[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2019 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope you continue this story soon!
Date: 25 Jan 2019 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great story! I am looking forward to more.
Date: 23 Jan 2019 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella needs to realize that Edward is perfect for her.
Date: 22 Jan 2019 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
What a great chapter and a lovely preview can't wait to read what happens next 😊
Date: 21 Jan 2019 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad she has finally sorted Jake out. Yummy mini-lemon
Date: 21 Jan 2019 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
While annoying, nice to have people who care.
Date: 20 Jan 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww Edward you are such a tease but hey
Date: 24 Aug 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Interesting. Jake maybe?
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2018 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh please tell me we are about to have a showdown between Bella and Jake....then Em shows up....or even Rose!!! More soon please!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
That better not be Jake. Bella needs to chill about Edward. She is so angry all the time. He really hasn't done anything wrong.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wowsers...the men in this are all dorks. Alec is lucky it was just his leg
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
I bet this is stupid jacob showing up! Grr! I'm sorry you still have writer's block. Ya know you could get out of bella's head for a bit and maybe jump into EPOV. That might help. No one would ever complain about hearing from possessivward. Hahaha
Author's Response:
I actually might just do that for the next chapter!!! This really helped spark some ideas so thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2018 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
😁🤪 Have a Better Day!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2018 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am sorry to hear about your writing block. If I may ask what was your original plan for this story? What was your original plan for each character and if I may say your outlined plan for each chapter. Do you plan and brainstorm or whatever you want each chapter to say? The little writing that I have done it always helpd me to stay focused and on track sometimes. Thank You for sharing your work with us. I have never written anything ecxept for my class assignments.
Author's Response:
I just tend to go with the flow, if i start planing and brainstorming before hand, i end up going off track anyway, so to me it's never proved to work out. But that means i end up blocked a lot of the time!!
thank you for reading!
Date: 20 Aug 2018 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Alec and Jessica are up to something aww Bella not Getting any rest at all uuu Edward jummmy who’s that talking
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Creepy Alec, Edward, Alice, and unknown person just all need to go. Poor Bella ....no relaxing. They need better security. Great chapter. Don't be so hard on yourself. :)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2018 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
~ sometimes blood does not make a family...it's the love and respect that make a family...
~ sometimes blood is not thicker than water, esp with blood thinners...
~ sometimes blood can become poisonous and infected and need to be drained...
and or medicated...
~ if you don't treat the infected blood quickly, it will spread and can kill...
~ this "she's still blood" is a crappy excuse to keep her if she's a problem...
hmmm, wonder if jessica will try to get to edward anytime soon? if that happens, hopefully bella will put her in her place rather than blame and to continue to berate and irritate edward irrationally like she is doing. other than being arrogant, he really has been quite affectionate to her yet she has been unreasonably rude. certainly, sometimes he was sort of like a caveman possessive but it's rather endearing, sexy to be so wanted...though i do love that she is not the timid, shy, quiet bella we know and hate, imho bella needs to tone down a bit with her "i am woman, hear me roar" esp to edward. also, what jake did to bella is assault. this can be starting of something very scary such as beginnings of physical abuse to women esp when angry. it is not a small thing that bella seems to think. she is threatening everyone to not speak to them if anyone confronted jake which is ridiculous...she is protecting the abuser. it's these type of women who remain in those types of relationship thinking it's just a one-time thing or that wasn't jake, or he's really sorry, etc etc etc...plenty of excuses. what bella did to protect jake was wrong. the guys could have at least spoken to jake and maybe he could have had an early intervention...but now, it may eventually escalate to something worse.
Date: 12 Jul 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Why won't Bella admit she likes Edward?
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if Jessica really understands why none of them like her. hmmmm...... I bet she just keeps believing and spouting her crap. It is probably better to have her ears a ways away.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well hopefully the men's reactions will rub off on Bella some. Her lack of concern over being assaulted is kind of concerning. Een if it is a family member in her eyes, women don't deserve to be assaulted.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella was at least honest with her friends about what happened. But maybe Bella should have went to a doctor about her head.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's not like Jake will tell the truth. He'll just be passive aggressive with Bella and deny it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella needs to wake up concerning Jake. I hope she does soon. And Edward needs to quit being so bossy. That is what would make me mad and that's probably why Bella is pretending she's taken with someone else. They are both a clusterfuck. LOL
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I don't think I like this Edward at all. He sluts around with whoeer he wants and even rubs it in Bella's face. But Bella can't even dress skimpy? And Jake is creepy as hell.....
