Date: 27 May 2023 8:35 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
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Date: 27 May 2023 8:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
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Date: 27 May 2023 8:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
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Date: 27 May 2023 7:59 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
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Date: 27 May 2023 7:49 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception
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Date: 27 May 2023 7:39 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
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Date: 27 May 2023 7:20 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans
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Date: 27 May 2023 7:09 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History
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Date: 27 May 2023 6:59 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements
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Date: 27 May 2023 6:50 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal
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Date: 27 May 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions
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Date: 27 May 2023 6:08 PM Title: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire
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Date: 27 May 2023 5:58 PM Title: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises
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Date: 27 May 2023 5:48 PM Title: Chapter Nine ~ Normal Blood Pressure
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Date: 27 May 2023 5:36 PM Title: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure
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Date: 27 May 2023 5:28 PM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds
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Date: 27 May 2023 5:19 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties
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Date: 27 May 2023 5:10 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits
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Date: 27 May 2023 4:44 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds
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Date: 27 May 2023 4:36 PM Title: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress
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Date: 27 May 2023 4:27 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
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Date: 27 May 2023 4:19 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
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Date: 12 Jul 2022 7:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
I very much enjoyed the ending of Carmen and Irina. Good for Esme. She showed herself to be a true member of her mafia family. As for Eleazar, his death was sweet revenge for Carlisle.
Date: 12 Jul 2022 6:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Seems like a fitting ending to Charlie Swan. He actually felt no remorse when he saw his wife die. She had disappointed him by not giving him the sons he wanted. Renee deserved to die because she helped her husband hold her daughter hostage. With no food how did she expect those babies to survive.
Date: 12 Jul 2022 5:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Painful for Royce to give up what he knew. Eleazar will suffer the consequences for putting the hit on Carlisle and kidnapping Bella. There will be no deals and no mercy on him and his family.
Date: 12 Jul 2022 5:14 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
Awwww. How beautiful. Irina wqas delusional that Edward loved her. Esme told Carmen Edward's wife had to be of irish descent. Of course, that might be true but she certainly didn't want her Edward to be joined with Carmen's family.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 4:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Yay Carlisle and yay Esme too. Haha well done. Another mob story to love.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
There will be loud baby.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
With such calm Skipper. Bye Royce.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Badass Esme, I'm just saying.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception
To many distractions to see. Carlisle hit, Bella pregnant with twins, meeting Rosalie and Alice, planning a wedding, renovating an apartment and regular everyday shit Royce snuck through. Charlie is cray. So many in this story. I love it!
Date: 15 Oct 2021 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
So Mark is suspicious of Royce I hope he tells Edward. I hope they don't actually kidnap her and I hope she doesn't lose the babies. How is Carlisle's rehab going?
Date: 15 Oct 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans
Jesus that family is nuts. I love Esme.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements
So stupid Bree is gossiping with Royce. I wish they weren't so distracted so they could see what's happening around them but maybe they are and you are planning something amazing.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal
Royce is the mole and Elezar is going to give her back to Charlie? Oh shit! I thought she was dead to him. Oh boy.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 2:09 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions
Royce can't be good news he rarely is like James. I mentioned him because besides Phil you mentioned his name here. Hmm...Again Elezar and Irina are both cray. He thinks Edward is weak and tried to kill Carlisle why would he want his daughter to have Edward's baby? Hope they don't let their guard down.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire
I'm not sure what Elezar is thinking encouraging his cray daughter to pursue Edward. I doubt Carlisle would let his son marry her. It seems he would prefer an Irish bride. Is Bella Irish? That was Irina across the street right?
Date: 14 Oct 2021 10:10 PM Title: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises
Good we seem on track for love and family. I love Esme btw. I hope Carlisle defies odds and at least walks with a cane. I love a sexy Papa Don/Captain Carlisle.
Date: 14 Oct 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties
He knew she was a virgin good girl he had the blood on his dick so why is he being one? I was hoping he would act better than this. *sad face*
Date: 14 Oct 2021 7:38 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits
Okay that slap was necessary although not very elegant. ;-)
Date: 14 Oct 2021 7:04 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds
She's surrounded by Edward's people but no Edward. At the gala maybe. I mean 6 months and he hasn't tried to find her? Will he see any of Bella while pregnant? I'm glad she's not alone.
