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Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story.  LOL, Carlisle wants his granddaughter and she loves spending time with him because he's so much fun.  Awesome date.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awww sweet chapter

Reviewer: KatHat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awww...they both deserve this second chance. It was something else when he says, "You have my heart" with us realizing she also has Maggie's heart.

I included this story as arec on the Fic Dive today on A Different Forest!

Thanks for writing!

Kat

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Absolutely beautiful 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Absolutely a beautiful chapter.  

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

This is fantastic!! I hope they don't freak out about their connection when they learn the truth of the heart! ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm so happy they are jumping right in. Life is too short.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

How long before he learns the truth about her heart?

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

:-)

Reviewer: KSesterhenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved! Thank you for the new chapter! :)

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh, what a lovely first date and what a declaration from them both so soon! They both deserve a second shot at life and if that's together, so much the better.

 

Happy New Year, Clo darlin'!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful update.  Congratulations on your Top 10 placement for Testing Faith.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

Are they going to find out that Bella has Maggie's heart???

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sweet story. I hope he does not go bonkers when the connection is made about the heart transplant. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2020 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward and Bella both are so swoony and romantic.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2019 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

 Yeah!  Loved it.  Happy New Year!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2019 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

So glad he went after her.  Wonder how he will react to Bella having Maggie's heart. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2019 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

They both need happiness and love in their lives. I can't wait until they realize that Bella has Maggie's heart.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2019 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sweet.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2019 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Please please finish this story. I'm really loving it.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am happy that he went after her and they talked! ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

Glad he went after her. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

Awe that was so sweet I loved it 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm pleased that Esme encouraged Edward to follow Bella and that Edward and Bella both were honest about their feelings and fears.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

Can't wait to see what happens 

Reviewer: imwithemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm so hapoy that your muse returned!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2019 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loving this story 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sssooo hhappyy!!! to see this update. THANK YOU!!

Cant wait for the date and more time with lil ms Elizabeth 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Soooo glad to revisit these two. Their connection is getting stronger and stronger and they can’t figure it out. I wonder how long it will be before they piece it together and their reactions.

Elizabeth is certainly already attached to “Miss Bella” so that will make things easier, or more complicated. Can’t wait to find out.

Thrilled you found your muse again on this one. Read ya soon. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

How anybody gets through a tragedy of this magnitude is beyond me but I suspect divine intervention would be the only remedy *sigh!*

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš’๐Ÿš‘ & HAPPY NEW YEAR ๐ŸŽ†

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

Finally they kissed! Yeah!!!!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

Finally they kissed! Yeah!!!!!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great to have these two back. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loving this story 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2019 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

What will he do when he realizes that Bella has his dead wife's heart.  Wow, this is good.  Loved the movie with the same plot, Remember Me, with David Duchovny and Minnie Driver.  Great job.

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2019 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it can't wait till next update

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2019 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2019 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for sharing! I think this one will have me crying alot. Happy and sad tears. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2019 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

๐Ÿคฃ.  Poor Edward final finds the courage and mom interrupts them. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2019 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

They are both so smitten.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow that was a tough chapter. So very well done. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2019 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Update soon please!! Love story do far 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2019 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Keep on writing

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

lol thank you for the update...well done...Ladybug is to funny..she wants what she wants when she wants it...I love the way Esme is with her....I can't wait to see how the rest unfolds...............until you post again

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Bella's heart feels the connection with Edward and Elizabeth.  

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm sure it won't be the last time he is cockblocked!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

nice update

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Why Esme, why?

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

So lovely to see Edward and Bella both struck by lightnin' at the same time...and for the same reason LOL! It was probably a good thing Elizabeth and Esme cock blocked them, even if they weren't aware that's what they were doin'! Well, maybe Esme had a clue LOL!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

It's awful that Bella and Edward can't be alone for 5 minutes. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOL Edward can't catch a break.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dont let the burn be to slow

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 8

Aw cock blocked by Esme!!!!

KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lol for all the interruptions 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh my that was intense in more than one way

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh Esme!!!!  

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

excellent chapter

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Update soon pppllleeaaasse!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness...I will not cry!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my goodness. So happy for Bella. So sad for Edward 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2019 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

great update

Reviewer: jmullinax Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2019 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

When is the next update! I’m obsessed with this story 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2019 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

OMG, UPDATE SOOONNN!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2019 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

OMG, UPDATE SOOONNN!

Reviewer: nat40 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2019 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is really a great story,I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

Did sparks fly when their eyes met? Magic.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

I know this really isn't important, but the class was in the morning yet Edward was going to meet at the end of class, so they could go to dinner. I thought you might want to fix this to say lunch.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh Wow, loving it so much.

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2019 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

I had to laugh at her checking him out! Bwahahaha! And him being all smitten and going all 1800’s on her with the hand-kiss. It was soooo swoony. *Sighs* 

Yes, I adore feisty LadyBug Elizabeth who already knows what she wants and how to get it. She’s as fiery as her hair color. But sweet as pie too. She has the whole family crazy for her. It’s nice to see that Edward has such a great support system.

Very interesting dreams he’s been having. Wonder if the voice is Maggie “releasing” him to love again?

Awesome update. Can’t wait for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2019 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Freaking love it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

“Sigh “.  So beautiful. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness.  Wonderful!! 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Tough tough update. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a small world.  AlL tied together one way or another. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow what an amazing story.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2019 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update ..Well done..Lizzy is a hot mess..lol..she's getting a dance floor so she could pratice..I'm  impressed..until you post again

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2019 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

Dream promotion great addition to story.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

They’ve met!!  Yay!  I’m looking forward to the next chapter and their

interactions. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh my! ;) I love that Bella brought Elizabeth shoes but she is too little to begin Pointe.

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

Nooooo I need more lol  but awesome chapter can't wait till you update again. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

They finally meet!!!!!!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Swoon, damn great chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

Winner winner hope Esme made chicken dinner! Lucky Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

Glad ladybug is kept grounded while also being spoiled , if that makes sense

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

Get it Edward. Be a gentleman!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR & KEEP WRITING โœ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿš’๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš‘

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

I loved it wow what a connection now will Edward allow it to happen or will he fight it

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