Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2018 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
I still think Carlisle's stupidity is what caused Charlie's murder and it seems he is still a moron.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter. Nice new plot lines.
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 05 Feb 2018 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
oops, thought it was ch 9 instead of 1 i reviewed earlier.
but same thing as before. things needn't change so drastically
at least for now. im sure it has to do with the emotional
turmoil at not being able to see each other but if they permanently
break, they would not see each other at all...not sure i agree with
this decision...actually, i dont agree. they should continue as is for a
bit longer...1 year is not long enough.
Date: 05 Feb 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
it's only been 1 year. why would they need the reason to "break" ?
they are young and in love...they can still continue what they have been
doing at least for now... not that anyone would want to have a secret
romance but in their situation, they can continue to meet... certainly,
they are sad about the situation but at least for now, nothing needs to
change, so why?
Date: 03 Feb 2018 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE IT! THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love Loved it can't wait for next chapter,greatest story on here
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2018 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love this chapter; and love that it isnt the same direction as they all seem to go in. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 02 Feb 2018 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
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[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2018 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have been like a dog in heat waiting for the next update and I wasn't disappointed but I can't help feeling cautious about Carlisle. I can see I'll be in heat til the end . Looking forward to the next update. : )
Date: 02 Feb 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are correct this chapter makes me very very happy!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2018 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
I guess I see his POV, but I still think Carlisle fucked up a lot of things.
Author's Response:
Yes, yes he did
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Holy Shit!!!! If I was a rich girl....I would totally pay you to do nothing but write this story. Did Carlilse have Charlie killed? Will Bella find out? What does that mean for Bella and Edward? My heart is racing. I have so many questions
Author's Response:
Lol, lets see I can answer a few without giving too much away for you lol. Carlisle did not have Charlie killed. Bella and Edward get a HEA its just a bumpy crapy road there Thank you !
Date: 01 Feb 2018 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Feb 2018 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so sorry to hear about Zeus!
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2018 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Two solutions for the price of one. Edward can now bring her into the family and she can broker the deal with the Russians. Win-win!
Author's Response:
:) Maybe, just maybe!
Date: 01 Feb 2018 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Such a sad chapter! :(
Date: 27 Jan 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm disappointed. I would think your readers would know what the Prologue said. Instead of you repeating it, you could have written a real chapter!!!!
Are you planning to repeat chapters in the future? I would sincerely appreciate if you would tell me and your other readers. I'm not rating this one as I already have.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
It was interesting to read Edward's day before he gave her the Claddagh ring he purchased for her!
Bella really is smarter than the average young woman of her age and she still adherers to everything he Daid taught her!!!!
I really don't like Carlisle!!!
Beautifully written!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Carlisle is being a first class arse!!!
I loved how they both had the same day!!! It was sweet and beautiful!!!
I hope what happens next is not to horribly painful for either of them!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's an intriguing and a bit of romantic chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
I forgot to say how much I love the Gaelic you've added to the story and I'm grateful for the definitions.
Well, Carlisle was a lousy example of a father!!!! I truly hope he didn't take out a hit on Edward's Mom.
I happy he loved his Ma Esme and his half brothers.
Excellently written.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
He certainly knows how to turn into a bitchy little girl!!!
Excellent job writing this one!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your sex scenes are HOT!!!
I'm looking to more of it ad some plot!!!
Beautifully Written!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's a hell of a introduction chapter!!!
I'm really sad they end up parting ways forever!!!
Beautifully written!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I haven't got a clue why they're parting permanently. Their words and actions are simply heartbreaking!!!!
Author's Response:
I know, they are just a little crazy
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2018 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
So very sad
Author's Response:
:( it gets better
Date: 25 Jan 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can’t wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank YoU!
Date: 25 Jan 2018 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter. You broke them, now you get to fix them.
Author's Response:
Yes, fixing making up is going to be fun
Date: 25 Jan 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
So sad I want to cry!
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 25 Jan 2018 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Very sad
Author's Response:
Yes,
Date: 19 Jan 2018 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Really good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love that Bella actually snowed Carlisle!!
Author's Response:
I know! I love her!
Date: 19 Jan 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
I’ve loved your other fics, too. I was bound to be pulled in. Glad I was. :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Carlisle is kind of a dick.
Author's Response:
Yeah just a bit lol
Date: 18 Jan 2018 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ugh! I wasn’t going to become invested in another angsty fic but I can’t resist! Love this! Can’t wait for the next chapter... and I’m finally adding you to my alerts. Damn you for getting me hooked. ;}
Author's Response:
Hehehe, i want to say sorry but I really wouldn't mean it lol. Thank You!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
She knows a lot about guns!
