[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2022 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward was sure a hella good boyfriend in this chapter. Swoon.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2022 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Did Seth turn in the image of the van that has been taking pictures outside of his middle school?
Bella's support system surrounding her and Seth will easily aid in dismissing the allegations of neglect.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2022 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad E got to be there for Bella and Seth. They def need to report that van. Def Gotta be Jacob and company. boo hiss.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2022 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
I was worried she was going to be pregnant, glad it was the flu.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, it's amazing that Jacob can find even more levels of low to stoop to. Poor bella.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
So glad Edward come home when he did. Glad Edward was there for Seth's performance.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
I figured the van was associated to someone keeping tabs on Seth. I kinda thought Jacob was going to try an abduct Seth. Jacob's playing dirty pool. No neeed for Bella to freak out if the allegations aren't founded, right?
Sherry
Date: 15 Jan 2022 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks muchly for the update. Awesome as always. Poor Bella, it's hard for her to stay positive when things try to keep creeping in and darkening her light
Date: 10 Jan 2022 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Date: 03 Jan 2022 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Always love seeing how their bond grows stronger
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2022 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2022 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
I hope you are feeling better about life with it's unexpected ups and downs.
Thank you for another chapter in this beautiful story.
Alice relocating to New York will come in handy for press junkets with Bella's book tour and the movie.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2022 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 25
:) I hope 2022 is better for you
Date: 02 Jan 2022 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad he talked to Alice. Sounds like she is growing up a bit. Aww for palm springs. Nice getaway.
Date: 02 Jan 2022 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward does have a way with words.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have missed it but holidays congest things for all of us, The story is great!
Date: 01 Jan 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
I agree citrus can be fun, but should not be the guts of a story. A story needs substance. LIKE YOURS DOES.. Thanks muchly for the update..
Date: 01 Jan 2022 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I look forward to your updates. I really love this story.
As much as I love the updates... you and you mental and physical health is more important. Please take care of yourself first. Thinking and praying for you.
Date: 23 Dec 2021 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Jacob's planning something.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's sixth sense is on high alert. She honed this skill while running away from her ex. She's not paranoid, just hyper aware.
Date: 13 Dec 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved this chapter. I hope Bella can handle this movie. How in the world will she handle watching it?????? I am nervous about Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am so loving this, you are amazing
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2021 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella definitely had some healing moments in this chapter along with a setback.
She needs to always trust her gut instincts. I would bet money that Jacob or someone he is paying is watching Bella.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Dec 2021 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad they made some happy memories for her and them. Sebastian sounds like a nice guy. Sadly I don't think we've heard the last of Jacob.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
:O :O more more please <3
Date: 06 Dec 2021 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
Nice gesture for Alice to make. Will be a long time before she can mend family fences....if at all. Rose is such a good friend to her.
Date: 01 Dec 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Alice impressed me with her letter to Bella. I hope they all can get past what Alice did. Everyone deserves a second chance.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2021 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Alice made the effort, now it's up to everyone else to set the emotional healing in motion.
Any chance Jasper can forgive Alice?
The trust factor will be the toughest part.
Will Edward's promise to marry Bella come to fruition after the movie has been filmed?
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2021 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I loved this healing, warm chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Nov 2021 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good to see Bella taking charge of her life.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am really enjoying this and I hope you had a great Thanksgiving
Date: 28 Nov 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm hoping Bella will be able to get past her past on get it on in her future. While she may never be great friends with Alice, hopefully some kind of tolerable relationship can be found with her...Not only with Bella but Edward and her parents as well.
Date: 26 Oct 2021 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Seth def has some talking to do but I get why he is so angry. Glad B&E got some lemony time.
Date: 26 Oct 2021 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Your chapters could NEVER be too long. I love the trust and love that Bella is having in Edward. I do not blame Seth for his reactions. But he does need to talk to his therapist. Can't wait for more as always.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2021 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Seth needed his chance to express to Alice how her actions affected his life as well as Bella's. It could take years before Isabella and Seth are able to interact freely, probably limited, with Alice.
Hot tub sex can result in pregnancy. I dont remember if Bella is on birth control?
Edward's having a good Christmas.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Seth and Bella will need counselling for a long time to deal with everything that's happened and their feelings about everything.
But I can definitely tell they are both getting better.
Alice might even be actually learning something and changing her behavior too. We'll see......
Love the growing physical intimacy between Edward and Bella.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Good luck with your play. :)
Date: 24 Oct 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the update. Do you know how many more chapters there will be?
Sherry
Author's Response:
To be honest, I'm not sure. I've written through chapter 24 and we're not near the climax of the story. If I had to hazard a guess, maybe 30 chapters (included an epil).
Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter, I'm so happy to see Bella is becoming more brave and trusting Edward with her body.
Date: 24 Oct 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks muchly for the update.... and for the record, i'd like to have drooled over Chris Hemsworth too!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
loving this
Date: 15 Oct 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad they got some family time and some fun adult time too.
Date: 12 Oct 2021 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
My heart feels for Seth.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Several steps forward, an occasional step backwards. All great signs of bonding through unconditional love.
Esme and Seth each had a misstep. Will we read about his time with Carlisle and Esme?
