Date: 23 Jan 2022 12:36 AM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
Bella sure cries a lot. She needs to grow a backbone and start putting people, like Tanya, in her place. She is the Queen, after all. These two need to work on their communication. They fight way too much. Bella left Jacob because of his controlling ways, but Edward is controlling too and he's putting his hands on her. Wasn't that way she was afraid of Jacob? Edward may not be as bad, but it's still abuse, right? Gotta love a spitfire Alice.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 9:41 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 1
Yeah, I think I may need a drink too with all the tension in the VIP room at the moment. Adding Edward to the mix is only going to multiple it.
Bella's mentioned a few times that Mike watches and it makes her uncomfortable. I'm wondeiing if he's just a creep or is he working for someone to keep taps on Edward's household and now Bella since they married.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 7:01 PM Title: Accusations
Alec has some balls hiding in there somewhere, didn't he? Good idea keeping him alive to get info on Black's place.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 10:30 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Another great chapter.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 9:18 AM Title: To Russia
What a way to end a Edward's night. Why the hell do the Feds have Bella for?
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 8:06 AM Title: Changes
Seems E & B will make some progress then it'll go to hell. Maybe they're finally on the same wavelength. I kinda thought R/E would split up, but I'm surprised Em still doesn't have a tail on her. Loved Bella putting Mrs Cope in her place.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 6:01 AM Title: Official Part 2
I like how you glossed over the wedding. Reading long, drawn out ceremonies can get a little boring, so I don't mind that action at all. However, Demetri, has some balls to treat Bella and Jessica the way he did at the Cullen's reception. I'm curious how Marcus knows Renee. Is it possible that Marcus is Bella's birth father? Didn't expect to read Aro was dead, but I'm gonna guess Demetri did it to take the reigns of the Volturi Family.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jan 2022 4:44 AM Title: Official Part 1
Reading on... BTW, I'm loving this story.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 8:42 PM Title: It really hits you
You have my adrenaline running. I think it's Demetri.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2022 8:44 AM Title: Should've Said No
A reader rec'd this story in the MafiaWard Twilight Fanfiction group on FB. I'm happy to say this first chapter has me hooked. Looking forward to reading on and catching up as time permits.
Sherry
Date: 13 Jan 2022 1:40 AM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2022 11:15 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
Edward is going to make them suffer for taking Bella, hope they make it hurt long before he kills them.
Author's Response:
Right!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2022 11:13 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 11 Jan 2022 9:59 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
Oh wow... this is great.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 11 Jan 2022 8:53 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
Oh my!!!!!! Can't wait for Edward and his men to show up and take put Jacob. What was Charlie talking about? Is Bella not his daughter????
Author's Response:
Nope. ;)
Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:45 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
I wonder who Charlie thinks her father is
Author's Response:
Same!
Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:45 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
I wonder who Charlie thinks her father is
Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:45 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
I wonder who Charlie thinks her father is
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:42 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
Thhank you for the update..well done.. Edward is on his way. Jocob & Charlie watch out. Quil good looking out. Hopefully Edward wil get ther before this fake cermony..until you post again
Author's Response:
Next chapter will be here soon!
Date: 05 Jan 2022 5:12 AM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
What is Code Red????? Black just signed his death warrant.
Author's Response:
He did! Ya don't mess with the boss wife!
Date: 05 Jan 2022 5:12 AM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
What is Code Red????? Black just signed his death warrant.
Date: 05 Jan 2022 4:41 AM Title: Merry and Bright Part 2
It seems like Alice is truly sorry.
Date: 05 Jan 2022 4:36 AM Title: Merry and Bright Part 1
Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2022 8:31 PM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
aw thank you for the update..I can't beleive jake got Bella & Zarfina is dead. WTF... Edward needs to get to Beel afast. call Seth to see if knows where they hang out. Bella should not be in this position. edward get to her now. well done...until you post again
Author's Response:
Yeah I didn't like killing her off but would she be a good solider if I let her survive?
Date: 03 Jan 2022 10:02 AM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
Terrific chapter! Poor Bella! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 03 Jan 2022 9:41 AM Title: Merry and Bright Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 03 Jan 2022 9:23 AM Title: Merry and Bright Part 1
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2022 12:32 AM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
Poor Bella and Zafrina
Author's Response:
Rip zaf
Date: 01 Jan 2022 11:56 AM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
Omg!!!! U ended it here!!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry:)
Date: 31 Dec 2021 11:40 PM Title: A Bloody New Year's Part 1
Well we knew it was coming.. Now the war begins. I wonder if Tanya had a hand in Bella's kidnapping?
Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Hmmm
Date: 31 Dec 2021 8:53 AM Title: O Christmas Tree
Loved it!
Date: 31 Dec 2021 8:42 AM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Loved it!
Date: 31 Dec 2021 8:13 AM Title: Wait.. What?
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2021 12:11 AM Title: Merry and Bright Part 2
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2021 10:26 PM Title: Merry and Bright Part 2
:)
Date: 21 Dec 2021 3:07 PM Title: Merry and Bright Part 2
Glad Alice is trying to make a mends.
Date: 14 Nov 2021 5:50 AM Title: Merry and Bright Part 1
Glad Mrs cope has come around. While I don't like Carlisle, I do feel sorry for him and Esme too. Cancer sucks.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Nov 2021 5:36 AM Title: O Christmas Tree
Glad she has James to talk too. Nice having him as the nice guy. Go Jessica. She's doing really well.
