Date: 30 Apr 2020 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hard subject, but you did a great job. Love is what binds us together.
Date: 29 Apr 2020 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm surprised that Bella wasn't a little upset with Edward for calling Riley. But it's a good thing he did.
Date: 29 Apr 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, I can't believe Riley just gave up his rights. That's so wrong.
Date: 27 Apr 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved that sweet moment
Date: 27 Apr 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
E is such an awesome guy. I can totally understand Jake's feelings and actions. Ouch for the hand
Date: 26 Apr 2020 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Riley is a douche canoe and almost proud of it. It's like he isn't even going to send his son's card or call them after he moves. ugh....
Edward's protective instincts forced him to call Riley on his bullshit and force him to see his sons.
That scene with Jake and Edward was heart breaking. I wonder if little Seth will be just as upset.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Apr 2020 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am happy that Edward didnt let Riley get off easy. My heart is just breaking for the kids.
Date: 26 Apr 2020 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 26 Apr 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love Edward for calling Riley and taking him to task.
Date: 26 Apr 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really enjoying this story, so well written. I love that, even though, it would be totally understandable for them to hate Riley, you haven't made this into a huge fight with the kids in the middle. I love the relationship that Edward has with Bella, and especially the kids! Can't wait for the next update! Take care, and stay safe and healthy! Thank you for an amazing read!
Date: 26 Apr 2020 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Riley is sure a piece of work
Date: 24 Apr 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Apr 2020 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Riley just keeps making mistake after mistake with his sons. It's good that he is going to be monetarily there, but he should send cards, make calls and visit them too. ugh.... Poor little guys are going to be so confused and upset. Bella is already upset for them.
The boys would definitely choose Edward at this point.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think Riley did the right thing giving up his rights
Date: 23 Apr 2020 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, thats a heavy burden for Bella to process. Im glad she has Edward.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
well at least she doesn't have to get him to relinquish his rights now.
Date: 22 Apr 2020 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 21 Apr 2020 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awww they're going in their first date!@
Date: 21 Apr 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Think that a family goal is good. But I am afraid of two step forward will be going a step back soon. Sadly I don't think wehave heard the last of Rileyh
Date: 21 Apr 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Seth. Sucks having a shitty parent. Heidi sounds like a piece of work.
Date: 21 Apr 2020 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
He is so awesome!
Date: 20 Apr 2020 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward, Bella, Jake and Seth are doing great. Marcus is a great therapist too. I wonder where Riley fell off the Earth to. hmmm..... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Apr 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh you have me worried with what you said in your author's note.
Date: 19 Apr 2020 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
She is doing so great I love it.
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
So exciting seeing her improvement
Date: 16 Apr 2020 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love it this chapter made me smile Edward is perfect for all of them
Date: 16 Apr 2020 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love Edward so hard OMG I want one of him please lol
Date: 16 Apr 2020 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love that Edward is helping Seth build his confidence back.
Happy for their family unit.
Good riddance Riley!
Date: 16 Apr 2020 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
So glad Edward took the time to talk to Seth and reassure him that he was not leaving.
Date: 12 Apr 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was some very yummy lemonade. ;) Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Apr 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is certainly deserving of those lemons.
I hope it helps her confidence soar.
Date: 12 Apr 2020 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
They are taking such good care of each other WOW
Date: 12 Apr 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward makes her feel so loved.
Date: 12 Apr 2020 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hot damn fun yummy times heheheee
Date: 11 Apr 2020 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Esme apologized. Elizabeth seems very sweet.
Date: 11 Apr 2020 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Elizabeth is much easier to get along with I would imagine. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 09 Apr 2020 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my, Aunt Lizzie is a trip.
Date: 09 Apr 2020 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aunt Lizzie is great!
Date: 09 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love snarky Aunt Lizzie!
Date: 08 Apr 2020 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hahahahahaha I love his aunt hehehehehhe
Date: 08 Apr 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Esme is trying Bella feels a lot more comfortable now
Date: 08 Apr 2020 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awe that hurt her a lot
Date: 07 Apr 2020 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
I want one just like him to lol. He gets the best boyfriend awards. Esme has learned an important leson
Date: 05 Apr 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Apr 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad E made sure his mom will be more sensitive.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
Lol kids will do that . The more I learn about Riley, the more I want to run him over with a bus
Date: 05 Apr 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is willing to stand up to his own mom and explain what she said wrong to Bella. Hopefully Esme learned something and makes it right.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love how Edward is her rock and addressed the Esme situation.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
That is a love I wish I had
Date: 05 Apr 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is definitely protective. I'm wondering what he will do the 1st time he meets Riley.
