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Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

OMG, so loved this story, it was awesome.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Please hurry with the next part. I loved this.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ooooooo, a part 2. A sequel!!!!! YES!!!!!!!! Loved this story and I can't wait for the next one.  

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love it thank goodness Maggie set him straight 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great job.  I am sure the sequel will be as wonderful as this one.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad he finally pulled his head out of his ass.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2020 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2020 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella got there to fight, but Edward had already seen some sense.    :)   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2020 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

This story is heartwarming. I look forward to all three of them flourishing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2020 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love this chapter.  I'm glad Bella is determined to care for Edward and Elizabeth like Maggie wanted her to.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh no. My heart breaks for both of them.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2020 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love Edward's conversation with Elizabeth.  Love that Elizabeth was excited about her date with Bella. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

He did good with the date. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2020 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

So glad they were honest with each other.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

WOW, that is a hard pill to swallow.  Feel bad for everyone.  Go get your man.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love the update as always. My heart hurts for Edward and Bella. Soon I bet he will realize he was meant to love Maggie's heart no matter in whose body it was in residence of. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

Dear me I don't really understand why he feels this way. That heart was not stollen from his wife nor was she murdered for it. Come on.. drama for what?  If you donate an organ you are helping some other poor soul to live. It is a chance it will not be accepted by the recipient.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yes go get him Bella.  

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am glad thar Eme and Carlisle talk to Bella! And: Bella is such a fighter! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh what a mess! That is one of the worst ways to find out for Edward. He overreacrs and leaves a desperate Bella behind. I hope they will get a chance to set things right soon. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter, thank you! But what will happen when Bella finds out that her new birthday is Elizabeth's birthday as well and the day of Meggie's death. What will this knowledge do to all of them? What about Carlisle? Does he know or suspect which heart he transplanted? So many questions! 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

Hopefully he will realize it is fate

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh, wow! It's a good thing Bella went to talk to Carlisle and Esme! She might have just given up and run away if Esme hadn't shown her that photo of Maggie!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

Holy Crow!!! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thank God its out in the open for Bella.  Edward will catch up. Ilove this story.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm ugly crying.   And I'm super relieved that Bella is going to Edward instead of running from the heart break.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

OMG!!! My heart is breaking for them! What a shock it must be for Edward but, poor Bella! Leaving her to think she is unwanted. :(
This is a fantastic story! I can't wait to read more! ;)

Reviewer: lwiegert Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love this story!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

Go Bella, you are a smart woman.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

But will the stubborn ass listen to her?

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Go get him Bella!!!

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

Amazing chapter, thanks! 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my! Give Bella strength 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow oh wow now what will she say to him and will he listen 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wowsers.  I can kind of understand his thought process but poor B and Elizabeth.  Go get 'em B

Reviewer: nat40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2020 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

This is really a good story and I hope you finish it thank you.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh no, poor Bella.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

He knows he knows who she got her heart from but what will he do

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward needs to know. He will come back to Bella, but he has to work this out in his mind and heart.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2020 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

That was hard.  Bella didn't take his wife away.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

What??? You can't leave us here!!! uggggggggggggggg!!

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

He was meant to love this one heart

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my. Carlisle better be ready 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh man I can't believe this is how he found out and now they are both hurting. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: KSesterhenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

I feel bad for both of them. I hope for their sakes they talk about it and soon, but I can see E needing to process and B feeling guilty when she shouldn't. I hope I'm wrong, but it does seem like the natural course for the next chapter or two as you did promise dark clouds. :( Thank you for the new chapter. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update. Have a wonderful weekend! :)

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Papa Carlisle is in trouble!!!

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh, nooo! Well, I call miscommunication! Edward coulda taken 2 extra seconds to explain he needed to see Carlisle before stormin' out like he was rejectin' her!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh Poor Bella...such a misunderstanding.. Things were going so well.

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

:}

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

More please 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow, there is no way to easily address this, but I think he will come to grips with the fact that Maggie, whom he loved, lives on in Bella, whom he has come to love.  Great update.  Sad, but inevitable.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Let's hope Carlisle sets him straight. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

Omy love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well that was a roller coaster of emotions.    They both were so happy and thrilled, then both are devastated for different reasons.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow...excellent

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh no

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMG! *sobbing* :'(

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh the poor thing.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great story

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

Holy guacamole! Can't wait for next chapter! Thank you! 

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

Very heart breaking chapter! I hope Edward doesn't stay away from Bella or only want her just the same for whose heart she has. Love this story!!

FYI even if Bella had asked (at least for real and not in the fandom world lol) who her donor was they wouldn't have told her. There is a program where you can write a letter to your donors family and the transplant organization will see to it that it's given to the family. The only info your given is the about age of the donor, the health level of the organ, etc... obviously this mostly applys to a deceased donor organ as you typically know the person if it's an organ that can be done as a live donor. My mom just had a kidney transplant back in June. 

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

Very heart breaking chapter! I hope Edward doesn't stay away from Bella or only want her just the same for whose heart she has. Love this story!!

FYI even if Bella had asked (at least for real and not in the fandom world lol) who her donor was they wouldn't have told her. There is a program where you can write a letter to your donors family and the transplant organization will see to it that it's given to the family. The only info your given is the about age of the donor, the health level of the organ, etc... obviously this mostly applys to a deceased donor organ as you typically know the person if it's an organ that can be done as a live donor. My mom just had a kidney transplant back in June. 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 11

I so hope you will be able to finish this story. It's so lovely.

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

I have a feeling Edward is not going to take it well when he figures out Bella had Maggie's heart. sniff!

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

Holy Moly! Is it hot in here?????

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ugh!!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love Elizabeth 

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

I feel badly for everyone. I wonder if Bella will see a picture of Maggie and recognize her from her vision?

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

So sad but happy too.

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

It will be interesting to see how Edwards puts things together.

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Thanks for posting in FB!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 11

I wonder how hard he is going to take when he finds out about her heart.  Does Carlisle know that the heart in Bella was his daughter-in-law?

Reviewer: KSesterhenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved! Not quite ready for the dark cloud, but it is inevitable. :( I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Can't wait for next chapter. It's going to be interesting when her heart donor is revealed. I'm pretty sure Carlisle has to know who it is. Right?

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love this story and even though you have warned us about "a dark cloud in the horizon" I am still excited for more!! I can't wait! ;)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

I think that cute little ladybug is as excited about the date with Bella as Bella and Edward are.   ;)   

 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

gthey are doing so well together but what will happen when he learns the truth?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

Elizabeth is so darn cute about "dating" Bella.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wonder how E will take it when he finds out who's heart she has.  Elizabeth is just too cute

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks forn the update. Looking forward to future ones. Gotta have a few dark clouds to appreciate the sunlight more..

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

I think Edward will be upset when he finds out about her surgery. But I think Elizabeth will be there to sooth him over. Fingers crossed!!! Does Bella know her heart belongs to his wife?

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

My hope is that, the longer they have to bond, the better chance of weatherin' the storm ahead but I'm gonna be ravagin' my fingernails in the meantime *sigh!*

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

Such a cute family.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

So loved it.  Elizabeth is so adorable.  They do make an nice family.

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

Amazing chapter as always, thanks! 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2020 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great job with your story so far, my friend. When the heart knows, it just knows. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2020 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

How beautiful all of it I love it 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

These two are so perfect together!  I am curious how this story is going to move forward to the point they realize where Bella's heart came from. 

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Keep on writkng

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great job! Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: lwiegert Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

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