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Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 10:16 PM Title: My Mother's Things

Oh he had to move the grandparents out!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 9:45 PM Title: My Mother's Things

I loved it but what happened and I think Bella needs to look at the books and journals

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 4:03 AM Title: My Support

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 7:18 PM Title: My Cousin

Glad she talked Leah down off that proverbial ledge. Royce is going to be an issue I think. 



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I am so glad to see that you are getting caught up! I really love your comments!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 7:08 PM Title: My Reluctant Heart

Glad they are talking things out.  Lol for another interruption. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:54 PM Title: My Unanswered Question

 I'd feel upset if he didn't talk after her story too. The do need to learn to trust and have conversations. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:44 PM Title: My Insecurities

Getting rid of the past can be really difficult esp in your head. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:54 AM Title: Marking My Territory

Glad she put J is her place.... With witnesses. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:47 AM Title: My Wolf

Ah so the mating has brought out her true full wolf.  Jessica really has a death wish. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:29 AM Title: My Grief

Glad Charlie and B are talking about things.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:18 AM Title: My Sun

Poor Leah.  Glad she has B to talk to.  Yea Sam/Emily there was just icing on a crappy cake for her today.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:05 AM Title: My Video

Of course there is a video....LOL  Pact indeed.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 1:05 AM Title: My Support

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 1:04 AM Title: My Support

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 11:46 PM Title: My Support

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 6:27 AM Title: My Magic

Glad Bella was able to do it. Thinking Jaime has something to do with the traps too.  Aww for Edward being her rock. Lol for Seth's video

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 6:17 AM Title: My Aunt and Uncle

Carlisle is just so welcoming isn't he... Not. Aro is Def observant. Loved Charlie's dominant side coming out

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 6:07 AM Title: My Idea

Hmm thinking Victoria has fingers in this trap pie. Jess is a twit

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:54 AM Title: My Spiderman

Yea Jessica and Victoria are going to be a problem.... Good on Jake intercepting Jess

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:44 AM Title: My Great Loss

Well at least she got to say goodbye. Carlisle has crappy timing.  Bella is going to take awhile to trust herself and E

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:32 AM Title: My Reassurance

Oh wow. The rock keep falling in their path. Nanna too 😕. Not liking Ed Sr T all. Wanker. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:22 AM Title: My Last Day

Aww for Pop's passing. Yummy playtime at the cabin. Lol for playful Jake

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:06 AM Title: My Decision

Glad they are talking more and opening up. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 4:56 AM Title: My Mate's Past and Future

Nice history lesson.  Not sure I'm liking Henry or Carlisle in charge of anything with all the hatred being spewed towards her

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 6:01 PM Title: My Support

I absolutely love this story! Such a great concept but I bring witches and wolves together, with our favorite characters! I love Bella and Edward in morning this story, they are a great couple! Can't wait to see where you take us as the story unfolds. I'm looking forward to the drama that I know is coming, and really excited for the traitors behind the scenes to finally get found and defeated! Looking forward to the next update! Take care and stay safe! Ciao 

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 6:00 PM Title: My Support

I absolutely love this story! Such a great concept but I bring witches and wolves together, with our favorite characters! I love Bella and Edward in morning this story, they are a great couple! Can't wait to see where you take us as the story unfolds. I'm looking forward to the drama that I know is coming, and really excited for the traitors behind the scenes to finally get found and defeated! Looking forward to the next update! Take care and stay safe! Ciao 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Support

Oh, I love this Aro, and the relationship he has with Edward and Bella.  Riley looks like trouble.  Smackdown time.  Great update.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 7:13 AM Title: My Request

They Def both have a lot to learn. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 7:04 AM Title: My Troubled Past

She Def has some things to get over. Glad E is getting her to talk. Still surprised Carlisle or E senior hasn't come looking for them. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:52 AM Title: My Turn

Glad they are talking..... At least a little. Lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:44 AM Title: My New Mate

Yea they Def have a lot to work through.  I'm surprised that Carlisle didn't go after them. 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2020 5:05 AM Title: My Allies

Hopefully you feel better soon! I'm jumping in my skin to see how you reveal what Riley did and how much his brother was involved. Good luck on the Golden Onion Awards!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 9:54 PM Title: My Allies

:) 



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Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 3:27 PM Title: My Allies

Good chapter ☺️



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Thank you!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 1:56 PM Title: My Allies

I am with Edward, Riley is up to something.  He needs to be taken care of.  Interesting shift in alliances with Jasper looking to Edward as his Alpha, and the wolves uniting with the witches.  Hmmmm. can't wait to see where we go next.



