Date: 18 Sep 2019 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 34
I would love Little Bear to make a friend. See Jake and everyone else out on the res again. Other than that maybe some brother sister bonding? I guess I'm looking for a few things past the epilogue, some futuretakes?
This story has been great, because it's been a wild ride I'm glad it's coming to an end, but I'm also sad since it was so good! Thank you for sharing your creation with us (:
Date: 27 Aug 2019 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
I hope Cheney becomes Big Bubba's bitch in prison. I hope he lives a long life of torture, but he is a weak bull who will probably kill himself or get himself killed. Angela is a sick sad person. She is so messed up that there is no hope for her. Her mind is gone. Lauren, Bella, and Edward will survive and excell in life because they have each other and a large support system. They need to continue with Jasper, but they all should head to college and a new life.
Date: 21 Aug 2019 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow!!! How horrific of a man was Cheney. I really want Aro to find out what all Cheney's done and spread the word in prison. They all are stronger for the hell they've been through, but I could see Bella holding Renee's death against Edward because of Cheney's reasonings why he did it. What a horrible situation to be in. At least Cheney will get some of what he deserves; although I think he'll be found dead in prison sooner rather than later.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
That conversation with Charlie is so funny. I think they have some time before they get to full on sex. They need to explore each other more first. Edward's and Lauren's sperm donor is a piece of trash that they need to dismiss from their lives. Charlie justs needs to "adopt" them as his kids. He is there for them. Edward doesn't need to give his sperm donor anymore money. That is all he wants. Help Lauren and himself to get their degrees should be his priority. When that is done, he can work on his new school.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Edward Sr. is a joke. The man needs to fall off the end of the earth. Edward and Lauren, both would be better off. I have a feeling that Edward Sr. is going to focus on getting his hands on Edward's money somehow. Charlie surprised me; being so open about the sex talk with Edward, considering it is his daughter, but oh well... lol.
Date: 08 Jul 2019 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
First thank you sharing but Dad is a douche!!! I know you are going to have him doing something STUPID!!!! Poor Edward, I would be freaking out about speaking to Charlie!!! Charlie’s statement at the end was down right SHOCKING, I bet Edward’s jaw is in the floor. I love how you made him real and logical while being a good parent!!
Date: 08 Jul 2019 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think it would be best if poor Lauren just accepts the fact that her father is going to leave. Edward already has written him off it seems. I sure would. He is a selfish ass.
The fact that Edward is worried about Bella's possible enjoyment during sex to have that awkward as hell conversation with her dad is evidence that he really loves her and cares about her.
Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
How crazy! I think Edward and Lauren will be great support for each other. I think pops needs to stay away. They don't need his toxic attitude in their lives. Edward should use some of the money he was awarded to help Lauren go to university. In fact, I think Bella, Edward, and Lauren should go to university together and all get a new start.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
I started wondering if Lauren's father was Edward's also while Tanya was talking to Edward about him. Then the phone Tanya had in the store is when I was fairly sure they had the same father. What an awful man; he's gonna try to make money from one of his kids over what happened to them. I really hope he disappears again and leaves them both alone.