Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..Well done!!Also i s crazy as a bed bug..I hope Charlie &Edward save Renee and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again. BRAVO
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..Well done!!Also i s crazy as a bed bug..I hope Charlie &Edward save Renee and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again. BRAVO
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..Well done!!Also i s crazy as a bed bug..I hope Charlie &Edward save Renee and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again. BRAVO
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..Well done!!Also i s crazy as a bed bug..I hope Charlie &Edward save Renee and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again. BRAVO
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..Well done!!Also i s crazy as a bed bug..I hope Charlie &Edward save Renee and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again. BRAVO
Date: 01 Aug 2021 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
While I have sympathy for Aro.... He is a psychopath. Poor Bella. At least Peter is dead. What debating who the partner was.
Date: 01 Aug 2021 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Omg. Mr Volt is real I wonder or is it a psydonym? Ack
Date: 01 Aug 2021 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wowsers... Someone really wants to hurt Charlie. Glad B&E talked things out
Date: 31 Jul 2021 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Aro has gone totally off the deep end. But with such a tragic story, I probably would have too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my goodness. Thrilling chapter. Can't wait to read more soon.
Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my goodness. Thrilling chapter. Can't wait to read more soon.
Date: 30 Jul 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
How terrified is Edward? Running into a burning building; something he said he would never do again.
Did the detectives follow Charlie and Edward?
Date: 29 Jul 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
OK I hate cliff's, get to writing asap
Date: 29 Jul 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 29 Jul 2021 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my!!!!!!!!! Please update early!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2021 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Just shoot Aro he has gone mad. Grief and guilt nasty combination.
Date: 26 Jul 2021 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wpw, this fire victim is really busy with his vengeancce plan. How has no one seen him? Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Jul 2021 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
What you leave us on this cliff?!?!
Come on, dont do this! What happens next?!?
Date: 26 Jul 2021 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
What you leave us on this cliff?!?!
Come on, dont do this! What happens next?!?
Date: 24 Jul 2021 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Jul 2021 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 22 Jul 2021 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my goodness will they survive will Edward and Charlie be able to get to them
Date: 22 Jul 2021 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hopefully Amber eavesdropped on their conversation and can give Edward the clues he needs to get to Bella and Renée in time.
Date: 22 Jul 2021 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
you rock glad you are back thanks
Date: 22 Jul 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh no. I am assuming that the person that has Renee and Bella is the person who survived the fire in this condo when Bella and Angela were babies. I guess he considers Charlie reasonable for his burns. Can't wait for more. So glad ya'll are back.
Date: 22 Jul 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for continuing! Love me some firefighterwarf
Date: 04 Nov 2020 6:56 PM Title: Author's Note
Sending lots of love and prayers to Clo and her family.
Date: 04 Nov 2020 3:59 PM Title: Author's Note
Aww... Sending lots of prayers for healing...strength...and peace of mind your way Clo! We DEFINITELY be here when you're able to come back. Remember in the midst of taking care of him, take time to KEEP yourself healthy and going! He's going to need YOU to be okay, so that HE can concentrate on getting better! 🥰—
Date: 01 Nov 2020 8:11 PM Title: Author's Note
My thoughts and prayers are with you and your your husband, Clo! Thank you for the update, Josie! Family always comes first. Take care of yourselves and your families. See you when things are better!
Twi-sessed aka Virginia
Date: 01 Nov 2020 7:31 PM Title: Author's Note
My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. Be safe!
Leesa
Date: 01 Nov 2020 2:56 PM Title: Author's Note
Prayers!!
Date: 01 Nov 2020 1:41 PM Title: Author's Note
My prayers
Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:51 AM Title: Author's Note
Best of wishes for a timely recovery.
Date: 01 Nov 2020 5:08 AM Title: Author's Note
Hope everything's better soon and your hubby's surgeries are a success
look forward to more x
Date: 01 Nov 2020 4:58 AM Title: Author's Note
Much Love Ladies. Family First. Extra hugs and positive vibes for Clo and her family
Date: 01 Nov 2020 4:34 AM Title: Author's Note
Prayers are with your friends husband.
Date: 01 Nov 2020 3:35 AM Title: Author's Note
hope your hubby feels better soon Clo, hugs and kisses to you and yours!!!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2020 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great update!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2020 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 07 Sep 2020 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is still keeping secrets from Bella. He should have told her that it was the coffee shop. So glad they are back together. Could it be someone tied to the fire station.? Someone who Charlie has fired? Loving this story.
Date: 06 Sep 2020 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow oh wow this was all kinds of hot hehehehehe I loved it
Date: 06 Sep 2020 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
The reunion was sexy. fans self.....
I wonder if the killer/arsonist lost a loved one to cancer or a fire??? Or were they fired from their job??? Or were they a jilted omr night stand??? Hmm....
