Date: 24 Apr 2022 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 33
I was wondering when and how the whole trauma would hit Edward. Aro being flexible was great.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Apr 2022 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 33
Yeah e needs some therapy to and maybe all together As well. Glad B got to see him denied bail at least. Leah has a long way to go as well.
Date: 24 Apr 2022 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 33
I wonder how long before Edward would have his own breakdown.
Time to seek therapy.
Will a death sentence even be an option?
Didn't California's laws removed that possibility
Date: 23 Apr 2022 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
Love this judge. I hope Jacon becomes someone's bitch in jail. Lol. I hope Edward, Bella and Seth can all start healing together.
Date: 23 Apr 2022 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
Does Bella feel the slightest bit guilty for upturning Edward's life as she has? He's been very supportive oh her throughout the story, but she's not returned much until now.
Sherry
Date: 21 Apr 2022 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
Came across this amazing story about 2 weeks ago. Last night (well, early hours of this morning, actually) I finally finished catching up, and I can't wait to read the rest as you post it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us! It's an awesome story!!!!
Cheers,
Helen xx
Date: 14 Apr 2022 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for the update..well done..I happy Seth is safe & back with his parents..I hope Jake geys what he deserves. until you post again
Date: 12 Apr 2022 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for the update...well done..I'm so happy that Seth is back with his parents & Jake is caught , Paul is dead. Couldn't have happen to better people.lol I hope Jakes survives so he can go to jail. I can't wait to see what happens next. Does the movie go on? until you post again..BRAVO!!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 32
Will Seth's projection of Jacob's life in prison come true? Will he become some big lugs play thing?
The family will struggle some during recovery Seth's physical recovery. The emotional will take longer for all.
Date: 04 Apr 2022 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope they've been keeping Seth mostly knocked out with drugs. The less he remembers, the better.
Date: 04 Apr 2022 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
Jacob is going to wind up dead.
Date: 04 Apr 2022 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Jacob got off too easily. Nothing short of being someones bitch in prison will scratch the surface of what type of justice he deserves. Why didn't Seth tell the doctor or at least Edward that Jacob shot him up with something. They should've done blood work. Seth's exam should've been a little more in depth. This chapter waa a bit intense. I'm kinda sorry Bella didn't get to attack Jacob.
Sherry
Date: 03 Apr 2022 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Seth. Glad they got to him in time before permanent injuries.
Date: 03 Apr 2022 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 32
It's too bad Jacob couldn't have been shot and killed like Paul and Billy. Ugh.... Good thing his intelligence doesn't match his grossness.
Thanks for writing and sharing. Good luck with your musical! :)
Date: 03 Apr 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 32
I was hoping that Jacob was killed along with Paul.
Date: 02 Apr 2022 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope they are able to find Seth quickly and that no harm comes to Ryan, the stuntdouble. I also hope Jacob is not killed in the altercation of rescuing Seth. I'd like to see him tortured painfully for a very long, long time. Maybe he could find out what being raped feel like... repeatedly.
Date: 26 Mar 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
I know there's going to be a HEA, but I hate reading about kiddos in these situations. Hurry back...
Date: 24 Mar 2022 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love this please update when you can .
Date: 22 Mar 2022 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
If the promise of money has been Paul's motivation, what's Embry's reason for aiding the two idiots?
Glad Leah was found in time. Hopefully the information she overheard is enough to find Seth before Jacob tries to leave the country. Alice volunteering her legal services to Leah was a pleasant surprise.
Will the stunt doubles escape harms way by dropping fake money and then leaving?
Who will stay with Seth when Jacob and Paul attempt to collect the ransom money?
If they are as dense as Leah believes then Embry will b e alone with Seth. Easy to over power.
The death penalty is to good for Jacob, Paul and Embry. They should feel the pain of physical abuse by a big burly inmate that wants conjugal visits.
Rip them up good.
Date: 21 Mar 2022 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope Leah gets the help she needs. I also hope Jacob and Paul get all the pain they have caused to everyone they have hurt. I also hope Seth is not hurt during all of this.
Date: 21 Mar 2022 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really want Edward to have the opportunity to beat the crap out of Jacob.
Sherry
Date: 21 Mar 2022 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
Get Seth back
Date: 21 Mar 2022 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really do hope that Jacob and Paul are as dumb as Leah thinks. She is a bad ass by the way.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 21 Mar 2022 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Jacob need’s a good as dose of karma let the Edward emmet and jasper have 10 min with he’s ass
Date: 21 Mar 2022 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my goodness, what an emotional nightmare for all.
Date: 20 Mar 2022 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
glad they found Leah and she'll get the help she needs. Nice for Alice to step to the plate.
