Date: 27 Jul 2021 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 44
I was wondering how this would wrap up.
Perfectly I might add!
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic.
Thank you.
Date: 27 Jul 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 43
Has Charlie overlooked Emmett? Usually the property goes to the first born or is split equally amongst siblings.
No more Armoni for Edward or Bella.
Date: 27 Jul 2021 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
Two places gives them a bit of freedom.
Will Edward try to buy the place next to Emmett?
Date: 27 Jul 2021 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 41
Haha, so similar in tactics. Angela has definitely rubbed off.
Date: 27 Jul 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 40
Their lives are falling in to place more quickly than originally thought out.
Rose in LA, double dating will be a regular thing.
Date: 27 Jul 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
Even if Bella doesn't like surprises, she going to love this one. Hopefully the time spent with Vic will not end up in the tabloids.
Emmett needs to get over his aversion to the family land owner and visit Bella.
Date: 27 Jul 2021 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 38
Their time apart will bring out a few hurdles for them to leap over.
Any chance Riley and Victoria are an item on the DL?
Date: 26 Jul 2021 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 37
He handle the situation and the idea of a temporary assistant very well.
Maybe he and Seth will get along so well that Bella will b e able to t a key m I re time to write.
Date: 26 Jul 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 36
Smooze time with the auction of her book on the line.
Date: 26 Jul 2021 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love Bella's internal monolog describing Marcus from his familial ancestry to all the manipulate ways his arrogance brought this downfall in her eyes.
Yay, Jasper and Edward are now thick as thieves.
Jasper lost what he thought was a friend as well.
Date: 25 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Might be easier said than done.
Angela may have been right about getting the two Dad's involved.
Date: 25 Jul 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 33
Who knew Edward would be completely drawn in by a nerd barister? Well almost lawyer.
Date: 23 Jul 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love the t-shirt idea.
Emmett was spot on in his projected outcome of this luncheon.
Will we see a renewed connection between Emmett and the Admiral?
Date: 23 Jul 2021 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Marcus is a weasel. His pompous behavior needs to be cut down a few sizes.
Edward's sage advice to Bella was the best possible approach to her situation.
Date: 23 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jasper and Alice will be the only two on the wrong side of the pond.
Emmett's going to be very excited about his girls relocation.
Date: 22 Jul 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
Will Rosalie try to find a job in LA?
Emmett must be going crazy trying to figure out what to do to assist his fiancée.
Date: 22 Jul 2021 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 29
So the siblings found a way to take down Jacob. All hail the Hales. Lol
Now Marcus needs to go away.
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Maturity has entered Edward's life.
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
Confessions of a stalker, lol.
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
The tug-o-war on Bella's heart and mind has to be wearing her out.
There must be some way to torpedo Jacob's arrival in LA.
Too bad the Admiral has no idea how to relate to his own children.
Date: 21 Jul 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh boy, somehow Dad's going to figure out the mess Jacob has created and try to smooth it over. But to whose benefit?
Date: 21 Jul 2021 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
That does not bode well for the brother/sister relationship.
Date: 21 Jul 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Between Jacob and Marcus, I can't figure out which one is worse. They both seem to believe that Bella is a wayward youth who needs to be lead around by the nose.
Why are we being pushed to believe Edward is a teen in man's body. Lost and unable to understand or think for himself?
Date: 21 Jul 2021 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
One of her ex-boyfriends was bound to show up.
Date: 20 Jul 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
Angela reacted well to Edward's announcement.
Rose is right, stop over thinking.
Date: 19 Jul 2021 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Interlopers indeed.
Date: 19 Jul 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
All in, Edward seems to be there. Has Isabella arrived at the same place?
Date: 19 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Is the west coast ready for Alice?
Date: 18 Jul 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
Huh, Alice planned this all along. Did Bella know?
Date: 18 Jul 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good or bad timing, Emmett saved her either way.
Will Edward remember his latest awkward moment?
It will at least give th ed m both something to think about over the Christmas Holiday.
Date: 17 Jul 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Might have to set some new ground rules.
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
Two steps forward, five steps back, the three steps forward. So far they are standing in the same place as before....
Date: 17 Jul 2021 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is probably having a panic attack of epic proportion.
Will Alice calm him down?
Big girl panties Bella.
Talk it out, don't hold vack, explain everything to Edward.
Start over.
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'll bet he suggested Bella's edits to the casting script and they loved it!
Hm, delayed departure to England. Maybe his family can all fly to him and spend a few weeks together?
Date: 16 Jul 2021 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward's gotten to know Bella's surrounding family situation pretty well in short order.
Maybe Christmas plans will change if Edward leases Kate And Garrett's house?
