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Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 10:05 PM Title: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure

Well, that could have went better.  Clusterfuck all the way around.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 9:52 PM Title: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure

Edward caused her stress and now he is going to have to deal with the fallout from it.

Plus the grief he will be getting from Rose and Alice. He deserves it all.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

I love it 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Yes, this is starting out so out of the box. I like an Irish mob story. Thanks for providing translations.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

I like the different adversay!  :)

 

I am so loving this and looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

I like the different adversay!  :)

 

I am so loving this and looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2020 12:15 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Oh this ended sad!!  Poor Edward is so out of his depth!  LOL... Bella gives as good as she gets.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2020 12:00 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Oh holy crap on a cracker!!!   She smacked the shit out of him!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2020 11:33 PM Title: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

OH wow... More please!!

Reviewer: Shannon30033 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2020 6:09 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Oh!  I hope this story gets finished.  It is so great!  Thank you

Reviewer: Shannon30033 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2020 5:45 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Oh! She handed him his ass...

Reviewer: Shannon30033 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Ha!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 6:06 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Really good

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 2:25 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

I can't wait to see Edward beg for Bella's forgiveness. Love Esme so much. Please update soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2020 9:54 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

:) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Excellent

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Boy Tony you have a long way out of the hole a little progress for us but Bella needs to see it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2020 1:41 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Well TONY you just keep on digging that hole. Deeper and deeper.  sigh

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2020 12:38 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

:}

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 3:37 PM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Loving this story and I love how Esme knows them already.  Eleazer needs to be taken down.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 10:35 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

what a pleasant surprise! thank you for the update. now i can;t wait for the next. 

   read you soon   : )

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Good thing he is stepping up security for Bella now that Irina has been shut down.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Ah  Irina being the slut this time.  Glad that Robert was/is there for Bella.  Wait till he finds out about Rose and Alice's finds as well.  LOL

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Glad Robert stood up to Edward.  So Eleazar was who put the hit out on Carlisle.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 3:08 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 3:08 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 2:25 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Uuuuuu can’t wait

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Can't wait to see what Edward does to get Bella!!! Make him work for it!!! Also can wait to see what Rose and Alice have to say to Edward!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

OMG so happy that they all know each other now but I am freaking out about the evil bastard and his daughter when they find out that is is Bella.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Eleazar and his bitch daughter are gonna be a real problem *grrrrr!* I look forward to seein' Edward handle them...with prejudice LOL! Now to get Edward on Bella's good side which might prove an even bigger problem *heheheh!*

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 1:16 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Yeah! Great new chapter! Can't wait for the next one. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2020 1:03 AM Title: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Is it wrong that I want to stab Irina in the eyes and cut off all her fingers and feed them to a rabid dog?!?!?!?

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 8:40 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

I HAD TO RE-READ AGAIN .... I'M GOING OUT OF MY MIND PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Big trouble

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

As usual another great chapter.   Update soooonnnn!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2020 2:44 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2020 2:34 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

:) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2020 9:37 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

He has some major groveling to do. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2020 9:21 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

HELLO PREGNANCY HORMONES!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2020 5:38 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

Hopefully edward is in attendance tonight!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2020 5:24 AM Title: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

I think an irish mob edward is the sexiest!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2020 1:03 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

If Edward wasn't the Captain, he'd be in for an epic ass-whoopin'...worse than he just got from Esme LOL!  Still, this is something for Edward and Bella to sort out for themselves.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Looks l8ke she will only need to move up a few floors to be with edward in the penthouse.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 10:56 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood

I’m hooked!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 10:36 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

On my gosh!!!!!! Esme pulled a gun on her own son. LOL!!!!!😂🤣

So glad Bella stood up to Edward  

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 3:07 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Love it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 7:52 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Loving it. I can’t wait for more chapters! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

OMG Love Love Love Esme she rocks lol. Edward has so much ass kissing to do 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Damn, so loving this story and how everyone is so connected because of Bella and they didn't know it.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2020 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Great chapter. I am glad that Vella stands up to Edward.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 11:05 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 10:31 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Way to win her over dickhead! Esme is going to have his ass.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 10:23 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Good for you Bella!!! I think Bella will be just what he needs!!!

