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Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 35

Love your writing. They definitely need to have at least two kids so Katie won't be a spoiled brat....that would be easy for her to be because of her issues, you know being treated 'delicately' because of fill in the blank. She kind of got on my nerves, but after all she was a little girl who lost her parents. Bella, same thing. I know, I know. Edward deserved lots of sympathy but he also could be annoying.. I guess just being human. I think you balanced it pretty darn well. I look forward to the epilogue.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 35

Beautiful 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

So happy for them 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thank you for this chapter! I enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 35

Aww.. how sweet is this chapter.  Please I don't want the epilogue to be next chapter can't you do another chapter then the epilogue as I want a detailed description of the wedding and the future ie how would Edward cope with Bella being pregnant and Katie's feelings.  Until you post again xxx

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 35

What a beautiful journey. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 35

Technically Katie will become an Aunt to Edward's and Bella's children.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Tough decision for Katie and Bella to make, titles don't always capture the true definition of a relationship.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 35

That was a great chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 35

Wedding at Cinderella's Castle at Disney World.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2021 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 34

I love Edward's talk with Katie. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 34

Beautiful chapter.  I love that Katie calls them mom and dad.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sweet

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sweet

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved this update!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 34

Such a great chapter!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

So glad Bella and Edward are working with someone about their issues.  

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34

Yet another great chapter.  I do not want this story to end just yet, please don't rush to finish it as I always look forward to the next chapter with anticipation x

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 34

This chapter had some of everything!    Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 34

Such a sweet chapter.  Love him talking to kit kat about the ring and her helping pick it out.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 33

Edward really is pushing his recovery time. Hopefully no setbacks.
Emotional scars will remain for both but the team work building up the support for each other will surpass their issues.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2021 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 33

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2021 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 33

Sound like they are all on the mend both physically and mentally. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 32

Love that they are working together to get their relationship back. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thank you for not dragging out their self-loathing; instead focusing on their desire to be together.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 32

They have a long way to go but glad they are getting the therapy and help they need.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 32

Lovely update!!! Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella can't honestly believe she can go back to being friends with Edward?
She's still young and her experiences aren't deep enough to guide her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella can't honestly believe she can go back to being friends with Edward?
She's still young and her experiences aren't deep enough to guide her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella can't honestly believe she can go back to being friends with Edward?
She's still young and her experiences aren't deep enough to guide her.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

I ugly cried through this whole chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Poor Bella her body just had enough now what will be next

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 31

Awww poor Bella sooo much her body was bound to crash

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 31

Glad they are talking things out and that Bella has some awesome friends supporting her and Katie there. Esme is such a great mom

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh these folks need a break

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 31

I love that way you write these two. They've been through so much and you've helped them along. ;) I'm betting that friendship will turn back quickly. Is it possible that Bella fainted because she's pregnant? Maybe?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope they are able to talk and heal fast.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope they are able to talk and heal fast.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope they are able to talk and heal fast.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 31

The thing is forgive and from there you just move forward. He needs therapy. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 31

The thing is forgive and from there you just move forward. He needs therapy. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 30

Happy he at least made it through the surgey and they have the opportunity to work through their issues.   I hope James gets what he desrves! 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

Can't wait to hear ....or read

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

2 or 3 chapters not enough, they have more to say I am sure

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

How long are they staying in Forks/Port Angeles?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

I hope Edward will get more help with his issues.  They are definitely understandable.  Also he and Bella need to go to some type of counseling too. Glad Edward made it through the wreck.  I hope Katie doesn't freak out from Edward being in a wreck like her parents.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30

I've heard many horror stories about logging trucks and coal trucks.  Poor E. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh my goodness this made me cry please let them fix this 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Glad he is on mend. He needs some Katie love

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awww Edward

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

This chapter had my tears pouring.   Ugh....    :)    Great chapter.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 30

James needs to do some serious time. Also, he needs to become Bad Bubba's newest girlfriend AND share him with his buddies. Just sayin'. Lauren needs to also do some time and be forced to work and reimburse Bella for the money she embezzled (stole). Maybe in our fictional world they'll both pay for their crimes. However, in the real world....it's a crapshoot.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update well done!! until you post again 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 29

You better post quickly or we will Beat you. LOL thanks for the update. On a cold cliff here....

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

wow please hurry back, was not expecting this

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Bella can;t catch a break.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh no!!!!!! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ack another cliffy!!!   Wow Lauren is  a piece of crap.  Poor Beverly

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh my, hurry the next chapter 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved the chapter. Ack for the cliffy end. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad Edward came out to WA. Bummed about the near death experience.   As eager as i am for E & B to make up, I can't wait to hear Emmett's news about James

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad Edward came out to WA. Bummed about the near death experience.   As eager as i am for E & B to make up, I can't wait to hear Emmett's news about James

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Wow, what an emotional chapter. Great job 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 29

Awww poor Bella one thing after another

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Edward and Bella.... 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2021 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

This chapter really brought on my water works.   It sounds like Edward figured out what his wrong assumptions might have cost him.   Or maybe Emmett told him?   Hmm.....

He is going to full of more self loathing after this situation.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2021 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh No!! Edward jumping to anger and conclusions again. Perhaps he needs to see someone before Bella runs back.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2021 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

wow, he really has trust issues

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh no. I hope it doesn't take long for Edward to listen 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

Well, Edward has done it again.  He did not listen to Bella and said hurtful things that he can't take back. Edward already promised that he wouldn't hurt Bella again. Can't wait for the update.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

He should have listened to Bella 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh wow, yet another great chapter however, I can't believe you decided to go along this route.  I sincerely hope there are cameras in the office so this misunderstanding can all be cleared up but at the same time I wouldn't put it past Bella now to consult Esmee and possibly take Victoria up on her offer. 

Just a question though there will definitely be a HEA?  The amount of times Bella and Edward have had sex they have never taken any precautions, will she end up pregnant?  Just a thought that's all.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter already and hopefully all things will be resolved xxx

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh no, Edward jumping to the wrong conclusions is never a good thing.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

Aw this is awful I'm sorry Edward had to see James hands on Bella..I don't know if he will believe Bella that nothing happen between them..I'm sorry Bella didn't  just go to dinner with Edward and his family..Thank you  for the update..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

Aw this is awful I'm sorry Edward had to see James hands on Bella..I don't know if he will believe Bella that nothing happen between them..I'm sorry Bella didn't  just go to dinner with Edward and his family..Thank you  for the update..until you post again

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh man...these two can't seem to get psat the drama!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2021 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

Does Bella seek out Esme?
There must be cameras at the office. Emmett needs to ask for copies from Rosalie to review what happened.
Wondering if Bella will seek employment elsewhere? Victoria has offered. So has Jane. Would she uproot Katie again?

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