Date: 24 Jan 2022 4:20 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome as always, but just wondering what happened to that idiot billy. I hope he got his comeuppance too
Date: 23 Jan 2022 4:24 PM Title: Epilogue
What a fabulous ending to yet another fabulous story from yourself x
Date: 23 Jan 2022 12:20 PM Title: Epilogue
Perfect story thank you
Date: 22 Jan 2022 7:29 PM Title: Epilogue
Awwww. This was a great ending. Edward was her husband, and her Dom when he needed to be and everything turned out well.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Lordamercy, I was as shocked as Edward when he had to deliver baby Gracie in the back of his limo LOL! With Peter and his evil father no longer on this earth, life can only get better and better for Edward and Bella...I suspect they won't stop at 2 babies. Esme will be even more over the moon than she is now!
Hate to leave them but they'll do just fine without us, now LOL! Thanks for another fabulous story, Clo darlin'!
Date: 22 Jan 2022 4:00 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved it but I am sad to see it come to an end thank you
Date: 22 Jan 2022 3:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Perfect! I'm going to miss this story
Date: 22 Jan 2022 2:44 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved following along with you with this tale.. great job with it my friend.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 2:41 AM Title: Epilogue
Well we have never ready a story where Edward deliver his own children but hey it's 2022 I will eventually get to deliver 8,9 & 10. I mean some of the crew hasn't even deliver 1, so I got that. Ok so now it time for Bikerward and Bikerella!! KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ‘π”₯π’
Date: 22 Jan 2022 1:58 AM Title: Epilogue
I really loved this story!
Date: 22 Jan 2022 1:54 AM Title: Epilogue
The demise of Peter and his father was fitting.
Yay babies!
Happily Ever After. .....
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:34 AM Title: Epilogue
So flipping good! Thanks so much for writing this! Enjoyed reading this so much!
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:31 AM Title: Epilogue
OH MY! I love this! I Love them! Thank you for sharing! ;)
Date: 21 Jan 2022 11:16 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this. Going to miss these two
Date: 21 Jan 2022 11:01 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! I have loved reading every word, every chapter. Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. I am sad to see it end. But I am excited to see what you share with us next.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 10:37 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful end. Hate to see it end but I know you'll be starting something else I'm going to love again soon. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 10:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautifully concluded. Loved it.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 10:30 PM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this story and sad to see it over. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 9:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Such a sweet HEA for these two. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 9:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Left my review on ffn but I just love all the pictures you added here! That nursery is gorgeous!
Date: 21 Jan 2022 9:04 PM Title: Epilogue
Tears! I am not ready for this to be over.
Thank you for another fantastic story.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 8:23 PM Title: Epilogue
What a beautiful ending, though I'm sorry to see the story end.
'wonderful writing
Date: 21 Jan 2022 7:57 PM Title: Epilogue
I love it! Beautiful ending! I am so glad Peter was ass raped multiple times!
Date: 18 Jan 2022 2:47 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I loved the picture at the end, Edward snuggling up to Bella. Very satisfying ending. Mistress Angela gave Peter a taste of pain and he gave her a confession about himself and his father. They are both evil men and obviously the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Plus implicazting Tia and Leah Green and exposing the sins of their father. All will get the punishment they so rightfully deserve. As for the newlyweds, they will get their HEA.
Date: 18 Jan 2022 9:05 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I have truly loved this story, and every week, I was eagerly anticipating the next instalment. I can't believe this ride is almost over. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Until next time, be safe and take care!
~ Helen xoxoxo
Date: 18 Jan 2022 3:36 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I love it thank ya
Date: 17 Jan 2022 1:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Great story
Date: 17 Jan 2022 11:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
No no on no no no no no no nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmnmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
it can't be the end
I love it
Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I've absolutely loved this story. Can't wait for the epilogue, hope Peter and Billy get a taste of their own medicine. So sorry to see this end though.
Date: 17 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Hopefully closure comes to Bella as her future unfolds within the Cullen family.
Date: 17 Jan 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I loved π’π it! I hope Edward and Bella get pregnant in the epilogue.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Awe man I'm so disappointed this story is over! I hope you do a spin off or future takes of them! Especially Rosalie and Emmett's forary into the scene! I loved the way it ended though!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 10:17 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
:) loved this story
Date: 16 Jan 2022 9:12 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Love it! A bittersweet moment loved the ending but sad it is over.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 8:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
This was so good. So glad that Peter and the nasty Tia and Leah, got what they deserved!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 7:56 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Angela didn't do half as much to Peter as he deserved but I can hardly blame her for not wantin' to spend another minute in his putrid presence *gag!* Clever of her to get him to admit his crimes on film *high five!*
Edward, Bella and the rest of the Cullen family can finally breathe again and so can we LOL!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 6:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I was sort of hoping for a bit more torture for Peter.. Thanks for the update and sad to see this ioe winding up but I'm looking forward to the epi.. big hugs to ay.. stay in and warm my friend.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 6:13 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Really good story and lots of fun to read!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 5:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Omg that was without a doubt the best wrap up. Glad Peter got his punishment and billy too. What a great story loved it so sad to see it ending but can't wait for your next adventure. You are awesome much love thank you for all your stories
Date: 16 Jan 2022 5:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Loved it
Date: 16 Jan 2022 5:52 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Loved it
Date: 16 Jan 2022 5:49 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Too bad Angela didn't get a chance to carve him up a little more. He certainly deserved it. Maybe he will be the new boy toy in prison. One can only hope.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 5:39 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Wonder if Emmett and Rose will ever have anal sex??? Lol π
KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ’π”₯π‘
Date: 16 Jan 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I absolutely love this story!! ;)
Date: 16 Jan 2022 4:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Just keep posting your other stories we love this
Date: 16 Jan 2022 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I hate when stories end!!!
