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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great story!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2021 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

Nice wrapup.   Ty for writing and sharing. 

Ty

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2021 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading your new story 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2021 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for a very enjoyable story. You wrapped it up nicely.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2021 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loving this story.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2021 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update..well done

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update..well done.. Thank God Edward got his family back.  It's going to take a while for them to get over the trauma they have been through.  until you post again

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

Poor kids.  But. Kids are really resilient. Bell's mind on the other hand.  Figures Jane would eat a bullet. Pro ably the only smart thing she ever did. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh Janes back.  That's not good.  Hope B is OK. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my. Lucio is helping James I guess.  He needs to really die this time. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

So happy they are back together

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

I sort of feel cheated that Edward or Bella didn't get to execute Jane. I'd like to see a one-shot from Jane, about her motives to take over and the things she did, all the way up to her thoughts in the warehouse and what made her decide to eat her own bullet.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great! I'm happy that they made it out safely!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

my heart just break for them

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter! Poor Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm getting amped up for the showdown that's coming. I can hardly wait for Jane, Alec and Jimmy to get their upcommance.

As well as Sulpicia.

Sherry

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2021 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

:):)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2021 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2021 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loving this story.  I hope they make Jane, Alec and Suplicia pay for what they've done.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2021 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next..edward has to get his family back..until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 15

I'm packing my bag for some blood and revenge.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2021 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for the chapter.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2021 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 15

There will be blood lots of blood OMG

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow!! thank you for the update...OMG!! thisis not happening.  Edward is on a mission to get his family back.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

Please let.them be safe and found quickly 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

Excellent!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

Excellent!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

:):)

I think aro's wife is in on this 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loving this story.

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

I want to go to Italy!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Aaawww:-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

love it 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

That picture was to identify Bella and baby

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

That picture was to identify Bella and baby

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

I have a feeling someone is coming after Bella and the baby now!! I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Sounds like a nice family vacation. Jane is a twat

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

thank you for the update..well done..lets hope nothing comes from Edwards wallet being missing..until you post again

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2021 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! 

Reviewer: hisangel338 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm confused as to why Edward was kept out...especially in this day and age?  But sooooo loving this story! ’



Author's Response:

In the 1960s it was common for men to not be allowed back during labor and delivery. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm confused as to why Edward was kept out...especially in this day and age?  But sooooo loving this story! ’

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2020 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 13

Woo hoo for baby girl.  Funny how men were kept out for so long.  Awww for good baby

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh..So edward had the Evil Eye. LOl

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2020 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2020 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

This chapter seems like a calm before the storm.

Sherry

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2020 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 13

Labor and delivery was much the same even into the early 70's.

Reviewer: SunRised Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

wonderful, still not sure that James is dead, slippery you said.Anyway you left enough open fot twists and turns and I will wait and see what will happen and if I m right. Thank you sofare for a nice story.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love your story can't wait to see what she has

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2020 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2020 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loving this story, it's so good.  LOL, Edward and the baby's not due for another three weeks.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

yyyyeeesss 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 12

The wedding came off without a hitch. Edward's handling the early arrival pretty good. Awaiting baby Masen's appearance patiently.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Woo Hoo for being married!!!  Sulpicia better get over her crap quickly before E or her husband need to put her in her place.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..I can't wait to meet the baby..let's hope there are no complications  and Jasper finds out what's  going on with the shipments...until  you post again 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

love it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2020 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

Edward is too cute

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2020 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loving this story, it's awesome.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2020 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

It is all coming together for them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have a feeling something is going to pop-up. Why didn't Edward read over the papers Aro gave him to sign or have his lawyer check them out first. Aro said Jane was getting married to a suitable man, and I keep thinking that's Edward.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2020 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

I hope this wedding gives her the protecton that she needs.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

Aww for the wedding present from Aro and Carlisle too

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2020 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Definitely worth the wait.  Thank you!

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