Date: 25 Aug 2023 1:13 AM Title: When it All Falls Apart
This is awesome! I cannot wait for future updates! Thank you.
Date: 19 May 2023 2:51 AM Title: When it All Falls Apart
Hope you update soon. Miss reading this story.
Date: 13 Nov 2022 1:44 PM Title: When it All Falls Apart
Ok, I am really confused with what is going on with the case. Who is Peter?? What is Marcus's deal? Si many questions unanswered still.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2022 8:43 AM Title: When it All Falls Apart
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Sep 2022 3:04 AM Title: Connections
Who is the Commish?????? I hope you update soon, please!!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2022 8:25 PM Title: Connections
Thank you for this chapter! There is so much going on, I am very curious how it will all turn out!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2022 10:13 PM Title: Connections
Bella is pissed.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2022 6:00 PM Title: Connections
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Jake in trouble? I can't wait to see what's going on with him..until you post again..What's going on with the baby?
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2022 7:01 PM Title: Another Look
Thank you for the update.well done..I can't wait to see if Bella goes to a differnt doctor to get a second opinion..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2022 12:51 PM Title: Another Look
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 26 Mar 2022 3:41 AM Title: Dinner
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 22 Mar 2022 6:35 PM Title: Going Back
Maybe the Cap is worried YOU WILL SOLVE THE CASE.
Date: 18 Mar 2022 3:54 PM Title: Dinner
Ok. So I am assuming that Aro is the "boss" in this chapter. Also Aro and his crew are the ones killing the girls. Bella is important to Edward so Aro wants her for some reason. Can't wait for more.
Date: 24 Jan 2022 11:59 PM Title: Going Back
I hope we get more on the murders. Or maybe an Edward POV.
Date: 23 Jan 2022 2:31 PM Title: Going Back
Great chapter as always, until you post again x
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2022 9:31 AM Title: Going Back
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Jan 2022 1:55 AM Title: Going Back
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2021 2:25 PM Title: Miracle
Loved it I didn't see her getting pregnant coming.
Author's Response:
Now shes Edward's forever
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2021 1:19 PM Title: Miracle
Bella should tell Edward about the baby due date confusion of the doctor. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
More will be revealed in an E POV
Date: 16 Dec 2021 3:35 AM Title: Miracle
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2021 1:22 AM Title: Miracle
:)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2021 12:46 AM Title: Miracle
OMG ! love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Dec 2021 8:56 PM Title: Miracle
Thank you so much for this amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
You are very welcome!
Date: 15 Dec 2021 3:47 PM Title: Miracle
Why does Edward keep getting called away from Bella? Does Alice not "see" any of this? Does Bella's dream mean the baby is going to be a true vampire??? Will her pregnancy go normal or rapid??
Author's Response:
A lot will be revealed when I get to do a Edward pov. Alice is human in this story. Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2021 4:14 PM Title: Surprise
OH My!! Thank you for the update..well done..What is Agent Swan going to do now? I can't wait for the next chapter..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2021 3:17 AM Title: Surprise
I am totally intrigued by this story. I am still confused about Heidi though. Sounds like she is pregnant too! Thanks for writing and giving me great stories to read. No nitpicking here, just gratitude.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!! Hope you stay on to read to the end!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2021 2:45 AM Title: Surprise
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 06 Dec 2021 3:04 PM Title: Surprise
Pregnant!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes!!
Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:48 PM Title: Regrets
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:48 PM Title: Regrets
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Oct 2021 3:22 PM Title: Regrets
Edward is not human. Is he a vampire? If so, could a rogue vampire be killing the people? Making it look like Edward is doing it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2021 1:10 PM Title: Regrets
Loved it!! Can't wait to read more and find out what Bree meant by her saying she was right?
Date: 18 Oct 2021 8:26 PM Title: Foolish
Oh my!!!!! They had sex. Are they mated????? If so, what does this mean for the both of them???
Author's Response:
answers will come soon! Thank you for reading!
