Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
glad Paul got decked and fired. What a prick. Don't blame B for running though. Emotional abuse can be worse than the physical. Alice is such a piece of work.....really despising her.
Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Sadly I was afraid he'd know her. I'm surprised she didn't recogize his last name. Paul needs to be punched in the face.... to start. I'm afraid for the next chapter.
Date: 05 Aug 2021 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
cliffy indeed. Love that Seth is encouraging her to go for it. B&E def need to talk
Date: 05 Aug 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad she told Jasper a little. Loved the Charlie flashback. Hate that she doesn't even have any pictures of him. Jake deserves to get run over with a logging truck. bas***d
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update.well done. I can't believe Paul.Im sorry Edward had to use the restroom. I'm happy he knocked Paul out though. Poor Bella. I know her story is going to be hard for Edward to hear. I hope he understands, I think he will. He already loves the story, I don't know if he ever thought the story was true. I can't wait for next chapter. BRAVO!!! UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN
Date: 02 Aug 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can I hug bells pleaseeee uuu freaking Paul and Alice they all need a dose of karma and Jacob needs to suffer a lot
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Does Paul have any recourse other than bringing Jacob back into her life?
Seth remembers the abuse his father subjected them to every day.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Paul is just as much of an asshile as Jacob and Billy. ugh.... He'll probably sue Edward for hitting him now. grrr....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2021 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm Team Edward all the way. Paul deserved what Edward did and more. I'm ready for Bella to tell Edward everything.
Sherry
Date: 01 Aug 2021 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Bella let Edward in. While she is finally telling her story to a second person, she really needs professional help. I hope edward and rose can convince her of that. Her level of trauma and abuse will not self heal. She needs someone to help her see that she is a survivor. Not everyone would have made it through.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2021 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this Edward and hope he can fix Bella
Date: 01 Aug 2021 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Unless there's another dead body coming, Bella did not commit murder. It was clearly self defense. What will it take to convince her of that?
Date: 01 Aug 2021 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Edward broke Paul's jaw too. Glad Jasper gave Edward information on Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2021 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
cannot wait
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2021 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Paul has already shown his hand.
He's connected to Jacob and the Black's and is probably the one sending insider hate to Alice.
Does Edward have enough clout to remove Paul from the mix?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jasper has some pretty strong loyalty to side with Bella instead of his dick. That is unusual for a guy. :)
Bella is being brave in front of this Paul, but I have a feeling Edward senses something. If Paul was involved with Jacob, Billy and the whole mess of crimes committed to Bella, she should tell Edward about her past ASAP. It's going to come out at an awkward time if she doesn't.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2021 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for the update..well done..Paul must know Jake..I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again
Date: 26 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Does Bella know "Paul" or has he been inform by Jake and Billy on Bella? I can guess that he knows of her troubles with Jake and Billy and is taking there side of it. I have been thinking that since I heard his name. I hope that Edward don't turn against her.
I bet that Heidi is where Alice is getting her info from, since she seem to be someone that Paul knew. I can see how all of them are working agaist Bella to get her story out even thou its suppose to be fiction.
Date: 25 Jul 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looks like Bella recognized Paul as a Quillute
Date: 25 Jul 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looks like Bella recognized Paul as a Quillute
Date: 25 Jul 2021 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
I do not like Paul!!!!!! Does he know Jacob????
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2021 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really don't like Paul. I get the feeling he is or was one of Jacob's friends and Jacob allowed him to abuse her as well. Any possiblity of getting the next chapter early? A reader's got to try. Bouncing back to the first half of the chapter; I like Bella is always encouraging Seth to 'make good choices.' I'm assuming that stems from personal experience; making good decisions.
Sherry
Date: 20 Jul 2021 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope Edward means what he says and not run or need time to think about what Bella tells him. She is opening herself up to him.
Date: 19 Jul 2021 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is so excited to be with Bella.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
She killed in self defense or she set out to kill someone? Two very different scenarios.
