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Reviewer: Carliec Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2024 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved this story, I would love to read a sequel with these characters. The only think I would say is Im  from Glasgow, born and raised in the east end, and I've never heard anyone speak the way the characters do. I'm not sure what part of Scotland the author is from but I honestly don't know anyone who speaks that way. We don't say Ken, that tends to be more of a western and northern thing. I've never heard the phrase a gift from Glasgow, but I have heard it a headbutt being called a Glasgow Kiss lol! And some of us do use the C word regularly in all kinds of situations without batting an eyelash. The actual story itself, as always from the authors, was great and I couldn't wait to read the next chapters but that was the be only downside. I hope you don't think I'm being picky or cheeky, Inthinknwith me being from here it  just really stood out to me xx

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2023 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

Why is Charlie not in jail or prison?

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2023 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

I LOVE this story! Edward has to come clean about quite a few things before he loses her! Love the Scots!

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

I loved this story so much and thanks for finishing it.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2023 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

As usual another amazing story with outstanding characters. Thank you for sharing 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2023 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

My lovely ladies you finished this! I’m so excited to spend time reading Caledonia. I have been a huge fan of you both for so long now.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2023 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved this story. Maybe a sequel??

Cheers

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

This was a great ending to a great story!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2023 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

good 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2023 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it!

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2023 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 30

Nice ending. Not surprised Jasper and Bella didn't show up for Charlie's cremation.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2023 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: Frosticles Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2023 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

A fabulous end to a lovely story!  It's lovely to have you back ladies, I glad to see things are on the up for you both and excited for more stories!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2023 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for a perfect wrap up to this story.
Love all the things you two write together and separately.

Reviewer: Christofine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2023 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 30

So glad to have you back, take it slow. Can't wait to here more - loved, loved, loved that Bella and Edward as well as the others got their happy end.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2022 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love the story. PLEASE FINISH. THANKS 

Reviewer: iggy2109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2022 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

It has been so long since you last updated this story I understand that you might have writer's block and covid issues but it has been so long please update this story

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2021 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

look forward for another chapter please

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

Great update

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2021 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

great wedding

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2021 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 28

very but I don't want this to end

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2021 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 27

awesome

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

just want to see Charlie get punished

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 21

he will be back

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

this is a great story the plot is very good. Lemons are a little tame but plot before lemons is never a bad thing

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2021 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is a regular Jon Taffer

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2021 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love the Charlie character from the movies so this is a little hard to read but I love the story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

ahe yelling at Charlie

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

nice twist

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

hilarious

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can't wait to find out what her prkblem with Jasper is

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am guessing Bella is the cake lady, even if I an wrong I love this story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

this is so good, very different

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 29

Lovely wedding and start of the honeymoon.   Awww for new baby

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 29

Lovely wedding and start of the honeymoon.   Awww for new baby

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2021 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 29

What a nice wedding. Lots of cultural things for Edward to learn. Wonder if he went commando. Worked out that Rose had her baby right before they left. I'm curious to see what name she and Emmett decide on for their baby. So thoughtful of Edward to be concerned that Bella has her cuddles. Their future is looking bright. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2021 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

That was a fun wedding all around.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2021 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 29

love it love it you make me happy

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2021 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 29

good 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved the wedding.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 29

Kasi, I'm not sure how you do that daily? I'm 59, had two of my grandsons (5&4) in a hotel swimming pool for 1 1/2 hrs and was wiped out. Then helped their parents move out of and then into a new home. It took several days to get back home and wind down.
Remember, Family always comes first .

Great wedding and celebration.
Honeymoon will be a good adventure.

Thanks to both of you for sharing this story.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 29

Kasi, I'm not sure how you do that daily? I'm 59, had two of my grandsons (5&4) in a hotel swimming pool for 1 1/2 hrs and was wiped out. Then helped their parents move out of and then into a new home. It took several days to get back home and wind down.
Remember, Family always comes first .

Great wedding and celebration.
Honeymoon will be a good adventure.

Thanks to both of you for sharing this story.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2021 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

This always makes me wish I could take another trip to Scotland and stay for an extended visit.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2021 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh I love it more please 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

Can't wait to read about Edward and Bella's wedding!