Date: 03 Apr 2020 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh I love it it's beautiful so very beautiful
Date: 02 Apr 2020 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
The more we learn about Riley, the bigger Ass he becomes.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad the boys are ok with Edward being around.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like how Bella and Edward are getting to know each other as she goes through her therapy. He is getting to know the two boys as well.
It sounds like Riley, the douche canoe, really left her in spirit before he physically did. grrr....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOL busted by the kids love it
Date: 02 Apr 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 02 Apr 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 02 Apr 2020 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Cock block was pretty funny. Way to go Seth
Date: 31 Mar 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 30 Mar 2020 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love how honest Edward was Seth.
Date: 29 Mar 2020 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Super sweet!
Date: 29 Mar 2020 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love that the boys are opening up to Edward
Date: 29 Mar 2020 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Kids act out when they are angry or sad or hurt. Poor little Seth was all three. Jake has matured or gotten over most of Riley's bullshit it seems. I guess he realizes he has a lot of good people around him. :)
Bella being open with Edward will help her heal fully as well. Edward is one awesome dude. ;) wags eyebrows.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Mar 2020 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is being awesome. Not sure why she would schedule a date with Seth playing.... But glad it worked out.
Date: 28 Mar 2020 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
<3 <3 <3
Date: 27 Mar 2020 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 27 Mar 2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
Glad the judge put it to him. What a prick. Aww for first kiss.
Date: 26 Mar 2020 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was a touching, sweet, romantic and sexy chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Mar 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
He sure changed her day lol so cute
Date: 26 Mar 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Squee awesome adorable and beautiful chapter
Date: 26 Mar 2020 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
i loved it good the boys dont have to see the loser and bella has a date with a real man
Date: 26 Mar 2020 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
He got her put of her sad mood.
Date: 26 Mar 2020 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
MORE!!! I’m loving this story so very much. Fantastic work.
Date: 23 Mar 2020 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad that Bella called that douche out on his asshole tendency. ugh.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Mar 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow her ex is a low life dead beat
Date: 22 Mar 2020 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you so much for this chapter! I live thus fierce Bella who puts her children first. Riley only cares for himself. It is very hard for the children to cope with such a father.
Date: 22 Mar 2020 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
awe hugs to the little man <3
Date: 22 Mar 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
My heart is just braking for the little guy. Riley is a total asshole.
Date: 22 Mar 2020 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Poor Seth and Jake, sadly kids are collateral damage in divorce. I look forward to seeing how things unfold and hope Edward is a healing partner for the boys, and Bella.
Date: 22 Mar 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more more
Date: 22 Mar 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
To the pits of hell is not far enough!!
Date: 22 Mar 2020 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wowsers poor Seth. School Def dropped the ball on all this esp if James has been picking on others too.
Date: 22 Mar 2020 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Riley is an asshole. I don't understand how parents can just throw away their children. I have seen it in real life happen so many times. It just makes me so mad.
Date: 22 Mar 2020 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am so grateful that me and my siblings where still so young, 5 yrs (Me) 2 yrs 8 mths (brother) 17 mths (sister), when this happened with our parents. I of course did not find out until much later when I was older and married. That my Dad pretty much left my mother, married the lady he cheated on her with and helped raised her 2 boys. He threw the 3 of us aside. His child support payment bounced and back to court they went. He signed over his parental rights and all he asked for was some personal things he left behind. There has to be a special place in hell for men, no boys like this.
Date: 21 Mar 2020 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Solid chapter, loved that we saw into Edward's head and that he handled the situation of professional v personal appropriately and well. As it goes doctors, nurses, and other medical professionals that we see with frequency will always become close to us as we trust them more and open up; especially if they're helping us regain something we've lost. So kudos to Edward for acknowledging that the lines are blurring.
Date: 20 Mar 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Keep on writing