I think Edward is also trying to figure out how close the book is to her life? He's already grasped the idea that the book is semi-autobiographical.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2021 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
so effing good
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2021 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella better tell him everything very soon or some ominous person will. They always do.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Jul 2021 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad Bella has Edward. While her other friends help, it sounds like he might be able to help her see the light inside herself.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2021 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the update..things seem to be going well with Bella & Edward. I like Emmett. I can't wait to hear the rest of Bella's story. Murderer? I'm sure it was to survive and is the person even dead. I can't wait to find out..Well done until you post agasin
Date: 18 Jul 2021 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad they got some good quality time in before she tells him everything. Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2021 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
My stomach is in knots...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2021 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Jasper now has a better sense of Bella's life prior to meeting his sister.
Date: 11 Jul 2021 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Jasper knows about Bella's past now. I like how she told him. Glad Edward is there with her.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2021 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Bella opened up to another person. Jasper is a fierce loyal friend, like Rose.
Buying a car was pretty monumental for Bella when she remembers not being able to afford to eat so recently.
Hopefully she will confide in Edward also.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2021 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..Well done . Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2021 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..Well done . Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2021 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, man. You had me tearing up this chapter. Bella's moments with Charlie was cutting. I'm surprised a little that she admitted so much to Jasper. Now it's her turned to clue Edward in on her past. I keep wondering when Jacob is going to appear and ruin everything for her, or at least try. I can hardly wait for the rest of Edward's visit.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2021 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wondering if Sue will resurface as an ally to Bella?
Is Paul Lahote somehow behind the information getting to the mystery email sender? (I'm thinking it's Jacob)
Is Laurant really sick?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2021 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Foreshadowing, Jacob will try to get his hands on some of their money.
Is Sue still around?
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Alice has methods that are way out there, but her heart is in the right place. Although I think the info she's gotten is correct about Bella. Fact remains tho, how did the emailer find Alice? I think Paul may have something to do with that. I need more this is getting deep.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2021 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really don't like this Jacob or Billy. Now I'm curious as to why Sue got shunned by the tribe. What did she do, or was it something Billy did? Loved the flirting between E/B. How's Seth going to react to Edward when he finds out they are seeing each other.
Sherry
Date: 05 Jul 2021 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Pleaseeee pleaseeee let Bella open up about her self to Edward I want Alice to say something in front of Rosalie so she could smack some since
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2021 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
There are loads of assholes in Bella's past. I wonder which one is sending shit to Alice. Hmm....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 04 Jul 2021 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my gosh, Alice is like a dog with a bone. She won't let it go.
Date: 04 Jul 2021 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Alice is a mean bitch. I bet Jacob is having someone send the emails because he's to dumb to do it. Also I bet Paul is one of Jacobs friends.
Date: 04 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Dang I hope he sticks to his guns and doesn't back down where Alice is concerned. She's one evil manipulative piece of crap. It sounds like poor Bella has been through alot and I honestly can't blame her for the things she's done. She was thrown out with absolutely nothing and had to take care of her young son. What she had to do to survive doesn't define her as a person. I really hope we get to hear her story next chapter.
Date: 04 Jul 2021 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sadly I knew Malice wouldn't let it go. Bella has already told him she has skeletons. Ugh. Glad Jasper didn't give A her number.
Woo hoo...I'm a copy writer now. Lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..Well done🤗I wonder who is sending emails? IS Paul Jacob's friend? IS Paul from her past & she doesn't recognize him? So many questions..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..Well done🤗I wonder who is sending emails? IS Paul Jacob's friend? IS Paul from her past & she doesn't recognize him? So many questions..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..Well done🤗I wonder who is sending emails? IS Paul Jacob's friend? IS Paul from her past & she doesn't recognize him? So many questions..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..Well done🤗I wonder who is sending emails? IS Paul Jacob's friend? IS Paul from her past & she doesn't recognize him? So many questions..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..Well done🤗I wonder who is sending emails? IS Paul Jacob's friend? IS Paul from her past & she doesn't recognize him? So many questions..until you post again
Date: 03 Jul 2021 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
Maybe the reason she's heard the name Paul Lahote is because he's from La Push or a friend of Billy, and maybe he's the one sending Alice info or has someone else doing it
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2021 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
anither reason to dislike Jacob
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2021 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. It seems suspicious that Laurent left and Paul Lahote came in.....
