Date: 28 Apr 2019 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 17: Military Cadence
Sookie, ever the over thinker :)
Date: 27 Apr 2019 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 17: Military Cadence
I'm glad you are feeling better.....headaches suck. As for Sookie and Eric i'm glad they are thinking of everyone involved especially Jason. However, Jason is a perceptive young man I can almost imagine him having the talk with both of them when the time comes
Date: 25 Apr 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 16: Say Again Your Last
I know this is logical thinking but Gah....I hope her thoughts at the end of the chapter are just those....thoughts and she tries to be friends with him.....he did give up everything
Date: 14 Apr 2019 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 13: Fire Watch
Another beautifully written chapter....now the real healing begins
Date: 12 Apr 2019 2:47 AM Title: Prologue: Rocks and Shoals
Please open your eyes....don't keep them waiting......
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 6: Surge
I love also how Eric and Sookie aren’t immediately together. IMHO, that makes when or if they do more believable!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2019 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: Detachment
I rarely read TB fan fiction, but I’m so glad I gave this one a shot. I love it, and I love how you’ve made Eric so real. I always felt that the show did a great job of making you understand why he was the way he was and made you empathize so much. Your writing does the same, even better, and I can hardly wait to find out what happened next!
Date: 07 Apr 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 11: Take Cover
These two have already been through so much mentally and emotionally only knowing there is so much more pain for them to endure before the sun starts shining is gut wrenching....Sookie is about to hand him his butt
Date: 03 Apr 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 10: Above My Pay Grade
Writing is hard work...thank you for sharing your with us!
Date: 20 Mar 2019 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Surge
I only know these 'people' from fan fiction as I have not read the books or seen the shows. Having said that I am thankful for the stories and realoly like the different take from different authors. I realize that it is hard to convert stories from supernatural to all human, but feel that you are doing a great job of it. Thanks for your hard work.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2019 3:59 AM Title: Prologue: Rocks and Shoals
Terrific start, I'm hooked. Thanks.
Date: 26 Feb 2019 2:41 AM Title: Prologue: Rocks and Shoals
So excited to read your newest work.
My thoughts on this prologue:
The mental and physical discipline Eric's dad imposes on Eric is made worse by the verbal downgrading of Eric.
And While Eric's dad is abusive, the mother is also culpable.
But we know that our Eric will always overcome and become a better man because of it.