Date: 09 Jan 2022 8:30 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
I like Angela. This isn't enough of what Peter deserves.
Date: 09 Jan 2022 4:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I love these stories can't wait for more the long wait is killing me.
Date: 09 Jan 2022 2:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I hope you continue with this story. I just binged read it all night. Oh, the agony of a cliffhanger. I look forward to the next installment.
Date: 04 Jan 2022 8:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Tia and Leah are in trouble! They lied about being with Peter. And now they will unknowingly help to catch him. Edward and Bella are so sexy together, inside the playroom or out.
Date: 04 Jan 2022 8:05 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Peter maqde his first mistake giving Tia his real name. Good thing Tia has a big mouth and Felix oveheard her. I can't believe Peter thought Bella lied about what happened, like he thought she enjoyed what he did to her.
Date: 04 Jan 2022 7:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I feel bad for Emmett knowing he brought Jasper into their lives and Edward's home. I loved how Rose intentionally mispronounced the reporter's name, ""bitchy" instead of "Betsy."
Date: 04 Jan 2022 6:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Wow, I never thought it would be him. Wonder if Jasper knows anything about the kind of monster his step-brother is.
Date: 04 Jan 2022 4:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Nahuewl sounds like a good attorney. He thinks he has a way around the agreement. "He" violated their contract. It's too bad she can't make the NDA void.
Date: 04 Jan 2022 3:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I loved how protective Esme was of Bella. Smart of her to research BDSM so she would know what her son is involved in.
Date: 04 Jan 2022 2:31 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
"He" has had too much control over her. Thankfully her Dominant has brought her back and made her feel safe and confident again.
Date: 02 Jan 2022 5:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I hope he gets someone that looks like Bella and she can kick Peter on the snow balls Jajaja
Date: 02 Jan 2022 5:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I hope he gets someone that looks like Bella and she can kick Peter on the snow balls Jajaja
Date: 21 Dec 2021 4:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I love this! I love them! I love Kings!! ;)
Date: 20 Dec 2021 5:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Peter, Tia and Leah...a perfect trio of trouble with a capital T!
Date: 20 Dec 2021 3:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I can't wait to read more soon. I hope that the setup works.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2021 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I haven't figured out who will be the bait once Bella has been switched out of the trap.
If Peter has been caught lying about his alibi, he has committed a falsified act.
Tia and Leah are guilty of being an Accessory After the Fact.
Edward's plan better not put Bella anywhere near Peter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2021 2:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I love it so much now I can't wait to see who will be waiting for Peter
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
not enough will we be getting another before Christmas as a present? If not I hope you have a very merry Christmas
Date: 20 Dec 2021 12:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2021 10:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 19 Dec 2021 8:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
The Whitlock family needs to go down, as well, for coverin' for that heineous bastard...enter Esme Cullen who always keeps her promise and I can't wait!
Tia and Leah more than deserve to go down with him, too. As for the substitute Bella, no clue who it might be but the shock to Peter will be quite entertainin', I'm sure!
Date: 19 Dec 2021 7:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Wondering who Edward is going to get to switch Bella with at Dark Sensation??? Also we are surprised that Tia and Leah didn't make a scene at bowling the night before!!
KEEP WRITING & MERRY CHRISTMAS π βοΈβ€οΈπ’π”₯π’π‘π…
Date: 19 Dec 2021 7:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Glad our favorite couple are getting closer. Tia/Leah really need to go down. Such Skanks. Peter def needs a taste of his own medicine. Love to give him the same amount of slashes he gave B..... and/or make him someone's biatch in prison. Wonder if Jasper is in the dark about everything. I hope so.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2021 5:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Love Love it ! Happy Holidays And Happy and Healthy and Safe NEW YEAR To All !
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Ooohhhh....I cannot wait to see the madman explode & the 2 skanks sink.
Date: 19 Dec 2021 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Edward setting a trap is exciting
Date: 19 Dec 2021 3:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Master has a plan... YES!!
Thank you for the great update.
Merry Christmas!
Date: 19 Dec 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Excellent. Rolling my hands together.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2021 3:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Can't wait for the slut sisters to get what is coming to them.
Date: 19 Dec 2021 2:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2021 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Ohhh. I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 19 Dec 2021 2:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Ooooo, I can't wait to see what Edward has planned and with who. I hope Peter gets what he deserves before the police get there to arrest him.
Date: 19 Dec 2021 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I hope Peter and the Green gals get what's due to them soon. Thanks for the update. laters my friend, Pam B.
Date: 19 Dec 2021 2:21 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
So Edward has a domme lined uptown put Peter in his place, he? Looking forward to it
Date: 19 Dec 2021 2:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Love protective Edward. Can't wait for Tia and Leah to go down with Peter. What fun it will be!
Date: 17 Dec 2021 1:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Not surprised Bella went Yellow at the sound of a camera even though she trusts Edward with her life. Perhaps he should have discussed its use beforehand *sigh!*
Felix has good instincts and I can't wait to see what tailin' those two sluts delivers LOL!
Date: 13 Dec 2021 6:17 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Yummy first session. Ugh Tia and Leah are such skanks. Glad Felix was there to overhear.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Friday here yet ! LOL ! Love your story. Great writing .
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2021 11:17 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Will they put a stop to him before he gets to Bella
I love it
Date: 11 Dec 2021 5:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Great chapter, thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 4:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Fucking Tia and Leah!!!! The playroom scene.....hot.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 4:21 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
The slutty bridesmaids may just make it easier for dear sweet Peter to be found!
Date: 11 Dec 2021 3:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I love how cohesive they all are as a family.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 10:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
FANTASTIC!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Tia and Leah may be the best link Felix and Sam will get to find Peter.
Let's hope he is found before anyone else is hurt.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Tia and Leah may be the best link Felix and Sam will get to find Peter.
