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Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2021 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Nice Story so far.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Aww for the heart to heart with Charlie.  I so love LOTR. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad you are back!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2021 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

cute

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loving this story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2020 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Glad his mom and brother are helping him talk things out. How can u not love HP or LOTR

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love them they are so cute

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

Lol 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

I loved the commentary lol

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loving this story, his family is so good.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2020 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter! Both of them watching The Lord of the Rings was so much fun to read! Thank you! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2020 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well I guess I'm a big geek too cause I love all those movies mentioned and more.  :-D

Glad he's got Jasper to talk to

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope Jasper was able to talk some sense into his brother.  LOL, I love they're going to watch a movie together long distance.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter, keep on writing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World

I totally understand what Bella is going thru with Edwards speech. I have a dear British friend and when I first meet her, her Dad was with her, it took me awhile to get use too. Great story. Keep on writing

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

😀

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

Jasper is wise

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad they talked but it is going to be a long 2 weeks.  Hope all in going well in your world.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

About time lol 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

She has no clue how he feels about her lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

Now that the cat is out of the bag how is she going to handle it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

They are just fooling themselves silly kids

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

What happened to one of his kids.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

They need to be together all the time lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World

They are just so cute

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Wheeling and Dealing

love it they are so cute

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad they talked it out. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2020 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2020 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Aww, loved it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2019 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

I still can't figure out what the problem is with them having a romantic relationship.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2019 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

oooh the first kiss......

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2019 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2019 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story! It's so much fun! Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2019 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2019 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

I dont' see the problem with having a relationship with Edward. He is the best guy out there.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2019 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

ROFL for the shagging comment.  She's going to combust soon.

Reviewer: DesertTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2019 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

I’m in love with this story!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2019 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh Bella, you need to listen to your dad and face it head on.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2019 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

She is def in denial

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2019 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

They are being stupid. There is nothing wrong with this relationship growing. They have a firm friendship to grow the intimate relationship. Dad should be encouraging the relationship not stopping it. He is the perfect guy for a daughter. I wish my own would find someone as wonderful. They are making a problem where there isn't one.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2019 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wake up you two. You are meant to be.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2019 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

The two of them are dancing around one another with the questions.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2019 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2019 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Those two are just too cute together. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2019 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

She cares so much for Edward, they've become so close over the weeks.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

Something bad must have happened to one of " his"children. - I am glad, Bella is there for him! Thank you for this chapter! 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2019 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

Love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2019 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

:)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2019 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

I hope everything is ok with his kids. I wonder what has him so flummoxed? Is he starting to realize he cares more than just friendship for her?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2019 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ Growing Bonds

Oh my. Wonder why he had to go to the hospital. Probably one of his kids

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2019 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

It would never be enough. 

Reviewer: justginger Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2019 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

I have loved this story so far!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2019 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

Loving this story.  Overprotective dad, lol, good thing Sue is there to reign him in.

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2019 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

He is too adorable. Of course she's smitten. Just won't admit it yet.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2019 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

Wonder who between them will make the first m move

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2019 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Just Friends

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2019 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World

Aww sweet friends night

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2019 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World

They are so cute together! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2019 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World

LMAO, I love this story, so funny with each of their slang expressions.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2019 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World

:)

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2019 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Wheeling and Dealing

This chapter made me smile! I love their banter and the way they open up to each other! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Wheeling and Dealing

They are so cute together, loving this story.  Yup, frosty and dipping fries into it, best thing ever.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2019 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~ Wheeling and Dealing

His ex reminds me of my first husband.  Fucker bounced checks and I was active duty military at the time

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2019 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

Sounds like date night to me lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2019 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

Love it already sounds like fun

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2019 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

They are so adorable with one another.  LMAO COD is fish.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2019 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

I'm loving this story already.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2019 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

They are so cute. Is Edward a doctor?

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2019 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

Great! He likes marmite! That's so funny! And he is right about the tea. After having been in The UK it took me several weeks until I could stand drinking tea in Germany again. It's the water. I don't know how to say it in English, in German we call it "smooth water". The German water is "hard", with chalk in it. So it tastes different. But I think my thoughts are boring for most Americans. Great chapter, thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2019 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

A promising start! I am very curious about the story! I am looking forward to the phone call and when they will meet personally. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2019 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

Great start to a friendship.  Nice of her to invite him. marmite.... gonna have to look that one up.

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2019 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

Your Edward is very enigmatic. Even after his backstory;) Thanks for sharing him. Looking forward to your updates! ~RoseE. x

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2019 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

Like your story! I also like the way you write it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2019 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2019 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

Can’t wait for the next update.. Hope you update SOON 😍

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2019 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

Yes you have no idea the sexy man that is coming!! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2019 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Tentative Tenant

Cute start.

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