Date: 31 Oct 2021 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
This may have had triggers for readers but you were graceful in how you presented their story. So many different issues you covered, divorce, depression, death but you get them thru in the end. Lovely story Lady Good Witch. Happy Halloween. Ajfflady.
Date: 28 Oct 2021 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
:) loved this story
Date: 20 Oct 2021 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update..well done..They are moving forward with their lives. I'm happy for them & their new beginings. Until you post again
Date: 03 Oct 2021 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Moving across the country and leaving behind all the family and friends is very traumatic for everyone. I know because I did it twice.
Date: 24 Sep 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update..things are looking up for Edward & Bella🤗 A fresh start..well done..until you post again
Date: 09 Sep 2021 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
And I'm sobbing. That was beautiful. And I'm glad they're forgiving Jake. It only hurts them to hang on to the hate. Love this fic!
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the updates. well done. until you post again
Date: 28 Aug 2021 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awww. I love that last bit. So sweet.
Date: 20 Aug 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
So sweet. And I love the way they handled Jake.
Date: 07 Aug 2021 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update..Well done. They are on their way to healing..until you post again
Date: 07 Aug 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the steps he is taking for himself and that Bella does want a second chance. Great update
Date: 07 Aug 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I really love this and the direction you've taken their journey.
Date: 02 Aug 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for the update .,Well done. Edward is moving on good for him. Bella is there to help him . Until you post again
Date: 23 Jul 2021 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
They need each other if they still love each other work on this hurt and Edward is right perhaps another job or another town. Jake needs to be hung.
Date: 17 Jul 2021 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
You can't help but want the best for Edward when you read him. This is an amazing fic.
Date: 09 Jul 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this. The road to recovery. And Bella's love to support him. As always, you do a beautiful job writing a difficult subject.
Date: 03 Jul 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
So sad. Poor Edward
Date: 03 Jul 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Edward. Hopefully he can get some help.
Date: 02 Jul 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update..wow what a miss understanding..welll done..until you post again
Date: 02 Jul 2021 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awww man. Poor Edward. My heart breaks for him. And everyone who loves him. And he still wants to do it. I know this must be a tough story to write but you do it beautifully. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 27 Jun 2021 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
As that was sad. Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 27 Jun 2021 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
As that was sad. Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 26 Jun 2021 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Such a hard subject but beautifuly written. My heart breaks for their pain.
Date: 25 Jun 2021 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
So good and so heartbreaking.
Date: 20 Jun 2021 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really hate Jacob and Sam is a coward for not finding him negligent in watching Vanessa. That was his job to take care of the little girl but know he has to go play with his friends and let her get away and climb that cliff then jump. It is his fault.
Date: 20 Jun 2021 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really hate Jacob and Sam is a coward for not finding him negligent in watching Vanessa. That was his job to take care of the little girl but know he has to go play with his friends and let her get away and climb that cliff then jump. It is his fault.
Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for the update..well done..its sdo sad to lose anyone you love but a child or a parent jhas to be the worst..until you post again
Date: 19 Jun 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hard for him and Bella! Bella has to feel the guilt for letting jacob keep watch over her
Date: 19 Jun 2021 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh man... heartbreaking. Why do I have a bad feeling he's going to do something to Jacob. I was kind of pissed at Jacob's seemingly lack of remorse from the last chapter. Anyway... my heart breaks for Edward.
Date: 18 Jun 2021 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is so sad ! I wish Jacob was the one to die!
Date: 18 Jun 2021 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Why on earth would Bella divorce Edward and then get with that disgusting dog. He should never have been allowed to watch Vanessa. Bella knew he was irresponsible and a sorry excuse for a man. Edward was a hundred times better man.
Date: 18 Jun 2021 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
what a tool is this Jake.
Is beyond me, that he doesn't feel guilty, even a little for what happened
Date: 11 Jun 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I don't blame him going after Jake
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Heartbreaking. But still with you. Very good story.
Date: 10 Jun 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for the update..welll done..very sad..until you post again
Date: 10 Jun 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hate you killed off our girl! Not an accident is my opinion
Date: 10 Jun 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is so sad. To have to bury a child would be one of the hardest things anyone would ever have to do. I really hope Jacob goes to jail but I doubt if he will since it's on the Rez. They always take up for each other. But he was very negligent. Hopefully Bella will realize what a scumbag he is and stay away from him.I don't really see how she could divorce Edward then get with Him. She must be a little crazy herself.
Date: 09 Jun 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think,,, that perhaps she was pushed and not jumped.
Date: 04 Jun 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Woah. Didn't see that coming. Heartbreaking. Excellent fic!
Date: 04 Jun 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.
Date: 02 Jun 2021 7:07 AM Title: Prologue
WOW I dont know how I feel
Date: 30 May 2021 3:14 PM Title: Prologue
Poor Edward. Looking forward to more
Date: 29 May 2021 6:41 PM Title: Prologue
So many questions!!!!!!