Date: 04 Aug 2020 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh wow Good thing Peter is on their side. Wow Charlie and Esme... Didn't see that one coming
Date: 04 Aug 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ahh ya tricked me up at the top there. Poor Alice and B. Sounds like karma needs to visit Charlie and bitch slap the hell out of him.
Date: 04 Aug 2020 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
See I knew it. Bella knows about the Masen thing. Jasper is really too puzhy
Date: 04 Aug 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy. The review is going to come back to bite him in the arse if he doesn't tell her. Well at least she knows about Jasper now.
Date: 04 Aug 2020 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad they are spending some time together outside the restaurant.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2020 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow so much has happened now how soon will they get everything fixed
Date: 31 Jul 2020 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 30 Jul 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love the things that happened in this chapter!! Annnd REALLY love that Bella's parents are here!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2020 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
good. had a feeling something was up when things started disappearing. looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2020 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
Some ass are going to feel the heat OMG
Date: 30 Jul 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonder how much Charlie is paying mike and Joe to do his dirty work? Joe is dumb to give up the extra money that was promised if the restraunt did well. Back when Edward made security changes after Charlie hit Bella...didn't he put cameras up everywhere including the kitchen?
Date: 30 Jul 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
Charlie in for world of pain (I hope)
Date: 30 Jul 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward meeting Bella's parents is hilarious, can't wait to see how Vicky handles the inspector and how much trouble Mike's in.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
I had a feeling Mike was involved somehow, but the Joe person was a bit random. Poor Jessica. Maybe Jake will make a better boyfriend?
Lovin' Vicky and James.
Date: 30 Jul 2020 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
So Mike and Charlie got together to take down Bella and Edward. Glad Vicki and Jimmy are here. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2020 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank goodness some much needed discussions and apologies happened. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Jul 2020 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
my only thought is when are we going to get an update?? Things definitely are coming to a head and heads are going to roll. Tanya needs to be fired for breach of confidence but I think she may have bigger things to worry about like if her daughter is okay or if Charlie has hurt her.
I hope Bella listens and forgives Edwards and as for Mike and Joe? They need to fry and that inspector needs to investigated to see how many bribes he's taken to shut down a restaurant.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ladies you have me every single time at the edge of my sit wanting to know what will happen next!!! You are Rock Stars!!!
I have loved every single chapter you post, sorry for not reviewing all of them, I'll try to do better in the future.
I loved this weeks chapter. Edward not giving up or feeling sorry for himself, he knows he messed up but is working to fix it.
I'm happy Ed&J, J&A had their respective discutions and would love to see how they move on from this curve life through at them. I'm glad J knows a lot about the truth now.
I feel sorry for Katie and a little bit for Tanya too, but all I can say is karma is a Bitch... I do hope Katie is able to move forward from this horrible experience, cause we all know that even if Tanya was oblivious Charlie is not to be trusted.
I really love seeing Carlisle in Cheff/Business mode. He did have very valid points.
Also good for Jessica for coming forward. I do hope something happens between her and Jake, she deserves someone good in her life not that piece of shit Mike. Can't wait to see him, Joe and Charlie pay for all their sins.
But what I was seriouly not expecting and just had me laughing non stop is Vicky and Jimmy just showing up at Edward's. My only thought as I was finishing to read the chapter was "Oh Lord, are they seriously going to let let Vicky loose on American soil? I don't think America can handle that!!!" can't wait to see her going all Scottish Mama Bear and I'm sure Esme is going to gang up with her!!! Let the mamas loose! They'll fix everyone up good and proper!
I hope you and your loved ones are doing well. Things on my part are as good as they can be all things considered. Sending you lots of love from your biggest Argentina fan and counting the days till the next update.
Bisous,
R.
Date: 29 Jul 2020 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad Jessica was only being used by Mike and not a willing accomplice
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
I guessed that Mike was somehow involved with Charlie. Filthy scum the lot of them!
Now to get it fixed and start the investigation into Charlie and all his minions.