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2021 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 27

Awww what a romantic weekend get away.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 26

Things with Charlie finally got wrapped up. The restaurant and bakery/teashop are doing well. And Tanya came by to apologize. I don't think Edward needed to hear it but i guess it made Tanya feel better.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

The drama with Charlie is almost over, just sentencing. Hopefully he gets a very long sentence. He was limping coming into the courtroom. I wonder if he was punished by more than just Vicky. Now they can all move on. The promotion for Caledonia and Wee Caledonia went off great. Who knew Bella had these hidden talents.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow!! Vicky knows her stuff. She's been waiting, gathering evidence, talking to victims and their families. Charlie is f*****.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

What is Charlie up to now? I'm glad that Bella has all this support.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 22

I would love to see a picture of this cake. it sounds incredible. Bella is not used to all the praise, it's overwhelming her. The night ends on a good note.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2021 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

so sweet

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2021 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wonderful wedding plans. So sweet that Rose could get something special for her new date as well. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

great updatee

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 28

good 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 28

I would definitely let Edward teach me and thing of two. Lol. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

A person has to have great organization skills and great friends/family to help plan events like weddings.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 27

So excited for both couples,  Edward/ Bella and Jake/Jessica.  

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 27

Love Love your story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 27

So happy to hear from them very sweet proposal . Thanks so much

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 27

Finally!! He asked her and she said yes!!! I love it!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad you came back

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love the proposal. So memorable for them.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 27

That was a great chapter.   I loved how Edward used spots from Bella's favorite movie for their weekend away/engagement.    That made it extra special.

Thanks for writing and sharing.   :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

I loved it more please 

and you all take care of yourselves and stay safe that is the most important thing 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2021 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

good

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2021 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

So happy to see another chapter!

He really went all out for the engagement surprise. Kudos to a man in love and not afraid to show it!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2020 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 26

10/10

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2020 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am so happy for them all

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2020 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 26

Glad to hear Charlie is going to be out of her life now.  Nice that Tanya and Kate came to apologize. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2020 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2020 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2020 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

thanks so much good to see Charlie is getting a little of what he deserves  

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love Carlisle 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2020 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 26

So glad that things are finally looking up for them.  So excited to get this update.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2020 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love how life is going along quite well for everyone.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: GuardianSakura Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2020 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter as always I love all of your guy's stories and don't worry about how long a wait can be real life happens and it's been a crazy year can't wait to read the next chapter and have a good holiday season and be safe out there

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2020 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

I enjoy reading the ins and outs of the characters you created in this story. They feel tangible. Drama rules their world but the underlying current of persistence forges their bonds.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2020 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2020 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 25

great update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love Charlie going down. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2020 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love it everything went great and things are really looking up now it's time for the grand opening 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

Charlie's submissive beaten posture doesn't fool me.   I still don't trust the bastard.   ugh....

Vicky is great.   :)

Bella and Edward seem to be over any possible big humps.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved this!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

It's so cool that everyone has come to help out with the event handing out free food and having music and entertainment.  That's a great way to get your name out there. Word of mouth is the best advertising.  And they can have a baby, when they're ready of course.  I am loving this.  

I'm keeping y'all and your families in my thoughts and prayers and sending positive energy your way.  Thank you for still making the time to write and share your stories with us.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

OMG!  I love Vicky!  She's the bomb.  I would not want to piss her off!!!  She's scary, but awesome!  The amount of stuff she has on Charlie is amazing.  He should most definitely listen to her.  I wouldn't cross her. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

Iove it and can't wait to see them have kids. I really hope she calls Vicki and James dad soon. I hope to see how the opening goes...how they work being part owners in each restraunt and head chef/baker of one. Maybe a little.lemons throughout. I really want to read about the proposal and wedding/honeymoon. Do Vicki, james, jimmy, and Jake all stay in america cuz they have their own restraunt back home.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 25

No need to worry, the updates are worth the wait!
Vicky is very scary,😁.
Hopefully Charlie will find out just how much predators are liked while in prison. He could use a few lessons from an inforcer!

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