Still waiting for Jacob to rear his ugly head.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update well done. I can't wait for next chapter..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update well done. I can't wait for next chapter..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think they will "seal the deal" she has to trust him at this point and they are in love
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2021 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
It turns out that Edward is just what Seth needs also. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 10 Oct 2021 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Beautiful chapter
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the scene with Edward and Seth!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2021 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have to say, I'm sort of looking forward to a Bear, jake encounter
Date: 28 Sep 2021 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I can't wait until Bear tears into Jacob.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
A great Thanksgiving involving everyone that needed a family due to different circumstances.
Will Jasper ever find someone to love?
Bear is a beautiful guard dog.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is very thankful for the life she has now. She did not think she could ever be this happy. I can't wait till they have Bear home with them..
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
they are progressing nicely
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful everyone pitching in for the holidays. Bear sounds awesome.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella had a moment where she recognized everything/her life/her son's life etc... was good for a change, and she got overwhelmed.
It's wonderful to recognize those moments.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ugh poor Emily. Sad her kid has a scummy sperm donor. Seth is such an awesome kid.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad that they have Bear.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hopefully Alice understands the mess she made. Love the dog idea. Shepards are awesome dogs, esp Anatoli's. House sounds awesome
Date: 20 Sep 2021 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
She wants magic... Alakazam Alakazoo. Abracadabra.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2021 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Does Jacob have access to Bella's new address? He's obsessed with the idea that his privilege deserves Bella's wealth. He will become a bigger threat soon.
Seth and Rose were able to convince Bella that it's time to tell Edward how she feels. The I Love You's were so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2021 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
this is so good
Date: 19 Sep 2021 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Beautiful chapter, i hope she and Edward get their magic soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2021 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awe... Edward and Bella declared their ILY's. Hopefully that will help Bella's security in the relationship.
I'm pleased that Caius is coming to Thanksgiving at Bella's house. :) And Jasper met a new woman. Hopefully she will be his one. :)
Seth getting the part in the musical and receiving help and support from Edward was really sweet.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Sep 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
This was a busy chapter but a fufilling one. More trust gained, I love You's spoken.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 19 Sep 2021 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved this chapter. She told Edward she loved him.!!!!!!!! That was a huge step for her.
Date: 14 Sep 2021 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Date: 14 Sep 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love Bella's reaction to Edward being there.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
Jasper's ex and her new partner are an interesting addition to the usual characters.
Bella's worst fears were confirmed when Sue's body was discovered.
Some form of legal action against Billy and Jacob needs to happen.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just knew that Billy or Jacob had done something evil to poor Sue, just for helping Bella. Ugh....
Poor Bella is getting swamped with evil. Finally owning her own home and reuniting with Edward will do her good.
Hopefully Alice's trip away from work will help her attitude and future decision making skills.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Sep 2021 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad that Edward is there for Bella and that he is already in Seth's good graces.
Date: 12 Sep 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
I truly hope they find a way to charge Jacob for the death of Sue. I'm glad Edwrd is sticking by Bella.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was afraid Sue was dead.
Loved Jasper & Moira
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2021 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jacob is getting aggressive.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes he is dispicable but she has Rose and Emmett, Jasper and now Edward. I was once in a abusive relationship he did not abuse my daughter nor did he want her but for 5 years my life was pretty bad.
This is a very good story, I am not sure how you juggle ao many stories at the same time but you are amazing.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Caius seems like a good fit as Bella's pseudo father figure. He and Edward will be very active in Seth's future. Equally as much as Jasper and Emmett as male role models.
Bella's journey will be a rough one until Jacob is removed from her life.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2021 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella has waaaaay more people who love and support her and Seth than when she was stuck with Jacob's slimy abusive ass.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yes sadly Jacob won't go away easily. She totally needs a place with excellent security. Caius is a cool dude.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am liking Caius in this story so far. Loving all the support Bella and Seth have.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter, I adore Caius. I'm so glad that Bella has him as her advocate.
Date: 02 Sep 2021 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor B. She def needs therapy. Paul and Jacob both need to be run over by a tank...a bus isn't good enough.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2021 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Tribal law is limited to the lands where the tribe members reside. They have no jurisdiction outside of this area. In the case of your imaginary world, Bella has never been a member of the tribe. Therefore Jacobs claim of her having no legal right to her son is false.
It would also be in Bella's favor to find Jacob's sisters so their stories can be told. Nothing can be done from a legal perspective but the president set would paint William Black and the other males of the tribe in a very negative light.
Maybe Alice can redeem herself by turning over all the false claims sent to her email by Jacob.
Bella's in for a big fight.
Wondering how much Seth will be involved in protecting his mother and damaging his father's plans?
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob is disgusting and he and his father need to be in prison. Ugh....
Poor Bella... I would have shut down too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2021 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I knew Jacob would pop up somewhere. He sees Bella as free money. I'm surprised it wasn't a slander lawsuit, climbing she defamed his character with her book and movie.
Sherry
Date: 29 Aug 2021 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob needs to have someone beat him half to death. I hope the lawyer runs him into the ground. He is only wanting to profit from Bella after all of the horrible things he did to her. I hope he rots in hell and Bill and Paul with him.