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 10:18 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

great story

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 9:38 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Can we say hormones?!?!?!?  *snickers*

Reviewer: iamafan10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 8:18 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

I love Bella for not giving in so quickly ! Make Edward sweat!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 7:02 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Loved Bella's reaction. I hope Esme and Carlisle makes him pay so Edward comes crawling back filled with remorse. Love this side of mama bear Bella. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 6:46 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Glad Esme & Carlisle were there.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 6:41 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Love that everyone is on Bella's side.   E is in for a difficult tim . 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 5:31 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Wait until they find out that they live in the same place!!! And we figure Esme will have a few choice words for her son and she will tell Mr. Hale and he will tell Bella. Now we can't wait for the next chapter keeping us in suspense. 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’‘”’

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Oh, Edward.  I have no words for you.  Get your act together!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 5:07 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Oh snap!!  I was wondering what would happen when they finally met again!  Fireworks... And not the good kind, lol. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

This was amazing.  I have only one "complaint".  Here, "She thought she and Edward had connected Ina special way...". Bella doesn't know that Tony's real name is Edward.  She only knows him as Tony Masen. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 4:57 PM Title: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

I gasped so loud I scaredy my cats!  I adored this chapter!!  I loved the family history!  You are amazing! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Oh snap!!  I cannot wait to see how Bella takes this news!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood

That was incredible!!  I loved every bit!  I wonder how they will meet up again? 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 4:09 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

He will always be an Irish dick but maybe he can convince her he will make a good father...and maybe husband?

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Love your story! I like the tough Bella! Yeah Edward is a cutie, but don't let him push you Around! I also like Esme and Carlisle are so loving and supportive of Bella. Great story!

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2020 3:08 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Great story, I usually side with Bella. But I dont know this time she is just being a dick about it. Come on, Carlisle was shot and she didnt leave a forwarding address. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 4:32 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Damn go Bella. Oh Edward/Tony has lots of splaining to do and he doesn't need to worry about anyone else trying to kill him because momma is going to do it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 6:32 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I am so excited that she smacked him lol.  

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 9:44 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Now I am going to be very nice this time.   Don't you leave me hangin for long next time.   You can't drop this bomb and make me wait so long.   My heart may not beable to sustain another long wait.   OMG, this story is amazing.   Thank you so much for taking your time to share this with your readers.  But please, please update soooon!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 6:36 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

OMG !  Love your story. Hope you're doing well ,stay safe .Cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Totally brilliant. Thank you

Reviewer: cincy223 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Thank you for updating! Can't  wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

OMG!!! What a Cliffhanger!!! lololol

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 12:35 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Finally! They meet again! I cannot wait to see what happens next! This will be good. 

Reviewer: Frosticles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I rarely comment but I have to say I'm thoroughly enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!  Thank you!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 10:27 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Wow

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 10:11 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Oh my

Reviewer: debb8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Uh oh!!

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

:}

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 7:02 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Nicely done Bella. Slap him again.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 3:58 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Lol!!!!!!! I'm glad she slapped him. Edward is sooooo in trouble.  Esme is going to get him too. Oh my, I can't wait to Esme get a hold of him. I can just see her getting him away from the crowd and then grabbing him by his ear till she gets him where she wants him and then chewing his ass out when she finds out how he did Bella. PLEASE update soon.  

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 2:23 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Cant wait for more 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 1:50 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I seriously was worried the Covid got you! Thanks for the update! Please update again soon! 😊

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 11:55 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: drpharmgrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 2:28 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Ohhh that was an awesome end to the chapter! Let the explanations begin!

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 1:33 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Boom!!! She has an Irish temper, she just maybe Irish!!!! Wonder what Esme will think about what just happened???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’‘’”

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 12:00 AM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Ouch! Not exactly the reunion either of them was hopin' for but I'm waitin' for the fireworks from Esme, and the rest of his family and her friends...gonna need a big bucket of popcorn for that LOL!

 

Oh, and might I suggest a slight change so that slap in the face & slapped him in the face don't slap us in the face?

The reality of the situation drove the breath from her body with a heaving gasp of shock.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 11:50 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

please update quickly before I get over being mad at TONY

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I guess Edward needs to kick his own ass for leaving Bella. I wonder why he didn't think of what he did to Bella when Garrett was telling him about Bells.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Edward, you have a lot of 'splanin' to do!

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:40 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

great great story

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:38 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

YES!  He's got some explaining to do

Reviewer: iamafan10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:26 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I had forgotten all about this fic ! But it was worth the wait! Can't wait until the next chapter !

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:21 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Ooh he is in for a world of hurt. She's not gonna trust him any time soon.

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:09 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

great job thanks for sharing

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 10:08 PM Title: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Edward you have some esplainin to do!!!!!

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