Date: 03 Jul 2022 1:52 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved you managed to work Cedric Diggory into this..awesome! Oh! Batman too! Gotta say though, I'm not ready for this tale to be over. You did an amazing job with it and it was one of my, "stop whatever i'm doing and read" stories. It made me go through so many emotions and I'm with Edward, Jacobs demise was what he deserved. I love that they were able to come to have Elizabeth in their lives.. She seemd to be a perfect fit. Thanks for sharing your story.. till laters, Pam b.
Date: 06 Jun 2022 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hopefully the sentence on Jacob will be carried out sooner than later. He doesn't deserve the comforts of a prison cell.
Will Jasper end up with Chloe or will something separate them from each other allowing Alice to sweep in and help pick up the pieces?
Here comes the movie premier.
Date: 05 Jun 2022 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 36
I'm glad Jacob had sitting down issues.. I hope more of that is in his future. I've a feeling someone will take him out in prison but I sort of hope they won't. I'd reather he survive in prision for a very long and painful time.
Date: 04 Jun 2022 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 36
Jacob going to prison is the best. It's too bad that Paul escaped that with his death. Everyone did so amazing standing up to him.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
FYI...I didn't get the STARS announcement for this chapter. I had to go looking for it when I received the FFN announcement.
Date: 08 May 2022 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
I'm torn with the notion of Edward moving to be with Bella and Seth since he can work some from home and his filming could take him anywhere, or Bella and Seth moving into Edward's place. Bella can write anywhere but her extended family are still elsewhere but Seth's not happy with "home" anymore. Thanks for update and I'm really looking forward to Jacob being locked away for a really long time. I sort of want the death penalty for him, which he certainly deserves, but I'd like for him to suffer... slowly and painfully.
Date: 21 Apr 2022 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
Came across this amazing story about 2 weeks ago. Last night (well, early hours of this morning, actually) I finally finished catching up, and I can't wait to read the rest as you post it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us! It's an awesome story!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2022 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for the update...well done..I'm so happy that Seth is back with his parents & Jake is caught , Paul is dead. Couldn't have happen to better people.lol I hope Jakes survives so he can go to jail. I can't wait to see what happens next. Does the movie go on? until you post again..BRAVO!!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2022 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Jacob got off too easily. Nothing short of being someones bitch in prison will scratch the surface of what type of justice he deserves. Why didn't Seth tell the doctor or at least Edward that Jacob shot him up with something. They should've done blood work. Seth's exam should've been a little more in depth. This chapter waa a bit intense. I'm kinda sorry Bella didn't get to attack Jacob.
Date: 02 Apr 2022 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope they are able to find Seth quickly and that no harm comes to Ryan, the stuntdouble. I also hope Jacob is not killed in the altercation of rescuing Seth. I'd like to see him tortured painfully for a very long, long time. Maybe he could find out what being raped feel like... repeatedly.
Date: 22 Mar 2022 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
If the promise of money has been Paul's motivation, what's Embry's reason for aiding the two idiots?
Glad Leah was found in time. Hopefully the information she overheard is enough to find Seth before Jacob tries to leave the country. Alice volunteering her legal services to Leah was a pleasant surprise.
Will the stunt doubles escape harms way by dropping fake money and then leaving?
Who will stay with Seth when Jacob and Paul attempt to collect the ransom money?
If they are as dense as Leah believes then Embry will b e alone with Seth. Easy to over power.
The death penalty is to good for Jacob, Paul and Embry. They should feel the pain of physical abuse by a big burly inmate that wants conjugal visits.
Rip them up good.
Date: 20 Mar 2022 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 31
I want to see Jacob and Paul get injured, but not killed. I want them captured and stand trial. Since some of the activities/crimes happened CA, I'd like to see him stand trial there first, then be extridited to WA and stand there. I like to see Life with no possibility of parole for either and Jacob receiving the death penalty at one of the trials. I would like to see the rest of the men on the reservation arrested and tried for a subset of the the Jacob/Paul crimes and sentenced to life. I'd like to see a lady lawyer rip them all apart including Billy Black. I'd like him to have a stroke and with complications of the stroke, no walking, no sex and only partial use of one hand/arm.
Date: 13 Mar 2022 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jacob's not that smart. He'll give himself away by boasting about something stupid. Paul will find out he's expendable.
Hopefully Seth will figure out a way to expose their location.
The Father's day events pulled on the old heart strings.