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Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2021 8:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Thanks for sharing this story. I truly enjoyed taking a step back in time. I'll be looking forward to reading your next story.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 9:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

Your description of childbirth for those days reflected the ins and outs of it.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 9:09 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

I can't imagine the day to day living in those days. However, Bella seems to adjusted fairly well.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2021 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Edward has me concerned for the winter ahead.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 10:34 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Seth's right, Bella has managed to make herself a wonderful life.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 8:29 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Bella sure got a good little chunk of inheritance. Looks like she doesn't have to worry about funds to increase the ranch anymore.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Yikes.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

I can only imagine how hard life was back then.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 9:59 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

I think Bella just jinxed herself.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: hisangel338 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Lovely! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

New reader to your story..It was a very good and entertaining  story I loved it..I'm  happy Edward & Bellka worked everything  out..Jasper got his family back let's  hope he will let Alice be his partner again.  I loved Rosalie  & Emmett in your  story..I'm  happy we sent Irene packing lol she needed to go..until next time..WELL DONE!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 1:12 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

:) loved this story.  Going to miss it 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 3:24 PM Title: Prologue

Love love love the story! So sad for and ending but happy how you ended it! Another great in the books! Looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 1:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Love this story and hate to see it end.  Thank you for writing and sharing.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 2:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I love them all thanks so much

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2021 3:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty

Loved it.  So loving this story. I don't want it to end. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2021 4:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty

that is so sweet

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 12:55 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Glad Bella was there to help out Alice and vice versa. Aww for Garrett and Kate. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

Hard winters so sad .  I love this story so much thanks

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen

I lost a calf this year when the Blizzard hit Texas. Poor babe was born that day. We put hay under and arround it but it was just too cold. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Aww for Garrett and Kate.  Glad Seth will be staying nearby. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2021 4:37 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2021 9:20 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen

Love it so happy for them

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 5:42 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Glad Bella bought things she liked and needed.  Seth sounds like he'll fit in just fine. Aww for Billy leaving 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 5:28 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

Life is going so good for them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 5:23 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2021 2:01 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2021 3:44 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Wowsers.  Glad her father didn't have a chance to make good on his threat.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2021 5:37 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

I just love them and so happy Charlie didnt leave her out

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2021 4:19 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Glad he's happy with the cattle price.  The Seth announcement has me worried though. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2021 4:05 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Logan sounds like a great guy.  Hmm wonder what is up with Seth 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 3:59 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 2:56 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Surprise

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Sweet

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2021 7:15 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Sounds like lots of new friendly people coming to the Ranch.  hmmm Katie and seth maybe?  :-D  Glad to see you posting again.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 3:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 6:48 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Love it so good to hear from you

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 11:51 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Irene trouble maker. Keep on writing

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 4:55 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Many a close calls in this chapter; all for different reasons. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Yikes. Irene is up to no good.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 4:36 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Rut-roh...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Aw, I'm gonna miss Mrs Cope. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 1:27 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 10:19 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Bella should pack Irene's bags for her 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Whew.. send that heiffer packing and don't pay her fare. Let her work it off in a saloon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 9:15 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Thank you for 2 in a row I would of lost my mind thinking Edward was doing something wrong.  I love how Rose was helping her leave lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Kick that skanky thing out of the house

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Kick that skanky thing out of the house

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 7:26 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

angry

OMG  Irene needs a good hard kick in the arse.  Glad E threw her out.   What a biatch.

 

Phew for getting to Bella before it was too late.  Hope she doesn't get pneumonia or anything like that.  

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh no poor Bella, I sincerely hope Bella gives Edward a mouthful about how he is suddenly treating her, he should also be honest about his past relationships and maybe send Irene on her way due to the way she's behaving/treating Bella.  I hope there is a happy ending to all of this and Edward doesn't fall into Irene's trap.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

He should not have accepted the young woman in his home. She is not being a good guest. Poor Bella. Load your gun and get rid of her.

