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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2020 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Maybe Laurent will figure out Tanya's modis operandi and dump her after the launch party.

Reviewer: Neera_dRD Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2020 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Nooooooo!!!!!

I NEED MORE!! PLEASE ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ 

Awesome story btw ๐Ÿ’‹

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2020 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Somehow I knew it was Tanya from Victoria's description 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2020 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Somehow I knew it was Tanya from Victoria's description 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2020 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh snap the ex what will happen 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2020 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love them making new memories together.  They got great friends in their lives too.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

GREAT STORY CANNOT WAIT  FOR MORE

Reviewer: Neera_dRD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 13

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

I'm Loving this!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2020 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

Bella and Edward both are helping that sweet little girl adjust to losing her parents.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2020 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

Nice chapter 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks muchly for the update. Great chapter. Nickname's are great. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

So precious!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2020 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love love love this chapter!!!!!! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2020 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..Well done..they are getting so clise..Bella told Katie Edward is her boyfriend..yay!!   until you post again

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2020 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it what a great day 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2020 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it what a great day 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2020 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it what a great day 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2020 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Super sweet!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

nice update

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2020 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

can;t wait for more

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

loving it and hope Carey recovered

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

loving it and hope Carey recovered

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

I loved that they FaceTimed Edward for Thanksgiving!  The time between Edward and Carlisle was so touching.  I'm glad to hear that Edward did have at least one foster parent who wanted him and showed him love.  Best first date ever!  And they kisses!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

cannot wait for more

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

always a great start

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

So kissing and peas on an ankle?   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love this fic! So incredibly precious. 

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2020 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

That talk with Carlisle was long overdue. Edward planned well for their date. I always enjoy going to the Chistmas-Market, sadly they are all called off this year in Germany - smart, but sad nonetheless.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2020 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 12

Leave it to Bella to get hurt. Lol. Love that they had such a carefree date. So glad Edward is opening up more to Bella.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

A shortened but fun date!
Katie will love being able to go shopping with Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the chapter .. I can't review on FF as it won't allow me to even view this story .. thank god for FB and links to STARS :)

 

Cannot wait for more X

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..well done..I'm sorry they didn't get to skate longer..sad face.  I love ice skating it's so much fun..They still had a great time, can't wait for tem to decorate Bella's house..until you post again

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am so glad they are moving forward. I think they are going to be SO happy!!

*huggles*

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

So thankful you post here too since fanfic is being a jerk. I love christkinkland and try to get their yearly mugs every year....love their pretzels and woodcarved pencils.  Im so glad Edward and Bella are gonna make it official at work and be serious...I think he does trust Bella he just doesn't know it yet.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

Aww for the Facetime with him and Katie.  Nice that he had a great visit with his family and first date with Bella was so cute.  

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 12

I loved it they are so sweet together 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

i Like the slow build as it is more realistic. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2020 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love it so very sweet 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it and the story so far!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love that Edward, Bella and little Katie cooked together.   They are all getting so close.   

Rose has made up for her Edward bashing, but as an HR person, she shouldn't have mentioned anything about Jared and his court case.   Rose needs to learn to not speak about people like that.   Bella wouldn't tell, but Rose spoke out of turn again.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hope Shelley is on the up and up with the apology.  Thinking Jared isn't going to go away quietly.  But is sounds like Riley needs to go to.  Toxic people can make the workplace hell.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Any chance Rosalie is pregnant?
Does Shelly finally turn around her attitude towards Bella?
I'm not sure MAC has seen the last of Jared.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Beautiful chapter and a heartfelt toast, a nice reminder for us now. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Beautiful chapter and a heartfelt toast, a nice reminder for us now. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2020 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love that Edward is opening up.  He needs Bella as much as she needs him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2020 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love that Edward spent time with Esme and felt comfortable to really talk to her.  Glad her asked Bella out.  