Author's Response:
She sure does :)
Date: 16 Jan 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 13 Jan 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this,
but can I suggest you write the translations in brackets in the story. It gets a little confusing when you don’t know what they are saying
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2018 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG ! Love Love Your story can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Date: 13 Jan 2018 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love this so much!
Author's Response:
Thank You!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't know who is a bigger dick Carlisle or Emmett in this chapter. Edward might be since he hasn't texted Bella back.
Author's Response:
Bella didnt text Edward she was just waiting for him in general. But it does hurt waiting not knowing what is going on. thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: 12 Jan 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can you tell me how I can find The Mafia Group?
Author's Response:
https://www.facebook.com/groups/120992615219070/
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2018 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is so smart with speaking russian in the face of his horrible father! She took that sweatshirt pretty well too!
Author's Response:
Bella isnt naive that Edward has had a past but its about them now. Bella isnt someone that can be intimidated. Thank You!
Date: 11 Jan 2018 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank yoU!
Date: 11 Jan 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Did she give herself away by answering back? Even tho' she answered in Russian the statement was made in Gaelic.
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 11 Jan 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good update!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Jan 2018 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! MORE PLEASE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sex you. I hope nothing happens to Ang
Author's Response:
Thank You for reading and reveiwing
Date: 05 Jan 2018 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
1 st::: I'm so sorry to hear about your loss...
2nd:) I just came across this story today and I Love it!!!
Author's Response:
1, thank you. 2 I am so happy that you are enjoying it.
Date: 05 Jan 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story and anxiously await the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2018 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
She was so smart to talk russian and keep her face hidden.
Author's Response:
Yes she is, Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
These two are on fire!
Author's Response:
:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2018 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella is more cautious than Edward is. LOL
Author's Response:
Maybe, lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really good work
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love what you have so far, can’t wait for more!
Date: 31 Dec 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to raging more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass and quit being a jerk. He can't have it both ways.
Author's Response:
No he can't thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: 28 Dec 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really sorry about your mother-in-law. I'm not as close to mine, but I've known her since I was 15. It must be tough.
Author's Response:
I had known mine since I was 15 also but I had help take care of her as much as I could for the last few years. Thank You!
Date: 28 Dec 2017 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 Dec 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good, I love a good Mobward story
Date: 28 Dec 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow! Edwards kinda a dick. It’s ok for him to ask personal questions but he thinks something as simple as a last name and occupation after meeting twice a week for 3 months is too much. Hope she makes he pay for it.
Date: 28 Dec 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for clearing up the marriage thing.
So, it's by his choice not to marry. I have a feeling that may change in the future.
Author's Response:
Yes its his choice, Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Epov is always great! Did his dad have his mom killed?
Sad to here about your MIL. Thoughts & prayers for your family!!
Author's Response:
No his dad didnt we will get the bottom of that eventually Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Looks like he wants to make her his girl!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2017 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
No complaints about lemons. EVER!! now about the translations....you only think it breaks up the sentence because you know what the gaelic means. Scrolling down to the bottom of the page after they speak the gaelic breaks up the story the most because then the reader has to scroll back up and find where they left off. I want to know what he is saying or she is saying as soon as i read it. Otherwise i'm wondering the entire time what was said and not focusing on the rest of the story.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so grateful you didn't make us wait for another lemon!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this! Not sure if i will be able to handle the build up!! I love a mobward story!! They are my absolute favorite!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well Edward was blunt as hell at the end there. LOL Bella probably doesn't give a shit though.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward seems to be really surprised that a woman isn't hanging all over him. I think they both knopw the other is at least a little interested. But who is going to admit it first? Hmmmm.........
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
It seems like if anyone would be able to deal with a criminal life style, it would be Bella. hmmm........
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
This seems like this story is going to be a tear jerker. I'm getting ready.
Date: 25 Dec 2017 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
really enjoying this so far. cant wait to read more.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, she did ask.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope she sticks to her guns and quits taking shit from him.
I was impressed by her strength in the beginning.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Dec 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Dec 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter. B is a strong woman character.
Author's Response:
Yes I try to write that way! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Why can't they be together, other than fuck buddies. It seems to me that they're the same heritage, by their language.
Author's Response:
We are getting there π
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
So vood...love the Gaelic!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 18 Dec 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you !!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Eager for more!!!
READ YOU SOON. : )
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Dec 2017 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it!
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Dec 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 14 Dec 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol, nevermind, I was on the wrong chapter. They're so sexy together!
Author's Response:
hehe :) Thank you!
Date: 14 Dec 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
You forgot to pimp your own group! Especially on STARS where you can post the whole link without it being eaten.
Date: 14 Dec 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Would you include the translations right in the same sentence?
Date: 07 Dec 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
No sense in turning down a good looking piece of a.......
Author's Response:
Exactly :)