Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, I did cry. Masterfully done. You have a gift with words. I've added you to my favorite authors, I hope I'll see more gifts of words from you. Well done, well done indeed.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Esme is so underwritten and I think she's fascinating. I'm looking forward to reading this!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Esme is so underwritten and I think she's fascinating. I'm looking forward to reading this!
Author's Response:
Please let me know what you think after you read it. I think there are several sides of Esme that can be expanded upon.
Date: 01 Feb 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
awww thats such a sweet and sad story! I nearly cried, poor esme! Is this going to be one-shot? It would be interesting to see how Esme deals with becoming a vampire. anyway great job :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you and I am glad that you were able to feel her emotions. It really was a sad time in her life. And yes I am only planning a one shot for this one. I don't want to take away form this moment of her story.
Thank you for the lovely review