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jake is being a little clingy to Bella. I think he does like her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder why Edward even hired slimy James. hmmmm......
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
That would be awkward and annoying having to put up with Jessica's ass if she really is that much of a bitch.
Date: 30 Jun 2018 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Not worse...i like jess out of sight, but i figure shes aros window
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yea Jess is def a weak link that Aro could exploit. I wouldn't be surprised if E&C were to push her towards E. He's in the family, mafia family that is.
Do you have a banner for this story?
Author's Response:
You made me want to get one just so i could show off how i imagine everyone looks! Hope the one i made isn't too bad! Thank you for reading!
Date: 27 Jun 2018 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Jake needs to move to alaska before all the alpha male get to him.
Date: 27 Jun 2018 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow you got some f'ed up Alpha males in this story. And one whore by the name of Skankya
Date: 27 Jun 2018 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow Alice is a bit flaky with her mood swings.
Date: 27 Jun 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
E is def playing the I get what I want game. Can understand why she would be put off by it.
Date: 27 Jun 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
B is in for a long ride with Mr bossy.
Date: 27 Jun 2018 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well eddie is a piece of work too. Jake is too funny
Date: 27 Jun 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Had men like James...thinking they own the world. Jazz is quite mouthy isn't he.
Date: 27 Jun 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like a good start. Sounds like Jess is a walking STD.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2018 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder how edward is going to get into bella's good graces.
Author's Response:
Wondering that myself! Seems like one to either pull out all the stops or go basic and just use his natural allure! I'll see which way it takes me! Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 27 Jun 2018 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Interesting. I am nit sure to kick her out is wise.
Author's Response:
Will have to see what the repecussions of that are wont we! Thank you for reading my story!
Date: 08 Jun 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! What a story! It's such a drama! Will Bella ever see the good in Edward? Is Jake really in love with Bella? What have Emmett and Edward Sr. been doing? 'What age difference is Edward and Bella? What happens with Tanya? How long will it take for Jess to be killed off? The answers will unfold so off I go to read....
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2018 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yep thats a dad 4 ya
Date: 04 Jun 2018 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yep thats a dad 4 ya
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2018 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm still thinking jakey is going to get a beat down but no one is going to admit who did it. And i love a possesive kissing edward!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2018 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward might not kill him bc of bella but no doubt jakey is going to get a beat down.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2018 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Alice & edward will get their ways.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2018 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Jakey the cockblocker!!
Date: 25 May 2018 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love thus chapter ur writing is very descriptive! It makes me want to keep reading! But no more chapters:(
Date: 24 May 2018 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jake is such a jerk. Bella needs to stop causing problems with her teasing. She knows she likes Edward.
Date: 17 May 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella is acting immature and stupid. Who would want Jake when you can have Edward.
Date: 17 May 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
If you are on Facebook: feel free to advertise your story in the STARS Library Group: https://www.facebook.com/groups/LibrarySTARS/
Date: 17 May 2018 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella Edward really knows what buttons to push muahaha
Date: 30 Apr 2018 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward I understand. Bella not so much.
Date: 21 Apr 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
New chapter please <3
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2018 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is sooo freaking sexy!
Date: 14 Apr 2018 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward you are a possessive dude Bella you are playing with fire ” a beautiful handsome fire
Date: 13 Apr 2018 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Looks fun. Can’t wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2018 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think edward will be making her very jealous!
Date: 04 Apr 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Getting good!! More please!!
Date: 02 Apr 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yay! Finally an strong Bella!
Date: 01 Apr 2018 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jajaja they are both in for a ride
Date: 29 Mar 2018 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Added to my favorites! I hope to read a new chapter soon :)
Date: 27 Mar 2018 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like this story already!! There's already riffraff with Jessica and now James which the Cullen's don't need. I could see Eclipse totally through the description you gave and that is difficult to do. I can't wait to read more of Careful Now.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2018 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
love,love,love this story. My fav. stories are mafia ones. please keep writing and update whenever you can. I appreciate all the work and effort that goes into writing these stories for people like me to enjoy. Again, thank you for the enjoyment I receive reading your story. Pamela
pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au
Date: 26 Mar 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well hello night in shining armor Edward
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yummy is all i can say! Other than what is up with bleeding heart jasper? Does he have a death wish?
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2018 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excited to meet edward!!
Date: 24 Mar 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
love mafia stories. enjoyed your first chapter. can't wait for the rest. regards pamela
Date: 24 Mar 2018 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far so good!! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds Good.. ‘🏽