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Reviewer: breaksea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2023 11:01 AM Title: Epilogue

What a horrible way to end it

Reviewer: breaksea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2023 11:01 AM Title: Epilogue

What a horrible way to end it

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2023 10:22 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh wow. What a way to end. Excited for the sequel when it comes. 

Reviewer: farsidelady Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2023 2:56 AM Title: Epilogue

Terrific 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2023 12:28 AM Title: Epilogue

good 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 6:52 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for the updates!! Well done!! I can't believe you ended it there.  Thank you for making a sequel.  I need to know what happens next.  Edward must save her before Demetri takes her anywhere.  They can not lose another child before it is born.  What will happen with Alice & Jasper, I can't believe she raped him to get pregnant.   Carlisle was a hot mess, I can't believe he did that to Edward to make him tuff.  I loved this story, I started it when you started & stay with you.  Great story!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 2:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Well crap, a lot of people are hurt or dead.   And Bella is kidnapped again?   Dam!    And she didn't get to talk to Edward about being pregnant?   I hope history doesn't repeat itself.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 5:44 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved this story and can't wait for the sequel.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh my!!!!! I thought you were really ending this.  I am sooooo happy that you are doing a sequel.  Please, please, please do not let Bella lose this baby. Can't wait to the sequel. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh my!!!!! I thought you were really ending this.  I am sooooo happy that you are doing a sequel.  Please, please, please do not let Bella lose this baby. Can't wait to the sequel. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 12:45 AM Title: Epilogue

OMG!!! Nooooooo! You can't leave it there. Bella does not need kidnapped again. You gotta please allow Edward to save her this time. So, grateful you're writing a sequel. Please post it soon. Thanks for writing this amazing story.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue

No...., I was not expecting a cliffhanger.  Please don't let Bella lose her baby like last time as this was sole destroying, until next time xxx

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue

No...., I was not expecting a cliffhanger.  Please don't let Bella lose her baby like last time as this was sole destroying, until next time xxx

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue

No...., I was not expecting a cliffhanger.  Please don't let Bella lose her baby like last time as this was sole destroying, until next time xxx

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 7:14 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this.  Looking forward to the sequel 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 7:12 PM Title: Epilogue

Holy Moly!  What a clifty to end with.

Great chapter, can't wait for the sequel! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 7:12 PM Title: Epilogue

Holy Moly!  What a clifty to end with.

Great chapter, can't wait for the sequel! :D

Reviewer: Ashley211230 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2023 3:42 AM Title: Before I Die Part 3

This is such a great story!! Please don't leave it like this. I think Marcus is Bella's dad. We have to know how Alice is dealt with and poor Jasper what's he going to do when he finds out!!

Please post soon!!!

~Ash

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 9:04 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

I hope you are feeling better soon.   

So much truth came, I wish Edward would just talk to her.  Not be such a hard ass all the time.

Alice has really screwed up.  

Evil Carlise has died.  GOOD!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 9:04 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

I hope you are feeling better soon.   

So much truth came, I wish Edward would just talk to her.  Not be such a hard ass all the time.

Alice has really screwed up.  

Evil Carlise has died.  GOOD!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2023 10:22 AM Title: Before I Die Part 3

Will there be a sequel? Man, there's so much to tie up. Alice is beyond evil.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2023 2:35 AM Title: Before I Die Part 3

Oh my gosh!!!!!!! So much in this chapter.  I do not feel sorry for Alice.  I do feel sorry Edward,  Bella,  Emmett and Jasper.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2023 12:48 AM Title: Before I Die Part 2

Ok, I'm going to have to go back and refresh my memory on who Demetri is. I some how missed this chapter.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2023 12:05 AM Title: Before I Die Part 3

Alice is as fucked up as Caius and the rest.   Ugh....    Poor Jasper and poor Peter....    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 7:35 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 7:35 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 7:06 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

good 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 6:30 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

:O :O 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 6:10 PM Title: Before I Die Part 3

Wow.  I suspected as much.  I can't wait to see how it ends.

Reviewer: Sullysnonna Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 6:45 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

Amazing story! Oh I'm so eager for the next chapter!!! Thank you.

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2023 4:54 AM Title: Before I Die Part 2

Please update as soon as possible! I love this story and I am hooked and invested to see what happens next. I suspected Demetri didn't die and I have to know how they work everything out, is Alice in on it? Caius and Bernard? 

Honestly this has been the best mafia story I have read in quite a while and I can't wait for more!

Well done so far by the way

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2023 6:58 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

OMG ! Can't wait for more !Love your story ! Just found  this great story  and am letting everyone I know to read it ! Hope is well !

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2023 12:17 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2023 9:17 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

good 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2023 8:48 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

Oh, wow. Things are getting deep.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2023 5:17 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

So Malice and Cauis are shady as F.   I do not trust Malice, at all!

