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Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

Such a long road back from all she had to endure.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

Badass Bella saves the day, part of the day anyway.  And here comes a very angry Calvary with Edward in the lead!!!  Yay!  I’ll be anxiously waiting for next Thursday!  Loved it!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

She certainly has balls!

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

Come on Edward kill them all

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

WoHoo!  Here comes Edward....   Short chapter, but better than nothing.  Great story.

 

Reviewer: Shiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a good story with a lot of suspense, but I wish the chapters were longer! When u wait like a week or more and u get such a short chapter, it's quite frustrating and sometimes bothersome deciding whether or not to keep up and continue reading. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love it can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

YOU ENJOY LEAVING US WITH OUR MOUTH WIDE OPEN...DON'T YOU? ( YOU MEANIE ) SO ARO TURNED HER INTO GI JANE HUH??? IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR A QUICK UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! 

READ YOU SOON 

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

I can't get enough of this story.  Love it!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

I wonder why Aaron hasn’t used Bella and Carlisle as leverage or blackmail against Edward.  What is his game?   I really hope Caius helps and it isn’t a trap. 

I started the story over and re-read it just so I could read it straight through to today’s new chapter.  I love it!!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

Good chapter.

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

She's going to rescue herself!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hate the humiliation torture, but I couldn't have kept reading if you had written a rape.  Thank goodness.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

Very very good. I really hope they get revenge 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

Love Loved it can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

It sounds like the only reason Bella and Carlisle got caught was because Carlisle was a dumb ass and couldn't shoot anybody.  hmp....



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yeah lol Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

Caius is lucky to still be breathing.



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Yes he is, Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

Going to be difficult to trust Caius.  I've got a bad feeling about him.  Thanks for the update.  Love this story!



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can’t wait for more 



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Reviewer: Mireads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great update,but could you give us the next update say.......later today?

Author's Response:

Thursday my darling. Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

Can he trust a snake?



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Who knows. Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: andrezzafreitas Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

A hi from Brazil.

Turning to say I'm loving your fanfic. Congratulations. Kisses

Reviewer: bemidjibear Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

This is a really good story. I love the pace, of the progression. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

They came looking for trouble and I think they found it.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is right.  If the Cullens got to kill Alice, then Bella should get to kill Carlisle.  I think, hopefully, they are about to bond while doing some ass kicking.  

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Omg you left me with a cliffhanger
I love it please don’t ever stop writing

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.  I think Alice got off too easy.  Just my opinion.  Thank you,  Love this story.

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 18

Exciting chapter.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Very good, can’t wait for the next update



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2018 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can’t wait for more 



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Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2018 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

Getting good 



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Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2018 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hehe, I had a feeling that Alice was the rat!! Will she be killed or will they disown her and in essence Jasper?? Hhmnn, can't wait to find out!!



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Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2018 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow what is up with Alice??? Is she betraying the family and in turn trying to get Bella killed?? Can't wait to see where this story leads!! Keep up the good writing!!

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bummer, I thought Alice was a cold bitch. Thanks for the update:)



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Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!  I was suspicious of Alice after the shopping too..  She was acting weird.  I really look forward to each chapter.  Thank you!



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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

Sorry but no sympathy for the rat. She should have talked to jasper. The

cullens could have done something to help her and her brother. I have always 

been bothered by Alice's spoiled and childish attitude. But I'm sure jasper

will forgive her.



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Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good chapters.



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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

I FELT LIKE THIS WASN'T OUR LOVING BADASS BELLA WHO TAKES NO SHIT FROM ANYONE!  A LITTLE DISAPPIONTED HERE BUT I'LL GET OVER IT JUST AS SOON AS YOU UPDATE. 

READ YOU SOON  : )



Author's Response:

Lol i know it seems unlike her but there is a reason for everything. Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

Damn that Alice. I think she's being played. 