Let's hope he is found before anyone else is hurt.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Tia and Leah may be the best link Felix and Sam will get to find Peter.
Let's hope he is found before anyone else is hurt.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Tia and Leah may be the best link Felix and Sam will get to find Peter.
Let's hope he is found before anyone else is hurt.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 5:57 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 4:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
`you know I don't know why Rose is putting up with how the 2 of them treat Bella, she's is her best friend and had been most of their lives. I get Bella really hasn't said anything but how shallow they are they must have made nasty comments about Bella to Rose. And if they have why hasn't she set them strait, or at least got them out of her life.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Now you know how we feel!!! Lol π What about Jasper and Alice?? Wondering if Tia and Leah will get what's coming to them?? Although they should get it from Bella and Rose but it's fiction. KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ”₯π‘π’π…
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Oh, this is getting good!
Date: 11 Dec 2021 2:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Glad Felix and Sam are alert
Date: 11 Dec 2021 2:09 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Yes! Hope all 3 are picked up
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 1:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Great chapter!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
I hope Leah and Tia get busted
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2021 1:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
so good
Date: 11 Dec 2021 1:08 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
As usual loved it.
'Bella and Sam too steamy for words.
I really hope Felix and Sam bring down Peter, Tia and Leah.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 11 Dec 2021 12:58 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Oh my!!!!!! Master and Isabella had an amazing time. I hope they catch Tia and Leah with Peter.
Date: 11 Dec 2021 12:56 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Loved it :D
Date: 10 Dec 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Thanks
Date: 10 Dec 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Thanks
Date: 08 Dec 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 06 Dec 2021 6:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Short and Sweet. Love that Aro came to support them. Hope Em doesn't beat himself up too much.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Something tells me that Mr. Peter will have a hissy fit. Then start devising a plan to get access to the new Mrs. Cullen. Probably recruiting the assistance of the devious and jealous Leah and Tia. But they are all underestimating Mr. and Mrs. Cullen, Mrs. and Mrs. Cullen, Emmett and Rosalie, and Sam and team. Dun, dun, dun.
Date: 04 Dec 2021 4:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
He will probably lose the rest of his mind. Sorry it's late but Christmas parade last night and today equals busy day. Lol π Ok so does Jasper know what he's step brother did or will he find out like everyone else did and does Alice know? KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ‘π’π”₯ π…
Date: 04 Dec 2021 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
OHHH Sexy time ahead !!!
Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 04 Dec 2021 1:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Oh boy! I can only imagine that announcement lights a fire under Peter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Will Jasper and Emmett's friendship take a hit?
Rosalie was a delight while answering, Betsy, the reporter's question.
Aro's surprise visit was a bonus for the family.
Peter's going to mess up after learning of their marriage. His rage will expose him.
Will we hear about Billy Black's legal troubles?
Date: 04 Dec 2021 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Esme and her grandchildren comments aren't going to stop until she has some grandkids.
Date: 04 Dec 2021 12:48 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I'M EXCITED!! ;)
Date: 04 Dec 2021 12:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2021 11:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Love it
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2021 10:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
he will noy be happy or will Black
Date: 03 Dec 2021 10:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
That went alot calmer than I thought. Will we get Peter's POV ? Will Edward ir Emmett confront Jasper? Do Jasper and Alice know about what Peter did?
Date: 03 Dec 2021 9:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Will Peter do something stupid when they bring him in for questioning and get himself arrested? Let's hope so!
Date: 03 Dec 2021 8:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I'm sure Jasper and Alice will be appalled to hear about Peter and, as for Peter, he'll throw an enormous tantrum if his past is anything to go by...hopefully with lots of witnesses LOL!
Date: 03 Dec 2021 7:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I think a Peter & Billy pov or outtake is needed. Peter will be livid. It's one thing to go after the gf of Edward Cullen. But now his wife? He may as well concede defeat...but he won't. Too cocky.
Date: 03 Dec 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Thanks!!
Date: 03 Dec 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
I'm sure Peter is wrecking his apartment as he listens. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2021 4:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Holy Shit ! Love it can't wait till Friday !
Date: 29 Nov 2021 12:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
HOLYSH*T!! O.O
Date: 28 Nov 2021 4:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Well I was soooo wrong. Lol I love this story!
Date: 27 Nov 2021 10:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
OMG Peter never entered my mind!!!! Do hope Jasper has no idea.
Love Mama Bear Esme.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2021 10:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Wow!!!!! I would have never guessed. And poor Emmett, now feeling guilty about his friendship with his stepbrother. Wow. Great chapter.
Date: 27 Nov 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Wow didnβt see that coming
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
well I was surprised but I don't try to guess
Date: 27 Nov 2021 10:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Absolutely LOVING this story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I look forward to every update. Have a wonderful week!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2021 5:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
WWWWHHHHAAAATTTT!!!!! I was sooo far off. I absolutely love the twists and turns in this story.
Date: 27 Nov 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Ok I totally knew it was jasper step brother but not the name
Date: 27 Nov 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Loved it can't wait for more!!!
Date: 27 Nov 2021 3:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
I guessed it was Peter, after you printed Jake and james names as working for Edward. One you didn't make Alice and Jasper part of the family or even close friends, I knew it had to connected to Jasper and he was the only one I could think of was Peter, I don't remember if you said his name just that Jasper was in town to help his step-brother move from Seattle so I figured it was Peter, because in the books he's the only male that was friends with just Jasper.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2021 3:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
OMG! this keeps getting better and better! I want to see vengeful Esme. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2021 12:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Love it!
Date: 26 Nov 2021 11:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
That was an awesome twist. I would have never thought of Peter. You are an amazing writer. I can't wait til the next chapter.
Date: 26 Nov 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Thank you