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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

I don't blame him going after Jake 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

Heartbreaking. But still with you. Very good story. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for the update..welll done..very sad..until you post again

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

I hate you killed off our girl! Not an accident is my opinion 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is so sad. To have to bury a child would be one of the hardest things anyone would ever have to do. I really hope Jacob goes to jail but I doubt if he will since it's on the Rez. They always take up for each other. But he was very negligent. Hopefully Bella will realize what a scumbag he is and stay away from him.I don't really see how she could divorce Edward then get with Him. She must be a little crazy herself. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think,,, that perhaps she was pushed and not jumped. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2021 5:48 PM Title: Prologue

Sad beginning.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad... 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Woah. Didn't see that coming. Heartbreaking. Excellent fic!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Never could stand Jacob. I hope He gets locked up for child endangerment and manslaughter. Bella should have just tried to make her marriage work instead of running around with the scum. She should feel guilty for allowing Jacob to watch her when she knows he acts like a child himself. Now the little girl is paying for her stupidity in allowing Jacob to watch her. Hope she comes to her senses and stops seeing him.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 7:07 AM Title: Prologue

WOW  I dont know how I feel

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 3:14 PM Title: Prologue

Poor Edward.  Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 6:41 PM Title: Prologue

So many questions!!!!!!

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