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Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

They need to tell Jasper before Charlie realizes he's lost and uses/looks to Jasper for support. surprised Jessica was rehired.  Hope she does better! Great chapter!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love it things are looking up but when it comes to Jasper I think it's going to bite  everyone in the ass

Reviewer: nesciamema Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

Really hoping Bella goes to the cops and has Charlie's ass thrown in jail. Might be an easier way to break it to Jasper too since there'd be proof to charge him.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

good

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

Jasper is going to hurt when he finds out how much has been kept from him. Charlie will probably come to the opeinmg and make a scene.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well Edward is going to get burned when Bella find out that he is the writer of the blog she liked so much.  That is going to blow up in his face and probably Jasper is the one that will spill the beans when he find out about Bella nad Edward.  Thanks for your hard work on all your stories, I don't know how you keep comming up with them.

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

Jasper is being a jerk. Bella doen't know him from Adam, he is pushing too hard.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

All she has to tell Jasper is she doesn't  have a good relationship with Charlie 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

All she has to tell Jasper is she doesn't  have a good relationship with Charlie 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2020 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

Didn't see that coming. I hope Charlie gets what is coming to him 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wowza!!!!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Damn. I'm hooked. Scared about Bella finding out he's Masen though, it won't go over well. She's living with him and those contractors are coming back to treat his cabinets... I hope Jasper chills, and doesn't get royally screwed by no one being forthcoming about everything with Bella. I can just imagine Charlie says he purposefully got Maria hooked on drugs hoping she'd lose the baby or something since he never wanted children as well as abusing her too. And then who would be there for Jasper? 

Really excited for the next chapter, as well as going on this journey with you! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Damn. I'm hooked. Scared about Bella finding out he's Masen though, it won't go over well. She's living with him and those contractors are coming back to treat his cabinets... I hope Jasper chills, and doesn't get royally screwed by no one being forthcoming about everything with Bella. I can just imagine Charlie says he purposefully got Maria hooked on drugs hoping she'd lose the baby or something since he never wanted children as well as abusing her too. And then who would be there for Jasper? 

Really excited for the next chapter, as well as going on this journey with you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

Now that Bella's older and she has learned about her father's past can Bella, Jasper, and Esme put together a timeline of Charlie's offenses and take him to court?
I didn't see the connection between Esme and Charlie.
Hopefully Peter can shed more light on Charlie's nefarious ways.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Charlie has a lot of explaning to do Jail will look good on him what an ass hole

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

Charlie is/was able to get away with all of this shit because the victimes all kept secrets.   If they would tell each other everything, Charlie coudn't do shit.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: sandral918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

Did Charlie kill Renee????  He is a sneaky SOB!!  Thanks for another fantastic chapter.  Sandy

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: LENNOXBONES Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

They aren't protecting anyone by omitting the fact that Charlie is a extremely violent, cowardly, evil piece of trash. He's getting away with all of this because no one will speak up. Just be honest people! 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my gosh!!!!! I do not think Bella's mom killed herself. I think Charlie killed her and made it look like she killed herself.  Wow, Esme was married to Charlie.  What was/is Charlie doing with all that money????

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow oh wow that man is pure evil and needs to be put behind bars or six feet under

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope Bella presses charges now, and for stealing her money. Idk why last chapter Bella said the cops did nothing for her abuse when she just said she told th she's clumsy. I agree they should have done more.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

good

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

Charlie, there is a bus leaving in 5 minutes...be under it.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

Jasper needs to be told that having  Charlie as a dad wouldn't have been sunshine and rainbows.  I still want to know who the bratty teenager he said he was raising was. I am looking forward to Charlie being brought up on fraud charges at least

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my! Charlie is certainly an AH! Someone needs to give Alice a gun and then set the boys on him!

Reviewer: Silv Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

Sehr spannend. Oh ich muss Charli erwürgen. Sich an Kinder Vergehen das ist 😠

Warte mit Ungeduld 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

OMG...Charlie needs to be beaten to a pulp!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh wow.  I never thought of Charlie abusing Bella.  I'm glad she is trying with Jasper.  But he needs to quit pushing her. Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

Jason is being pushy.  Who is Bella yelling at? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

I didn't think she knew. Charlie intersect the letter and wrote one back to Jasper.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

I knew she was the cake lady!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

I think Jasper needs to come clean with Alice. If Bella is only 18 a d she and Alice are such good friends,  how old is Alice? Does Jasper know how old Alice is? I'm surprised Bella didn't defend her father.  How is Bella and Charlie's relationship?  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

I was wondering if Jake and James were going to come for a visit.  I can't wait to see what Jessica thinks.  Lol. 


Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

What is the deal with Bella acting that way towards Jasper.  I was hoping with Bella being drunk that we/Edward might find out something about her past. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

I feel Edward should have told Bella that he would have yelled at the staff if they had try to serve that Lobster. Also he should have said more to both "chefs" about  Bella being right. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Bella.  I hope Charlie gets all he deserves 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

Grrr...   I want to shoot Charlie in the ball sack too.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Well I think Charlie is done for because Vicky and jimmy are not going to take this lightly not even god will protect he’s sorry ass from Vicky and Alice just wait till esme and Rosalie find out shit is goin to hit the fan

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 13

having worked in another country and had frriends lose their pasport, I can conferm that it is a drawn out process to get a new one.  Also due to the length of time she had been there, her origonal pasport may have expired and she certainally change in looks a great deal, so making it even harder to get a new one.  Thanks for the insite into Charlie and Bella's relationship, or rather lack of one.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow ladies this just gets better and better

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Bless it.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

Did not expect that

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

He needs a police report filed. Get it over with. while she still looks like she does.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Charlie is  pure evil and the things he has done to Bella  OMFG someone just kill him

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

Charlie is a POS...how in the hell can you just abandoned someone in another country

Reviewer: TateLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well this sucked. Worrying over Bella finding out that Edward is Anthony Masen seems tiny in comparison. But I am still stressing about it. Ugh. I felt like I waited forever for this chapter and now I am dying. It was wonderful of course, as always. Can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

Was she threatened with sexual abused by Charlie?

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm glad I was wrong about her being mad at Edward. But Charlie! That douche bag has got to go. this needs to be reported to the police asap regardless of how embrassing it might be. He will continue to try and abuse her again if it isn't reported. And what money is he owed? Was he getting kick backs from dear old Mike or what?

So far we have 5 + suspects for Charlies's murder.

 

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

I want to be the president of the "Kick Charlie Sean's Ads " club! Please!

Reviewer: sandral918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

I really want to kick Charlie's arse!!!  He really needs all of them to get a turn.  Jasper should know and then make his own choice, he should no Charlie is no good if the letters were messed up.  Thank you for a fantastic chapter.

 

Sandy

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

Charlie needs to be reported, found & arrested asap. Lots of witnesses & evidence. He also needs to return the money he stole!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow Charlie abusing her I never saw coming. Wonder what money he wants....I hope Bella reports his armed robbery and gets him arrested. Something tells me to give Bella money Edward becomes partners in the restraunt, cuz Bella wouldn't just take his money. I'm thinking Charlie threaten rape or tried it or something based on Alice's last comment.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

good. now wondering what charlie did when she was little. thinking e needs to come clean to b asap 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wish someone in Bellas life had the maturity to say it's okay to tell Jasper that you have a bad relationship with Charlie  and he is on his own in pursuing a relationship with him. She also needs to press charges for assault and robbery.   Again, even though she is young, her friends should be able to make her see that Charlie won't go away if she ignores him

Reviewer: nesciamema Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Really hoping she presses charges and sues him for the abuse.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow. What I want to know is does the teenager Charlie said he was raising when Jasper first made co tact actually exist? Who received Jaspers letter and who replied?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm hoping she is yelling at Charlie but I get this feeling Edward's alter ego was revealed and his review of the restaurant will do;e between them.
James and Jake will be none to happy to hear Charlie is back.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope she was talking to Charlie 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope is it at Charlie and he didn;t spill the beans about Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope she is screeming at Charlie to get out but it may be both of them if Charlie told Bella it was Edward the was the reviewer.  No matter what Charlie is an ass hat

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

I have a feewling Charlie just revealed to Bella who Anthony Masen is. There is so much mystery surrounding Charlie. He gets Maria pregnant with Jasper, wonder if she was a prostitute, but makes no effort to get to know Jasper. Then he gets a young girl, Bella's mother, pregnant. Yet Granny Liz raises her. Bella has surgery, also unklnown what for. Bella thinks it was a ruptured appendix but Esme is very closed mouth about the surgery. And does not have a good opinion of Charlie. Bella recovers and is sent to Scotland for eight years. When she comes back she finds a very rundown Renny's Soul restaurant. Again, Charlie ignored it and let it go after Liz died. Now he interferes with Bella again. I think he would be all too happy if Bella returned to Scotland and he could sell the restaurant. Only he needs Bella to agree because Liz left it to her. Wonder if Charlie has debts he needs to pay and selling that restaurant might do that. He's not involved in either of his kids lives. Jasper needs to quit pushing Bella and let her get used to having  brother, she's too overwhelmed. And Edward neeeds to find a way to apologize to Bella. He should have told her, but hindsight again.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

Charlie..,..but maybe Edward bc Charlie told her the truth about the reviewer? Charlie is a dick.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

So Bella doesn't know she and Jasper are related. She feels so guilty about the way she's treated him. But that explains why she's treated Jasper with such dusgust, knowing he was with her best friend Alice but flirting with Edward. Now the mystery is who sent those letters? And what does Charlie have to do with this because he definitely does. Esme didn't like him and I'm sure Edward wants to know why.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hopefully Bella was yelling at Charlie.    There is some more shit there, I just know it.  Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my...Charlie told her he was the blogger I bet

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I think Charlie did something to Bella when she was little...maybe he was the cause of her needing surgery and Bella is yelling at Charlie to get out...that she doesn't see Edward there. Hopefully Edward doesn't think that's him. 