I hope Bella doesn't regret letting her nastiness out of the pool house.

Loving this!

Thanks for the great update and I hope that your real life is going to be okay.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2023 4:35 PM Title: Before I Die Part 2

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 7:55 PM Title: Before I Die Part 1

Thank you for the update..well done. It's time for part 2 I need to know if Bella was correct in her feeling that it was a trap.  Did Alice  start the fight for a diversion? Will they get ther happily ever after?  Will Bella make the hill and pass a few more people?  Let's hope.  Im happy Esme spoke up, was it all a ruse?  until you post again.  Hoprfully soon so I can find out what happens next.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2023 4:25 AM Title: Before I Die Part 1

nice updates

Reviewer: Elf38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2023 12:15 PM Title: Before I Die Part 1

Love it hope u will add more too it or make part 2

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2023 9:20 AM Title: Before I Die Part 1

I'm aggravated with Bella. She keeps too much to herself. She doesn't tell Edward how's she's feeling about anything. Alice is gone bat-shit crazy. I think she's part of the "mole" situation. If Alice was on something when she fought Bellaa, why didn't anyone speak up and address it? Doesn't make sense Alice has issues with Bella. What's her deal? Loved Esme putting Alice in her place. But I can't help but think Alice was being a distraction for someone to sneak onto the property. Her behavior makes me question Jasper's loyalty now too. Allice's new code name should be Cybil. I'm anxious to find out if Bella's feeling of Edward walking into a trap actually happens. I'm ready to get this resolved and E/B work on their marriage.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2023 1:15 AM Title: Before I Die Part 1

OH what was up Alice's ass??  Cause I am glad that Rose got a hit or two in.  Bella kicked her ass!

Oh and Esme??!!! Wooohooo!  YOU go mama!

So much unsaid between the two of them.   I just wish they could actually have some time together with out all the other stuff.

Bella needs to listent to that little voice.  He probably is walking into a trap!

Thanks for the great update :D

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 7:22 PM Title: Before I Die Part 1

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 6:30 PM Title: Before I Die Part 1

Oh no. I hope her feelings are wrong. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 6:11 AM Title: Before I Die Part 1

good 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2023 6:38 AM Title: Should've Said No

Loved it 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2023 4:53 PM Title: Lockdown Part 2

This is a set up, ed...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2023 10:10 AM Title: Lockdown Part 2

Things aren't looking too good for them, is it?

 

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2023 5:53 AM Title: Lockdown Part 2

Bella and Edward are in a bad place, but I guess everyone is right now, huh?     Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Right! Like they need a break lol thank you for reading

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2023 4:42 AM Title: Lockdown Part 2

Two steps forward and 10 steps back... 

I am sooo glad that Rose tore Malice (not a typo!) a new ass.  Cause if anyone deserves it...

Looking forward to more :D



Author's Response:

Hahahaa you made me snort! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2023 11:32 PM Title: Lockdown Part 2

Edward is being jerk again. What has happened in Edward's past that he needs to talk about? What is the deal with Caius?  Edward needs to learn to talk with Bella.  He thought if he was with her he couldn't hurt her. He is wrong. Being away from her is hurting her too. 



Author's Response:

Amen! Eds being dumb rn! Thanks for reading 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2023 6:57 PM Title: Lockdown Part 2

good 



Author's Response:

Thanks 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:20 PM Title: Lockdown Part 2

Thank you for the update..well done..I hope Edward 7 Bella can work things out..until you post again



Author's Response:

Same I promise a HEA! Thanks for reading 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2023 2:44 PM Title: Lockdown Part 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2023 9:32 PM Title: Lockdown Part 1

Man these two need to work on communication.  Edward needs to not be an a-hole all the damn time.   

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2023 4:16 AM Title: Lockdown Part 1

I'm so glad Edward gave her something. Even a little piece of information is better then nothing. 

 

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2023 3:07 AM Title: Lockdown Part 1

I am so glad Edward finally told Bella something.  I'm sorry but he was being an ass in the beginning.  When is he going to figure out that they are both better as a team than individuals.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2023 2:29 AM Title: Lockdown Part 1

Well couldn't Edward just have told Bella that information at the start?   Ugh...   men.....      ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2023 1:41 AM Title: Lockdown Part 1

I'm so glad he decided to give her something!  He doesn't need to be a a hole all the time! 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2023 1:41 AM Title: Lockdown Part 1

I'm so glad he decided to give her something!  He doesn't need to be a a hole all the time! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:04 PM Title: Lockdown Part 1

good 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2023 6:09 PM Title: Lockdown Part 1

:) 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2022 9:55 PM Title: Back to Reality