Date: 20 Mar 2022 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
Nice being a former actor with a stunt double
Date: 20 Mar 2022 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 31
I want to see Jacob and Paul get injured, but not killed. I want them captured and stand trial. Since some of the activities/crimes happened CA, I'd like to see him stand trial there first, then be extridited to WA and stand there. I like to see Life with no possibility of parole for either and Jacob receiving the death penalty at one of the trials. I would like to see the rest of the men on the reservation arrested and tried for a subset of the the Jacob/Paul crimes and sentenced to life. I'd like to see a lady lawyer rip them all apart including Billy Black. I'd like him to have a stroke and with complications of the stroke, no walking, no sex and only partial use of one hand/arm.
Date: 14 Mar 2022 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for the update..They really need to save Seth from Jacob he is really an ass hole. until you post again
Date: 14 Mar 2022 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jacob is disgusting and so is Paul. Ugh.... Those two sure ruined everyone's day and life. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Mar 2022 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved what Seth did for Edward for Father's Day. I hope they make Jacob and Paul really pay for what they have done.
Date: 13 Mar 2022 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 30
I didn't expect Jacob to show up and take Seth.
Sherry
Date: 13 Mar 2022 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 30
omg awesome chapter till the end. My chest hurts..... ya killin me woman
Date: 13 Mar 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my goodness, stay strong Seth
Date: 13 Mar 2022 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jacob's not that smart. He'll give himself away by boasting about something stupid. Paul will find out he's expendable.
Hopefully Seth will figure out a way to expose their location.
The Father's day events pulled on the old heart strings.
Date: 13 Mar 2022 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 30
🥰 great chapter!!
Date: 28 Feb 2022 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the update..well done..I'm happy Bella had a wondeful Mother's day. Thry will all be together soon..until you post again
Date: 28 Feb 2022 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Things are slowly moving forward. How's Alice going to feel if Bella is given their grandma's ring that is suppose to go to her?
Sherry
Date: 28 Feb 2022 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 29
The CPS fiasco was just a taste of what Jacob is willing to do to detour Bella's stable life.
Hoping Seth will remain safe from his sperm donor's grasp.
Date: 27 Feb 2022 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad things went well with Chloe. Aww for mothes day stuff. Seth is such an awesome kid
Date: 27 Feb 2022 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awe, Seth and Edward's mother's day was so sweet
Date: 27 Feb 2022 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
The new social worker was very nice and professional. :) Bella DOES have an army of friends that are her family.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Feb 2022 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 29
Can’t wait to see what’s Jacob up to damm crazy
Date: 27 Feb 2022 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved what Edward and Seth did for Mother's Day. I'm buckling up but I'm nervous. Can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Feb 2022 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hopefully, the CPS will be short and uneventful. Yes, Seth is an amazing kid! Hoping they all so get their HEA..
Date: 15 Feb 2022 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 28
The emotional stress continues to build up for Bella and Seth.
They finally have a support network to ease some of the burden. The fear of returning to the struggle is real for Bella. But Seth is right, Edward needs to propose sooner than later.
Date: 14 Feb 2022 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 28
I am living Edward and Seth's relationship.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 28
I loved Seth's pov.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
Seth and Caius are both really sweet. Along with Edward, Bella really has some great support. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Feb 2022 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 28
Seth is such a cool kid. Glad Edward got him to let off some steam in a healthy way. Caius is a godsend.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
I've wondered if Jacob or some of his "buddies" will try to do something to Edward while he's in Washington filming.
Sherry
Date: 06 Feb 2022 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 27
Sadly too many family's don't have a Caius in their corner. Women like Martha give the actual hard working cps folks all a bad nMe, but sadly there are too many Martha's out there. Sigh.
Poor Seth.
Date: 04 Feb 2022 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
I have SO many things I'd like to do to Jake.... I'd also like to do a few things to that horrible woman from child services.
Date: 01 Feb 2022 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
How did Martha usurp the assigned social worker and get this case file?
Is Caius filing a lawsuit against Martha, against CPS, or both?
Who's helping Jacob?
Drawing Billy and Jacob off the reservation is the only way to get them arrested.
Date: 01 Feb 2022 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
oh please hurry back
Date: 31 Jan 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for the update...well done..Wow they got a lot going on. I hpe things work out in there favor. Caius ain't nothing to f with!!! Yes Ms Martha should be fired and they need to look into who made the alligation..Until you post again
Date: 31 Jan 2022 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
I've never heard of a social worker behaving in that manner. Though, I get this is fanfiction and it doesn't have to be accurate. Bella needs to pull her shit together and stop the whimpy, crying jags all the time. She needs to start being a strong woman and setting a better example to Seth; stop crumbling at the first sight of adversity or visissitude. CPS can remove a minor child if the parent's mental health is questionable,and at the moment, Bella's is very questionable.