Date: 28 Jul 2020 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Edward and Bella. This is what happens when people keep secrets. I have never hated Jasper and Charlis more.
Date: 27 Jul 2020 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Charlie just got his daughter's place shut down. He doesn't have a key to the restaurant so who has he been working with? I'm glad Alice is having that much needed talk with Jasper. I think James and Jake can straighten thing out with Bella.
Date: 27 Jul 2020 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
They should just let Emmett tell Jasper the truth. They're hiding too muich from him and he's getting suspicious.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2020 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
Charlie has his minions. Wondering if the inspector was a cake?
Can Carlisle help fix this mess?
Date: 23 Jul 2020 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was a lot!! Hope Bella listens to him
Date: 23 Jul 2020 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
You asked all the right ? I want to know OMG would someone just kill Charlie
Date: 23 Jul 2020 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
So much on this chapter. I was wondering if Charlie was behind the missing food. But how did he in? Who is Katie.....maybe Jessica. When did Jasper meet with Charlie and why did Jasper not tell Bella that he had meet Charlie. I hope Jake and James can get Bella to listen to Edward. Oh, could Katie be someone from Aro's office. That would explain Charlie knowing about Edward signing papers. Can't wait for more.
Date: 23 Jul 2020 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 22 Jul 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I knew someone was going to tell her he was Anthony Masen before he did!!! OMG! Jasper thought he was sleeping with Alice??? lololol What a mess!!
Date: 22 Jul 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think the health inspector is being blackmailed by Charlie how else was Remy soul never closed down when it was bad. I think the health inspector planted it. I also think Jasper is stupid and made things worse with his need to be loved....him being his own chef to his own place should clue him in that you be professional and don't bother someone at work.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Bella hears Edward out. I think Charlie, the health inspector and Tanya/Kate are behind the negative comments, planted dead rat and missing food. I even think there's an inside employee as well who may be working with Charlie. Could even be the fired cooks and Mike.
Edward & his family have more clout and resources. They all need to band together quickly and exterminate Charlie and company.
if Tanya told Kate who told Charlie about the next door property that was supposed to be kept private, you can trace it directly to Tanya who must have been snooping in her bosses business and should be fired.
The main thing is Bella should hear Edward out.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Bella hears Edward out
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow that blew up fast now will they be able to fix everything will Bella forgive Edward and will they find a way to stop Charlie once and for all
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Holy Hell! I'm so very heartbroken for Edward and Bella both! I can't wait until it comes out that he was buying the place next to the restaurant for her to have a bakery, maybe that will make her understand how very much he loves her. I'm not going to bash him for not telling her about being Anthony Masen, he was worried it would drive them apart and people make bad decisions when scared, that people part of being human! I'm really going to look forward to Charlie and his crownies being taken down!! Can't wait for the next update! Take care and stay safe
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, crap evil Charlie hit everything at once. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Kate is Tanya's daughter. I figured Charlie was the reviewer and I'm assuming he had Jessica mess stuff up in the kitchen
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
One of the new kitchen staff was also working for Charlie and wither they or the inspector planted the rat. I think the inspector is on Charlie's payroll too.
Edward has a looooong way to go to win Bella back.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was under the impression that when a health inspector comes in someone from staff need to be with him when checking the place, so maybe something can be done, and they need to get him investigated also,and Bella needs to talk to Edward, she knows how Charlie is how can she listen to his crap
Date: 21 Jul 2020 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper is really pushy. I think it's time for him to meet Charlie and see what he's really like. Bella will be angry when she finds out who Anthoiny Masen is a. Not only because he hurt her with that first review but because Edward lied to her by not telling her he is Anthony Masen. And the longer he waits the worst it will be.
Date: 13 Jul 2020 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper is so clueless and needs a wake up call and soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2020 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper is just being dense and annoying as hell. But at the same time, I feel bad that he is the only one in the whole group that doesn't know Charlie is an abusing douche canoe. ugh.... I don't know what feeling to settle on.
