Date: 27 Oct 2020 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a good story. I would love to see more and see what happens when they are all face to face for the first meeting and wedding.
Date: 29 May 2020 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this one shot...it's a cute little story..
Though it's been a while since you wrote this, i would love one more chapter
in all the ways jasper and alice are suffering...
That would really make this 1-shot all the better...😊
Date: 13 Sep 2018 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much. I'm a big fan of karma.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the karma and irony of this story.
Date: 21 Jul 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
i loved it!
alice and jasper deserved what they got!
they will be feeling the pain forever? so they can't have
sex with anyone? that's hilarious...
btw, who is bella's father? one of the volturis?
if so, i looked for any hints but didn't find any...hmmm...
Date: 17 Jul 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it!!!Well done
Date: 02 Jul 2018 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well if that isn't the definition of "Karma's a Bitch", I don't know what is. I loved this.
Date: 01 Jul 2018 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked your "twist" on the mating/imprinting bond. You need to explore this further. Have you ever read "Open Up Next to You" or "Tender is the Night" by LJ Summers? (It's on ff.net) That may inspire you to continues this idea in a a more comprehensive-developed story. Your thought process in this one-shot concerning the mating bond was truly unique. :)
Date: 28 Jun 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
An interesting twist to normal mates connections. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 26 Jun 2018 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was fantastic. I hope you continue and this wasn't a one shot
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I’ve have thought about it..But for now it is just a one shot...
Date: 26 Jun 2018 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story. How mean is it to want to read about Alice and Jasper suffering a little more?
Author's Response:
Thanks.. And it’s not mean at all...
Date: 26 Jun 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Great storyline. The characters are well developed even though it is short and you instantly connect with Bella the Edward. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks I’m glad you enjoyed it...