[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2021 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 33
I want to know that Aro makes him suffer
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2021 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
I rushed to Youtube at the start so I could visualize
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2021 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
don't know if the father of daughter could realistically have that conversation with her boyfriend
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2021 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
I haven't looked but I think a sequel of these characters would be awesome
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2021 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Hopefully he will get his college degree in teaching and open a music center in his moms name
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
somethings I suspected now I want to know the whys. An amazing story ladies!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2021 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
I think Cheney is blackmailing her
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope Cheney gets his
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
that is just wrong
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
getting closer
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
can't wait for first kiss
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
so I assume there are two of the same necklaces, can't wait to learn why
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2021 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
he is so sweet
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2021 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
aww sad for Edward
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
going well
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2021 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
she will believe his innocents
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2021 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
I always liked the Charlie character he is a great dad
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2021 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
definate progress
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2021 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
loving this story
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2021 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
HE IS NOT USED TO KINDNESS OR TRUSTING PEOPLE
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2021 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 35
I loved reading this one so very sweet I love this Edward
thank you
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2021 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 35
I loved reading this one so very sweet I love this Edward
thank you
Date: 22 Mar 2020 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
Great ending to another great story Thanks so much
Date: 22 Mar 2020 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
I was so happy that Ben got his first beat down. It was good them going back. Great story sad it is over
Date: 23 Feb 2020 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 33
I realy want Edward to write Aro a special note and make Ben's life hell at least what is left of it.
Date: 02 Jan 2020 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
Beautiful story ,enjoyed reading.Good luck with other projects as well.
Date: 02 Jan 2020 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
Beautiful story ,enjoyed reading.Good luck with other projects as well.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2019 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have been following you two as always but now want to reread as completed.
Hope to finish in a day.
Date: 23 Dec 2019 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
That was a great story. Wonderful job you two!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 35
Another end to a sweet story. Would love to see an outtake someday for this one. Thanks for writing and sharing
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2019 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thank you for sharing such an amazing story with your readers. You guys did a wonderful job wrapping this fic up and giving us a look into their future.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2019 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 35
The 4 baby story addition seemed to come out of nowhere. ---shrugs--- But I love Edward as a principal and Bella as a counselor after all that they've been through. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Nov 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it all!!! Thanks for all of your time spent gifting us with this!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2019 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 35
:) loved this story
Date: 16 Nov 2019 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 35
Tank you for sharing this story.
I loved it.
Date: 16 Nov 2019 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, what an amazing wrap up! So sad their story is over!
Date: 25 Oct 2019 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please post the last chapter as is annoying me when author's don't post for a very long time I know real life get's in the way
Date: 26 Sep 2019 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 34
Cheney got beat! Yes!!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2019 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 34
I would love Little Bear to make a friend. See Jake and everyone else out on the res again. Other than that maybe some brother sister bonding? I guess I'm looking for a few things past the epilogue, some futuretakes?
This story has been great, because it's been a wild ride I'm glad it's coming to an end, but I'm also sad since it was so good! Thank you for sharing your creation with us (:
Date: 15 Sep 2019 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 33
Yeah....Aro and friends need to rip that sorry, sick mother effer apart from the inside....maybe he cant be hurt mentally or emotionally.....but physically...oh yes......physically he can be hurt.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2019 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 34
Emotional packed chapter.
Sherry
Date: 13 Sep 2019 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 34
I will miss this story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2019 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
It seems like Edward and Bella are both getting some closure concerning their past. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2019 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 34
It seems like Edward and Bella are both getting some closure concerning their past. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Sep 2019 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 34
I was hoping Cheney would get punished even more.
Date: 13 Sep 2019 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 27 Aug 2019 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
I hope Cheney becomes Big Bubba's bitch in prison. I hope he lives a long life of torture, but he is a weak bull who will probably kill himself or get himself killed. Angela is a sick sad person. She is so messed up that there is no hope for her. Her mind is gone. Lauren, Bella, and Edward will survive and excell in life because they have each other and a large support system. They need to continue with Jasper, but they all should head to college and a new life.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2019 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 33
You always put the genious touch to every story you both write. Keep them coming. Can't wait for the next one
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2019 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 33
Wow a heart wrenching chapter. Hmmm I want Tanya or Charlie to go see Aro..... Muhahaha... Esp the part of being a pedophile . What can I say.... I'm evil like that. They
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2019 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 33
Dam! Ben was more of an evil bastard than I thought he was and for a much longer time frame too. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2019 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow!!! How horrific of a man was Cheney. I really want Aro to find out what all Cheney's done and spread the word in prison. They all are stronger for the hell they've been through, but I could see Bella holding Renee's death against Edward because of Cheney's reasonings why he did it. What a horrible situation to be in. At least Cheney will get some of what he deserves; although I think he'll be found dead in prison sooner rather than later.
