Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:14 AM Title: Epilogue
Great epilogue!
Date: 14 Dec 2022 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!
Date: 27 Sep 2022 1:48 PM Title: Epilogue
I was not expecting Renee and charlie...they never loved their daughter. I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: 05 Dec 2021 6:51 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow, what a roller coaster ride of emotions! I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 18 Nov 2021 5:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Love your story. Can't wait for more crime stories.
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Thank you very much!
Date: 17 Nov 2021 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue
Nice ending. Looking forward to the next installment
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Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2021 1:40 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this. Looking forward to the next instalment
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Thank you, Deb!
Date: 16 Nov 2021 5:09 PM Title: Epilogue
I can't believe it's over! I have read both stories and they were amazing!
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Thanks very much!
Date: 16 Nov 2021 3:41 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. So glad Bella and Edward are still together better than ever.
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Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
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Date: 09 Nov 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 33
Definitely don't get on Bella's bad side.
Author's Response:
Lol, definitely not!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 29
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Thanks!
Date: 02 Nov 2021 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for explaining how things came about. I loved Jasper and Emmett's reactions.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2021 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
:) I'm happy to hear that there is to be a third instalment
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 26 Oct 2021 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my!!!!!! Renee!!!!!!!! Wow. She was crazy, going to kill her own grandson. How did she live all those years helping take care of the children she claimed to hate?
Author's Response:
Playing the long game, same as Esme in Fallen Angel.
Date: 22 Oct 2021 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
YAY!!!! She's alive. You had me scared. It could be Quinn. A pissed off kid could do pretty much anything
Author's Response:
We just don't know!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
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Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2021 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great story can't wait for more
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Thanks so much!
Date: 19 Oct 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
I trusted you and was hoping it was just a trick. Is Quinn the mole or has he been taken hostage? Can't wait for answers.
Author's Response:
Thank you for that!
Date: 14 Oct 2021 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ugh where is the hidden sniper deadly and not dead
Author's Response:
Deadly for sure
Date: 13 Oct 2021 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is there really a support group for this story? wow!! I mean you did say in the beginning that nothing is as it seems...so how is it that people are freaking out:( this reminds me of games of thrones freakout support group:)
Author's Response:
There is, it's the Angst Freak Out Room. Not just because of the stress, but because they love to talk about who the mole is and what they think truly happened to Bella, whether she's dead or alive...
Date: 13 Oct 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
OK I wannt to know, is Bella still alive.?
Author's Response:
That's what everyone wants to know!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 12 Oct 2021 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok, I'm kind of confused. Who is Zion....a terrorists group, right??? Who is in charge of Zion???? Is Charlie working for Zion???
Author's Response:
They are a terrorist group with roots in the mafia, yes. Holden explains a bunch of it in chapter 9. Ivan is the man in charge, but they've just learned Charlie was involved.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
:)
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Thank you!
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sick
Author's Response:
Then I don't think you'll like the next chapter either.
Date: 09 Oct 2021 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
I need LOTS of WINE and a few cookies. You are stressing me out. WHY is Quinn not attacking Edward??? What has happened to Bella???? Are they just going to leave her body there?????? Is she really dead????? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!!! 😘😘😘
Author's Response:
Quinn might need time to process what happened, but he definitely goes after Edward a few times.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Edward hasn't killed her
Author's Response:
We'll have to see!
Date: 06 Oct 2021 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie? Please fix this. She can't be dead
Author's Response:
It could be!
Date: 05 Oct 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
Unbrlievable..... Don't know if I will continue this story. This is a HARD LIMIT
Author's Response:
It's a matter of trust.
Date: 05 Oct 2021 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
What is going on?????????? This is a little different than the beginning of the story. There is more here than in the 1st chapter. I went back and read it last week. What the hell has Edward done? How and why did he bring Quinn to watch his dad shot and kill his mother. That is just wrong.
Author's Response:
It's a little different because I expanded on it, but the dialogue was copied.
Date: 30 Sep 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
So stubborn. So hard headed.
Author's Response:
Maybe!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
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Thanks!
Date: 28 Sep 2021 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm beginning to not like this story. I read to decompress. This is pissing me off. And if Edward actually shoots Bella in the chest I might be done with this. I love u as an author . But the anxiety I'm feeling from the anger at putting a wedge between those 2 is getting to be too much.
Author's Response:
I won't be upset if you need to take a break.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
My heart breaks for both of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 22 Sep 2021 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.
Author's Response:
Well, he's never going to spank her for actual punishment ...
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
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Thanks!
Date: 07 Sep 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
They need to figure out who the mole is and take care of him or her.
Author's Response:
Yes, they do!
Date: 02 Sep 2021 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
I trust you. But my heart is hurting for both Edward and Bella.
Author's Response:
I don't blame you.
Date: 02 Sep 2021 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
They should have locked Gianna up and kept her as a prisoner. She's probably in with Zion anyway. She told the info she knew wasn't any good. I wish Bella had beat her ass and then gave Edward a good slap or two. He's worried about her so he's trying to drive her away I believe. He really had no business letting that bitch put her hands on him. He's destroying his marriage and he doesn't seem to really care. I hope how soon they get to destroy Zion and all of the people who are with them.
Author's Response:
Yes, they probably should have locked her up.
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Come on. Where is this headed
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Come on. Where is this headed
Author's Response:
I can't tell you that without spoiling it.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2021 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 26 Aug 2021 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm still mad at him. Good chapter
Author's Response:
That's okay! Thanks for reading.
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was soooo intense!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 20 Aug 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Edward met with Seamus. What does Gianna think she can do to help?
Author's Response:
That's an interesting guess!
Date: 19 Aug 2021 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
I just read all this in 2 days. I loved the first one! I'm betting jasper although I'm not sure. Maybe em? It's a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Aug 2021 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
What is Bella's problem. I understand there is alot at stake and under pressure. But everyone is.
Author's Response:
They all are, for sure.
Date: 18 Aug 2021 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Damn!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
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Thanks!
Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
My guess he was speaking with Jasper?
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon!
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2021 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
:)
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:)
Date: 03 Aug 2021 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward and Bella are headed for troubled waters in their relationship.
Author's Response:
Sadly
Date: 29 Jul 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2021 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 27 Jul 2021 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Do they have a mole among them??????
Author's Response:
It sure seems like it!
Date: 20 Jul 2021 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
If Quinn dies Bella will kill every person that has anything to do with Zion.
Author's Response:
That's exactly what would happen.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
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Thanks!
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
They both are hard headed.
Author's Response:
I would say that's true!
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
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Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2021 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
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Thanks!
Date: 06 Jul 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
She should have known that Edward would not allow her to steal the bomb back.
Author's Response:
I think she did, but she wants to do it anyway.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2021 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
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Thanks!
Date: 29 Jun 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Lol. Love Edward and Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you!