Date: 17 Oct 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Maggie :(
And damn it's going to be a battle starting now.
Date: 11 Oct 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Tanya didnt stay did she???
Date: 11 Oct 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow - definitely a plot I've never seen before, and I'm really liking this so far - great job!
Date: 11 Oct 2018 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow Hope he gets rid of Jessica and Tanya soon before someone is really hurt. Glad she told him her story. Jacob is a moron.
I have no issue with your chapter length, your posting schedule, or your plot. This is your story to tell. I'm just along for the ride and I appreciate you allowing me to go on it with you.
Date: 11 Oct 2018 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sweet that Bella is caring for her maids and such. Wonder what will happen to make Bella change her mind about a possibility of being with him
Date: 10 Oct 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Doesn't Bella realize she can help her family and friends the most by being chosen.
Date: 10 Oct 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yes she is. She needs to give him a chance.
Date: 10 Oct 2018 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my!! I wonder what Tanya did or said to provoke Maggie. I'm sure she will try the same with Bella soon.
Date: 10 Oct 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder who will realize 1st that they are falling for each other.
Author's Response:
Edward doesn't need to realize, he knows. Just needs her to put it together.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love that Bella is so caring for her maids. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, she kneed him in his privates. That was not good.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, she kneed him in his privates. That was not good.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, she kneed him in his privates. That was not good.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, 8 are already gone. That was quick.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, 8 are already gone. That was quick.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, 8 are already gone. That was quick.
Date: 29 Aug 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this Bella. I also like this Edward? Maybe.
I like that this story isn't crazy and outlandish, but rather has a good balance between the fiction and realism.
I appreciate all of the updates, I hope life balances itself out for you soon!
Date: 29 Aug 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 28 Aug 2018 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ouch for the allergic reaction. Glad I don't like seafood. lol. Bella is such a great person, thinking of others.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella seems like such a sweet, unselfish person. LOL for her taking E down. Jenks is in for a surprise I'd wager.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad that Bella isn't letting it go to her head. I like that she gushed over her trio. Wow 8 gone already. Guess they gave some crappy/selfish/hateful type answers
Date: 17 Aug 2018 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Prince Edward seems nice. He does not seem arrogant.
Date: 17 Aug 2018 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. She's just being herself and the other girls already don't like her.
Date: 17 Aug 2018 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Sounds like Tanya already has her nails out.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
This kind of sounds like the Bachelor. Lol.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think Jacob has someone else that he wants to marry. And that is the reason he is acting the way he is.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for explaining the cast or stages of how their society works.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 4:10 PM Title: Prologue
This sounds very interesting.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story is so interesting. Bella needs to calm down and enjoy the ride.
Date: 13 Aug 2018 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice. This is definitely the kind of Bella I was hoping for.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww Bella is so overwhelming to be in that position Edward sounds like he’s goin to keep an eye on MRS Isabella
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
By the looks of it Bella is the one that will do anything for her family she’s soo down to earth her kindness will get her far in the election
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like Carlisle doesn't approve of the collection. Does sound like people selling themselves to help their families out.
Author's Response:
I love when you review my fics. To answer your questions/comments, a family is the same caste unless something changes it. Marriage is the main way, Victoria no longer lives in the home, and Tyler moved out when his work being commissioned by the mayor gave him a small level of celebrity. Tanya is a pill now, but she slowly grows on you...like a fungus. And Bella won't let them get too much over on her. As for Carlisle, his issue isn't with the Collection, but with other things being the royal physician makes you privy to. He sees a lot but he cares for Edward as he has been at the palace since before he was born. And he is being honest when he says he wants Isabella to stick around. Having him in this gives me a whole side plot that th original didn't have and I love it.
AGW
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like Bella's personality and kindness will be taken advantage of by the other contestants.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sounds like Skanya is going to be a real biatch to be around.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow, some hellacious rules....which I'm sure don't apply to the men.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm, wonder if Jacob is trying to have his cake and eat it too....with another piece of cake on the side.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow interesting that different people in the same house are different castes. The Jacob thing at the end doesn't sound good for Bella.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 5:57 PM Title: Prologue
Lemme guess, Renee submits for her without her knowledge?
Date: 04 Aug 2018 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Only a suggestion" my ass. Gtfo creepy Jenks.
Yay, double date! Looking forward to the next chapter (:
Date: 01 Aug 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yikes I would not want my daughter to sign that
Date: 31 Jul 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Umm don’t like Jacob soo far will see I wonder who else is a Virgen beside Bella
Date: 31 Jul 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella, this isn't starting off great for her... I don't usually think of Jake characters in a bad light until made to do so, and everything just points to Jake being an ass in this story ): I'm firmly Team Bella, I just hope the Bellas are strong women ya know?
What's the update schedule for this story? Looking forward to more!
Date: 25 Jul 2018 5:17 PM Title: Prologue
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jul 2018 10:51 PM Title: Prologue
I am so incredibly excited!!!! I have to admit i crash coursed The Selection Series after reading your intro and this is going to be a GREAT story, especially with your creative twists and turns!!!! Please warn us if this isnt going to be a HEA though.... i just got stabbed with an unexpected story-end this week nad im still trying to recooperate. LOL
Date: 06 Jul 2018 8:06 AM Title: Prologue
I thought The Selection sounded I interesting, but I have never taken the time to read it. I look forward to this story! Thank you!
Date: 05 Jul 2018 8:04 AM Title: Prologue
I loved this series and I thought it would make a great Edward and Bella story. Cannot wait to read this!
Date: 04 Jul 2018 6:19 PM Title: Prologue
Thank you for this intriguing first chapter! Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 04 Jul 2018 10:38 AM Title: Prologue
I never read The Selection Series, but I'm looking forward to this. Seems interesting and hopefully full of big f-you's from Bella!