Reviewer: nounoute Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Salut,

Thanks you

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

There is an Irish form of the tea loaf. It's called a barm brack I make it a lot but it's a traditional All Hallows' eve cake/loaf and when made then you hide a ring or some such in it. 

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

good. seems charlie and b don't have a good relationship - definitley something going on there 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm thinking that I love updates from y'all! I'm thinking that I SINCERELY APPRECIATE the work you put into the stories.  I'm thinking I COULD JUST HUG YOU BOTH for all the time you devote to writing for us.

 

I'm thinking y'all provide me with a few minutes of peace when I desperately need it.

 

THANK YOU!!!

 

Chapter was great, too....as usual!❤🧡’’’’🤎–

 

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

First off, Jasper is a jerk. The more he pushes the more Bella will retreat. He needs to back off!! Give her space & time.

I hope Bella is yelling at Charlie to get out! He's the one that deceived her.

Reviewer: TateLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

ahhhh. I have to wait another week for more?? This chapter was soooo good. Jasper is getting so annoying. I mean, he kind of has been this whole time since he is being so pushy. I understand why he is acting that way but can he not tell that it is freaking Bella out? I love Edward and his love for her. But I am so nervous about the eruption that could possibly happen when she finds out about Anthony Masen... I am so anxious for more and can't wait until Wednesday!

Reviewer: lovesurfer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad Jasper and Bella are talking about the fact they are brother and sister, but he really needs to understad he needs to go slow. This is all new to her and there are still lots of things we don't know, like the real reason why she moved to Scotland and why she an Charlie don't seem to get along (besides the fact that he is a jerk)

I'm very sorry Alice and Jasper broke up but he should have been honest with her, I had a feeling adter last chapter that something like that was going to happen. I hope they can work things up and that Jasper fights for getting her back, he'll be a full to just walk away.

I love how Edward's feeling throwards Bella seem to be getting deeper, and moving past the just sex zone. And that he was there for her through the whole visit with Jasper.

I am afraid though about what will happen once Bella finds out Edward is A. Masen and he wrote the review. He is going to have a lot of grovelling to do.

Lastly, I'm pretty sure Bella was yelling at Charlie to get out. She probably confronted him about Jasper being his son and Charlie had nothing possitive to say about the matter. 

On a side note I'm currious to see what's the present Edward got her and what her reaction to it will be.

Next Wedneday can't come soon enough!!! 

I hope real life is threating you well and that you ladies and your families are staying safe.

Bisous. R.

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

To answer your question... I think that it is directed to both of them. To Charlie because he didn't tell her about Jasper and to Edward because Charlie told her who Edward was in the food world

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

Charlie must have  told her it was Edward that wrote the review. Bastard!

Reviewer: glassbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Ooooo Bella threw Charlie out whats Charlie been doing or more not doing to get that responce?

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow oh wow Jasper needs to try to relax and at the end I don't think Bella was talking to Edward 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

I suspected she was the cake lady. I like how Edward is seeing her as the person she is. And the lust he feels for her. And yes, I see him feeling more.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm assuming she's yelling at Charlie. I'm also sure that Jasper will be the one to out Edward as Anthony Masen

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm hoping she was yelling ar Charlie and didn't find out that Edward is the one behnd the blog 

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm hoping she was yelling ar Charlie and didn't find out that Edward is the one behnd the blog 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

The longer time Edward spends with her, the more he sees she is trying so hard to make the restaurant work. She knows some things and is trying to find what she doesn't by asking and researching. And he has let his judgment be clouded by what her father had said. I'm glad he's willing to work with her now. Staff has definitely improved since the old crew left and Jummy and Jake have arrived. They know how to run a restaurant.

Reviewer: Silv Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, ich bin begeistert. Nun bekommt Charli seinen Auftritt. Hoffe er bekommt seine Strafe. Was mit Masens Kritik passiert ist, er war zu abgelenkt. Warte mit Soanung wie es weitergeht.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonder how she will feel when she learns he did the review?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonder how she will feel when she learns he did the review?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2020 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved this chapter!

Call Jasper... he'll turn around! Lol!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

So many things need to be discussed between everyone so they can jointly revenge on Charlie.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

They are all going to be so pissed off at Anthony/Edward when they find out.  Now that's what I was hoping for that Bella had no idea that Jasper was her brother.  

Reviewer: Princeselisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

I think Bella will be crushed when she finds out they are the same person

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thank god he know knows that she didnt know Jasper was her brother OMG

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2020 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my oh my my heart goes out to her so very much

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2020 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

No I kinda thought she was the cake lady. Loved the end and glad Edward sees her in a better light. Still curious about how much she really knows about Jasper. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2020 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella has a huge heart. But, she has been the victim here. Her half-brother was prevented from knowing her and she was kept in the dark about his existence.
Charlie is to blame for all this heart wrenching pain these two siblings are feeling.
Can someone bring Alice on board at the same time. If she's the last to find out, Jasper will have greater problems.
The restaurant review will come between Edward and Bella at some point. Again, Bella will move past it due to the extenuating circumstances.
Now, Esme learning that her adult son is hooking up with an 18 year old might not be Edward's finest hour.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2020 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

good

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