Edward and Bella are getting closer. He sort of told James how he feels about Bella. Now Bella and Edward need to have that talk. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 10 Jul 2020 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper is going to loose his mind
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2020 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward needs to take Emmett up on the offer to talk to Jasper about his obsession with Charlie.
Date: 09 Jul 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
So many people not being open with each other - a volcano about to erupt
Date: 09 Jul 2020 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awesome sauce!
Cant wait for more!
Date: 09 Jul 2020 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 09 Jul 2020 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper needs help. The world is not perfect like he seems to think it is. I am afraid when he find out the truth he will snap a d turn on Bella and/or Alice.
Date: 09 Jul 2020 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Jasper is an ass hat OMG get over himself
Date: 08 Jul 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Haha, I loved the tongue tied reference! 😆
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
The shit hitting the fan is going to blow a whole lot of mess on a whole lot of people.
Date: 08 Jul 2020 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper is out of control. Clueless and coming on waay too strong. He needs to knock it down a bunch of notches. He's irritating AF.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2020 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
My prayers are given
I loved it and Jasper is pushing too much he wants everything now but that's not how life works
Date: 08 Jul 2020 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm a little put off that Jasper is accepting of Charlie dating younger girls considering Alice would have been a teenager at the time. I wish Edward had answered no Alice didn't but Esme did
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2020 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Just like Bella withholding information from Jasper, Edward will find himself scrambling to smooth over his dishonesty.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Im confused i thought Charlie wanted nothing to do with jasper.
And why would jasper want to know about a dad that didnt want nothing to do with him,especially when he lied about his sister not wanting to know about him.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
A fabulous story, Charlie's next appearance needs to be in front of a magistrate ! though i'm sure Jasper will try to come to his rescue
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2020 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful story can't wait for more! Stay Safe Stay Well.!
Date: 04 Jul 2020 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 03 Jul 2020 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper is going to do something stupid
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2020 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
great stort so far.
Date: 02 Jul 2020 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
He is screwing up not telling her she is going to be pissed when she finds out. Jasper is an idiot!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2020 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh Edward.... that was the perfect time to confess and you chickened out.... grrr....
Jasper is being annoying as hell. Bella should just tell him that Charlie was and is an abusive, controlling, thief and that she wants nothing to do with her father's creep ass. Jasper is acting like Charlie in the controlling department. So he needs to know very soon.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 02 Jul 2020 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
I bet Tanya outs him as Anthony Masen!! Just a thought that went through my mind.
Date: 02 Jul 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
This has me a littlke confused. I would think the holiday rush would be before Christmas or between Christmas and New Year? " the full week after New Year's Day we will be open every day to accommodate the holiday rush. "
He is teill going to get bit by being Anthony Mason, but now I believe that Tayna will do it, either by mistake or on purpose. A woman scorned and all that.
Date: 02 Jul 2020 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper seems really possessive of Bella. I hope he does not have a temper like Charlie.
Date: 02 Jul 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!! I look forward to the update weekly!
Date: 01 Jul 2020 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
If she finds out from someone else she will be pissed...and once she knows she will think any reviews were a pity one. Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2020 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow Jasper needs to come back down to earth and stay out of the clouds and I am happy for Bella but Edward needs to tell her soon
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2020 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
She doesn't like being lied to and this is going to come out as one gigantic lie. Good luck Edward. Maybe the bakery will help her get over being lied to.
Are we going to hear from Charlie anytime soon? Will he be demanding more money now the the restaurant is doing well?
Date: 01 Jul 2020 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
While I agree Jasper needs to make his own mind up about Charlie, I still think Its ok for Bella to simply say that she doesn't have a good relationship with him and Jasper must meet with Charlie on his own
Date: 28 Jun 2020 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think kthey need to tell Jasper or showed Jasper what Charlie has done to Bella .