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Thank you for leaving a review! We shall see! ;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 6:43 AM Title: My Allies

well well well Aro doesnt know either but hopefully they will work together to find out



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Hopefully!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:24 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

I loved it Edward can be so cute with Bella 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:24 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

I loved it Edward can be so cute with Bella 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:47 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:47 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:46 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:37 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2020 7:56 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

nice update

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2020 10:49 PM Title: My State of Normalcy

Shit Bella, take the escort.  James could strike at any time, anywhere.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2020 7:44 PM Title: My State of Normalcy

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 6:37 PM Title: My Date Part 2

I am about done with Rose, James and the rogue witches! Why cant they leave the Betas alone! Good update. Proud of Bella

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 1:24 AM Title: My Date Part 2

good update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 10:39 PM Title: My Date Part 2

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 9:18 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Put that dog down!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 8:43 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Wow oh wow that took a turn but I think Bella should go to the site and see if she can sent the witch

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 7:28 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Wow oh wow that took a turn but I think Bella should go to the site and see if she can sent the witch

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2020 6:26 AM Title: My Date Part 1

great update

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Another good chapter. I love their first date so far can't wait to see what else they get into .

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Another good chapter. I love their first date so far can't wait to see what else they get into .

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 9:19 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Awe he is so sweet and cute

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 3:58 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Working on editing it for now, but we shall see. Thank you for your awesome comments.

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 3:57 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 3:53 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 10:21 AM Title: My Date Part 1

Okay, I see gramps having a hissy fit already.  Great update, now to your page.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 7:47 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Thanks 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 12:17 PM Title: My Date Part 1

:) 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:01 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 4:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

great update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: My Shopping Trip

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 1:48 PM Title: My Shopping Trip

Wow oh wow Rose won't let it go but I think Bella will prove her wrong

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 12:13 PM Title: My Shopping Trip

If I was Bella, I would want nothing at all to do with the pack.  I have never seen such a more dysfunctional group of bitches in my life.  Her and Edward need to pack up and move away.  Start their own pack.  And do not even get me started on Rosalie.  Love when an author can write to the point to encite such strong emotions in their readers.  Great job.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:09 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rosalie is a bitch and is jealius of Bella. Victoria and the others are just bitches.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rosalie is a bitch and is jealius of Bella. Victoria and the others are just bitches.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rosalie is a bitch and is jealius of Bella. Victoria and the others are just bitches.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 2:28 PM Title: My Cousin

great update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 12:34 AM Title: My Cousin

Hmmm Bella should always listen to her inner self 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:41 AM Title: My Cousin

The blood bond is strong in this one. 

Also, oh no, Royce King is going to royally f the already troubled and makeshift bonds between the Pack and Coven.

Badass witch Bella needs to hit us up with the good magics again. I love how more and more of a powerful woman she becomes in this story as the chapters pass.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 7:29 AM Title: My Cousin

I'm glad Bella it's listening to her wolf's instincts.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 7:29 AM Title: My Cousin

I'm glad Bella it's listening to her wolf's instincts.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 9:07 AM Title: My Cousin

:) 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 2:18 AM Title: My Cousin

Oh no! I hope she and Leah will be safe!! 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 2:18 AM Title: My Cousin

Oh no! I hope she and Leah will be safe!! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 6:15 PM Title: My Cousin

Hm, not sure I would see Paul again until after that 21st birthday.  Her experience with Sam and Emily has to have a heavy bearing on that decision.  Experience has shown her how painful it can be when the imprint is not the current love interest.

 

Not liking Riley or Royce.  Definitely something up with those two.  Stand guard BellaWolf.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 6:10 PM Title: My Cousin

So happy to be given this ch. 

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Date: 27 Jun 2020 6:10 PM Title: My Cousin

So happy to be given this ch. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 11:44 AM Title: My Reluctant Heart

Oh, I'm so, so sad I've come to the end of whats published! As you can probably tell, I'm enjoying this immensely. 

I didn't exactly take in when your last update was posted, but I'm thinking it was last week? So maybe this week or next week you will be on summer holidays.  I hope that's restful. I know my kids teachers were very glad to get back to school after I guess not quite two months of online learning. (Here in Australia most schools went back a few weeks ago.)

thanks for sharing your genius with us. I'll be very much looking forward to more!

 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 1:05 AM Title: Marking My Territory

Hot! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 12:19 AM Title: My Wolf

Oh oh,Jessica is in for it now!

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 11:07 PM Title: My Video

So the only other person we know of who hates the pack is Marcus - is he still alive, I can't actually remember? Edward senior obviously has an axe to grind but I can't imagine him taking it out that way....

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 9:09 PM Title: My Aunt and Uncle

Dun dun dun! What will the pack say about that?! They will

bith make each other stronger, through their bond, but many, perhaps most of the pack will be suspicious of such power bony welcoming. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 9:01 AM Title: My Last Day

It's weird now, I don't know exactly when you published this chapter (does it tell me somewhere? I'll have to check), but clearly I'm getting closer to the present. We're working from home too, although in Australia things are all opening up again. The kids are back at school now, and we don't have much focus keft here, for the moment anyway. 

I hope you're safe over there. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 7:15 AM Title: My Mate's Past and Future

So I'm curious. Who's the beta of this generation? Jacob?

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