Date: 10 Apr 2021 9:38 PM Title: Ch 5, The Calm & The Chaos!
Oh, I like this Abriel character. She is a whole lot like Bella and Charlotte. The three couples work well together right off the bat.
I love the translations placed next to the text too. It makes it so much easier to read without scrolling down and back up. Thanks for that.
I guess Alice knows her ass is grass now. But Edward is probably clueless, and Carlisle just assumes he will be OK. I bet Esme even wants him gone now. hehehe.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Mar 2021 1:01 AM Title: Ch 3, Crisis Averted, For Now
Dam! Edward and Alice are in the shitter. But Alice is already 'flushed' and she doesn't even realize it yet. That's really ironic with her being a seer and all. LOL
Bella's bad ass self is an amazing planner, and I bet she will be vicious with any revenge she deals out.
I'm relieved that Garrett is on scene now for Charlotte and the group.
There aren't too many unmated female vamps for me to picture with Jasper. Hmm.... Who did Alice keep Jasper from meeting? Someone from the Volturi? Maggie? Mary? One of the Amazon coven? I'm probably not even remembering all of the possibilities though.
I can see Emmett and Rose kicking the rest of the Cullens into line quickly. Edward and Alice will probably be dead soon knowing their total crapulence. LOL But Carlisle and Esme won't ever get to be leaders again if I'm guessing. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter Alexis.
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:27 AM Title: Ch 1, Who, What, When, Where, Why?
I love how Bella, in all her CIA spy wisdom, has the number of every Cullen, Whitlock and Jacob Black almost instantaneously. Plus she is really a bad ass too. ;)
I can't wait to read more of this story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
She more than a pretty face and they are aboout to find that out xx