Date: 26 Nov 2021 9:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Well we were not even close to being right. Oh well at least Toys for Tots will receive a lot of toys from us. Ok so some of us are confused when did Emmett bring Peter to Bella condo?? KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ‘π’π”₯π¦
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2021 8:58 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Reading βhisβ name finally puts the entire situation into perspective.
Unfortunately Jasper is connected to this monster.
Love Esme and her connections.
Date: 26 Nov 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Wow guessed it right after a little thinking can't wait for next update to see what happens
Date: 26 Nov 2021 6:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Peter!!!!!!! Wow, Jasper's step brother. I hope Jasper doesn't know anything about it. I'm surprised that Peter didn't use Jasper to get information and get closer to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2021 6:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Oh my now we know who "he" is what will happen next
Date: 26 Nov 2021 4:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
I did NOT see that coming! No wonder she was so uneasy around Alice and Jasper poor Bella
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2021 4:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Now we will see how good detective Miller is at doing his job.
Date: 26 Nov 2021 4:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
It had to be somebody close to the family. Peter's days are numbered.
Date: 26 Nov 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2021 4:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Damn. I had forgotten all about Peter Whitlock.
Bravo to those who guessed.
Any chance of a future outtake of the committee hearing where Peter tries & fails to dominate? Excellent
Date: 26 Nov 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Peter Whitlock?? Wow.. I wouldn't guess him in a million years! LOL
So the name is out, lets catch the bast@rd!
Loved it!
Date: 26 Nov 2021 3:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Well that was a surprise! I never would have guessed.
I can't wait for next Friday!
loving mama bear Esme amd how intimidated Tyler got.
Date: 26 Nov 2021 2:50 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Jason Jenks?? Is he her horrible ex dominant?
Date: 26 Nov 2021 2:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Poor Tyler got a first hand taste of what it's like to go up against Esme in mama bear mode and it wasn pretty LOL!
Finally gettin' closer to payback, especially now that Esme knows whose family to destroy...and you know she will *woo hoo!*
Date: 26 Nov 2021 2:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
sniffs sniffs you made it peter i was hopeing it was gonna be one of my other guesses.
great story even if you did make peter "him". My service dog cough jasperhalewhitlock cough gives ya big yellow labby eyes "please don't make my namesake be involved sug."
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2021 1:30 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Holy shit! I completely forgot about Peter! Can't wait to see what happens to Billy next
Date: 26 Nov 2021 1:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
I wouldn't have guessed Peter Whitlock. This is such an amazing story.
Date: 26 Nov 2021 1:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
I wouldn't have guessed Peter Whitlock. This is such an amazing story.
Date: 21 Nov 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Ooh yeah hope Nahuel can help them. Love their real wedding night
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Hopefully Mr Padro is worth the money they are paying him to get this resolved.
Date: 21 Nov 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Absolutely love this story. Can't wait to see "him" get what's coming to him.
Date: 21 Nov 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Absolutely love this story. Can't wait to see "him" get what's coming to him.
Date: 21 Nov 2021 3:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
You are SUCH a tease!! LOL Still no name.
#dyinghere #wanttoknownow
Date: 21 Nov 2021 3:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Oh, I just knew I was gonna love Nahuel LOL! Had he not come up the the loophole, I was wonderin' what would happen if Bella just returned the money!?!
Date: 21 Nov 2021 3:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Ahhh,, it helps so much that Edward knew "him" before Bella. That way Bella is not breaking a NDA by saying who it is. Edward is not under said NDA and as long as it's not Bella relaying the information she can't be in breech?...
Date: 21 Nov 2021 6:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Ohh good away around the paperwork
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2021 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Alright, Nahuel. Looks like someone's future is about to shine. Great update.
Date: 20 Nov 2021 11:30 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
I hope they can beat "him"
Date: 20 Nov 2021 2:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Oh very good! Heart fail when he said no way to break it
Date: 20 Nov 2021 1:40 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Hopefully Nahuel will find a way to get rid of the fucker.
Date: 20 Nov 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
GAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!! the suspense of finding out who HE is is killing me!!!!!!!!! cant wait for next week great chapter as always and have a happy Thanksgiving
Date: 20 Nov 2021 5:50 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Woohooo!!
For some reason, I did not get this update in my email. Nor saw it on FB.
Thanks for a wonderful chapter. :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Yes I hope it works
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2021 5:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
The club comes to the rescue.
Esme has ways of keeping her boys on their best behavior, hahaha.
Date: 20 Nov 2021 5:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
A loophole yess I like him
Date: 20 Nov 2021 4:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Ok so I am speaking as a lieutenant and the assistant chief brought it up at the same time but Riley broke HIPPA because even though Bella told Rileyshe told him in the ambulance or even in the club he still can't tell anyone only the police until he get subpoena and is on the stand or at the police station. That's my hardest thing to do when I work the ambulance because I know a lot of people and there families. Also Brian said you didn't give us a warning to get the hoses. Lol π
HAPPY THANKSGIVING π¦ & KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ‘π’π”₯
Date: 20 Nov 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Ooh....HE is going down!