Sherry
Date: 31 Jan 2022 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ok who’s ready to follow Martha and teach her a lesson oooo I want to key her face
Date: 31 Jan 2022 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
I know this a made up story so you are taking some leway on how CPS would act, but you are way off base. I know if you don't have an adress they would never start a file, or they would start at the school since some of the complaint is about how much time he spend at school. In which they would see that he was involve with after school things and then they would probably drop it. Just saying they would need a whole lot more than what they have to even start a file on them. Oh and there is no way that a social worker can just walk into your home and take your child without a whole lot of evience. Not just because the worker has a bias against you. Sorry but I just had to bring these things to your attention.
Date: 31 Jan 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
It breaks my heart when bad things continually happen to good people.
Date: 31 Jan 2022 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my, Martha is definitely a bitch. I am so glad Caius was there. I am glad that Bella and Seth have Edward. I can not wait to hear from Seth. I hope at some point in this story that Seth gets to tell Jacob what he thinks of him. And I hope he gets to knock the hell out of him.
Date: 30 Jan 2022 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
It's terrible that so many people can be bought off. Grrr.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Jan 2022 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward was sure a hella good boyfriend in this chapter. Swoon.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Jan 2022 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Did Seth turn in the image of the van that has been taking pictures outside of his middle school?
Bella's support system surrounding her and Seth will easily aid in dismissing the allegations of neglect.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad E got to be there for Bella and Seth. They def need to report that van. Def Gotta be Jacob and company. boo hiss.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
I was worried she was going to be pregnant, glad it was the flu.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, it's amazing that Jacob can find even more levels of low to stoop to. Poor bella.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
So glad Edward come home when he did. Glad Edward was there for Seth's performance.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
I figured the van was associated to someone keeping tabs on Seth. I kinda thought Jacob was going to try an abduct Seth. Jacob's playing dirty pool. No neeed for Bella to freak out if the allegations aren't founded, right?
Sherry
Date: 15 Jan 2022 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks muchly for the update. Awesome as always. Poor Bella, it's hard for her to stay positive when things try to keep creeping in and darkening her light
Date: 10 Jan 2022 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Date: 03 Jan 2022 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Always love seeing how their bond grows stronger
Date: 03 Jan 2022 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Jan 2022 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
I hope you are feeling better about life with it's unexpected ups and downs.
Thank you for another chapter in this beautiful story.
Alice relocating to New York will come in handy for press junkets with Bella's book tour and the movie.
Date: 02 Jan 2022 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 25
:) I hope 2022 is better for you
Date: 02 Jan 2022 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad he talked to Alice. Sounds like she is growing up a bit. Aww for palm springs. Nice getaway.
Date: 02 Jan 2022 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward does have a way with words.
Date: 01 Jan 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have missed it but holidays congest things for all of us, The story is great!
Date: 01 Jan 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
I agree citrus can be fun, but should not be the guts of a story. A story needs substance. LIKE YOURS DOES.. Thanks muchly for the update..
Date: 01 Jan 2022 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I look forward to your updates. I really love this story.
As much as I love the updates... you and you mental and physical health is more important. Please take care of yourself first. Thinking and praying for you.
Date: 23 Dec 2021 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Jacob's planning something.
Sherry
Date: 13 Dec 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's sixth sense is on high alert. She honed this skill while running away from her ex. She's not paranoid, just hyper aware.
Date: 13 Dec 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved this chapter. I hope Bella can handle this movie. How in the world will she handle watching it?????? I am nervous about Jacob.
Date: 12 Dec 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am so loving this, you are amazing
Date: 12 Dec 2021 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella definitely had some healing moments in this chapter along with a setback.
She needs to always trust her gut instincts. I would bet money that Jacob or someone he is paying is watching Bella.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Dec 2021 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad they made some happy memories for her and them. Sebastian sounds like a nice guy. Sadly I don't think we've heard the last of Jacob.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
:O :O more more please <3
Date: 06 Dec 2021 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
Nice gesture for Alice to make. Will be a long time before she can mend family fences....if at all. Rose is such a good friend to her.
Date: 01 Dec 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Alice impressed me with her letter to Bella. I hope they all can get past what Alice did. Everyone deserves a second chance.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Alice made the effort, now it's up to everyone else to set the emotional healing in motion.
Any chance Jasper can forgive Alice?
The trust factor will be the toughest part.
Will Edward's promise to marry Bella come to fruition after the movie has been filmed?