Glad they figured out what Jessica did.  While no woman deserves to be beaten, she does deserve the shame.of what she pulled because of her jealousy of Bellas higher standing

Well that was .......perfect Thanks

Jessica had that one coming sorry she’s too evil and Jacob oh boy can Bella smack him just for good measure infront of Edward afcource

Awesome!  But left us wondering  what bad thing will happen next and why no more future highs Will  come to pass for them.

Great update

I hope you gave her tell Edward that since she refused Jacob and stopped working with him she thought she'd handled it & didn't need to bother him.

I think in the coming unrest, I see Bella as a social justice warrior, on the side of the people

Wowsers. Some talk between them.   Wonder who saw them.... Or did Jacob come clean? 

Really they where doing sooo well Oh hells no who freaking snitch on Bella Edward better be careful

I just read everything today. Omg love the concept the way you're presenting it. I've read stories with the caste system and this one is particularly well done. I'm excited for more and more character growth. I hope that Bella does tell Edward about the encounter with Jacob because I too feel that he had an agenda considering that the person who hired him originally was Jessica. Also so sad it's Jessica being the bitch, I always liked her character. 

I'm looking forward to the next update! Thanks for sharing such a great story (:

Interesting storyline

Those two have a long way to go.   Esme is so sweet.   Ugh jacob

Thank you for the update..Well done..Bella has a lot to think about..Edward  needs to tell her how he feels about her..really..I think he really loves her..until you post again 

Esme is wonderful! Edward is strange, I just can't figure him out. I'm nervous about Jacob. Has he a hidden agenda? I love this story so much. Thank you for your update! 

Great job

I love this story and completely understand how Bella feels.  I hope that she now begins to see herself as Edward sees her, beautiful and lovable and deserving of that love. 

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Glad he was so sweet with her and told her to stop listening to her mother so much.

Thank you! I like this considerate, friendly and nervous Edward. Does he start to fall for her? I think so. I hope Bella's and his relationship will develop in a way that it ca heal the emotional wounds Renee's words have caused. 

In a way I kinda agree with mom on that  one.... But not how her mother talks to her and how she treats her

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thank you for the update..until you post again

Love bellas big adventure to McDonald's. 

Bella is just not a nice person. She keeps saying cruel things to Edward. She she really trying to make him not like her. 

Hope nxt update is soon! Truly enjoy the story!

Thank you for the update..well done..Edward went to the city..Bella had a great time...Hopefully Edward will take back his words or Bella will tell him how him being with other women will bother her.  I'm hoping once they do the do Edward won't want anyone else he will want Bella for herself , the kind person that she is..his childhood friend..until you post again

You made me cry how Edward reaction to Bella is he is starting to feel geulous of Jacob he hasn’t realized how Bella is important to him bringing another girl to the house in front of her was uncalled for

Edward should not have done that to Bella 

thank you foer the update..Does Edward really have to be that harsh?..I like the way Bella handle herself..I love Esme, her time with Tanya & bella was to funny.  I hope Edward realizes how he feels about Bella.  until you post again

Edward seems hurt. Does he more than care for Bella? Does he love her? I think he does, but Bella can't even imagine it. Her self esteem is too low. And I'm not sure if Edward really knows that he loves Bella. It's so complicated! Yet so intriguing! BTW I don't like Bella's thoughts about Jacob. And I wonder :will there ever be an EPOV! "It would be enlightening. 

I wish this society didn't make Bella feel so worthless. I still can't believe Edward cares so little for Bella. I will hold out that he secretly really loves her.

Good job to bella for making it through a tough day. I like seeing her and jasper commiserate together over the stresses of being at court. Great chapter. 

Bella has the lowest of self esteem. I don't think Edward is as cold as she makes him out to be. 

Bella has a long way to go to feel better about herself.  She is right that she's probably heard enough negativitly about herself to not be as phased about it.

Thank you for this chapter! Bella is so insecure and her self esteem is so low. I'm glad that Edward tries to have more patience with her. I really like Carlisle yet his words hurt deeply. Even though they are friendly meant. I hope the blessings ceremony goes well and Bella will gain confidence. Nevertheless I fear the contrary. I hope she and Edward will talk about their feelings towards each other soon. Before it will get more complicated with her growing few lings for Jacob and their strange situation in this f*ed up society. 

Glad she sees Edward is looking out for her.  Her egg donor, I refuse to call her a mother, is such a witch.

Glad they are having some hard conversations.  Jeez her mother is such a bitch.

Silly woman.  She really needs to talk to Edward.  Or maybe Alice will tell him what B said.

It is about time she realizes that Edward is a good guy and she is treating him horribly. She has this big chip on her shoulder and she is acting like a bitch. He is doing all that he can to make her happy, but she complains and fight him at every turn. Unless she takes a good look at herself, she will end up a bitch just like her sister and mother. Edward doesn't care about the stuff, just her.

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It seems like they may finally be on the same page

Wow! This could be good or bad for Bella!

Thank you! Edward gets a glimpse into Bella's work and her ethics. It's hard for him to accept that even in his world there are things that don't revolve around his money. I like that and I like that he stays with Bella. My distaste for Renee grows and grows. And Jacob cares for Bella. Let's see if his will complicate things between Edward and her.

I'm curious about the contract! Thank you! 

Loved the "fight" they had with the floor stuff. I hate Mrs Swan

Really glad that Edward is going with her to see  Bree

Edward is not the bastard that Bella thinks him to be. She has the worst self esteem. I believe Edward truly loves her, just maybe not as a romantic love as of yet. They truly need to talk. Hopefully they will have that chance again.

Oh Bella! Her self esteem is so low, she only thinks of herself in terms as ugly, disgusting, being a burden. My heart breaks for her! She is the person who cares the most in this story. She has no prejudices, she cares for the lower and the higher. That is so precious! But in this f*ed up society it does not count. Edward is still partly blinded. He believes in the rules of his society, he cannot see the injustice. But I guess there will come a turning point for him and then his point of view will change. Although I think it will take some time until we get there.

When I think of Renee, I'm just sad. She is so shallow. She wants to be somebody. That her only aim. She doesn't care for her children 's well-being. And she puts so many degrading and venomous thoughts about herself into Bella' s head. Yes, she gave birth to Bella, but she doesn't deserve to be called mother at all.

Thank you fo this chapter! 

Are we going to hear Edwards point of view

I am loving this story, I haven’t read a twific with a premis like this before. I really appreciate that you give detail and flesh out the story, it makes it more real for me and not like the author is rushing through or skipping vital pieces. And thank you for updating twice a week, it’s soo great knowing I have something waiting for me after work those days! 

I'm looking forward to learn more about this world. I'm wondering about Edward and if his concern is that Jacob has a reputation of hitting his clients or that is just afraid that fella might be attracted to him

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Fab idea, love the pace but desperate and greedy for updates! Can easily see myself

re-reading the finished story many times. ��