I love your stories

This story was great. I loved the power of it. There's so much zi could day but in the end none of those words feel correct. So I'll simply thank you for sharing this it was something I could feel in my soul. Best wishes on your next stories. 

Thanks for giving us another amazing story, although I feel like this chapter was rushed to wrap everything up and complete it. However, it's an amazing story of courage, going agrainst the grain to save a land from its self and those who thought they were above the population. Bella is a woman that prevailed over a chauvinistic world; a woman of standards even though she didn't know she had it in her to overcome it all to save not only her baby's daddy, but the entire country.

Sherry

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading your new story 

Thank you so much! This story is so powerful! I longed for every update, it had me captivated! Thank you for imagining it, for writing and sharing! This story is very precious to me! 

Loved this story 

OMG! They made it!! I love this story! I am sad that it has come to its end but I do love the way you wrapped it all up. Thank you so much for sharing this story! ;)

Well isn't that just a kick in the dick. Can someone just kill Michael?

Emmett will save them. Hopefully he will kill Newton

OHMYEFFING-O-D!!!! HOLYSH*T! I AM DYING HERE!!! O.O

This story has become one of my absolute favorites. I was so excited to see and update this morning. I can't wait for the next one.

Thank you so much for this chapter! Sam knows the truth and it cripples him. To him it doesn't matter whether he survives or not. As expected, Edward has been caught. It seems as if Michael Newton will triumph. But Emmett is still out there. They are not dead yet so there is still hope. 

I'm hoping the crowd will revolt when they see Sam 

Communication skills -20% these two. Or rather Edward's, he never listens but expects to be listened to. I understand the societal dynamic, but even so there are examples of men taking into account what the women around them have to say.

Should've known Edward would try to out do her.

Sherry

Edward & Bella both have issues  with thinking before they act Bella, at least, is improving 

OMG!! O.O

Oh! Edward is blindsided by his view of women, his want to protect Bella and his views about the crumbling system they live in. He wanted Bella to understand that they are a team, now he makes the same mistakes as she did. I hope Bella and Emmett will be able to save him. - I am very excited about Bella's inner development. She matures immensely. 

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I can almost hear the wheels turning in Bella's head.

Sherry

I hope Bella realizes that they are stronger together and keeps working with Edward and Emmett. They really need each other to succeed.

I think Bella is right in telling Boyce about his son

Thank you for the update..well done..New Bella is strong..I amazed at Jessica but proud if her for blowing house and amo up..you go girl..Bella is going to ditch Edward and Emmett..until you post again

HOLYFANTASTICNESS!! I love this!! ;)

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Wow! Jessica redeemed herself at the end. I understand that Bella has to change in order to cope with the situation she is in, but I think of her decisions as kind of kamikaze. She can't do it on her own. I wonder what it will take for her to see that she has friends she can count on. I hope she will get there. 

Excuse me?

“Sleeping would help, but I forced myself to stay awake, so the bitterness of my situation could marinate deep into my soul.”

Just, wow!

(Really enjoying your story 🙂)

When the establishment threatened and then kill the children and Emily I thought the Newtons were involved but only in the defense against the uprising. It's looking like Michael is playing both sides and trying to emerge in a situation where the Newton's rule the world

Ugh!!! I knew I didn't like Jessica or Micheal. How gut-wrenching to know your sister is involved in such a horrible act.

Hopefully Emmett will come to the rescue.

Sherry

OMG!! O.O

Bella is so stupid. Edward is right. She can be so stubborn.

What an escape! I am breathless. I like the dialogues between Edward, Emmett and Bella, the way they discuss things and become closer. They are under a lot of stress and cope differently with it. But now I am really scared. Bella is so stubborn, I guess she wants to save Charlie. That is so dangerous. I fear for her and the life of her companions! 

Girl you can't make it out if you don't move. 

Hopefully this trek teaches them both something.

I'm glad she didn't break anything! Jumping from trains is dangerous, even slowing down that could be 80mph 

Fuck man, why'd you have to kill him? 

Okay. Deep breaths. 

I need the next chapter asap. 

Sherry

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thank you for the update..well done..I'm happy they got to eat and clean themselves properly.  Sleep in a bed...now why would the Resistance find them?...I'm hopeing it friendly people..until you post again 

Love this story! 

Hope they take a little time to rest and heal.

OMG! This chapter is fantastic! I am so glad that Bella is alright!! I can’t wait for the update! ;)

Wow. I hope she's just scraped and bruised

Love this story  Enjoy reading about our favorite characters in not just another romance story but different time period and such. 

Thank you and can't wait for nxt chptr!

I love this!! I am dying to read more and find out what has happened on their trek! ;)

These guys have so many obstacles they are having to overcome; one thing after another. But we knew the journey to Mexico wasn't going to be easy.

Sherry

That was a close call. I expect they'll have a hard journey back to Mexico.

Sherry

I think she'll do better with Emmett on her side and helping her in her travels. 

Sherry

Pls update soon.....Cliffhanger is killing us here!