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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2021 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2021 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved the sexual house breaking competition.....     ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2021 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it. Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2021 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2021 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love how Edward and Bella are getting more time to themselves (than in S.M.'s version), even with listening ears nearby.

Jasper was almost pissy that Bella wanted and COULD talk to Jake without hurting him.   Hopefully he gets over that soon.

Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter.  :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

Nice

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

This was a great awakening, first hunt, and sexy time chapter.    I loved it and am jealous of fictional characters.    LOL      Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2021 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

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Date: 02 Mar 2021 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2021 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Vicky is dead and gone.    But she sure tortured Bella some before she died.

Good for Edward for changing her with no hesitation.  

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2021 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Nice transformation 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2021 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2021 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Charlie is slowly easing up with his thoughts about Edward, huh?    :)   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2021 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

This does seem bad.    Perhaps Edward will tell Charlie everything Mike has been saying/thinking about Bella.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thank you for update..until you post again..I sure  Mike has permanent  damage  lol🤣😂

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

I imagine Charlie's not going to be as bad as she thinks! Love the story!! Can't wait for the next update! Take care and stay safe, Ciao 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

Whoa!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2021 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2021 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is gonna have to push Edward even more now.   hehehe....   You can't give a girl the keys to the peen and then take them away.    gah.....

Alice can sure work Charlie.   But he is still furious at even the idea of Edward.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Glad annoying Jacob left Bella's house.....    

Edward is getting with the intimacy with Bella.    That's a good thing.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for the update.well done..until you post again

Reviewer: Lovergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

more please

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: papierne_ersatzwelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2021 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing start! I saw the story mentioned on A Different Forest and I am glad I did. I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2021 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Edward....Why did you leave the room?    Don't you know that Bella is gonna have huge abandonment issues because of your actions?    Grrr.....

I am relieved that Jacob left the room and house.    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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