Date: 09 Feb 2018 2:56 AM Title: Epilogue
So sweet! Fun read!
Date: 08 Feb 2018 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed the first chapter!
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:56 PM Title: Epilogue
Awww I didn't want it to end. Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful end. TY for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Only person on Jasper's side I feel sorry for is that baby. Glad Charlie got his head out of his arse.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Charlie is seeing the error of his ways. Jasper sound screwed. Glad pay for all he did.
Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:00 AM Title: Epilogue
The perfect ending to their perfect begining thanks so much for another great one.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Jasper got what he deserved and so glad Edward got some pay back. They are all so sweet so sad about them lossing Renee but life goes on and she wanted to make sure of that.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 7:43 AM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely loved this story
Date: 26 Dec 2017 4:31 AM Title: Epilogue
Perfect ending!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2017 2:02 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved this so so much! It was a great little short story.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love love love this chapter. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2017 12:27 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 25 Dec 2017 8:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Fantastic story Josie well done hun
Date: 25 Dec 2017 6:52 PM Title: Epilogue
A Merry Christmas indeed.
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Jasper sure was an ass, but Alice was a piece of work too. Edward and Bella are too sweet.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wonderful. Thank you. Best wishes for the season.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it
Have a Merry Christmas.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really needed something sweet & mushy to read! I love this and can't fathom it being over in 5 chapters.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Sounds like Jasper is going down. I just wonder what they will decide about their future.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really needed something sweet & mushy to read! I love this and can't fathom it being over in 5 chapters.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter, keep writing
Merry Christmas
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm actually glad that Jasper, Alice, his father in law and all of his cronies are going away for so much more than beating up Edward and trashing his place. That is 1 thing that Edward doesn't have to have a speck of guilt over.
Bella and Edward should think of something that they would both love to do for a living together, but do it in a totally different town than Chicago, Forks, or any where in Washington. LOL
I now what you are going to do to us next.....You have a cancer patient declining chemo....... Death? Funeral? Sad letters left behind??
Bring it On!!! I'm ready!!! LOL
Date: 23 Dec 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
It is good that Charlie has changed his ways. So sad about Renee my heart just breaks for all of them. Jasper is a stupid dick and I hope he spends a long time behind bars.
Date: 23 Dec 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my goodness wow Jasper is horrible man I hope is gets his comings
Date: 20 Dec 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Jasper is def a douche. Who does he think he is? A mobster? What a dick. Charlie is a jerk but as you said, he's making amends.
Date: 20 Dec 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jasper is definitely a douche. I'm guessing he has to pay his mom's bills because the garage was used as collateral. Otherwise, he wouldn't be liable for them. Ah well...I'll shut up now. Happy lemon dance though.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know how someone can be as big an asshole as Jasper was and still is. ugh......
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was worried about what Peter was going to say.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I’m so sad for Bella with her mom but so happy that she now has Edward. Jasper sure has fucked up his life with his mean, hateful, reprehensible behavior! Well, now he’ll have to deal with the ramifications of his behavior. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is kissing ass and he should be. Jasper just needs to take a long walk on a short dock and not come up for air ever.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
How could Jasper think he could get away with that?
Only one chapter left? I'm really enjoying this.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Omgosh! Jasper is such a jerk. I hope Bella pops Jasper in his face. Love the lemons.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter keep on writing
Date: 19 Dec 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cabt wait to find out more about them.
Date: 18 Dec 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 18 Dec 2017 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
She sees that they are ment to be but Edward does not see his worth so sad
Date: 18 Dec 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really great story so far! Keep up the great work !
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Thoroughly enjoyable on all measures. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice. Lots of history to sort through. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Don't give up Edward
Keep on writing, good story
Date: 16 Dec 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I Jasper gets what’s coming to him. Their night together was perfect. It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella. She’ll just have to prove him wrong. Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I Jasper gets what’s coming to him. Their night together was perfect. It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella. She’ll just have to prove him wrong. Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
No no no no no! Poor Edward - so despondent & insecure! Bella better not leave him! Silent partner??
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dam! Jasper the douche bag has partly ruined both his sister's and Edward's life. He deserves some come upance. I think Bella and Edward should tell his ass off together. I wonder if Bella's mom is in on .the ass hatery
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think Edward is selling himself short.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Edward, Belle needs to kick Jasper’s ass.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can’t wait to hear more about their history and what happened. Thank you for the Christmas treat!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Keep writing
Date: 13 Dec 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2017 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
He will warmer her up lol
Date: 13 Dec 2017 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see what happens to these two! I am not happy with Jasper. I can't wait for more. Thanks so much!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are always good.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
It sounds like all of Bella's family are assholes. I wouldn 't want to ge to see them either. It goes both ways too. I didn't read about any visits or attempted visits from them either.
Poor Edward seems so lonely and alone too. These 2 need to get snowed in for about a month and then disappear, it sounds like. LOL
Date: 12 Dec 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! They sound so sweet together! Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 12 Dec 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this! Can't wait for the rest !
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11 Dec 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
sounds like Jasper has some 'splaining to do Lucy.