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Date: 03 May 2021 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 15. Sons of Thunder

Aaaaahhhh! I'm dying over here haha

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Date: 02 May 2021 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 14. Kiss Me Goodbye

I have a funny feeling...we'll see if I'm right haha!



Author's Response:

Ooo, I am interested to know if your right, myself, lol. 

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Date: 02 May 2021 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13. River's Edge

Oh man. I hate knowing both sides and knowing that Jacob doesn't know that Raven knows hahaha



Author's Response:

I know, right? Thinks he knows everything 

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Date: 02 May 2021 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 11. Chances Are

Bahahahahaha, I freaking KNEW she'd imprint on River. I love it!!!



Author's Response:

Woop, woop 😂 she deserves it. 

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Date: 01 May 2021 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 10. When a Stranger Calls

Well, I didn't see that coming. Holy crow! And man, Raven is not just hurt. She's gonna be ticked off!

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Date: 01 May 2021 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 9. The Accidental Tourist

Oh no. I'm biting my freaking nails hahaha!



Author's Response:

Haha. That's what I like to hear. Thank you for saying!  Loved all your comments, btw. 

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Date: 01 May 2021 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 8. The Happening

I am literally on the edge of my seat. Gaaahhh!!!

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Date: 01 May 2021 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 7. Desperate Measures

Oh man, this just hit a whole new level of complicated. Nessie may not be his girlfriend so he is technically telling the truth, but she sure isn't going to see it that way...

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Date: 01 May 2021 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 6. Love Actually

Oh Jacob, making a decision about someone for their own good without talking to said someone is a huge mistake...

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Date: 01 May 2021 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 4. True Lies

Mike will know about the clandestine meeting. I'm sure of it. Yikes! As I said, I'm glad I don't have to wait for updates!

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Date: 01 May 2021 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 3. Something about Raven

Awww, I don't blame River. I don't like that he hasn't come back yet, but I get it. I have a suspicion as to why he hadn't come back, but we'll see!

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Date: 01 May 2021 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 3. Something about Raven

Awww, I don't blame River. I don't like that he hasn't come back yet, but I get it. I have a suspicion as to why he hadn't come back, but we'll see!

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Date: 01 May 2021 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2. Handsome Stranger

I'd like to punch Mike in the face. I'm not a violent person either. I like how bits of plot get revealed in each chapter. It's done naturally and not through exposition, that's what I really like. 

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Date: 01 May 2021 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1. Left Behind

I am so glad I gave this story a chance! The summary drew me in, and the first chapter made me glad I don't have to wait for updates. I only typically read B/E or B/J, but this one is a welcome exception!



Author's Response:

Hey. I am thrilled you gave it a chance, and left comments. I hope you enjoy where it takes you! 😁

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