Date: 17 Aug 2020 9:11 PM Title: Plagiarized
Good luck to you Marie, and thanks for the story xo
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:53 PM Title: Plagiarized
Dear Marie Carrio, I send You my best wishes! I enjoy Your stories so much: they are written in an excellent way, there is passion a d wit in Your writing. You have been badly betrayed. My thoughts are with You.
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:47 PM Title: Plagiarized
Legal action is NECESSARY!
Plagiarism is a crime.
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:01 PM Title: Plagiarized
I'm so sorry to hear this. You began a collaboration with an inferior writer in good faith. Instead of learning from you and developing her writing skills she stole your words. What a lowlife, lying leech she turned out to be. Please follow this through, I know you've said this story wasn't written for money but anything she has made clearly does not belong to her.
Please don't let this stop you writing
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:30 AM Title: Epilogue
Fantastic parting chapter.
Glad they had a chance to thank this who helped them in their journey to adulthood.
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Unexpected end to the reunion for the Cullens. Edward said is peace. Now for the rest of their future to pan out they need to graduate high school.
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Will Edward follow through with the request for emancipation from his parents?
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
The idea that you're not alone in your sorrow is a very deep seeded need in all of us.
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Finish school should be their next agenda item.
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm hoping Emmett will figure out the feds are search the boarder crossings for the young runaway couple.
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Fleeting friends are another interesting part if life's road trip.
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Of course the dead end trail would find new life just as the teens decide to continue the journey.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
But they didn't even consider the use of a condom!
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm leary of this new plan but also agree that Emmett's location needs to remain guarded.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can't imagine one of my daughters having to deal with a sexual assault of any form.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was too close to becoming a statistic.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hm, Charlotte isn't her real name. The Blacks must have known that by using other people who's lives are in a similar situation E&B's travel would remain a secret.
Did the check out clerk at Target call in Bella's sighting to the FBI?
Date: 04 Feb 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Life experiences do not truly equal maturity. They have too much to figure out regarding their journey to Emmett to mess with their first sexual intimacy encounter.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Life outside the protected bubble of parents rule is harsh.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
A tense moment, but quick thinking and sticking as close to the truth as possible helped.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Trust is difficult to earn as well as give if your past has had little to reference.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 2:59 PM Title: Epilogue
I am glad they got to see Kate and Gary again.
Thanks for sharing :D It was a wonderful story :D
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ha, Jacob is an old man. Glad he was right where E&B needed him.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
No id's and no transportation will put them in a bind.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward should have destroyed the phones so no signal could be triangulated. Their where abouts has at least been given as Champagne Illinois.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Where will E&B finish highschool?
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
What made Emmett plan an option for Bella to get away?
Date: 04 Feb 2019 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Young love! :D
Date: 02 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Young and in love doesn't set them up to face life's brutal challenges.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 11:11 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this