Date: 20 Nov 2021 3:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
We NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Will we find out how much Edward made the retainer check out for?????
Date: 20 Nov 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Love the work around the NDA
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2021 2:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Good for Nahuel for having a plan. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 20 Nov 2021 2:12 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Thank you
Date: 20 Nov 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2021 1:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Love it so glad there is a way around the NDA
Date: 20 Nov 2021 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Gotta love the loop holes. 1
just love this this story!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2021 12:31 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Love it can't wait till Friday ! Lol
Date: 15 Nov 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 14 Nov 2021 10:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I can't wait to see Nahuel in action! Please update soon. I want more momma Esme against HIM.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
How will Nahual undo a NDA? Is coercion a reason to believe it will be reversed in a court of law?
Let Esme take out this family, hahaha.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2021 12:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Oh, I am pretty sure Nahuel was bursting at the seams from that phone call. Get ready for the shit to hit the fan.
Date: 13 Nov 2021 10:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Next chapter soon pleeeeeeeaaaasssse
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Thank you for the update..Well done.I can't wait to see what happens next.. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Thank you for the update..Well done.I can't wait to see what happens next.. until you post again
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Glad the family is behind them 100%. Nahuel sounds like he'll make a great addition to the team.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Getting so good!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I can't get enough of this story. Each chapter gets better and better. Love it!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 12:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I hope they are able to fine a way around the NDA and that they can throw "him" under the bus... and it's okay if that bus has to back up and go forward several times..
Date: 13 Nov 2021 11:57 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Love this! ;)
Date: 13 Nov 2021 7:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Next week is going to be sooooo good!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 6:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
This was such a fantastic chapter. Thank you for sharing...
Date: 13 Nov 2021 6:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Next week is going to be sooooo good!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Oh man I'm almost all caught up :(
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
How did no one see the rings!
What are the double mint twins up to!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:39 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Bye bye Billy Boy!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:30 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I wonder what the job is?
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Great chapter. Can't wait to see if there is a way out of the nda and the big announcement of their marriage which will not be well received by 3 people,
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:17 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
How exciting!!
and we have two James? The James and Victoria that are Rose's parent and this James...
Date: 13 Nov 2021 5:06 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Too funny what happened to Billy!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Loving this story.
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:38 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
So glad she told him
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
She has to tell Edward HAS TO!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Oohhhh.....sparks are going to fly. Cannot wait for "him" to be d$strayed as well as Billy>
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:29 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I hope the bimbos are on the other boat.
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Jason - false name or new character? I don't remember a Jason
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:13 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Was birth control ever mentioned? I don't think so. Should we assume they are covered?
Date: 13 Nov 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Bahahahah that ending
Date: 13 Nov 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Another great chapter!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 3:38 AM Title: Chapter Nine
So proud of B for sticking up for herself and loved the ending and everything Edward had to say. Was expecting "him" to be James but that's a no so maybe Jacob? We shall see :)
Date: 13 Nov 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Ok so some of us are not lawyers but since "him" broke the BDSM contract and left Bella for died the NDA contract would be void?? I mean he went back on his word so Bella went back on her word???
KEEP WRITING βοΈ π’β€οΈπ‘π’π”₯
Date: 13 Nov 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter Eight
Damn it. I was hoping he wouldn't show up just yet. And sounds like he is coo coo for Cocoa Puffs! I wonder if he was Jaspers relative mentioned earlier? Hmmmm
Date: 13 Nov 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter Seven
I just live the visuals you share with each chapter!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 3:01 AM Title: Chapter Six
I say they would be switches lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2021 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Now it's time to put a game plan together and take "him" down and his family too
Date: 13 Nov 2021 2:00 AM Title: Chapter Five
I'm intrigued to see how R&E react to their instant deep connection. I hope they are supportive!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:52 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Oh, I do love it when Esme goes all Mama Bear and can't wait to see the considerable damage she inflicts on "his" family when she gets the green light!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Four
There chemistry is π”₯ felling so jealous lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
a little slow moving but I can't wait for more
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:33 AM Title: Chapter Three
Whew we that was fast! And I π‘πΌ Am π‘πΌ HERE π‘πΌ FOR π‘πΌ IT π‘πΌ
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:32 AM Title: Chapter Two
What a beautiful home
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Manuel seems to be just the guy for the job.
Funny how things seem to workout.
fun wedding night to be had. Great dat after the wedding to come.
love the story amd can't wait until next Friday!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 12:57 AM Title: Chapter Two
What a beautiful home
Date: 13 Nov 2021 12:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Don't mess with Esme. She's fierce!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter One
So excited to start this story! So far I'm intrigued!!
Date: 13 Nov 2021 12:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Excellent update!!!