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Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Alice you stupid stupid girl! She is lucky Bella didn't end her right then.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

I knew something was up with Alice.  Istill think she is shady though.   Dam her and Carlisle.  They are some morons.



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!



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Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great work

Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it



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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love it 



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Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm loving this, and I hate that this last chapter to me feels like a cliffie *pouts*. I hope there is more soon. Thanks for the story :)



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love EPOV!



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Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

MORE PLEASE!



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Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

AWWWW!!!    : (    IT WAS A SHORT BUT! .... INFORMATIVE CHAPTER.  I WAS HOPING FOR A LITTLE MORE DETAILS ESPECIALLY ON ALICE BUT... I GUESS I HAVE TO BE PATIENT AND WAIT SOOOOO! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE!!! WITH A CHERRY ON TOP TRY TO UPDATE SOON....BUT SOONER WOULD BE BETTER.  (he he he)    : )

READ YOU SOON : )



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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well they pretty much knew at least 1 mole was in Carlisle's group.  I still don't trust Alice.



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Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love it and can’t wait

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Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

This chapter was really good!  Great story.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it

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Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 15

WAITING WON'T BE EASY. ALICE SEEMS TO HAVE ISSUES WITH BELLA AND I GET THE FEELING SHE'S THE LINK. 

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

I'm suspicious of Alice now.   hmmmm.......



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Thank you for reading adn reviewing 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'm just not trusting Alice right now.



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She isnt very trust worthy, 

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

 I'm going to need pictures of a dress with room for weapons. 



Author's Response:

:) Maybe I have one for you to see ;p

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can’t wait for more 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

Good chapter.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

“I'm going to ignore you now before I have to decide between punching you or shooting you."   Best line ever😂



Author's Response:

Thank you, I thought it fit Bella perfect. thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great as always

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2018 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope she gets to kill carlisle!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm so happy that Bella is so quick thinking.   I hope she doesn't let the women or Carlisle push her around or tell her what to do.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter I am loving your development of Bella

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2018 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love it!

XoxoxoX
Alia

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

That left a smile to last til next update.....but a lot to wonder about as well and as always wanting more. 

READ YOU SOON ❤️

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

Good chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love the story. Hard to read with the Da and Tul... Oh well nice change.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great as always

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

just finished reading all 13 chapters...great story...love the drama!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

Aro! Aro!! Aro!!! ... Alway's Aro he never learns (he he he)  at least this time my tongue isn"t on the floor but my "EYES" are bulging out!!!!!  Good Job.....

 READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

That was tough for bella!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yeah, I would want Aro dead, but I'm still pissed at nosy, dumb ass Carlisle too.



Author's Response:

Yeah Carlisle isnt the brightest sometimes. 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

Cute

Author's Response:

Thank You!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

Charlie makes me want to cry!



Author's Response:

I know!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

That's a fine howdie do!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it



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Thank You!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2018 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

you do it to me everytime..... what you say......you left me with my tongue on the floor and now I have to drag it to bed wondering what the hell is in that safe.  (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad to see carlisle was a little remorseful.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2018 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Fantastic chapter

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Thank YoU!

Reviewer: Beduder Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

WOW, I just discovered this and read it straight through!  Can I just say I’ve loved all the chapters instead of commenting on each one? 😍



Author's Response:

Awe Thank you!

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2018 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

Can't wait for more



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Thank You!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2018 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

It's good that Bella is facing her past memories of her dad and his belongings.   I guess it's good that Carlisle faced the fact that he is an asshole douche.   ugh.....    I wonder who the leak is.



Author's Response:

He is a douche, and more clues to come :)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it



Author's Response:

Thank You

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love it

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Thank You

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

Good chapter.



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Thank YoU!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

So were carlisle and her dad friends?

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2018 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Great chaper 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love this story

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

They're together!

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love it

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

what is with Carlisle and his attitude?????  he acts like he knows a thing or two about Bella and possibly her father as well..... hmmmm

READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 11

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

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