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:44 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Time for Irene to leave. How can u see people working each day and she does nothing.  And Edward is so wrong to not be upfront with his previous relationship with her and the bad behavior started with him sitting his wife in the back of the buggy. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:01 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

hmm Bella is right to be wary, but Edward needs to man up and tell her whats what.  Glad she isn't tolerating Irenes nonsense.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter Ten

WTF who is that?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2020 5:17 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Mrs Cope was an awesome lady.  Glad she could help even with her gone.  Oh now you silly with the ending.  Bet its a cousin or something from back home.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 6:48 AM Title: Chapter Ten

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 5:02 AM Title: Chapter Ten

So happy for them and so thanks full for Mrs C.  I hope Bella does not have to kill Edward now lol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:42 PM Title: Chapter Ten

I'm loving it so far!

 

Thanks for writing the western!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2020 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Nine

You did a good job of a tough subject.  RIP Mrs. Cope your family will miss you.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2020 1:25 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Glad the ranch is coming together.  Love the blanket idea.  Bella did well all things considered.  E was so nice talking to her in the end. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2020 9:40 PM Title: Chapter Nine

So sad..... 

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I absolutely loved this chapter. 

You captured the emotion perfectly.

The speech Edward made to Bella

about how the men interpreted 

Bellas actions was amazing.

I think she will find out that she has their 

complete loyalty as the Missus of the ranch.

Great Job

Thank You

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 6:05 PM Title: Chapter Nine

RIP Mrs cope

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 10:28 AM Title: Chapter Eight

 

J'aime ce chapitre. Je préfère de loin quand tout va bien pour nos amoureux. Je vous remercie.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 1:55 AM Title: Chapter Nine

how sad poor Mrs  she will be missed

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Nine

That life required a lot of hard work. I don't think I'd be up to the task. I can barely keep up here at my home, with all the conveniences we have now.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Awe its beautiful

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2020 9:14 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2020 9:32 PM Title: Chapter Eight

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2020 3:01 AM Title: Chapter Eight

wonderful

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 6:00 AM Title: Chapter Eight

nice to see a pleasant Jessica for a change. Sounds like a lovely place for a honeymoon.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2020 8:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Finally, I'm all caught-up and looking forward to reading more. I appreicate your description of their wedding night. So many authors detail every single movement and draw it out to the point that a reader gets burned out on sex scenes. You did a fantastic job leading up to the wedding day. I'm curious as to where Edward has planned to take her on their honeymoon.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2020 4:52 AM Title: Chapter Six

I'm enjoying this fic.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2020 4:10 AM Title: Chapter Five

Things are moving along fairly quickly. Old wives tale traditions were something else back in those days.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 8:06 PM Title: Chapter Four

The date is set.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 7:14 AM Title: Chapter Three

I'm enjoying this story so much.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter Two

Bella's settling in fairly well.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 4:24 AM Title: Chapter One

Things are about to get shaken up at the ranch.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 3:29 AM Title: Prologue

Finally getting to start this one. Intriguing start. I'm looking forward to catching up and reading more.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 8:35 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Lovely wedding and chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Wonderful time for them love it

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2020 6:48 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Awww wonderful wedding build up and ending

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2020 3:19 PM Title: Chapter Seven

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2020 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Six

Wonderful to see everyone working together.  Rose and Angela are so sweet

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 9:46 PM Title: Chapter Six

:) 

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Six

Love this story..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 2:54 AM Title: Chapter Six

i KNOW life back then was tough but I wish I could of had that kind of life other than no fan fiction what would I do lol

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2020 1:58 PM Title: Chapter Five

Aww for Ben and Angel .  Lol for the bundling bed

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2020 1:48 PM Title: Chapter Four

Roosters can be nice or evil .  We had one on the farm whose name was Mr. Nasty.  Charlie is a real piece of work.  Aww poor Sue & Leah have to work now... Not.  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter Five

Finally, I'm all caught-up. I'm actually looking forward to more. As many westerns I have read I've never read one where a bundling bag practice was ever mentioned; quiet interesting.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2020 4:42 AM Title: Chapter Four

Good riddance to the likes of Charlie and Sue. Bella's better off to be moving on with Edward.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 10:45 PM Title: Chapter Three

I couldn't help but to smile as Edward wasted no time in claiming Bella for his own and made sure his men knew it.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 6:49 PM Title: Chapter Two

Bella appears to be settling well into her new life on the ranch.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 10:07 AM Title: Chapter One

I'm enjoying catching up on this story. Westerns have also intrigued me.

 

Sherry

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