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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 11:50 PM Title: Outtake 5

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:09 PM Title: Outtake 5

well done..great story!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 2:56 PM Title: Outtake 5

I def hate Siobhan more now.  The fact that she faced no justice, no one held her accountable for what she did, and she's probably doing it to more people.....that is just scary.

 

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 2:19 PM Title: Outtake 4

Siobhan is a crappy mistress not even knowing his limits and obvious not being ok.  She still played while he was drunk and not in control  Really want her to go down.

 

Liked seeing Jasper and his first meeting.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 1:45 PM Title: Outtake 3

ok that meeting had to happen, but I def do not like her touching him at all nor him calling her mistress.  Glad Bella and Jasper were there for him.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 1:23 PM Title: Outtake 2

wow. Craziness for the wedding.  Poor Ruby.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 4:31 AM Title: Outtake 1

Rofl for drunk Edward and the sock stealing dog

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 4:18 AM Title: Epilogue

Sucks that Siobhan still affects him.  Jake is too funny. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 58

Lol Em is such a big kid.  Hope Esme comes around. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

Oooh you Def had my head spinning with this one.  Don't know if I agree with telling his family without her approval though

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2021 6:28 PM Title: Outtake 5

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 10:48 AM Title: Outtake 4

:) 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2021 11:05 PM Title: Outtake 4

I want to kick her ass!! Omg Poor Edward. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2021 8:58 PM Title: Outtake 3

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2021 6:10 PM Title: Outtake 3

Wow thank you for the outtake..well done

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2021 5:13 PM Title: Outtake 2

Bless it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 3:15 PM Title: Outtake 2

So sad.... 

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 4:38 PM Title: Outtake 2

:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2021 3:34 AM Title: Outtake 1

Loved it!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 10:51 PM Title: Outtake 1

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 8:59 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the outtakes 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 3:48 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for your story I really enjoy it.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2021 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thank you for the update..well done.  They seem happy about the news.  they will adjust.  until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2021 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 58

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2021 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 57

:) 

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2021 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 56

Yes, those Love Eggs are pure evil, evil.
Road trip, time for even more fun games.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2021 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 56

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2021 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 56

Glad she was able to make it till midnight.  LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2021 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 55

So he can blurt out their secret without discussing it, but she can't stop him ? Don't agree with that but it is what it is. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 55

Cruel Edward 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 54

Well Jake's intention was good at least.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 53

Love her putting Jake in his place. Yumminess 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 51

Well he Def surprised me.  Lol for crack whores, titties, and doodie

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 50

Oooh dayum. Hawt hawt hawt

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 49

Lol for the stainless steel present.  20 is a lot. Wow

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 48

Esme really doesn't get it.  Sigh 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 47

Yes well Esme need to learn a lesson about how to treat people. Poor Tanya

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 46

Rofl for first taste of baby life. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 45

Rofl for sandy Edward. Hopefully she didn't go too crazy at the wedding when E wasn't nearby

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

Sounds like some wedding guests need to mind their own business. Yey for A&J being married

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 43

Glad B and R are getting along. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 54

Thank you for the updates..well done..Jake SMH..until you post again

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 42

Oooh hawt hawt hawt

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 41

Nice party. Glad Jake got her a nice gift.  Lol for Alice's gifts. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 40

glad the morning was salvaged. PTSD is a bitch.  Aww for Tanya and Felix. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 39

Nice talk w Felix.  Glad she got to know his parents a little better too

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 38

Glad he is trying to do something to include her other friends

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 37

Still pissed at James. But glad they talked. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 36

Glad she is calling him out on his screw up. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 35

Rose Def is sure something. Moody Edward needs a xanax

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 34

GB has a lot of healing still to do too. Hope she goes back and gets her ged at least. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 33

Glad they are talking. Hopefully Jacob remembers to stay in the friend zone and not cause trouble in that way. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 32

Glad B is letting go a bit. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

Sorry but James is still a disk. I might be a little more tolerant of Vic though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Glad E is taking time for himself. Ugh James.  No benefit. The way he left, she could have ended up in foster care or worse. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 29

Glad B has Jake and Garrett

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 28

E Def has some stuff to work on 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 27

Glad B went looking for him.  Ooh Dom Jasper is hawt. His dominance is prob why he needs though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

Lol for "mom and dad" waiting at his house because he didn't come home.  Lol. Glad he has Jasper to talk to. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 25

While counseling a friend normally wouldn't be advisable, with their lifestyle it makes sense. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

Yummy chapter. Glad they are still talking things over

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Think it's going to take some time for them to both to figure  out a balance

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Rose needs to pull the stick out of her arse.  Lol for falling in ocean. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loving Felix. Glad Tanya helped.  Rose is just a peach.  Lol for Carlisle's flirting

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad they are finally talking about things

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

They Def need to have some serious talks. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 18

Jeez they all have issues. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Rofl for drunk Emmett. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

Glad Alice came to help sort things out.  Felix is an interesting character. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad she got to help him at Jasper's. Lol for the secret present. Yum.  

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 54

Oh Bella, Oh Bella, when will you learn.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

Lol didn't see the Jasper and Bella thing coming. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

Lol for her showing up at his work.  Bet the guards are scared for their jobs.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad Alice was able to aleviate some of Bella,'s fears/questions/etc

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Lol for Felix and Tanya's looks.   Yummy evening. I need one of those

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

Glad she told him something but I bet there is more to her story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

Glad she told him something but I bet there is more to her story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

Hmm they both have to learn to give something. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

They both have stories they need to share. Glad He has Jasper to talk too

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow her brother was an arse.  Oh wow she knew Angie. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

Lol for over protective Jake and Em.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah for the bike story. I get why she's gun shy of riding again. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Family is often messing with boundaries.  Lol for Harley 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 54

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

Lol for his house invader.  Hmm wonder what the bike story is... Although I can imagine it. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad E has some good people in his corner. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 8:27 PM Title: Prologue

Oh wow. Poor Angie.  And E of course.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 53

Thank you for the updates..well done..I hope all is well and Bella doesn't have any marks on her.  Hopefully they didn't hear a thing..lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2021 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 53

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Date: 28 Apr 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 52

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 51

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Reviewer: InspireRae Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 50

Love long and intense sessions. Especially the ones in this chapter.
Not so much the ones that drag out.  Anticipation is a bitch.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 50

Thank you or the update..They definitely enjoy themselves with Cynthia going home to her parents.  lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 49

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 48

😀

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2021 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 48

 Thank you for the update..well done..Bella and Edward will spend so quailty time together..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2021 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 48

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2021 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 47

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