Date: 26 Nov 2020 4:43 PM Title: Epilogue
an amazing story, loved it can't wait for sequel
Date: 24 Nov 2020 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
intriguing, not sure what the selections is but would love to know
Date: 16 Jul 2020 9:11 PM Title: Epilogue
enjoyed reading :) glad the king got what he deserved..
Teddy and Darling sweet Ending
Date: 10 Jul 2020 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue
More , more this was a great escape read. Going to another time and world is so appreciated. Thank you Good Witch.
Date: 10 Jul 2020 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue
More , more this was a great escape read. Going to another time and world is so appreciated. Thank you Good Witch.
Date: 02 Jul 2020 9:11 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story, thank you for sharing.
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:50 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:00 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a sweet finish. I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:00 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a sweet finish. I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: 18 Jun 2020 7:06 AM Title: Epilogue
I like this Tanya from the latter part of your story. Thank you.
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:40 PM Title: Epilogue
Love love love this story!!!!!!! I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 17 Jun 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 44
Alice and Jasper are back!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2020 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 43
Lots of answers in this chapter
Date: 17 Jun 2020 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm glad things have worked out. Did Angela die in the fighting? Was she part of the Southern Rebels?
Date: 17 Jun 2020 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my. Edward and his hot headed self.
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
Glad Charlie wrote to Bella. Tyler is an ass.
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 39
What does Bella mean when she leaves her life will never be the same?
Date: 17 Jun 2020 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 38
I'm glad the girls had some fun. Also glad that Bella and Jacob got to talk.
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:48 AM Title: Epilogue
Nice ending. I hope Rose's husband isn't as evil as he was in canon
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:48 AM Title: Epilogue
Nice ending. I hope Rose's husband isn't as evil as he was in canon
Date: 17 Jun 2020 9:16 AM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 17 Jun 2020 8:55 AM Title: Epilogue
So happy for all loved this story and will be looking forward to what is next Thanks so much
Date: 17 Jun 2020 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 37
Is Angela setting Bella up?
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
Bella will make a good Queen for Edward. So glad she could get help for the rebels.
Date: 17 Jun 2020 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
How did the King find out that Edward and Bella were on the roof dancing???? I wonder if Edward will get another beating?
Date: 17 Jun 2020 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
How did the King find out that Edward and Bella were on the roof dancing???? I wonder if Edward will get another beating?
Date: 17 Jun 2020 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
I am assuming that the King is mad at Angela because she did not speak at all. And he is mad at Bella because she said to fight for yourself. Loved that the Queen came and talked to Bella.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
What medicine is Bella taking? Something for anxiety?????
Date: 16 Jun 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
Well, the claws come out with Rosalie. What are Bella and Carlisle talking about.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my. I think Edward would kill his father if he found out.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh wow. She pissed the King off. Glad she and Edward had one night together.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no. Bella is her own worse enemy. I have a feeling Tanya attack Edward. If so why did he not tell Bella that.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad Edward and his father came back safely.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad Rise and Bella talked. Sounds like we may have a traitor in the castle.
Date: 16 Jun 2020 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 44
The changes are happening OMG so happy for them all
Date: 16 Jun 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 44
Ah i love how positive things are turning out for everyone. So exciting.
Date: 15 Jun 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 44
So glad about the Whitlocks
Date: 15 Jun 2020 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 43
Wow!
I cant believe its almost over.
I absolutely love this story.
Thank you for writting it.
Hugs
Tina
Date: 14 Jun 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
Glad that king is dead and a new king lives on I am so sad about Edwards mom so sad
Date: 14 Jun 2020 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 43
I can't imagine how Edward is coping, losing his parents, the stress of waiting for Bella to recover and being thrust into the role of King during unrest.
Date: 13 Jun 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 43
Thank goodness the king died. Rosalie new Edward and Bella loved each other I don't see how she thought she was going to win.
Date: 13 Jun 2020 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 43
Thank goodness the king died. Rosalie new Edward and Bella loved each other I don't see how she thought she was going to win.
Date: 12 Jun 2020 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 42
OMG!
I started reading this story earlier today.
I dint stop until now.
I didn't review each chapter because I just could not stop long enough to do so.
I absolutely love this story.
Wow!
Holy shit!
Is Bella going to ok!
Now. Edward become king a lot sooner.
Will Bella become the Queen as well?
I have so many questions.
But i have to say that i absolutely love it.
Hugs,
Tina
Date: 11 Jun 2020 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 42
Edward needs to learn how to temporarily set aside his emotions in the moment so he can hear/see the information around him, it's an important skill for any leader to gain.