Sherry
Date: 21 Aug 2019 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
good. cheney is a real psycho
Date: 21 Aug 2019 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for sharing your work but I believe that we need his time in that cell with Aro!!! Lol! I stopped my day and went to a quiet spot!
Date: 31 Jul 2019 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
What a fun and great chapter. We needed a light-hearted one.
Date: 30 Jul 2019 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Lauren. What a douche her sperm donor is. Sweet that E could help her out. LOL for the prank.
Date: 30 Jul 2019 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 32
LOved it thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2019 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bittersweet moments. Our law enforcement used that song to do their video.
Sherry
Date: 29 Jul 2019 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
i dont know why but this chapter was a real tear jerker for me. loved it. cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2019 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 32
Edward and Lauren's dad sure is a big ole douche canoe. Dam! The prom, graduation and the prank were great. I hope the Cheneys get what is coming to them. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 20 Jul 2019 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think there dad is a dick. Charlie is the best
Date: 15 Jul 2019 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 31
nice updates keep up the great work.
Date: 14 Jul 2019 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
Welp. Thanks Charles.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 31
Lol!!! That was funny... love Charlie!!
Date: 09 Jul 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
That conversation with Charlie is so funny. I think they have some time before they get to full on sex. They need to explore each other more first. Edward's and Lauren's sperm donor is a piece of trash that they need to dismiss from their lives. Charlie justs needs to "adopt" them as his kids. He is there for them. Edward doesn't need to give his sperm donor anymore money. That is all he wants. Help Lauren and himself to get their degrees should be his priority. When that is done, he can work on his new school.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
I know he means well but having Charlie talking about "making women scream" really creeped me out! lol
Date: 09 Jul 2019 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wow his and Lauren's sperm donor is a real nasty POS. Def an awkward talk at the end
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2019 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Edward Sr. is a joke. The man needs to fall off the end of the earth. Edward and Lauren, both would be better off. I have a feeling that Edward Sr. is going to focus on getting his hands on Edward's money somehow. Charlie surprised me; being so open about the sex talk with Edward, considering it is his daughter, but oh well... lol.
Sherry
Date: 08 Jul 2019 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
First thank you sharing but Dad is a douche!!! I know you are going to have him doing something STUPID!!!! Poor Edward, I would be freaking out about speaking to Charlie!!! Charlie’s statement at the end was down right SHOCKING, I bet Edward’s jaw is in the floor. I love how you made him real and logical while being a good parent!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2019 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think it would be best if poor Lauren just accepts the fact that her father is going to leave. Edward already has written him off it seems. I sure would. He is a selfish ass.
The fact that Edward is worried about Bella's possible enjoyment during sex to have that awkward as hell conversation with her dad is evidence that he really loves her and cares about her.
Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Jun 2019 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 28 Jun 2019 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
HOLLY SHIT WOW what a twist love it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2019 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
No did not see that coming
Date: 27 Jun 2019 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
What a twist! Loved this chapter!!! Can’t wait for more!
Date: 27 Jun 2019 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
Nope, I didn't see that coming. Keep posting, we love your writing.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
How crazy! I think Edward and Lauren will be great support for each other. I think pops needs to stay away. They don't need his toxic attitude in their lives. Edward should use some of the money he was awarded to help Lauren go to university. In fact, I think Bella, Edward, and Lauren should go to university together and all get a new start.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2019 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 30
All I can say is WHAT THE @#$!@#$ that was crazy, but good crazy. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2019 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
I started wondering if Lauren's father was Edward's also while Tanya was talking to Edward about him. Then the phone Tanya had in the store is when I was fairly sure they had the same father. What an awful man; he's gonna try to make money from one of his kids over what happened to them. I really hope he disappears again and leaves them both alone.
Sherry