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Date: 03 Dec 2023 1:06 PM Title: Epilogue

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 03 Dec 2023 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 02 Dec 2023 6:26 PM Title: Prologue

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:14 AM Title: Epilogue

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 14 Dec 2022 5:34 PM Title: Prologue

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Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2022 1:48 PM Title: Epilogue

I was not expecting Renee and charlie...they never loved their daughter. I can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 6:51 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow, what a roller coaster ride of emotions!  I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2021 5:02 PM Title: Epilogue

Love your story.  Can't wait for more crime stories.



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Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue

Nice ending. Looking forward to the next installment 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 1:40 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this.  Looking forward to the next instalment 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Deb!

Reviewer: britter18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 5:09 PM Title: Epilogue

I can't believe it's over! I have read both stories and they were amazing! 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 3:41 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved reading this story.  Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.  So glad Bella and Edward are still together better than ever.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 33

Definitely don't get on Bella's bad side. 



Author's Response:

Lol, definitely not!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2021 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for explaining how things came about. I loved Jasper and Emmett's reactions. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2021 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)  I'm happy to hear that there is to be a third instalment 



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Thank you very much!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2021 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my!!!!!! Renee!!!!!!!! Wow. She was crazy, going to kill her own grandson.  How did she live all those years helping take care of the children she claimed to hate?



Author's Response:

Playing the long game, same as Esme in Fallen Angel.

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2021 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 27

YAY!!!! She's alive. You had me scared. It could be Quinn. A pissed off kid could do pretty much anything



Author's Response:

We just don't know!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2021 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great story can't wait for more



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Thanks so much!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 27

I trusted you and was hoping it was just a trick. Is Quinn the mole or has he been taken hostage?  Can't wait for answers.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for that!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2021 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

Ugh where is the hidden sniper deadly and not dead



Author's Response:

Deadly for sure

Reviewer: Ksamuraix Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2021 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Is there really a support group for this story? wow!! I mean you did say in the beginning that nothing is as it seems...so how is it that people are freaking out:( this reminds me of games of thrones freakout support group:)



Author's Response:

There is, it's the Angst Freak Out Room. Not just because of the stress, but because they love to talk about who the mole is and what they think truly happened to Bella, whether she's dead or alive... 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

OK I wannt to know, is Bella  still alive.?



Author's Response:

That's what everyone wants to know!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2021 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

Ok, I'm kind of confused.  Who is Zion....a terrorists group, right??? Who is in charge of Zion???? Is Charlie working for Zion??? 



Author's Response:

They are a terrorist group with roots in the mafia, yes. Holden explains a bunch of it in chapter 9. Ivan is the man in charge, but they've just learned Charlie was involved.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 25

:) 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm sick



Author's Response:

Then I don't think you'll like the next chapter either.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2021 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

I need LOTS of WINE and a few cookies.  You are stressing me out. WHY is Quinn not attacking Edward??? What has happened to Bella???? Are they just going to leave her body there?????? Is she really dead????? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!!! 😘😘😘



Author's Response:

Quinn might need time to process what happened, but he definitely goes after Edward a few times.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hope Edward hasn't killed her 



Author's Response:

We'll have to see!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2021 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

Charlie?  Please fix this. She can't be dead



Author's Response:

It could be!

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Unbrlievable..... Don't know if I will continue this story. This is a HARD LIMIT



Author's Response:

It's a matter of trust. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2021 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

What is going on?????????? This is a little different than the beginning of the story.  There is more here than in the 1st chapter.  I went back and read it last week. What the hell has Edward done? How and why did he bring Quinn to watch his dad shot and kill his mother.  That is just wrong.  



Author's Response:

It's a little different because I expanded on it, but the dialogue was copied. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

So stubborn.  So hard headed. 



Author's Response:

Maybe!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2021 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm beginning to not like this story. I read to decompress. This is pissing me off. And if Edward actually shoots Bella in the chest I might be done with this. I love u as an author .  But the anxiety I'm feeling from the anger at putting a wedge between those 2 is getting to be too much.



Author's Response:

I won't be upset if you need to take a break. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2021 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

My heart breaks for both of them.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2021 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.



Author's Response:

Well, he's never going to spank her for actual punishment ...

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