I love that they were able to take all of those horrible people down!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 Jan 2022 4:22 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Thanks for writing this! Loved reading it!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 4:06 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Loved it.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 3:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Well done!!!! You tied up the loose ends. Grusomely, but done none the less. Looks like every will get what they deserve. Great job. Can't wait for the epi.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 3:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I am so sad that this story is ending. I have truly enjoyed reading it. You have done an excellent job as always. Can't wait to read the epilogue and see what their future looks like.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 3:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I believe Peter should have endured a bit more torture, but it was a good start.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 3:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Loved it!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:42 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
loved the story, dissapointed in how abruptly it ended, seemed rushed like you got tired of writing it
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:34 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I'm so glad Peter and his dad got what they deserved. I'm sad that this is the last chapter before the epilogue, I'm gonna miss reading this story! You did an amazing job!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:31 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I xamt believe this is ending. I loved this story very much! I hope they get ass raped in prison
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
But But But.... I don't want it to end. Only consolation is I know you'll post more goodies for me to read soon. Hugs. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 16 Jan 2022 2:07 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I love when the karma bus comes speeding into town. Once again I am in love with your story and wish for it to never end. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 16 Jan 2022 1:50 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
So sad to see the story end, but what an ending!
thrilled at Peter's punishment from Angela. He deserved all he got. Daddy's money won't help him anymore.
please keep writing! I am addicted!
Date: 12 Jan 2022 8:34 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Well written and served the bastard right lol
Date: 11 Jan 2022 10:26 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Hell yeah I so cannot wait to read the next chapter
Date: 11 Jan 2022 11:15 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
OMG! Angela is the QUEEN! Nice little trap Peter walked himself into, voluntarily, I might add, which makes his downfall that much sweeter LOL!
Date: 11 Jan 2022 5:21 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Taze him good Angela.
Can this act of baiting Peter be considered entrapment?
Are the NDA and membership contracts legally binding in a court of law?
Hopefully Esme can put the screws to Tia and Leah, including their corrupt father.
That should also encompass the cops, politicians, and any other community leaders.
Date: 11 Jan 2022 4:29 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
I'm jealous Emmett gets to see the new Barman movie. I love how you worked the movie and Rob into your story..lol.. What I really love though is how Angela took care of Peter
Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:59 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Way to go angela!
Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 11 Jan 2022 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
OH HOW I LOVE ANGELA!!! I really wish we got to see more of her in the books and movies. Great chapter and I cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 10 Jan 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Bravo Mistress Angela!!! π΅π’«
Date: 10 Jan 2022 9:48 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Thank you for the update..it was worth the wait!! well done until you post again
Date: 10 Jan 2022 2:21 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Damn! Get em Angela! Thank you for the update. I know you have been busy at work. I hope that is slows down
Date: 10 Jan 2022 8:04 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Glad Edward has great people on his side. Love Angela putting him in his place. Glad Jasper was cleared. Tia and Leah need to go down HARD.
Date: 10 Jan 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Way it go Peter is going to regret everything Jajaja
Date: 10 Jan 2022 2:38 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Ouch!!!!! WoooHooooo!
Date: 10 Jan 2022 2:15 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Oh damn. I love it.
Date: 10 Jan 2022 2:11 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Oh my!!!!!!!! I was so excited to get this update. Loving this story. Oh, I hope Angela makes Peter pay. I also can't wait to see what happens to Tia and Leah. I also want to know WHO is finally going to get the wrath of Esme Cullen!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2022 1:21 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Yessss! Get his ass
Date: 10 Jan 2022 1:04 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
wtg he is getting what he deserves
Date: 10 Jan 2022 12:40 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Oh, to be a fly on the wall in that room. Give it to him Angela!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2022 12:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Love it looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 10 Jan 2022 12:18 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Love your writing.... this chapter was worth the wait. Can't wait to read more of your writing
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:53 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Finally Peter is getting what he deserves. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
OMG ,Love it can't wait until Friday LOL .Wonderful story great writing ! Thank you for writing your story best story so far .
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:41 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
It's Time for Peter to get his!!! Hope you are staying warm we have freezing rain right now turning into snow sometime today and we had snow on Thursday. Stay safe and warm!!!!! KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ‘π’π”₯
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:41 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Oh please update asap! Peter has finally come into his due!
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:37 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Confession on tape. Nice!
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:09 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Peter is so stupid. He should know, you should always read everything before you sign it. And admitting to what he did to Bella means she did not violate the NDA she signed. Now for him to get the punishment he deserved by another Dom.
Date: 09 Jan 2022 9:08 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Love it!!! Can't wait til Peter is behind bars!!
Date: 09 Jan 2022 8:54 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Oh how I love Mistress Angela and her electric cattle prod.
A taped confession with the jerk signing without reading anything, couldn't be better.
'Billy in jail. Tia and Leah going to jail.
loved it!
Date: 09 Jan 2022 8:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
YES!!!!! I love it!!!
Date: 09 Jan 2022 8:30 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
"He had it coming, he had it coming. He only got what he deserved!"
Date: 09 Jan 2022 8:30 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
That's gonna feel great for Peter, the take down. Thanks for sharing!