[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2020 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
Your story is one of the best dystopian stories I've read, and I'm including The Hunger Games and The Allegiant series in that assessment. I just like how you're writing Bella's awakening and all. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2020 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
Your story is one of the best dystopian stories I've read, and I'm including The Hunger Games and The Allegiant series in that assessment. I just like how you're writing Bella's awakening and all. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2019 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
in what year does this take place
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2019 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yikes, but I had a feeling something like this was going to happen.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2019 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy hell!! I knew Bella was getting fed up but I suppose Edward and James just pushed her over the edge. At least she stood up for herself.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Jessica is a case all on her own. She's got balls to concoct such a plan and think it would break E/B up just so she could be back on top.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward and Bella give me whiplash.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob just set Bella up. He's probably been paid so someone coud get a photo of them kissing; thus the rustling in the woods Bella heard. Edward is a coward from hell, bailing on Bella after taking her virginity. Esme is right, he needs to figure out his feelings.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
The choice of descriptions of having sex, lol.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
Several things happened this chapter I didn't expect.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella must thrive on bad situations.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
What a mess they've created.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella's got balls. She's always fighting.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really want to know what Edward thinks about how Bella's feeling about everything she finally let out. Will he go ahead with his plan to see other woman while married to her?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
The way Edward talks about the contract and Bella then belonging to him is so weird.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is really a selfish bastard, but taking her virginity has to be done. Poor Bree. How horrible to face death without your parents. Good thing she has Bella.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2019 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Seems Bella is thinking about things more carefully than Edward.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2019 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Such a strange way for intendeds to act toward each other.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2019 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is a disaster waiting to happen.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2019 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really don't like how Bella is always beating herself up over her weight. She really needs to except herself as she is.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2019 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward wasted no time in getting to what he wanted. They may have agreed to the farce of a marriage to get his inheritance, but they didn't discuss him seeing other woman, although I think that's a given.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2019 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jessica is a real bitch. I had to laugh at Esme putting her in her place. Edward seems to have the weight of the world on his shoulders. Bella seems to be handling things well enough.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2019 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm intrigued.
Sherry
Date: 22 Aug 2019 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Omfng!! O.O I need to read more!!
Date: 22 Aug 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMFNG!! WOW!! OMG!! WOW!!! This is huge!!! I am so proud of her for FINALLY sticking up for herself! James is an a**hole! I think I have a new love for the Cullen's! ;) I can't wait to read more! :D
Date: 22 Aug 2019 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG!! Did that friggen dirt bag just threaten her!?! OMG! Edward is a sh*t!! I love this! I can't wait to read more!! ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2019 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
WOW!! This is umm...fantastic! ;)
Date: 21 Aug 2019 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
OHSWEETBABYGEEBUS!!! My heart is poubding in my chest! Edward...and then, Mc'Ds in the city and Edward getting out of the car...O.O I LOVE THIS!! I can't wait to read more but, my four mile power walk is calling me so I will have to continue when I am back ;)
Date: 21 Aug 2019 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my!! The mess keeps growing! ;) I can't wait to read more!! These two are certainly having a time! o.o
Date: 21 Aug 2019 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOW!! Bella is...just wow! :)
Date: 21 Aug 2019 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am really enjoying this story!! I don't think I have made it through a chapter without shedding a tear or two...
Date: 21 Aug 2019 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG!! HOLYSH*T! He is way ahead of everything! ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2019 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am surprised by Carlisle. I see that he is definitely not the bad guy here. ;) I am happy that Bella and Edward had a talk! I think they are both still a mess. ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2019 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG!! I am really hooked on this story!! They are both so f'd up! ;) I can't wait to read more. Thank you for the AN about not getting to an HEA until part two. I think I would break at the lead up to a sad end of the whole story! PHEW!! I have so much to say today! lol I'm off to read more!! ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2019 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
I picture Bella a little...thicker in some areas but not entirely overweight...she just has a very low self esteem about her appearance because of her family. I am really enjoying reading this story and I hope that Edward is really going to care for her and protect her. ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my! I don't know what will happen with these two but I am thinking it will be something huge! ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2019 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
My eyes are watering....again! ;) I am really happy that Bella has Alice as her friend! She needs someone on her side!I really dislike Jessica and even Renee! I am excited to read more of this story!:D
Date: 20 Aug 2019 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, this seem like it's going to be quite exciting! ;)
Date: 13 Aug 2019 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Poor Bella and Edward!