Date: 18 Oct 2021 8:40 AM Title: Foolish
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2021 12:24 AM Title: Foolish
:)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2021 11:27 AM Title: Chicago
Agee thank Thorne is a pain in her ass pun intended. Let her do her job these men are getting in her way!! Hopefully she will find out who Bree was looking at from her flash drive. Great update can't wait to read more. Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2021 5:28 PM Title: Chicago
Loved can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Oct 2021 4:25 AM Title: Chicago
Why did she have to go through the FBI??? Why does she have to go to the headquarters???
Date: 09 Oct 2021 2:26 AM Title: Encounter
What is up with Heidi?????
Author's Response:
Bunches!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 2:12 PM Title: Encounter
Loved it but now with this update I have lots of questions lol
will he get a POV in this story?
Author's Response:
Yes eventually!
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:55 PM Title: Encounter
Loved it can't wait for more..
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Oct 2021 12:01 AM Title: Another One
I'm in love with both of your stories! Please I'm begging you do not make your chapters smaller, the wait is more than worth it! Small chapters always feel like previews to me little taunting crumbs to follow and entice. Have a great day! :)
Author's Response:
Totally understand! I like long chapters to! It just takes awhile for an update.. I hear you though!
Date: 05 Oct 2021 1:20 PM Title: Prologue
j'aime les longs chapitres
That was a great update can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2021 4:02 PM Title: Another One
I personally like long chapters. I love this and can't wait to read more. Thank you
Author's Response:
Same! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2021 2:22 PM Title: Another One
Oh my. Thank you for the update..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Sep 2021 12:55 AM Title: Another One
What in the world? Can't wait to find out more about Edward.
Date: 24 Aug 2021 1:51 AM Title: Stitches
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Date: 21 Aug 2021 8:00 PM Title: Stitches
Sorry about the past review my age is a problem sometimes. Short term memore is bad as you get to 75. I been where you are kids home etc. That is the busy part of your life.
Good story..
Author's Response: It's fine. I understand. Im actually trying to write a few then post so there won't be such a long wait.
Date: 21 Aug 2021 4:17 PM Title: Stitches
I am thinking that Carlisle called Edward. What did he mean that she was the one? Have they been looking for her/someone? If so. Why?
Author's Response:
defintely have been looking for someone ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2021 2:07 PM Title: Stitches
Short but good. Hmm so maybe he killed the others thinking they had been his mate?
Can't wait to read the next update and see what happens next. Will Edward get a pov?
Author's Response: there will definitely be a Edward PoV in the future.
Date: 01 Aug 2021 6:44 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen
ugh.. I forget where we are when you stories go slow.
Author's Response: This story was updated last week. Please check dates before reviewing. I have stated on both of my stories that Im a mom, wife, and I also work so I try to write when I can. I also said this story will have slower updates because I plan to finish Before I Die first. You can always wait till story is complete before reading. Thanks. :)
Date: 01 Aug 2021 5:54 PM Title: Missing
Nasty job essential but really hard.
Date: 24 Jul 2021 8:22 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2021 9:55 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen
Ok. So I am assuming think Edward is vampire in this story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2021 7:51 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen
:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2021 3:49 PM Title: Prologue
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jul 2021 1:52 PM Title: Prologue
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[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2021 12:27 PM Title: The Mysterious Mr. Cullen
That was a great update can't wait to read more â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Jun 2021 6:31 PM Title: Missing
Break your heart to have to see that
Date: 18 Jun 2021 6:31 PM Title: Missing
Break your heart to have to see that
Date: 17 Jun 2021 2:47 AM Title: Found
I am hooked can't wait to read more. Love this Bella
Date: 17 Jun 2021 2:18 AM Title: Found
Can't wait for her interaction with Edward.
Date: 17 Jun 2021 1:43 AM Title: Missing
Such a hard job.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 6:37 PM Title: Prologue
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:56 PM Title: Prologue
Oh this looks awesome. I love a good mystery. Can't to read more.
Date: 10 Jun 2021 5:02 AM Title: Prologue
Great first chapter.
Date: 08 Jun 2021 9:53 PM Title: Prologue
Well Bella start wearing Blue contacts.. Or Red. LOL