Whatever the aronist's reasons are they are escalating....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 06 Sep 2020 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad they talked and reconnected. Renee is too funny. I'm almost thinking that its Phil going after Charlie for "taking" Renee away from him.
Date: 06 Sep 2020 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..I gave no idea who could be made at Charlie to want to harm his family..I happy for Bella and Edward I hope they get the HEA..Well done..until you post again
Date: 06 Sep 2020 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..I gave no idea who could be made at Charlie to want to harm his family..I happy for Bella and Edward I hope they get the HEA..Well done..until you post again
Date: 06 Sep 2020 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am so happy they are doing so good
Date: 06 Sep 2020 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
First Bella you don't choose cookie dough over mint chocolate chip or rockie road!!!
Ok so who is the firebug??? Who were the candidates when Charlie became chief??? Whoever were the candidates were one is the firebug and one is died because of this fire that just happened!!! That's what we think.
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘
Date: 06 Sep 2020 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
First Bella you don't choose cookie dough over mint chocolate chip or rockie road!!!
Ok so who is the firebug??? Who were the candidates when Charlie became chief??? Whoever were the candidates were one is the firebug and one is died because of this fire that just happened!!! That's what we think.
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘
Date: 27 Aug 2020 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love that Angela visited Bella. Loved the grave scene
But who is hiding in the woods? Why does he want the Swans dead?
Date: 26 Aug 2020 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think it is paul because he is a dick lol So happy Bella pulled her head out
Date: 26 Aug 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 26 Aug 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 25 Aug 2020 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Who is this guy??!! Please let Charlie figure it out
Date: 25 Aug 2020 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Who is this guy??!! Please let Charlie figure it out
Date: 24 Aug 2020 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
thank you for the update...I'm happy they made up..Now who is this crazy after the Swan family? until you post again
Date: 23 Aug 2020 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ohhhhh, great chapter !!!
Date: 23 Aug 2020 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so pleased that Edward and Bella have reconciled.
I can't wait to read more about the mysterious arsonist and why he has it in for the Swan's.
Date: 23 Aug 2020 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad Victoria talked some sense into her. Ack for cliffy.
Date: 23 Aug 2020 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Victoria and Angela both helped Bella come to grips with her feelings for Edward. The investigation is supper scary. I wonder who the creepy man is. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Aug 2020 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow thank goodness for Angela but who wants them all dead
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the movement in the plot as well as the relationship. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 21 Aug 2020 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ahhhhhh
I'e just binge read every chapter.
I knew you would leave it there.
Ahhh
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great job
Date: 20 Aug 2020 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Keep on writing
Date: 18 Aug 2020 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
I was crying also
Date: 17 Aug 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Aug 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Aug 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Aug 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Aug 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Aug 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 10 Aug 2020 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Will Bella seek out solace in her father?
This separation will give Edward and Rose time to find the serial arsonist.
Angela was the target of that fire. The subsequent fires probably also have a selected victim.
Date: 10 Aug 2020 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just don't understand why he waited so long to tell her. I think she handled it very well.
Date: 09 Aug 2020 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome chapter but at least he told her before someone else did it.
Date: 09 Aug 2020 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
So sad for them both. I hope they can come through it
Date: 09 Aug 2020 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Whew! That was a rough one, but it needed to happen.
Date: 09 Aug 2020 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness. Im glad he finally told her about his past. Beautifully written chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2020 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
You made me cry now you have to fix them please
Date: 09 Aug 2020 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
You made me cry now you have to fix them please
Date: 09 Aug 2020 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
At least he manned up and told her even though it was hard. If she heard it from her dad or someone else she may not be able to forgive him.
Date: 09 Aug 2020 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hopefully Charlie talks to Bella, he knows Edward didn't kill his twin
Date: 08 Aug 2020 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it had to happen and she took it better than I thought she would but now they are both broken hearted so sad . Bella is going to rip Charlies face off for not telling her it was Edward?
Date: 25 Jul 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks, great writing.
Date: 25 Jul 2020 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
That didn't they by Esme. Glad she is in remission. Couldn't take another sad spot.
Date: 25 Jul 2020 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait to read about girl's night.
Date: 25 Jul 2020 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks, great chapter. I like that everyone is finally talking to each other. I was wondering if the brothers were going to make an appearance. They must not be close with Edward. Brothers usually talk to each other.
Date: 25 Jul 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Such close families...
Date: 25 Jul 2020 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. You both handled the time jump well!
Date: 25 Jul 2020 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
You weren't kidding about the tissues. Thanks.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, Peter is a walking, talking sexually transmitted disease.
Edward needs to talk to Bella before they sex it up.
Date: 21 Jul 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor wade. Peter is a wanker. Wonder if he is the arsonis .... I'm having Backdraft flashbacks
Date: 21 Jul 2020 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more