INDEED

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2022 9:03 PM Title: Miami

SO GOOD

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2022 4:56 AM Title: Back to Reality

great updates

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2022 5:08 AM Title: Back to Reality

Mercy! Great chapter :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2022 5:08 AM Title: Back to Reality

Mercy! Great chapter :D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2022 4:57 AM Title: Back to Reality

Ok, can you help refresh my memory.  Who is Jane a d what has she done before? Glad Edward and Bella are back to fucking each others brains out.  Lol 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2022 7:43 AM Title: Back to Reality

Duh, duh, duh.... I love that E/B are getting back to normal, whatever that is for them. Jasper is a rockstar.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 8:18 PM Title: Back to Reality

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 5:48 PM Title: Back to Reality

good 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 3:08 PM Title: Back to Reality

Thank you for the updates!! well done.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I'm happy Edward &Bella are on the mend let's hope it stays that way.  Until you post again

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2022 6:20 PM Title: It Gets Better

What does she have to be pissed off about? She has people waiting on her hand and foot, unlimited access to money and/or anything her childish heart desires. Also a husband that would give her the moon, if he could yet she still wallows in self pity. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2022 9:12 AM Title: Acceptance

Why in the Hell is she blaming Edward? It was all on her before he even met her. As I recall it was her father that was crooked and promised her to a nut job. 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2022 6:54 AM Title: Miami

Absolutely loved it, so glad they are on the mend, now I'm eagerly awaiting for the next chapter x

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2022 6:54 AM Title: Miami

Absolutely loved it, so glad they are on the mend, now I'm eagerly awaiting for the next chapter x

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2022 12:00 AM Title: Miami

I am so glad that they have worked things out. 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 10:02 PM Title: Miami

About time they talked and fucked again.  Great chapter!! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 4:31 PM Title: Miami

good 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 3:50 PM Title: Miami

Thank you for the update..well done..I hope things get back to normal soon.  until you post again

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 3:37 PM Title: Miami

Thank you so much for Your update and this wonderful chapter! I am so glad that Bella and Edward start reconnecting and getting stronger together. You write about their success and the obstacles on the way in such a captivating manner - I loved it! Thank you!

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 12:45 PM Title: Miami

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 12:02 PM Title: Miami

Welp, they talked. That's what they've been needing to do for a long time. They needed to work on their communication skills. Kiinda sucks once they get on the same page Carlisle takes a turn for the worse. Thanks for the update.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 6:37 AM Title: Miami

Glad they're getting back to one another by talking and being intimate.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2022 7:24 PM Title: Chicago

Thank you for the update..well done.  I hope they enjoy their honeymoon.,until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2022 7:24 PM Title: Chicago

Thank you for the update..well done.  I hope they enjoy their honeymoon.,until you post again

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 2:13 AM Title: Chicago

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2022 9:17 AM Title: Chicago

I think Irina was about to let the cat out of the bag, so-to-speak. Damn, that labor and delivery scene was intense. I hope it helps Bella to overcome her loss and try again. What an honor Sean and Bree bestowed on Edward and Bella; godparents. I'm looking forward to Edward and Bella getting away and reconnecting on their late honeymoon.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 9:35 PM Title: Chicago

I really enjoyed this chapter. Alice sucks lol and I hope we find out what Irina was trying to tell Bella soon. I'm glad Bella was with Bree and that everything ultimately went okay. Excited for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 7:48 PM Title: Chicago

Oh my!!!! A lot in this chapter. Rose and Emmett getting engaged.  The baby shower. Alice.  Carmen and Irina.  Something is up with that. Charlie...what is his deal? Is he behind all the attacks.  Bree going into labor.  Bella being with her.  Edward and Bella being Godparents.  Now they are going on their honeymoon.  I hope things are better with you. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 7:21 PM Title: Chicago

:) 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 4:27 PM Title: Chicago

Tanner and Riley... I love it :D  I am still preturbed with Edward.   After everything they have been through, hell and back literly.  And he is so damn standoffish.

Thank for the great update.  

I hope life settles down for you.  Things get better

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 4:13 PM Title: Chicago

good 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 12:45 PM Title: Chicago

Seems like the Denali's are up to something.   

Glad E & B are getting away

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2022 4:14 AM Title: New& Improved

Edward and Bella need to talk things out more than anything else at the moment.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2022 5:15 AM Title: New& Improved

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:14 PM Title: New& Improved

Thank you for the update..well done..I hope they can re connect.  I want Edward to find out who is stealing from him..until you post again

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2022 12:22 AM Title: New& Improved

he needs to tell her why he's so scared and that he's not ready. i hope things get worked out in the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2022 7:42 PM Title: New& Improved

Edward is definitely being an asshole. They BOTH need to talk to each other. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2022 4:08 PM Title: New& Improved

good

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