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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2022 3:04 AM Title: Connections

Who is the Commish?????? I hope you update soon,  please!!!!!

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2022 8:25 PM Title: Connections

Thank you for this chapter! There is so much going on, I am very curious how it will all turn out!

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 10:13 PM Title: Connections

Bella is pissed....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 12:44 PM Title: Connections

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 6:00 PM Title: Connections

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.  Is Jake in trouble?  I can't wait to see what's going on with him..until you post again..What's going on with the baby?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2022 7:01 PM Title: Another Look

Thank you for the update.well done..I can't wait to see if Bella goes to a differnt doctor to get a second opinion..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2022 12:51 PM Title: Another Look

:) 



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:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2022 3:41 AM Title: Dinner

Loved it can't wait for more ’

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2022 6:35 PM Title: Going Back

Maybe the Cap is worried YOU WILL SOLVE THE CASE.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2022 3:54 PM Title: Dinner

Ok. So I am assuming that Aro is the "boss"  in this chapter. Also Aro and his crew are the ones killing the girls. Bella is important to Edward so Aro wants her for some reason.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2022 1:23 PM Title: Dinner

:) 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2022 12:45 PM Title: Foolish

wow

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2022 11:59 PM Title: Going Back

I hope we get more on the murders.  Or maybe an Edward POV.  

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 2:31 PM Title: Going Back

Great chapter as always, until you post again x

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 10:26 AM Title: Going Back

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 9:31 AM Title: Going Back

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 1:55 AM Title: Going Back

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 2:25 PM Title: Miracle

Loved it I didn't see her getting pregnant coming. 



Author's Response:

Now shes Edward's forever

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 1:19 PM Title: Miracle

Bella should tell Edward about the baby due date confusion of the doctor.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

More will be revealed in an E POV

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2021 3:35 AM Title: Miracle

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2021 1:22 AM Title: Miracle

:) 



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:)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2021 12:46 AM Title: Miracle

OMG ! love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 8:56 PM Title: Miracle

Thank you so much for this amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 3:47 PM Title: Miracle

Why does Edward keep getting called away from Bella?  Does Alice not "see" any of this? Does Bella's dream mean the baby is going to be a true vampire??? Will her pregnancy go normal or rapid?? 



Author's Response:

A lot will be revealed when I get to do a Edward pov. Alice is human in this story. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 4:14 PM Title: Surprise

OH My!! Thank you for the update..well done..What is Agent Swan going to do now?  I can't wait for the next chapter..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! 

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 3:17 AM Title: Surprise

I am totally intrigued by this story.  I am still confused about Heidi though.  Sounds like she is pregnant too! Thanks for writing and giving me great stories to read. No nitpicking here, just gratitude. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!! Hope you stay on to read to the end!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 1:33 PM Title: Surprise

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 2:45 AM Title: Surprise

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2021 3:04 PM Title: Surprise

Pregnant!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:48 PM Title: Regrets

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:48 PM Title: Regrets

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 8:18 PM Title: Regrets

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 3:22 PM Title: Regrets

Edward is not human.  Is he a vampire?  If so, could a rogue vampire be killing the people?  Making it look like Edward is doing it. 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 1:10 PM Title: Regrets

Loved it!! Can't wait to read more and find out what Bree meant by her saying she was right? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2021 8:26 PM Title: Foolish

Oh my!!!!! They had sex. Are they mated????? If so, what does this mean for the both of them???  



Author's Response:

answers will come soon! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2021 8:40 AM Title: Foolish

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2021 12:24 AM Title: Foolish

:) 



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:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2021 11:27 AM Title: Chicago

Agee thank Thorne is a pain in her ass pun intended. Let her do her job these men are getting in her way!! Hopefully she will find out who Bree was looking at from her flash drive. Great update can't wait to read more. Thank you 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2021 5:28 PM Title: Chicago

Loved can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2021 4:25 AM Title: Chicago

Why did she have to go through the FBI???  Why does she have to go to the headquarters???

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 3:20 PM Title: Chicago

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 3:16 PM Title: Encounter

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2021 2:26 AM Title: Encounter

What is up with Heidi????? 



Author's Response:

Bunches!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2021 2:12 PM Title: Encounter

Loved it but now with this update I have lots of questions lol 

will he get a POV in this story? 



Author's Response:

Yes eventually! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:55 PM Title: Encounter

Loved it can't wait for more..



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2021 12:01 AM Title: Another One

I'm in love with both of your stories! Please I'm begging you do not make your chapters smaller, the wait is more than worth it! Small chapters always feel like previews to me little taunting crumbs to follow and entice. Have a great day! :)



Author's Response:

Totally understand! I like long chapters to! It just takes awhile for an update.. I hear you though!

Reviewer: Gyzou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2021 1:20 PM Title: Prologue

j'aime les longs chapitres 

That was a great update can't wait to read more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2021 4:02 PM Title: Another One

I personally like long chapters. I love this and can't wait to read more. Thank you 



Author's Response:

Same! Thank you

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2021 2:22 PM Title: Another One

Oh my.  Thank you for the update..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2021 10:43 PM Title: Another One

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2021 12:55 AM Title: Another One

What in the world? Can't wait to find out more about Edward.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 1:51 AM Title: Stitches

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2021 12:14 AM Title: Stitches

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2021 8:00 PM Title: Stitches

Sorry about the past review my age is a problem sometimes. Short term memore is bad as you get to 75.  I been where you are kids home etc. That is the busy part of your life.

 

Good story..



Author's Response: It's fine. I understand. Im actually trying to write a few then post so there won't be such a long wait.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2021 4:17 PM Title: Stitches

I am thinking that Carlisle called Edward.  What did he mean that she was the one? Have they been looking for her/someone?  If so. Why?



Author's Response:

defintely have been looking for someone ;)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2021 2:07 PM Title: Stitches

Short but good. Hmm so maybe he killed the others thinking they had been his mate? 

Can't wait to read the next update and see what happens next. Will Edward get a pov? 



Author's Response: there will definitely be a Edward PoV in the future.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2021 6:44 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen

ugh.. I forget where we are when you stories go slow.



Author's Response: This story was updated last week. Please check dates before reviewing. I have stated on both of my stories that Im a mom, wife, and I also work so I try to write when I can. I also said this story will have slower updates because I plan to finish Before I Die first. You can always wait till story is complete before reading. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2021 5:54 PM Title: Missing

Nasty job essential but really hard.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 8:22 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 9:55 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen

Ok. So I am assuming think Edward is vampire in this story.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 7:51 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 7:39 PM Title: Found

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 7:39 PM Title: Found

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 7:20 PM Title: Missing

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 3:49 PM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: AdminK Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 1:52 PM Title: Prologue

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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 12:27 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen

That was a great update can't wait to read more ❤️❤️❤️❤️



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 6:40 PM Title: Found

James hunter, hmm!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 6:31 PM Title: Missing

Break your heart to have to  see that

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 6:31 PM Title: Missing

Break your heart to have to  see that

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 2:47 AM Title: Found

I am hooked can't wait to read more. Love this Bella 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 2:18 AM Title: Found

Can't wait for her interaction with Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 1:43 AM Title: Missing

Such a hard job.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2021 6:37 PM Title: Prologue

Very interesting.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:56 PM Title: Prologue

Oh this looks awesome. I love a good mystery. Can't to read more. 

Reviewer: uma1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:02 AM Title: Prologue

Great first chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2021 9:53 PM Title: Prologue

Well Bella start wearing Blue contacts.. Or Red. LOL

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