Date: 13 Aug 2019 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Excellent chapter!
Date: 13 Aug 2019 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter!
Date: 12 Aug 2019 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Poor Bella!
Date: 12 Aug 2019 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!
Date: 12 Aug 2019 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is a good friend!
Date: 12 Aug 2019 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Go Esme! Poor Bella!
Date: 12 Aug 2019 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella! I don't like Jessica!
Date: 12 Aug 2019 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Shit is hitting the fan OMG cant wait for the next
Date: 12 Aug 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Shit did not see that coming OMG
Date: 12 Aug 2019 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Jessica is an evil Bitch
Date: 12 Aug 2019 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
I so want to kick Edwards ass for the way he is treating her. She should of told Edward about Jacob.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is right about Jacob something is not right about hime
Date: 11 Aug 2019 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
dont like her mom
Date: 11 Aug 2019 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Shit has hit the fan
Date: 11 Aug 2019 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward will not let that happen
Date: 11 Aug 2019 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think Bella will surprise them all expecally herself
Date: 11 Aug 2019 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
the swans suck. i dont like the way edward got bella away from her parents but glad he did
Date: 11 Aug 2019 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
What the F.......
Date: 11 Aug 2019 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love it Edward can poop pearls lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2019 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
I enjoyed the story and your writing however I would not have read this story if I had known that the complete was actually only book one with maybe additional books to follow.
I personally like to read stories that are complete even if that includes several books, not when the author is still writing.
I however did enjoy your story. Thank you for the adventure.
Janis
Date: 02 Aug 2019 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
I enjoyed the story and your writing however I would not have read this story if I had known that the complete was actually only book one with maybe additional books to follow.
I personally like to read stories that are complete even if that includes several books, not when the author is still writing.
I however did enjoy your story. Thank you for the adventure.
Janis
Date: 31 Jul 2019 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is not Bella's problem. She is her own worse enemy. She doesn't love herself, so she thinks no one else can love her. Edward has always loved her. She just hates herself so much that she can't see it. I hope Edward is alright. I only care about Bella because of the baby and that it will hurt Edward if something happens to her.
Date: 31 Jul 2019 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bye bye Eddie.
Date: 30 Jul 2019 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am happy they were doing better before he was taken...
I still want more from them, but I just have to wait I guess
Lol
Nice story 😀
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2019 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Can't blame B for needing to protect herself. Glad that Carlisle and Esme are caring for her. Lord knows what her egg donor would do to her mentally and physically.
ACK for the ending. Evil Cliffy Woman!!!!
TY for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2019 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
O come on don't leave us hanging like that! Good job.
Date: 30 Jul 2019 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, wow! Didn't expect that...
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2019 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
:) loved this. Looking forward to reading part two
Date: 30 Jul 2019 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! I'm looking forward to finding out more about the resistance
Date: 30 Jul 2019 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
They are getting closer. It is good to know that the Cullens love Bella
Date: 30 Jul 2019 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
She just broke his hart
Date: 30 Jul 2019 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
He has very strong feelings for Bella but she does not see it she just thinks she is an embaresment so sad for her.
Date: 30 Jul 2019 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward knows a good thing when he sees it
Date: 30 Jul 2019 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward has the best idea lol love it
Date: 30 Jul 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love Esme she put Jessica in her place lol.
Date: 27 Jul 2019 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG!! I didn’t see that coming. I feel for both of them. If they had the maturity to communicate I think things would be so very different. How different this would have went if Edward had stood up for Bella. I can’t wait to see what’s next!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2019 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you for the update..well done..Oh my I can't wait to see what happens next..until you post again
Date: 25 Jul 2019 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is so stupid and mean. Why can't she be honest with Edward in private or at least with his family. No she has to use public humiliation to release her anger about her own choices. Edward is not perfect, but she is so far from an innocent person in this charade. She made her choices and Edward is paying the price.
Date: 25 Jul 2019 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow didn't expect that twist. Admirable move Carlisle!
Date: 25 Jul 2019 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my god.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2019 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella. Edward deserves to be disinherited
Date: 24 Jul 2019 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward really screwed this one up with not putting James in his place and allowing Bella to hear all of that. Wow the ending surprised me with Carlisle backing her.
Date: 24 Jul 2019 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am shocked! Bella stands up for herself, is ready to face every humiliation and is sick of all the lies. And Edward? Perhaps this is his wake up call. I am astonished by Carlisle's decision. He is a just man without prejudices about station. I hope Edward will man up.