Author's Response:
Yes! You get it! I get so many saying there afraid of James turning it's not happening!
Date: 14 Nov 2021 5:27 AM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Oh wow Alice has really messed up this time. Jeez. Em is such a trip
Author's Response:
Em's definitely got some issues but he's hilarious
Date: 14 Nov 2021 3:30 AM Title: Wait.. What?
Oooh wonder who in the clinic f'd up the test. Had to be deliberate. Don't know if I'd trust Carlisle either. Alice needs to grow up.
Date: 14 Nov 2021 3:22 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Alice Def needs counseling or something us detox. Ooh the Bella thing had me scared.
Date: 08 Nov 2021 3:24 PM Title: O Christmas Tree
I so how missed this chapter. Edward is such a softie with Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks for you review!
Date: 07 Nov 2021 11:50 PM Title: Merry and Bright Part 1
Loved it can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2021 11:46 PM Title: Merry and Bright Part 1
:)
Date: 06 Nov 2021 12:09 AM Title: O Christmas Tree
Oh wow... started this and zoom its seems I am caught up! LOL...
So looking forward to more . I am hoping James is a sweet as he seems to be. I am leary of him.
Author's Response:
James Is definitely good! Thanks for your review!
Author's Response:
James Is definitely good! Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2021 1:19 AM Title: O Christmas Tree
Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2021 6:29 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Love your story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2021 6:29 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Love your story. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2021 6:29 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Love your story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 18 Oct 2021 2:03 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Oh wow. DRAMA!!!!!!! I feel sorry for Alice. Not being able to get pregnant is hard on a marriage. But when you go behind your husband's back and do something like that it makes it even worse.
Author's Response:
Right? Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Oct 2021 10:02 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 9:51 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
It turns out Alice has waaaaaay more problems than not being pregnant. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
a bit.. but thats what being spoiled gets you..
Date: 06 Oct 2021 12:25 AM Title: Wait.. What?
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2021 9:22 PM Title: Wait.. What?
Loving this story. Glad they changed doctors as I wouldn't trust them either, but sad that they ended up at the same one Alice uses and now Alice is mad that Bella's pregnant.
Author's Response:
I know right?! Thank you for your review
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2021 11:23 PM Title: Wait.. What?
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2021 9:16 AM Title: Wait.. What?
Oh wow a baby now what will come out of Alice's mouth
Author's Response:
Right??
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:40 AM Title: Wait.. What?
Oh no. I'm scared of what Alice will do now
Author's Response:
Me too! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2021 6:33 PM Title: Wait.. What?
This just keeps you hooked I love this.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad your enjoying it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 11:18 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 9:59 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 9:22 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 1
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 6:01 PM Title: Accusations
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 4:14 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 4:14 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 4:14 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2021 4:14 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2021 3:55 AM Title: Official Part 2
Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2021 2:12 AM Title: Official Part 1
Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2021 1:34 AM Title: Scars
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 16 Sep 2021 12:55 AM Title: It really hits you
Loved it!
Date: 15 Sep 2021 7:11 PM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
Loved it!
Date: 15 Sep 2021 4:41 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Loved it!
Date: 15 Sep 2021 4:24 PM Title: The Day After
Loved it!
Date: 15 Sep 2021 4:20 AM Title: Midnight Sun
Loved it
Date: 15 Sep 2021 3:58 AM Title: Should've Said No
Loved it!
Date: 14 Sep 2021 9:11 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Can't wait for the next one ... as I've been waiting 🙃🤩
Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:19 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Edward's family is crazy. Lol. What is wrong with Bella? Is it her appendix?
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2021 12:51 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Thank you for the update..Well done..I wonder what's wrong with Bella? I hope she is going to be ok..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2021 12:51 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Thank you for the update..Well done..I wonder what's wrong with Bella? I hope she is going to be ok..until you post again
Date: 12 Sep 2021 5:51 PM Title: Thanksgiving
omg....cliffie. Please write soon, hopefully nothing bad !!
Date: 12 Sep 2021 11:37 AM Title: Thanksgiving
This chapter needs a warning... Caution: Don not read in an empty stomach lol
Author's Response:
Hahaha. Yes how I'm ready for Thanksgiving!
Date: 12 Sep 2021 3:36 AM Title: Should've Said No
Love the story so far!! Hoping you will update soon!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2021 6:30 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
Loving this story
Author's Response:
I'm so glad thank you for reading!
Date: 31 Jul 2021 5:21 AM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
glad they finally talked things out.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 24 Jul 2021 6:30 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you for the review!
Date: 24 Jul 2021 8:16 AM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
I love love this story!! Please keep going great writing!
Author's Response: awwhh thanks so much!
Date: 23 Jul 2021 8:45 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
The really need to work on their communicating skills.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2021 5:31 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 2
Loving this story so much, glad they talked.
Date: 18 Jul 2021 7:01 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 1
What is Edward's problem? I think he is sexual frustrated. Lol.
Date: 15 Jul 2021 12:03 AM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 1
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response: next chapter has been sent to beta! so soon!! thank you!!
Date: 13 Jul 2021 10:20 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
love it