Date: 16 Jul 2021 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella has her sixth sense on high alert where Alice is concerned. As she should be.
But,her sense of personal preservation is slowly diminishing around lonely frightened Edward.
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
They are entering a very unique arrangement where there friends randomly know each other and they have to quickly figure out where they fit.
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ah, There's the connection.
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hopefully Em will become good friends with Edward.
James is lingering in the wings..... Wonder when he tries to garner Bella's attention?
Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'd say that Angela has failed Edward in one area;he has no sense of place, no roots. In order to establish himself, he needs to feel like he belongs in LA.
Brining a personal assistant on board just shines a floodlight on the subject.
Living together is going to complicate things quickly.
Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Has she not taken notice, even once, during the time their paths crossed?
Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good luck girl.
Edward has religated himself to the ignore category. Hehehe
Date: 15 Jul 2021 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Their paths are already interwined, how soon will they finally be introduced?
Date: 15 Jul 2021 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great introduction of main characters.
Internal monolog is my favorite way to get the scoop on a characters vibe.
Date: 09 Jul 2021 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 44
Great story, how about a Sequel!,
Date: 06 Jul 2021 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 44
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the outtakes and your new story
Date: 05 Jul 2021 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank you for a very strong cappable Bella, and a mixed up Edward. It was great having her take the reigns for a change, not just muddling around.
Date: 05 Jul 2021 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 44
Perfect!!! I loved this history!!! See you the next xoxo
Date: 23 May 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 39
Looking forward to the surprise
Date: 10 May 2021 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 37
Happy for Bella. Glad they are supporting each other
Date: 25 Apr 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 35
Glad she told Marcys off. I knew it was his playlist
Date: 22 Apr 2021 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
Interested to see how you will write B taking down Marcus. Will the readers see it as it happens or just get the retelling to Edward & Jasper? I'm greedy so I'd like to see both but I'm sure it will be great however you present it
Date: 05 Apr 2021 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love the t shirt idea. Of course he has to meet Renee yet as Bella's boyfriend
Author's Response:
Because Renee wasn't Bella's mom at the time ;-) [aka, when he met her first]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it. Looking forward to meeting the admiral
Date: 28 Mar 2021 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loving this story
Date: 08 Mar 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad Jacob is getting what he deserves. I hope whoever the "insider" was doesn't come to grief for it
Date: 04 Mar 2021 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
I so glad he told her and her reaction
Date: 22 Feb 2021 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope she takes this well, otherwise it's going to be a very uncomfortable flight
Date: 15 Feb 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
I want to know more about that blind item Alice was talking about. I'm hoping the embattled rising star on the way out means trouble for Jacob
Date: 08 Feb 2021 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow. Cant wait to heat what Dad has to say. I'm going to assume he's team Jake
Date: 01 Feb 2021 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Can't wait to find I out what Rose did. I'm guessing she outed B & E to Jake
Date: 19 Jan 2021 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love this story and how quick you update. Chapter 21 had some coding hug half way through....
Author's Response:
Thank you for letting me know, let me check and fix that real quick!
Date: 19 Jan 2021 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to seeing Bella handle Marcus
Date: 15 Jan 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
hey! i asked if you were going to update on ffnet. the story hasn't been updated since august? but the chapters are ahead on there too. im looking at user LaMomo. Is there a different account I should be looking for?
Author's Response:
Hi!
I replied last week (look below). The account and penname are correct!
The story will be (is being) updated on ffnet too, but because the first 22 chapters were already on there, they won't show up as new updates until I catch up on uploading the edited chapters.
For example, I update on Mondays, which means I'm about to post an update here (chapter 21), and on ffnet. But only the updates to Starslibrary show up as "new chapters" so far. Once I finish uploading edits to the "old" chapter (now posted up to chapter 22), there will be weekly new chapters uploaded to ffnet too.
The story is identical - totally up to you where you choose to read.
Thank you for sticking with the story.
Date: 07 Jan 2021 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hey will the story on fanfiction.net be updated as well?
Author's Response:
HI! Yes - the story gets updated here at the same time I update on ffnet (on Mondays, as things stand). I'm actually about to upload updates both here and there!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
Really glad they talked. Did Alice know about Renee's gift?
Date: 22 Dec 2020 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
All this touchy feeling is going to lead to a kiss.
Date: 22 Dec 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Maybe edward will come to the rescue!
Date: 21 Dec 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Nice. I can't wait for Alice & Jasper to meet
Date: 20 Dec 2020 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Using her first name softened her.
Date: 20 Dec 2020 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
It’s good he already knows emmett.
Date: 20 Dec 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Monday can’t come fast enough for him.