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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 09 Sep 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2021 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

And I'm sobbing. That was beautiful. And I'm glad they're forgiving Jake. It only hurts them to hang on to the hate. Love this fic!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the updates.  well done.  until you post again

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2021 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awww. I love that last bit. So sweet. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2021 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 20 Aug 2021 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

So sweet. And I love the way they handled Jake. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2021 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 07 Aug 2021 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2021 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..Well done.  They are on their way to healing..until you post again

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved the steps he is taking for himself and that Bella does want a second chance. Great update 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

I really love this and the direction you've taken their journey. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you for the update .,Well  done.  Edward is moving on good for him.  Bella is there to help him . Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

They need each other if they still love each other work on this hurt and Edward is right perhaps another job or another town. Jake needs to be hung.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

You can't help but want the best for Edward when you read him. This is an amazing fic. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love this. The road to recovery. And Bella's love to support him. As always, you do a beautiful job writing a difficult subject. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

So sad.  Poor Edward 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Edward. Hopefully he can get some help.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update..wow what a miss understanding..welll done..until you post again

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2021 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awww man. Poor Edward. My heart breaks for him. And everyone who loves him. And he still wants to do it. I know this must be a tough story to write but you do it beautifully. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2021 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2021 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

As that was sad. Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2021 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

As that was sad. Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

So sad.... 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2021 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

Such a hard subject but beautifuly written. My heart breaks for their pain. 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2021 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

So good and so heartbreaking. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2021 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

So very sad.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2021 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2021 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

I really hate Jacob and Sam is a coward for not finding him negligent in watching Vanessa. That was his job to take care of the little girl but know he has to go play with his friends and let her get away and climb that cliff then jump. It is his fault.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2021 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

I really hate Jacob and Sam is a coward for not finding him negligent in watching Vanessa. That was his job to take care of the little girl but know he has to go play with his friends and let her get away and climb that cliff then jump. It is his fault.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update..well done..its sdo sad to lose anyone you love but a child or a parent jhas to be the worst..until you post again 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hard for him and Bella! Bella has to feel the guilt for letting jacob keep watch over her

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh man... heartbreaking. Why do I have a bad feeling he's going to do something to Jacob. I was kind of pissed at Jacob's seemingly lack of remorse from the last chapter. Anyway... my heart breaks for Edward. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is so sad ! I wish Jacob was the one to die! 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

Why on earth would Bella divorce Edward and then get with that disgusting dog. He should never have been allowed to watch Vanessa. Bella knew he was irresponsible and a sorry excuse for a man. Edward was a hundred times better man.

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

what a tool is this Jake.
Is beyond me, that he doesn't feel guilty, even a little for what happened

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

I don't blame him going after Jake 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

Heartbreaking. But still with you. Very good story. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for the update..welll done..very sad..until you post again

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

I hate you killed off our girl! Not an accident is my opinion 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is so sad. To have to bury a child would be one of the hardest things anyone would ever have to do. I really hope Jacob goes to jail but I doubt if he will since it's on the Rez. They always take up for each other. But he was very negligent. Hopefully Bella will realize what a scumbag he is and stay away from him.I don't really see how she could divorce Edward then get with Him. She must be a little crazy herself. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think,,, that perhaps she was pushed and not jumped. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 5:48 PM Title: Prologue

Sad beginning.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad... 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Woah. Didn't see that coming. Heartbreaking. Excellent fic!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 7:07 AM Title: Prologue

WOW  I dont know how I feel

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 3:14 PM Title: Prologue

Poor Edward.  Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 6:41 PM Title: Prologue

So many questions!!!!!!

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