Date: 14 Oct 2021 6:52 PM Title: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress
Wow a paralyzed Carlisle I've only seen that once before and never at the beginning of the story. This is an interesting twist. I love how you bitch slap Aro around in your mob tales will he be trustworthy here? Can't wait to see.
Date: 14 Oct 2021 6:38 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
I'm not sure what either of them were thinking. He doesn't need Illegitimate children and she is just starting out. Also in all their 'spill' debriefing did the girls ask about protection? I love that she is on the floor with Garret and I think her dark prince has the penthouse hmm...Hey is Rose's Dad connected? Perhaps ' A Frind Of Theirs'? Good stuff as always. I love your stories. I'm in my mob part of the year for reading and you provide the goods. ;-)
Date: 14 Oct 2021 5:55 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
He could have woken her up. She was a virgin and she would have understood the emergency but this will make her feel used. Also she's not going to be knocked up from a one night stand will she? I hope savvy Alice and Rose have her on the shot. *fingers crossed*
Date: 14 Sep 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Great ending!
Date: 14 Sep 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
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Date: 14 Sep 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
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Date: 14 Sep 2021 2:26 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
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Date: 14 Sep 2021 2:16 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception
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Date: 14 Sep 2021 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
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Date: 14 Sep 2021 1:55 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 6:01 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 5:18 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:42 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:24 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 3:27 PM Title: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 2:41 PM Title: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Nine ~ Normal Blood Pressure
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:57 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
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Date: 13 Sep 2021 2:43 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
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[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 3:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
STORY WAS GREAT, LEFT ME SMILING WOULD LOVE A SEQUEL IF THE MOOD EVERY STRIKES YOU
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 1:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
good job
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 1:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Did they get Eleazar?
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 12:35 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception
I have to wonder how Elezar knows Charlie?
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 12:28 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
me too
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans
something gonna hit the fan soon I think
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History
hopefully they both look like him, he IS the prettier parent
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 12:31 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal
gotta be Charlie on the line
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 12:15 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions
dum da dum dum
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 10:53 PM Title: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire
is Irina going to be a stalker
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises
aww
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 8:34 PM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds
love
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:52 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits
he deserved it but I am sure he will make it better
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:33 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds
hopefullly Tony will be accompaning Esme
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
no surprise there lol
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2021 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Great story!
Date: 10 Apr 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
I am curious...was the code word baru and what does it mean? I tried looking it up and couldn't find anything that seemed to fit.
I am loving the story so far and cant wait to get further in!
Author's Response:
Baru is a nut. Irina was definately a nut. Haha.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Love it!! Would not mind some more of this family and more Daddy time!!
Date: 08 Apr 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
LOVED IT!!! Great Story. Thank you for sharing it. You are one of my favorite authors and I love reading your E&B stories.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2021 7:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Thank you for a lovely story!! I enjoyed it so much!! well done BRAVO. Charlie got what he deserved along with the rest of them. Carlise & Esme will enjoy their reunion I'm sure. I like hoe Bella change the lullaby!! Yes their father & mother will be there to catch them.
Date: 08 Apr 2021 3:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Great story
Date: 08 Apr 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Loved it. The last line was perfect
Date: 08 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
What a great trip! You took me on a journey that I don't want to end. I really hate to let this Edward and Bella go. More, please.
Date: 08 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
What a great trip! You took me on a journey that I don't want to end. I really hate to let this Edward and Bella go. More, please.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Awesome ending. Glad they took care of business. Wonder where Kate and Tanya are though.
Ty for writing and sharing
Date: 07 Apr 2021 7:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Lordamercy, Esme and Carlisle are freakin' awesome...very imaginative, as well *high five!*
Welcome to the world, Liam and Robbie! I bet they love Bella's new version of their lullaby! And don't be shy about postin' a future take or two or even a sequel featurin' those wild boys...well, with a father like Edward, I expect they will be LOL!
*HUGS!*
Date: 07 Apr 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
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[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
:) loved this story
Date: 07 Apr 2021 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
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