Date: 07 Sep 2020 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ Welcome To My World
I totally understand what Bella is going thru with Edwards speech. I have a dear British friend and when I first meet her, her Dad was with her, it took me awhile to get use too. Great story. Keep on writing
Date: 20 Sep 2019 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
They are being stupid. There is nothing wrong with this relationship growing. They have a firm friendship to grow the intimate relationship. Dad should be encouraging the relationship not stopping it. He is the perfect guy for a daughter. I wish my own would find someone as wonderful. They are making a problem where there isn't one.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line
Great! He likes marmite! That's so funny! And he is right about the tea. After having been in The UK it took me several weeks until I could stand drinking tea in Germany again. It's the water. I don't know how to say it in English, in German we call it "smooth water". The German water is "hard", with chalk in it. So it tastes different. But I think my thoughts are boring for most Americans. Great chapter, thank you!