Date: 28 Jun 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Uuu Seth you are awesome thank you for this chapter uuu I want Rosalie to give Alice a pice of her mind let Rosalie the momma bear out
Date: 27 Jun 2021 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella and Seth have such a close relationship that Seth can speak to her about how he feels.
Date: 27 Jun 2021 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella and Seth have such a close relationship that Seth can speak to her about how he feels.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2021 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella...Can you kick fictional Jacob in the fictional nuts? I would feel loads better. His character never had a chance being raised by asshole Billy though. Will we find out what happened to Sue? Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Jun 2021 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Such a good chapter. I'm really enjoying this story and I am very impatiently waiting to know of Bella's past. I really want Alice to get her dose of Karma too.
Date: 27 Jun 2021 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jeez I really want Jake and Billy to die slow, horrible deaths. Hope Sue is alive and well somewhere. The Paul thing sounds really ominous. I don't think Jake will stay away for long unfortunately.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2021 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2021 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
Somehow I think part of what Alice's email indicate has some truth to it; Bella possible did hook to provide for her son. A mother will do whatever is necessary to care for her child(ren), even sell herself. I am curious where that email came from tho since nothing has been made public.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2021 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm hoping this is a the beginning of a beautiful relationship.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Alice is definitely trouble. Bella should beware.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is quite gun-shy. Edward has his work cut out for him to break through the emotional trauma Jacob put her through.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2021 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
That meeting was explosive; not the meeting I expected. Alice is a bitch of a bulldog. At least Edward was able to save the day, so-to-speak.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2021 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is there a leak at Bella's publishing house?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2021 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
been waiting for this since Friday but it was worth the wait...sort of I have no patience
Date: 20 Jun 2021 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Alice is really a nagging bitch. Bella really needs to tell Edward her story about how her life was after her dad died. Really hope she tells him soon.
Date: 19 Jun 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Living this story. Can't wait to hear Bella's story. She must have been through something really bad to believe that she doesn't deserve happiness.
Date: 19 Jun 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad she at least talked to Rose. I do think she needs some more professional help.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2021 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hopefully Alice will stay away for a while.
How long before Bella confides in Edward?
Maybe this visit will help Bella return the familial love to Rosalie and Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2021 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hopefully Alice will stay away for a while.
How long before Bella confides in Edward?
Maybe this visit will help Bella return the familial love to Rosalie and Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
such a great story
Date: 14 Jun 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is so sweet to Bella. Loved this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2021 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is a sad but awesome story; can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe Alice and Bella will see eye to eye in the future.
Date: 13 Jun 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor B with her Dad. Sucks those things take a hard dole of kids lives. Jake is such a creepo. Really don't like Jasper being w/ Malice..... Maybe I'll change my opinion of her later but I have a feeling we've not heard the end of nastiness from her
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am loving this , do you have any kind of posting schedule?
Author's Response:
I usually post teasers on Wednesdays and updates on Saturdays. Barring I have updates to share. The story is prewritten through chapter 13, with halfway through chapter 14. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
not been there either
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
sparks flying quickly and that is a good thing. Sparks lead to fires
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2021 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
you write so well
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2021 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Alice is definitely a hateful hypocrite. ugh....
I'm glad that Edward knows Bella was talking to her son yesterday. But he is even more interested in Bella now.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2021 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
How much damage can Alice do? Will Jasper leak the little bit of Bella's personal history he's figured out to Alice in the throws of hate sex? Hopefully Alice is the one that gets dumped.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ugh Malice is pathetic, really. Wonder who emailed her though. Poor Bella. Seth is going to get hurt I bet. 😢