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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2020 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Hard subject, but you did a great job. Love is what binds us together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2020 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm surprised that Bella wasn't a little upset with Edward for calling Riley. But it's a good thing he did.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, I can't believe Riley just gave up his rights.  That's so wrong. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved that sweet moment

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

E is such an awesome guy. I can totally understand Jake's feelings and actions.  Ouch for the hand

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

Riley is a douche canoe and almost proud of it.   It's like he isn't even going to send his son's card or call them after he moves.  ugh....

Edward's protective instincts forced him to call Riley on his bullshit and force him to see his sons.   

That scene with Jake and Edward was heart breaking.   I wonder if little Seth will be just as upset.  

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love Edward

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am happy that Edward didnt let Riley get off easy.  My heart is just breaking for the kids.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love Edward for calling Riley and taking him to task.

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm really enjoying this story, so well written. I love that, even though, it would be totally understandable for them to hate Riley, you haven't made this into a huge fight with the kids in the middle. I love the relationship that Edward has with Bella, and especially the kids! Can't wait for the next update! Take care, and stay safe and healthy! Thank you for an amazing read!

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2020 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 16

Riley is sure a piece of work

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2020 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

Riley just keeps making mistake after mistake with his sons.   It's good that he is going to be monetarily there, but he should send cards, make calls and visit them too.   ugh....    Poor little guys are going to be so confused and upset.    Bella is already upset for them.

The boys would definitely choose Edward at this point.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

I think Riley did the right thing giving up his rights

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, thats a heavy burden for Bella to process. Im glad she has Edward.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

well at least she doesn't have to get him to relinquish his rights now.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2020 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Lemonmunch Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2020 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awww they're going in their first date!@

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

Think that a family goal is good. But I am afraid of two step forward will be going a step back soon.  Sadly I don't think wehave heard the last of Rileyh

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Seth. Sucks having a shitty parent. Heidi sounds like a piece of work. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2020 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 12

He is so awesome! 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2020 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edward, Bella, Jake and Seth are doing great.   Marcus is a great therapist too.   I wonder where Riley fell off the Earth to.   hmmm.....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh you have me worried with what you said in your author's note.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

She is doing so great I love it.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

So exciting seeing her improvement 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2020 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2020 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love it this chapter made me smile Edward is perfect for all of them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2020 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love Edward so hard OMG I want one of him please lol

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2020 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love that Edward is helping Seth build his confidence back.

Happy for their family unit. 

Good riddance Riley!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2020 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

So glad Edward took the time to talk to Seth and reassure him that he was not leaving.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

That was some very yummy lemonade.  ;)    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella is certainly deserving of those lemons.

I hope it helps her confidence soar.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

They are taking such good care of each other WOW

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward makes her feel so loved. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hot damn fun yummy times heheheee

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2020 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad Esme apologized.  Elizabeth seems very sweet. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2020 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

Elizabeth is much easier to get along with I would imagine.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2020 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my, Aunt Lizzie is a trip. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2020 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

Aunt Lizzie is great!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love snarky Aunt Lizzie! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2020 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2020 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hahahahahaha I love his aunt hehehehehhe

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

Esme is trying Bella feels a lot more comfortable now

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2020 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awe that hurt her a lot

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2020 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

I want one just like him to lol.  He gets the best boyfriend awards.  Esme has learned an important leson 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glad E made sure his mom will be more sensitive. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

Lol kids will do that . The more I learn about Riley, the more I want to run him over with a bus

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is willing to stand up to his own mom and explain what she said wrong to Bella.   Hopefully Esme learned something and makes it right.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love how Edward is her rock and addressed the Esme situation.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 10

That is a love I wish I had

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is definitely protective.  I'm wondering what he will do the 1st time he meets Riley.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2020 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh I love it it's beautiful so very beautiful 

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

The more we learn about Riley, the bigger Ass he becomes. 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad the boys are ok with Edward being around.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

I like how Bella and Edward are getting to know each other as she goes through her therapy.   He is getting to know the two boys as well.   

It sounds like Riley, the douche canoe, really left her in spirit before he physically did.   grrr....    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

LOL busted by the kids love it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2020 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

Cock block was pretty funny. Way to go Seth 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2020 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love how honest Edward was Seth. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2020 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Super sweet!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2020 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2020 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love that the boys are opening up to Edward 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2020 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Kids act out when they are angry or sad or hurt.   Poor little Seth was all three.   Jake has matured or gotten over most of Riley's bullshit it seems.   I guess he realizes he has a lot of good people around him.   :)

Bella being open with Edward will help her heal fully as well.    Edward is one awesome dude.  ;)   wags eyebrows.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2020 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

Edward is being awesome.  Not sure why she would schedule a date with Seth playing.... But glad it worked out. 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2020 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

<3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2020 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

Glad the judge put it to him.  What a prick.  Aww for first kiss. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awe

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

This was a touching, sweet, romantic and sexy chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

<3 <3

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

He sure changed her day lol so cute

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

Squee awesome adorable and beautiful chapter 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

i loved it good the boys dont have to see the loser and bella has a date with a real man

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

He got her put of her sad mood.  

Reviewer: eclipse55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

MORE!!!  I’m loving this story so very much. Fantastic work. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2020 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad that Bella called that douche out on his asshole tendency.   ugh....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow her ex is a low life dead beat 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you so much for this chapter! I live thus fierce Bella who puts her children first. Riley only cares for himself. It is very hard for the children to cope with such a father. 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

awe hugs to the little man <3 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

My heart is just braking for the little guy.  Riley is a total asshole.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  Poor Seth and Jake, sadly kids are collateral damage in divorce. I look forward to seeing how things unfold and hope Edward is a healing partner for the boys, and Bella.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

To the pits of hell is not far enough!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wowsers poor Seth.  School Def dropped the ball on all this esp if James has been picking on others too. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Riley is an asshole. I don't understand how parents can just throw away their children. I have seen it in real life happen so many times. It just makes me so mad.  

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2020 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am so grateful that me and my siblings where still so young, 5 yrs (Me) 2 yrs 8 mths (brother) 17 mths (sister),  when this happened with our parents. I of course did not find out until much later when I was older and married. That my Dad pretty much left my mother, married the lady he cheated on her with and helped raised her 2 boys. He threw the 3 of us aside. His child support payment bounced and back to court they went. He signed over his parental rights and all he asked for was some personal things he left behind. There has to be a special place in hell for men, no boys like this.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2020 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

Solid chapter, loved that we saw into Edward's head and that he handled the situation of professional v personal appropriately and well. As it goes doctors, nurses, and other medical professionals that we see with frequency will always become close to us as we trust them more and open up; especially if they're helping us regain something we've lost. So kudos to Edward for acknowledging that the lines are blurring.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

Keep on writing

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