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Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 10:48 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved the story!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 1:26 PM Title: Epilogue

Awesome ending.  Thank you for writing and sharing.

Ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 35

Sounds like things are working out nicely for our favorite couple. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 7:01 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved every word!!!! Great story!

Reviewer: cbhappy5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 4:20 PM Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed the story

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2021 2:40 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue

great story, thank you for sharing...

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2021 7:45 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story!! well done..They got their HEA an so did everyone else that mattered.  I so enjoyed reading this story!!!  until your next one

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2021 7:45 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story!! well done..They got their HEA an so did everyone else that mattered.  I so enjoyed reading this story!!!  until your next one

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2021 7:45 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story!! well done..They got their HEA an so did everyone else that mattered.  I so enjoyed reading this story!!!  until your next one

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2021 6:13 PM Title: Epilogue

Well crafted epilogue!
Thank you for taking me on this amazing journey through the hills and valleys of their lives.

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2021 2:27 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved this! To see how broken they both were and then healing...loved it!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 5:32 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story! Thank you for sharing your talents 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 1:20 PM Title: Epilogue

Such a beautiful journey.  Thanks for sharing this with us  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 3:08 AM Title: Epilogue

Love love love this chapter and the whole story.  Awesome great job. Thank you for sharing your talent with us 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 2:15 AM Title: Epilogue

Funny now that is more like men usually are. You change the poopy ones I will change the pp ones. LOL good story

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 1:54 AM Title: Epilogue

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 1:01 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 10:35 PM Title: Epilogue

ooh, I know what you should do next, that is if you want to, write a one-shot about Katie getting married!!! I think it would be great. it doesn't have to be written right away, give the idea some time to percolate.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 10:14 PM Title: Epilogue

Poopy diaper overflows will test a parent's true love.   :)    LOL    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 35

Love your writing. They definitely need to have at least two kids so Katie won't be a spoiled brat....that would be easy for her to be because of her issues, you know being treated 'delicately' because of fill in the blank. She kind of got on my nerves, but after all she was a little girl who lost her parents. Bella, same thing. I know, I know. Edward deserved lots of sympathy but he also could be annoying.. I guess just being human. I think you balanced it pretty darn well. I look forward to the epilogue.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 35

Beautiful 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

So happy for them 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thank you for this chapter! I enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 35

Aww.. how sweet is this chapter.  Please I don't want the epilogue to be next chapter can't you do another chapter then the epilogue as I want a detailed description of the wedding and the future ie how would Edward cope with Bella being pregnant and Katie's feelings.  Until you post again xxx

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 35

What a beautiful journey. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 35

Technically Katie will become an Aunt to Edward's and Bella's children.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Tough decision for Katie and Bella to make, titles don't always capture the true definition of a relationship.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 35

That was a great chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2021 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 35

Wedding at Cinderella's Castle at Disney World.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2021 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 34

I love Edward's talk with Katie. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 34

Beautiful chapter.  I love that Katie calls them mom and dad.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sweet

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sweet

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved this update!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 34

Such a great chapter!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

So glad Bella and Edward are working with someone about their issues.  

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34

Yet another great chapter.  I do not want this story to end just yet, please don't rush to finish it as I always look forward to the next chapter with anticipation x

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

As the proxy parent, Bella fills a very unique roll. Being called mom is significant, but the title makes no difference. She's become Katie's main source of guidance, comfort, and healing.
As a big sister, it would seem weird.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 34

This chapter had some of everything!    Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 34

Such a sweet chapter.  Love him talking to kit kat about the ring and her helping pick it out.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 33

Edward really is pushing his recovery time. Hopefully no setbacks.
Emotional scars will remain for both but the team work building up the support for each other will surpass their issues.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2021 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 33

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2021 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 33

Sound like they are all on the mend both physically and mentally. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 32

Love that they are working together to get their relationship back. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thank you for not dragging out their self-loathing; instead focusing on their desire to be together.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 32

They have a long way to go but glad they are getting the therapy and help they need.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 32

Lovely update!!! Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella can't honestly believe she can go back to being friends with Edward?
She's still young and her experiences aren't deep enough to guide her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella can't honestly believe she can go back to being friends with Edward?
She's still young and her experiences aren't deep enough to guide her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31

Bella can't honestly believe she can go back to being friends with Edward?
She's still young and her experiences aren't deep enough to guide her.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

I ugly cried through this whole chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Poor Bella her body just had enough now what will be next

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 31

Awww poor Bella sooo much her body was bound to crash

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 31

Glad they are talking things out and that Bella has some awesome friends supporting her and Katie there. Esme is such a great mom

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh these folks need a break

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 31

I love that way you write these two. They've been through so much and you've helped them along. ;) I'm betting that friendship will turn back quickly. Is it possible that Bella fainted because she's pregnant? Maybe?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope they are able to talk and heal fast.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope they are able to talk and heal fast.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope they are able to talk and heal fast.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 31

The thing is forgive and from there you just move forward. He needs therapy. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 31

The thing is forgive and from there you just move forward. He needs therapy. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 30

Happy he at least made it through the surgey and they have the opportunity to work through their issues.   I hope James gets what he desrves! 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

Can't wait to hear ....or read

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

2 or 3 chapters not enough, they have more to say I am sure

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

How long are they staying in Forks/Port Angeles?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

I hope Edward will get more help with his issues.  They are definitely understandable.  Also he and Bella need to go to some type of counseling too. Glad Edward made it through the wreck.  I hope Katie doesn't freak out from Edward being in a wreck like her parents.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30

I've heard many horror stories about logging trucks and coal trucks.  Poor E. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh my goodness this made me cry please let them fix this 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Glad he is on mend. He needs some Katie love

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awww Edward

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

This chapter had my tears pouring.   Ugh....    :)    Great chapter.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 30

James needs to do some serious time. Also, he needs to become Bad Bubba's newest girlfriend AND share him with his buddies. Just sayin'. Lauren needs to also do some time and be forced to work and reimburse Bella for the money she embezzled (stole). Maybe in our fictional world they'll both pay for their crimes. However, in the real world....it's a crapshoot.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update well done!! until you post again 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 29

You better post quickly or we will Beat you. LOL thanks for the update. On a cold cliff here....

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

wow please hurry back, was not expecting this

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Bella can;t catch a break.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh no!!!!!! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ack another cliffy!!!   Wow Lauren is  a piece of crap.  Poor Beverly

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh my, hurry the next chapter 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved the chapter. Ack for the cliffy end. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad Edward came out to WA. Bummed about the near death experience.   As eager as i am for E & B to make up, I can't wait to hear Emmett's news about James

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad Edward came out to WA. Bummed about the near death experience.   As eager as i am for E & B to make up, I can't wait to hear Emmett's news about James

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Wow, what an emotional chapter. Great job 

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