Date: 15 Sep 2022 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it!
Date: 15 Sep 2022 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it!
Date: 15 Sep 2022 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 15 Sep 2022 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it! I absolutely love Seth!
Date: 15 Sep 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it! Poor Bella and Seth!
Date: 14 Sep 2022 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it!
Date: 13 Sep 2022 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!
Date: 13 Sep 2022 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sweet chapter
Date: 13 Sep 2022 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! I don't like Alice!
Date: 13 Sep 2022 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2022 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
What in the Hell is up Alice's ass?
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2022 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
My advice to Bella, you're putting all of your life on your son. Not a good idea. My 4 children were 💯 my life. I went without so I could get or do anything that they wanted. I recently went through 5 surgeries and I needed assistance at home between surgeries. All I got was them arguing about who was going to be stuck helping me. Suffice to say I just signed myself into a rehab facility.
I was widowed at 49 years old and continued giving to them. I still hear nothing but complaints.
She needs to give to herself.
Date: 16 Aug 2022 10:00 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2022 3:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Tears throughout this chapter. It was beautiful. Their family is growing. Bella perserved through much hardship & now has much happiness. Loved this story!!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2022 4:21 AM Title: Epilogue
Such a beautiful journey. Thank you for sharing this tale with us.
Date: 06 Jul 2022 7:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Awesome story. Thank you.
Sherry
Date: 05 Jul 2022 4:26 AM Title: Epilogue
A beautiful full circle ending.
Thank you for the eventful journey.
Date: 04 Jul 2022 3:01 PM Title: Epilogue
Love love love this chapter and story!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2022 11:26 AM Title: Epilogue
a wonderful and amazing story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2022 9:50 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2022 2:48 PM Title: Epilogue
What a warm, happy ending to a great story .... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Jul 2022 1:52 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved you managed to work Cedric Diggory into this..awesome! Oh! Batman too! Gotta say though, I'm not ready for this tale to be over. You did an amazing job with it and it was one of my, "stop whatever i'm doing and read" stories. It made me go through so many emotions and I'm with Edward, Jacobs demise was what he deserved. I love that they were able to come to have Elizabeth in their lives.. She seemd to be a perfect fit. Thanks for sharing your story.. till laters, Pam b.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2022 12:38 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful ending to your latest creation. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Jun 2022 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wonderful chapter. Woo hoo for twins and godparents. Glad she got her hea w Edward.
Date: 25 Jun 2022 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 37
I love this story. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for your stories. I'm glad Bella is finally getting her happily ever after; she deserves it. :)
Date: 21 Jun 2022 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 37
I think this is one of the best chapters.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2022 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 37
The chapter title should be Labor of Love; the twins arrive, a wedding is scheduled, and a family is officially formed.
Date: 20 Jun 2022 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
Love love love this chapter!!!!!! I am not ready to let these two go.
Date: 20 Jun 2022 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
What a beautiful journey.
Date: 20 Jun 2022 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
What a beautiful journey.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2022 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 37
I loved it. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 20 Jun 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 37
Covered a lot with this update and you did awesome with it. Thanks muchly for posting.
Date: 20 Jun 2022 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love all your stories, including this one. One boo boo - "slacker" would not have been stated by Edward, it should have been Katie.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2022 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 36
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2022 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 36
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 36
you handled it very well as this has become one of my favorite stories
Date: 06 Jun 2022 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 36
Jacob got his just deserves.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hopefully the sentence on Jacob will be carried out sooner than later. He doesn't deserve the comforts of a prison cell.
Will Jasper end up with Chloe or will something separate them from each other allowing Alice to sweep in and help pick up the pieces?
Here comes the movie premier.
Date: 05 Jun 2022 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 36
I'm glad Jacob had sitting down issues.. I hope more of that is in his future. I've a feeling someone will take him out in prison but I sort of hope they won't. I'd reather he survive in prision for a very long and painful time.
Date: 05 Jun 2022 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
Awesome chapter. Glad Emily and Leah can get away from it to heal. Poor Seth. They all have a long way to go but at least this chapter is over and they can movd forward
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2022 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 36
Jacob going to prison is the best. It's too bad that Paul escaped that with his death. Everyone did so amazing standing up to him.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
FYI...I didn't get the STARS announcement for this chapter. I had to go looking for it when I received the FFN announcement.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2022 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Seth is very intuitive for a preteen.
HEA coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2022 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Seth is very intuitive for a preteen.
HEA coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2022 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Seth is very intuitive for a preteen.
HEA coming soon.
Date: 22 May 2022 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 35
PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2022 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter... I am so happy for your Edward, Bella and Seth. The sweet family deserve a new start. Thanks for writing andd sharing.
Date: 22 May 2022 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love that Seth helped with the engagement. Beautiful chapter
Date: 22 May 2022 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love that Seth helped with the engagement. Beautiful chapter
Date: 22 May 2022 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
They're all getting their happy ever after, finally.
Sherry
Date: 21 May 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 35
Awesome chapter. Glad Seth got to help plan. A fresh start would be best I think too.
Date: 21 May 2022 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks muchly as always for the update to this awesome tale. I am not ready for it to be nearing it's end. I'm looking forward to Jacob getting what's due to him.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2022 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 34
wow amazing story hopefully not too long for more
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
Someone like Jacob would definately get what they diserve in prison
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2022 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for the update..well done..Jake will get what's coming to him..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2022 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for the update..well done..Jake will get what's coming to him..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2022 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
YOUR STORIES ARE ALWAYS GREAT
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2022 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
i LOVE THIS STORY
Date: 10 May 2022 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
My heart breaks for Seth. He really has been through so much at a young age. Glad they are getting help and doing it as a family. I love when Seth calls Edward dad.
Date: 09 May 2022 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 34
What doesn't kill us makes us stronger. I can't imagine how strong will be when he goes up and faces the world himself.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2022 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
I want to hug little fictional Seth. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 08 May 2022 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
I'm torn with the notion of Edward moving to be with Bella and Seth since he can work some from home and his filming could take him anywhere, or Bella and Seth moving into Edward's place. Bella can write anywhere but her extended family are still elsewhere but Seth's not happy with "home" anymore. Thanks for update and I'm really looking forward to Jacob being locked away for a really long time. I sort of want the death penalty for him, which he certainly deserves, but I'd like for him to suffer... slowly and painfully.
Date: 07 May 2022 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad they are bringing in a woman to prosecute. That will drive Jacob insane. Poor Seth. A new school might help.
Date: 24 Apr 2022 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 33
It's odd how your heart can ache for fictional characters in a story.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2022 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 33
I was wondering when and how the whole trauma would hit Edward. Aro being flexible was great.
Thanks for writing and sharing.