Date: 27 Jan 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue
This was a really good story! I don’t know why there aren’t more reviews, but I enjoyed it immensely. Great job!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2018 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue
Loved it. Great ending.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 38: Goodbye Horses
I'm the strong Bella is coming out. I had a feeling about Martin and how things were missing.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 34: Bad News
How scary! They need to keep moving from hotel to hotel. They also need to change cell phones in case he has a tracer on them. I am so glad they expressed their love for each other. It will only make them stronger.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 33: Confessions
This guy knows too much. How did he get into Edward's place. I know he has to have security. He needs to add camaras if he doesn't have them already. He should because he lives in Los Angelos.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2018 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue
:) loved this story. Great twist at the end
Date: 19 Jan 2018 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2018 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 39: What a Wonderful World
Omg!!!! I’m still on the edge of my seat!!!! I hope somehow, they can contact Edward. I’m looking forward to the next updates.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 39: What a Wonderful World
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2018 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 39: What a Wonderful World
Oh wow
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2018 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 38: Goodbye Horses
Oh my
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2018 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 39: What a Wonderful World
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[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2018 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 30: Possible Justice
Sorry to hear of your loss. Thoughts and prayers are with you and your family.
.I like your story. Keep writing
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 37: Hearing Damage
I hope Edward finds her soon
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2018 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 36: Hungry Eyes
Poor Bella
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 36: Hungry Eyes
OMFG who is it the only person that keeps on coming to my mind is Emmett but he would not have soft hands so I know it is not him WHO IS IT!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 35: I'll Be Watching You
She is losing her shit who could blame her
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 34: Bad News
She is not to blame for the freak killing somebody he is crazy
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 33: Confessions
They are both scared OMG
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 32: Beginning of the End
OH SHIT
Date: 17 Jan 2018 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 31: Familiar Faces
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Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 30: Possible Justice
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Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 36: Hungry Eyes
HOLY SHIT!!! HOW the hell did that even happen???
Date: 16 Jan 2018 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 34: Bad News
I wish they would finally catch the stalker.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 32: Beginning of the End
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[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 31: Familiar Faces
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[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 30: Possible Justice
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 29: Night In Part II
OH sweet relise for both of them
Date: 08 Jan 2018 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 28: Night In
He is so sweet. Things are going to good right now shit is about to hit the fan agian???
Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 27: Reconnecting
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 26: Opening Up
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 25: Even Closer
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 24: Every Breath You Take
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 23: We're Alone Now
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 21: Feeling Safe
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 19: Safe and Sound
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 18: Someone You Won't Lose
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Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: Dead Ends
She thinks she is causeing Edward problems
Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 16: Waking Up
He is there for her now
Date: 08 Jan 2018 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 15: American Girl
She will be OK Edward knows how close he came to never seeing her again
Date: 08 Jan 2018 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 14: Face Off
Kills me each time I read it this is the second time.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Hard Pill to Swallow
Just catching up on stars
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 29: Night In Part II
This was a cute chapter. I love that he painted her fingernails. That was so sweet. Loved the lemon at the end. Is there any news on her stalker? I hope they catch him soon.
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29: Night In Part II
I love love this chapter so cute and and perfect!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 29: Night In Part II
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[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 29: Night In Part II
Keep writing
Date: 06 Jan 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 29: Night In Part II
Glad they are finally becoming more than friends. Hope how soon they find her attacker.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 28: Night In
I'm so glad edward figured out a way to romance her. He could leave love notes around the house for her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 27: Reconnecting
Now it's should be snuggle tume for edward & bella. ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 27: Reconnecting
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[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 26: Opening Up
PLEEEEEASE do an EPOV for this chapter too!! I'm soooo happy they finally kissed!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2017 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 25: Even Closer
I wonder how she will show him???? I'll be glad when she's not in so much pain.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 25: Even Closer
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[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 24: Every Breath You Take
I hope it's the chapter where she asks him to hold her & he has to give her a bath. I never thought this song was spooky until you used it in this chapter. I'll never hear it any other way now.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 23: We're Alone Now
I was worried this song was going to have something to do with the stalker. So glad it was moreabout her & edward.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 22: Closer
Edward wanted to hold her just as bad as bella wanted him too. Now how is it going to be when he wakes up?
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 21: Feeling Safe
I can only imagine edward's thoughts throughout all this.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 24: Every Breath You Take
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[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 23: We're Alone Now
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[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 21: Feeling Safe
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Date: 20 Nov 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
I hope Bella will give a chance.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
This song is one of my all time favorites. I can't not listen to it when it's on the radio. As u can see in that last sentence with my double negative, i'm not an english major. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19: Safe and Sound
For some reason i'm able to go back and leave double reviews so i'm going to. Perfect song for this chapter!! I'm looking forward to lots of updates!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 18: Someone You Won't Lose
I guess she forgot about stabbing him because he would have a scar on his face.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: Dead Ends
I have never watched the shining.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 16: Waking Up
Did she forget to tell them she stabbed him with the key in the face?
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 15: American Girl
I love that he told them he was her brother! Silence of the lamb & the sequals are my favorite! I love them bc when i say to my husband in the hannibel lector voice any line where he says clarese it spooks him. He does not like horror films.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 14: Face Off
The wrappers in the cliset are so spooky. He has had to of touched her while she was sleeping.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Hard Pill to Swallow
So who was that blonde in the bar? Was she edward's new actress?
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 12: I'll Be Seeing You
Going to a therapist & not talking is the biggest waste of money. As much as she says his eyes are piercing it makes me wonder if she does know who the stalker is but has blocked his face.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 Moving On
I have always wondered how dads see their daughters in nude films.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 10: Letting Go
What was edward doing when he didn't answer his phone. Grrr! I'm glad their final night was like this with lotsof lemons!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 9: We've Only Just Begun
Edward is good at what he does but bella doesn't realize he plays these reporters like a fiddle. I would have loved to see bella interviewed by a man who flirted with her in front of edward just so he had a taste of his own medicine!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 8: Life on Mars
To go from being a dick in the airport then possessive of her in the bar. He's giving me whiplash!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 7: Facing Reality
I think edward was kind of a dick in the airport.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 6: Last Day on Set
I was so excited when he hugged her in front of everyone.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5: Night Out
Anytime you can have an EPOV it's always a perfect decision!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: His Eyes
I wonder if it was edward's fantasy to have sex in part of a horror scene. I could see that on his bucket list.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Bite
I did not know that fun horror fact.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 2: Psycho Killer
I also wondered if it bothered him other people seeing her naked? He already considers her his property.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Beginning
This is probably close to every wanna be actresses dream come true!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:42 PM Title: Prologue
This was actually really scary!! I hate where the bad guy chases u. And i wanted to scream at her put your arm back inside the car & crash thru the barrier.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
This is going to be my new favorite addiction. I'm going back and reviewing all the chapters.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 19: Safe and Sound
I love he had thought of all these things to buy her. I'm looking forward to them snuggling!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 18: Someone You Won't Lose
I wish they would both just talk about how they feel. Edward is 30 but with dumb guy emotions & then bella is young.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
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[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2017 7:33 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting storyline
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
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Date: 18 Nov 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2017 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 20: Time after Time
Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 18 Nov 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 19: Safe and Sound
The Police song quote at the beginning is ominous.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 19: Safe and Sound
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