Date: 12 Sep 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just knew that Billy or Jacob had done something evil to poor Sue, just for helping Bella. Ugh....
Poor Bella is getting swamped with evil. Finally owning her own home and reuniting with Edward will do her good.
Hopefully Alice's trip away from work will help her attitude and future decision making skills.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 06 Sep 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes he is dispicable but she has Rose and Emmett, Jasper and now Edward. I was once in a abusive relationship he did not abuse my daughter nor did he want her but for 5 years my life was pretty bad.
This is a very good story, I am not sure how you juggle ao many stories at the same time but you are amazing.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Caius seems like a good fit as Bella's pseudo father figure. He and Edward will be very active in Seth's future. Equally as much as Jasper and Emmett as male role models.
Bella's journey will be a rough one until Jacob is removed from her life.
Date: 30 Aug 2021 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Tribal law is limited to the lands where the tribe members reside. They have no jurisdiction outside of this area. In the case of your imaginary world, Bella has never been a member of the tribe. Therefore Jacobs claim of her having no legal right to her son is false.
It would also be in Bella's favor to find Jacob's sisters so their stories can be told. Nothing can be done from a legal perspective but the president set would paint William Black and the other males of the tribe in a very negative light.
Maybe Alice can redeem herself by turning over all the false claims sent to her email by Jacob.
Bella's in for a big fight.
Wondering how much Seth will be involved in protecting his mother and damaging his father's plans?
Date: 29 Aug 2021 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob needs to have someone beat him half to death. I hope the lawyer runs him into the ground. He is only wanting to profit from Bella after all of the horrible things he did to her. I hope he rots in hell and Bill and Paul with him.
Date: 28 Aug 2021 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
What the ????? I knew Jacob would come after her when he found out about the movie. If just for the money. He doesn't want Seth. All he wants is money. I hope someone on this story gets to knock the hell out of Jacob. I really hope Bella gets to inflict some pain on Jacob. Maybe a couple hits or kicks to his balls to do enough damage where he can't reproduce any more.
Date: 22 Aug 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella needs to begin her therapy ASAP so she fully allow herself to go forward with her relationship with Edward. She'll always hold onto her fears and feelings of worthlessness and self doubt untill she seeks professional aide. I've never been to Disneyland or Disneyworld, can I tag along on their next visit?..lol
Date: 17 Aug 2021 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Seems like eveyone is on the same page about the movie and taking care of Paul. Seth's protectiveness of his mom is endearing. Edward and Seth, I think will have a special bond. I don't see Alice being redeemable; no matter the effort she puts into trying to redeem herself.
Date: 15 Aug 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
Alice is redeemable.
Who know how long it will take for Jasper to forgive her.
It seems Bella has chosen that path already, Edward is still on the fence but Jasper is no where close to that decision.
Seth and Bella definitely need the outlet of therapy.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..Well done..Bella finally got a chance to tell Edward her story..sad as it is Bella made it out to the other side..Bella is definitely strong she endured more than she should have. Charlie is rolling around in his grave. I hope the tribe gets what they deserve for treating their women that way. I'm on the fence about Alice I hope she is sincere. I'm sure she misses Jasper. Paul got what he deserved I wish it could have been Jake, but I m sure he will get his.. u ntil you post again
Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update.well done. I can't believe Paul.Im sorry Edward had to use the restroom. I'm happy he knocked Paul out though. Poor Bella. I know her story is going to be hard for Edward to hear. I hope he understands, I think he will. He already loves the story, I don't know if he ever thought the story was true. I can't wait for next chapter. BRAVO!!! UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN
Date: 01 Aug 2021 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Bella let Edward in. While she is finally telling her story to a second person, she really needs professional help. I hope edward and rose can convince her of that. Her level of trauma and abuse will not self heal. She needs someone to help her see that she is a survivor. Not everyone would have made it through.
Date: 26 Jul 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jasper has some pretty strong loyalty to side with Bella instead of his dick. That is unusual for a guy. :)
Bella is being brave in front of this Paul, but I have a feeling Edward senses something. If Paul was involved with Jacob, Billy and the whole mess of crimes committed to Bella, she should tell Edward about her past ASAP. It's going to come out at an awkward time if she doesn't.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Does Bella know "Paul" or has he been inform by Jake and Billy on Bella? I can guess that he knows of her troubles with Jake and Billy and is taking there side of it. I have been thinking that since I heard his name. I hope that Edward don't turn against her.
I bet that Heidi is where Alice is getting her info from, since she seem to be someone that Paul knew. I can see how all of them are working agaist Bella to get her story out even thou its suppose to be fiction.
Date: 25 Jul 2021 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really don't like Paul. I get the feeling he is or was one of Jacob's friends and Jacob allowed him to abuse her as well. Any possiblity of getting the next chapter early? A reader's got to try. Bouncing back to the first half of the chapter; I like Bella is always encouraging Seth to 'make good choices.' I'm assuming that stems from personal experience; making good decisions.
Date: 19 Jul 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
She killed in self defense or she set out to kill someone? Two very different scenarios.
I think Edward is also trying to figure out how close the book is to her life? He's already grasped the idea that the book is semi-autobiographical.
Date: 18 Jul 2021 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the update..things seem to be going well with Bella & Edward. I like Emmett. I can't wait to hear the rest of Bella's story. Murderer? I'm sure it was to survive and is the person even dead. I can't wait to find out..Well done until you post agasin
Date: 11 Jul 2021 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Bella opened up to another person. Jasper is a fierce loyal friend, like Rose.
Buying a car was pretty monumental for Bella when she remembers not being able to afford to eat so recently.
Hopefully she will confide in Edward also.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 Jul 2021 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, man. You had me tearing up this chapter. Bella's moments with Charlie was cutting. I'm surprised a little that she admitted so much to Jasper. Now it's her turned to clue Edward in on her past. I keep wondering when Jacob is going to appear and ruin everything for her, or at least try. I can hardly wait for the rest of Edward's visit.