Date: 14 Jul 2022 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love this story, thanks for writing





Date: 17 Jun 2022 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Does the Cafe/Bakery have a name yet?
Date: 15 May 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 03 May 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great story!





Date: 02 May 2021 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Nice wrapup. Ty for writing and sharing.





Date: 01 May 2021 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading your new story





Date: 01 May 2021 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for a very enjoyable story. You wrapped it up nicely.
Sherry





Date: 30 Apr 2021 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving this story.





Date: 30 Apr 2021 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update..well done





Date: 27 Apr 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update..well done.. Thank God Edward got his family back. It's going to take a while for them to get over the trauma they have been through. until you post again
Date: 27 Apr 2021 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor kids. But. Kids are really resilient. Bell's mind on the other hand. Figures Jane would eat a bullet. Pro ably the only smart thing she ever did.
Date: 27 Apr 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh Janes back. That's not good. Hope B is OK.
Date: 27 Apr 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my. Lucio is helping James I guess. He needs to really die this time.
Date: 26 Apr 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
So happy they are back together





Date: 25 Apr 2021 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
I sort of feel cheated that Edward or Bella didn't get to execute Jane. I'd like to see a one-shot from Jane, about her motives to take over and the things she did, all the way up to her thoughts in the warehouse and what made her decide to eat her own bullet.
Sherry
Date: 24 Apr 2021 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great! I'm happy that they made it out safely!
Date: 24 Apr 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 21 Apr 2021 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
my heart just break for them
Date: 18 Apr 2021 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Apr 2021 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Poor Edward and Bella!





Date: 17 Apr 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm getting amped up for the showdown that's coming. I can hardly wait for Jane, Alec and Jimmy to get their upcommance.
As well as Sulpicia.
Sherry





Date: 16 Apr 2021 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loving this story. I hope they make Jane, Alec and Suplicia pay for what they've done.





Date: 16 Apr 2021 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next..edward has to get his family back..until you post again





Date: 16 Apr 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm packing my bag for some blood and revenge.
Sherry





Date: 15 Apr 2021 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Date: 12 Apr 2021 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
There will be blood lots of blood OMG





Date: 09 Apr 2021 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow!! thank you for the update...OMG!! thisis not happening. Edward is on a mission to get his family back. I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again
Date: 09 Apr 2021 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please let.them be safe and found quickly
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Excellent!
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Excellent!
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
:):)
I think aro's wife is in on this





Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loving this story.





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!





Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to go to Italy!!
Date: 05 Apr 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
That picture was to identify Bella and baby
Date: 05 Apr 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
That picture was to identify Bella and baby
Date: 05 Apr 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
I have a feeling someone is coming after Bella and the baby now!! I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 03 Apr 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sounds like a nice family vacation. Jane is a twat





Date: 03 Apr 2021 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
thank you for the update..well done..lets hope nothing comes from Edwards wallet being missing..until you post again
Date: 02 Apr 2021 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
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Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
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Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 29 Oct 2020 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 29 Oct 2020 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!





Date: 06 Oct 2020 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm confused as to why Edward was kept out...especially in this day and age? But sooooo loving this story! ’
Author's Response:
In the 1960s it was common for men to not be allowed back during labor and delivery. Thank you for the review.





Date: 06 Oct 2020 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm confused as to why Edward was kept out...especially in this day and age? But sooooo loving this story! ’
Date: 28 Sep 2020 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Woo hoo for baby girl. Funny how men were kept out for so long. Awww for good baby
Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh..So edward had the Evil Eye. LOl
Date: 26 Sep 2020 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more





Date: 26 Sep 2020 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter seems like a calm before the storm.
Sherry





Date: 25 Sep 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Labor and delivery was much the same even into the early 70's.
Date: 17 Sep 2020 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
wonderful, still not sure that James is dead, slippery you said.Anyway you left enough open fot twists and turns and I will wait and see what will happen and if I m right. Thank you sofare for a nice story.





Date: 12 Sep 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love your story can't wait to see what she has
Date: 12 Sep 2020 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more more





Date: 11 Sep 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loving this story, it's so good. LOL, Edward and the baby's not due for another three weeks.





Date: 11 Sep 2020 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
The wedding came off without a hitch. Edward's handling the early arrival pretty good. Awaiting baby Masen's appearance patiently.
Sherry
Date: 11 Sep 2020 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Woo Hoo for being married!!! Sulpicia better get over her crap quickly before E or her husband need to put her in her place.





Date: 11 Sep 2020 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update..I can't wait to meet the baby..let's hope there are no complications and Jasper finds out what's going on with the shipments...until you post again
Date: 15 Aug 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 14 Aug 2020 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward is too cute





Date: 13 Aug 2020 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving this story, it's awesome.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
It is all coming together for them