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Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

It would be cruel for Carlisle to tell Edward his choice was to help someone who could actually be helped as opposed to someone who was already gone and beyond his help! The fact that Edward accepted his love in the end means Edward understands, on some deep level, that someone's life was on the line. 

I wonder if Bella will recognize the beautiful woman with the red hair and green eyes if...well, when she sees a photograph of her!

Reviewer: trojangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

I would review but I am crying.  

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

I suspect that Carlisle does't know the donor heart came from Edward's wife.

Reviewer: Crazy89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

Grrrr, tears and more tear. Unto the next chapter or do I have to wait for the next update? I think this is the last chapter, just great I’ll have to wait! Lol loving your work so far, but I do hate you for making me love this story and for making me cry like a baby! Poor Edward I hope he mends his relationship with his father. I guess that it until the next update! Oh before I for get do you have and actual schedule for update or do you just update anytime you get time? Just wandering! Well once again until the next update. Love you!

Reviewer: Crazy89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

Women your killing me here with these emotions, grrr I hate crying but at the same time I love it!

Reviewer: Crazy89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Tear I’m telling you, you are one cruel person. No not really, but you do have me in tear and I didn’t wanted to cry. Love the chapter. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Aww Maggie even in death you take care of your family

Reviewer: Crazy89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I’m in tear, this is my first time reading one of your stories and so far this chapter just got to me! 

Reviewer: roxiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my. I hope it’s a new beginning for them too.

Thank you!

Reviewer: roxiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you! I’m not getting update notifications for this. So frustrated. So I’m relying on FB, but I don’t look at it every day. Very well written. I missed this chapter, but saw the post about chapter 4, so catching up.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Let’s see if Bella can put the pieces together. How long will it take her to see the day Edwards wife passed away she got a new heart???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow!! This chapter was Happy and Sad!! Happy for Bella and Sad for Edward. I hope they meet soon!!! When will they figure out that Bella has Maggies heart??

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

MMy heart breaks for Edward and his family.   I'm happy that Bella will be fine and that Edward's wife have her blessing .

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Not quite snot sobbing but close. Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2018 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is a story near and dear to my heart.   It is so hard reading about these things but they are so real.   You've brought this story together nicely.  My sister has been on the list for a double lung transplant for 5 years which was hard for us in the beginning.   We since learned that there are people out there that donate organs for pure and wonderful reasons.  She received a call a few weeks ago for the transplant but it didn't work as they planed but she is really ok with it.   Thanks for writing such a beautiful story with such a traggic suituation.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great story so far but so sad for Edward.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great story so far but so sad for Edward.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great story so far but so sad for Edward.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2018 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wowsers....you are really pulling on my heartstrings.  Wonder how E will take it when he finds out about where Maggie's heart went.

Reviewer: trojangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2018 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love this story.  After reading all 3 chapters I went back and looked at the author.  No shock that it was from my favorite!  Can't wait to read more what a sad but beautiful story.  

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2018 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

No words. You have done an exceptional job in the telling of Edward's grief this far. You can't help ache for him. To be so in love and have that much of a loss. Well done.  The fact that the rest of the family is so entertwined with Bella's family is fraught with hope. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Always loved your writing and your stories.  Thank you for sharing, Clo.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loving your story!

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am going to take it that Bella is going to be the one that gets the heart from Maggie and Edward has no clue that she is a patient of his fathers

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think I'm going to need tissues for this entire story.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

more

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Heartbreakin' on so many levels *sniff!* ps: love the manip!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

So sad..... 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

I am crying

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

His family has circled the wagons around him to help him cope and get through this difficult time.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww poor Edward!! I hope Bella gets her surgery and gets well enough to come visit them. Since Emmett and Jasper know Bella does Edward know her as well??

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

as so the connection is made.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

sad  for him to loose his Maggie and just after having a baby.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2018 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2018 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

Omg love it so far can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2018 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hey there sweetie,, Great job thus far with your story. Looking forward to following along.. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow. You are building up one he'll of an agnsty story. Eek

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Carlisle has to put the pieces together and know whose heart Bella is getting.

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh, man! How will Edward handle all of this because we know that eventually, he's going to fall for Bella? Yikes!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

Talk about red strings of fate! This is gonna get real complicated, real fast, when Carlisle realizes whose heart Bella's gettin'!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Snotsobbin' here, Clo darlin'! Life can be so cruel *whimper!*

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it! More please!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm already reaching for the tissues!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

I cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2018 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sorry it’s late but we went on a call after we read it. 

Luck EMT I would’ve helped Carlise with Bella. Lol 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2018 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2018 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can’t wait to read the next chapter!!! And it makes me very happy that Carlisle is Bella's cardiologist and that both he and Esme know Bella.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, so sad. 

Reviewer: shannabanana1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

😭 can't wait for more though!

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2018 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love all of your stories that I have read and this one is no different!  I can't wait for the next update!! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

How sad!

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Clo what a heart breaker. I love the idea for this story. It reminds me of Return to me with Minnie Driver and David Ducovney I love that film. Amazing banner also. I'm so excited and can't wait to read more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad, but looking forward to reading more 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow from happiness to heartbreak poor Edward

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

holy cow.  What a start. But at least something good will come of it with the donation.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be a Bella/Edward story right??? 

We are all organ donors and so was Lt. Craigo!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️❤️’”‘

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

OH... wow... tears! :D

Fantastic chapter, looking forward to more :D

 

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can’t wait to next chapter!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!! I love this story already and can't wait for more!! :)

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2018 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Heartbreaking! Glad he honored her wishes about being an organ donor.

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