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow poor Edward but he has his family friends and Bella and Katie 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2020 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2020 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Bella and Edward are getting closer...   And Edward got closer to some of his friends.   :)    Thanksfor writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2020 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you so much for this 8ndight into Esme's and Edward's relationship! I enjoyed reading about their time together and how Edward opened up to her. I also enjoy the way Edward's and Bella's relationship is progressing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

Woo hoo for him asking for an official date.   You had me thinking Rose wasn't really sick until Em confirmed it.  I like that E was cool about Embry and his partner too.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

Could Rose be pregnant? Moody, emotional, and mean......unfortunate side affects of excess hormones. Hahahaha ๐Ÿ˜…

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

great update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved the chapter.  Glad E and B got some time together and kit Kat got Sammie time.  Good for her telling off Rose. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2020 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

Unfortunately friends find ways to push buttons while under the influence of alcohol. Time apart aids in forgiveness.
Will Edward be with his adoptive parents for Thanksgiving?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2020 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love that Bella took up for Edward against Rose. I am loving this story.  

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2020 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2020 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

Bella and Katie both are gettingh closer to Edward.   They are also both making more friends.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

Beautiful chapter.  I really enjoyed reading it and Bella standing up for Edward 

Reviewer: Delightfully Delicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

This chapter, it just gives me all the feels ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

Reviewer: Mzimb58 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2020 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love   this story so much can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2020 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

I forgot to review after the first time j read it but WOW. Love destroy so far. This was the best birthday present ๐Ÿ˜‚ I love the gradual steps Edward is taking in his character development. The surrounding support is awesome. Just interesting to see the conflict start to fade... But I'm assuming something new is on the horizon? ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Like Edward seems to be healing more

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Like Edward seems to be healing more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Glad he told her everything.   Sadly many kids in the system experience what he did.   Awws for guys inviting him out.  Like that he let the ladies help make the decision

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Edward.  What a horrible childhood.  The horrible truth is that it is real a d not fiction for some kids in the foster system. Gld he and Bella talked and were honest about their feelings for each other.  Glad Edward is going out with the guys. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

I did transcription for our local police department's child abuse unit and it's abominable what some people do to children.  It was so difficult, but I knew I was helping to provide the necessary documentation to prosecute those horrid people.  My heart breaks for Edward, but I'm so glad he's going to therapy and working to overcome his issues and that he's growing as a person.  I'm so looking forward to the building of the friendships and relationships in Edward's life.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2020 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

I like this warmer side of Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2020 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

I like this warmer side of Edward 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2020 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Will Bella move up on Alice's team?
Emmett is going to be excessively happy, hahahaha.
How's Katie going to take this new idea of Edward's friendship and him being around more? Will Bella's split attention become an issue for Katie?
Edward is expanding his personal space by getting closer to the guys in the company.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

Edward telling Bella about his childhood horrors is actually very intimate, and really shows how much Edward cares for and trusts Bella,

Thanks for writing and showing.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait to see what Edward is thinking.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Keep on writing

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love how their relationship is building.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awe he is so sweet with her and Katie too cute

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is really stepping in and being there for Bella and Kate. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

The company Halloween event was a great success.   Katie is going to have lots of ups and downs in the future as will Bella.     I'm glad Edward offered to be supportive for Bella.    Thanks for writing and showing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Will Edward reveal all?

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh man! Right in the feels. This is really good! I love the way they're interacting. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh man! Right in the feels. This is really good! I love the way they're interacting. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for update..Well done..it seems everyone had a great time at party๐Ÿ˜Ž...maybe Riley  didn't but everyone else  did..lol ๐Ÿ˜‚..I can't wait for them to get together....and Katie already likes Edward and Sam..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for update..Well done..it seems everyone had a great time at party๐Ÿ˜Ž...maybe Riley  didn't but everyone else  did..lol ๐Ÿ˜‚..I can't wait for them to get together....and Katie already likes Edward and Sam..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for update..Well done..it seems everyone had a great time at party๐Ÿ˜Ž...maybe Riley  didn't but everyone else  did..lol ๐Ÿ˜‚..I can't wait for them to get together....and Katie already likes Edward and Sam..until you post again 

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