Here's to the next chapter, and hopefully Edward keeping his head firmly on his shoulders.
Date: 11 Jun 2020 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 42
Damn he told Rose he was choosing her...
Date: 11 Jun 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow, what a riveting character. Awesome job.
Date: 11 Jun 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow, what a riveting character. Awesome job.
Date: 10 Jun 2020 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thank god he knows what happened
Date: 10 Jun 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 42
I've absolutely loved this story, I'm normally a silent reader and rarely comment on anything. The thing that niggles me is how we don't really know Edward and Rosalie's story. I get it is a Bella / Edward story but the last line of the chapter makes me feel as though there was a lot more going in than what we believe. Can you shed any clarity on this?
Date: 10 Jun 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 42
I've absolutely loved this story, I'm normally a silent reader and rarely comment on anything. The thing that niggles me is how we don't really know Edward and Rosalie's story. I get it is a Bella / Edward story but the last line of the chapter makes me feel as though there was a lot more going in than what we believe. Can you shed any clarity on this?
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 41
OMG NOOOOO he cant pick Rose no matter what
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm not sure what makes me happier the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm not sure what makes me happier the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm not sure what makes me happier the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm not sure what makes me happier the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 42
Happy this posted soon. Can’t wait for more. Thrilled the King is dead.
Date: 10 Jun 2020 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 41
🤯😭🤪🤷♀️🙈😍’”
At all the feelings (not in particular order) I felt in this chapter. The DRAMA!!!!
Sad to know this is slowly/quickly coming to an end... Looking forward to your next update ❤️❤️❤️
Date: 10 Jun 2020 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 41
Wow. I read this last night. Even though I knew this was coming (as I read enough stories to know this), I was so upset -- I couldn't sleep! Well, needless to say once Edward gets ahold of that letter and he hunts her down through Carlisle and has 'words' or a 'knife' for this father, I hope to see she is well and waiting for him. Too much angst if you prolong this part on top of all the angst to get here. I am looking forward to sleeping again, once you bring them back together ...happily of course.
Date: 10 Jun 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my goodness. teddy get your head out of your ass before you lose the best thing you've ever had in your life. Thrilling chapter.
Date: 10 Jun 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my goodness. teddy get your head out of your ass before you lose the best thing you've ever had in your life. Thrilling chapter.
Date: 08 Jun 2020 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
Tyler is an ass and needs ass kicked. WOW her dad was part of the rebeloun OMG
Date: 08 Jun 2020 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
Can we like... hit Tyler with a van?
Looking forward to what's to come! Very happy that Bella has her ducks in a row, as well as her and Edward falling more and more in step with each other every passing chapter.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 39
So sad to hear of her father's death. I cant wait to read more soon and see where this journey takes her.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 39
So sad to hear of her father's death. I cant wait to read more soon and see where this journey takes her.
Date: 06 Jun 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
OMG so sad I think it is a set up I dont like the king he is evil
Date: 06 Jun 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 39
I wish someone would kill the king so Edward could take over.
Date: 05 Jun 2020 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 38
All caught up and I have to tell you I LOVE IT cant wait for more
Date: 05 Jun 2020 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 38
I am all caught up and I must say I LOVE IT
Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
Im so glad that she and Jacob have come to a mutual respect and understanding for each other.
Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
Im so glad that she and Jacob have come to a mutual respect and understanding for each other.
Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
Im so glad that she and Jacob have come to a mutual respect and understanding for each other.
Date: 04 Jun 2020 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
He trust Bella and I am sure he is in love with her
Date: 03 Jun 2020 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a world to live in WOW
Date: 31 May 2020 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 37
Angela is part of the set up. Probably the king too
Date: 31 May 2020 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 37
Fascinating turn of events but was i the only one confused? She put jewelry on before she left... did she not notice it was different because Jacob came in? I had to read this chapter several times to make sure I got it right... or I think I got it right? Her jewelry was stolen and Felix had it right?
Still love your story. Just a tad confused for a sec. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 31 May 2020 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
I believe Angela had something to do with the necklace that Felix gave to Bella. She has been acting very suspicious lately.
Date: 31 May 2020 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 37
I had suspected the king, but it wasn't him. Now I wonder about Angela and her "off" voice. Why would the rebels care who is chosen? But Angela certainly does.
Date: 28 May 2020 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 36
Very impressive lady Isabella
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
Very impressive lady Isabella
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
Very impressive lady Isabella