Date: 28 Jun 2020 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
I like how close Edward and Bella are. He really wants to make Renney's Soul a success. I wonder what his thoughts were about the closed business next door. Jasper is really pushy about trying to get to know Bella and finding out about Charlie. The way he's acting makes me wonder how much he inherited from Charlie. He feels left out of everything and maybe that's why he's so testy but I just sensed that he's a bit or a lot like Charlie. He doesn't seem to understand taking things slow with someone he considers family but is a total stranger to Bella. She's not comfortable around him and I wonder if subconsciously she senses it too.
Date: 27 Jun 2020 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh what an awful awful man Charlie Swan is. He stole from Bella money that was rightfully hers and wanted the rest of it too. Thank goodness Esme got away from him. And the suffering he put Bella through not only from the beatings but the whole business with her appendix. To tell a child with glee that she almost died and losing one of her fallopian tubes was a punishment for taking her mother away from him. Evil man.
Date: 27 Jun 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, Charlie is a sick awful man. I hope Karma gets to him. I wonder if Charlie tried to sexually abuse Bella but never did because Alice was there or she was with Granny Liz. I wouldn't doubt that Maria was someone Charlie picked up just to fuck but found out she was pregnant and abandoned her. Jasper wants to get to know Charlie but the girls are right, he needs to get to know charlie on hiis own to see what kind of person Charlie is. I wouldn't be surprised that Charlie wants nothing to do with him. Now that Charlie stole the money from the safe howw will they remodel the resaurant. Charlie probably figured he was just going to sell the restaurant after letting it go to the ground because he didn't know what he was doing and just wanted to get rid of it.
Date: 26 Jun 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
I know it's kind of crappy, but I don't really care for Jasper. He is annoying. I know he just wants to get to know his sister but oooohh my gosh. Get a clue brother! I love edwRd and Bella's relationship but I've honestly been so stressed about the Anthony Mason thing haha. I can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 26 Jun 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
I know it's kind of crappy, but I don't really care for Jasper. He is annoying. I know he just wants to get to know his sister but oooohh my gosh. Get a clue brother! I love edwRd and Bella's relationship but I've honestly been so stressed about the Anthony Mason thing haha. I can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 26 Jun 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
I know it's kind of crappy, but I don't really care for Jasper. He is annoying. I know he just wants to get to know his sister but oooohh my gosh. Get a clue brother! I love edwRd and Bella's relationship but I've honestly been so stressed about the Anthony Mason thing haha. I can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 26 Jun 2020 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can picture it now, Jasper walks into Renny's on opening night, sees Bella and assumes Edward did it and punches him, Alice and Bella both lose their shit because not only does he look like Charlie but he's also out of the blue agressive like him as well. This sets Bella back, and widens the chasm between him and Alice. Opening night is in shambles, and everything makes the news the following day. Well, that's if this were a telenovela/soap opera anyways.
I honestly hope everyone gets it together and tells Jasper what's going on, he must feel so isolated and confused. All of his family and friends are ignoring and putting distance between him and them. If they aren't careful he'll grow to resent Bella instead of wanting a relationship with her.
Date: 26 Jun 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
I feel for Jasper. I hope he gets the truth soon
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jazz needs to know and punch charlie
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Charlie better hold off visiting for a while. He should know that Bella has better backup than last time.
I suggest Esme call the family over and Jasper to give him the total picture of what Charlie is capable of and how he expects to gain from the restaurant.
Date: 25 Jun 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Fun chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2020 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
There are waaaaay too many secrets floating around. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 25 Jun 2020 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jasper needs to know cause Charlie could tell him anything. Charlie is going to show up and cause a scene I just know it .
Date: 25 Jun 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm thinking Jasper is going to be so pissed. Not only because Edward is with Bella but because noone told him how abusive Charlie is/was. I hope Charlie doesn't show up on opening night or does anything to hurt the restaurant (like setting a fire). I am just so worried about when everyone finds out Edward is Masen. Hope Bella can forgive him. Great chapter. Stay healthy.
Date: 25 Jun 2020 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Jun 2020 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella and Edward are getting along so good. Jasper is getting on my nerves. How does he not realize that Bella needs time.