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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2022 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Perfect

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2022 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

aww thank you for the update..well done..i'm happy for them..intil you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2022 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) loved this 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2022 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great story  keep on writing 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2022 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

fun times

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2022 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2022 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

Fun times WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2022 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2022 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella's mom really messed her up.  I am glad she has a good support system now. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

love them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't believe Vicky did it in purpose.  I hope Edward will recover soon.  until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2022 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

So happy he is a wake

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2022 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2022 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad Edward is going to be ok. Wow, Austin does go over board.  Lol. I hope Tanya and Vicki get into so much trouble. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh My!! thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

she is growing strong

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

I hope Edward is alright 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh my gosh!!!!!! I can not wait for your update. Please let Edward be ok. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

Victoria probably hit him to be spiteful. She's a bitch.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2022 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella rock love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2022 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad they are going to therapy.  



Author's Response:

It's a great step!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

they have to work through their stuff it will take time

Author's Response:

True!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2022 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

they are working it out



Author's Response:

They're trying!

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

They are going to be great together.  



Author's Response:

I agree!

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad she was truthful with Edward on what she heard. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Sounds like Edward and Bella are trying to be adults.  I hope Bella tells Edward what she heard.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) Happy New Year 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2021 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Honesty!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2021 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

They are TALKING!!!!!! Not fighting or fucking.  I would say that is an improvement.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2021 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am proud of Edward for not taking her to bed. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

They need to take is a little slow



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2021 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

Leave it to Tanya to make Bella dought herself



Author's Response:

So true!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2021 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) Happy Holidays to you 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2021 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you for the update..well done.. I hope Edward is aware of Vicky & her plan.  I'm sure he's in love with Bella and will make it work..until you post again



Author's Response:

Let's hope so!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2021 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

they are working it out



Author's Response:

Trying to!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2021 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2021 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

that is cute



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2021 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2021 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

so happy for them



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2021 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update..I don't know if Edward will except that.  well done.  Maybe Bella will talked to Edward about it.  until you post again



Author's Response:

She'd better, if she's smart!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2021 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad Austin was not upset with her. 



Author's Response:

Yes, me too!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 7

She is such a good friend



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2021 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great story love it can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, Bella was very honest with Edward.  I'm impressed.  



Author's Response:

Yes she was. Thanks. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2021 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

that was sad 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

Do we call her Bella the beard lol



Author's Response:

Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2021 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2021 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

He is showing her lol



Author's Response:

Sure is! 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2021 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 So sad



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2021 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2021 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2021 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh my. So Bella is being used by both men in her life. One for sex and the other as a cover for being straight.  



Author's Response:

That's a good way of putting it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

He is going to punish her lol



Author's Response:

Of course!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

she doesnt like herself



Author's Response:

No, not really.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2021 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

Edward is really make her beg



Author's Response:

Absolutely.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2021 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ughhh so amazing. I think I need to change my pantirs. Poor Edward and Bella. She needs to beg him and show him that she still loves him. Where can we find your pen name Aubrey London?



Author's Response:

Mostly on Amazon, but also on Smashwords, Apple, B&N, and places like that.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2021 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2021 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, this Bella is a piece of work.  



Author's Response:

Yes she is.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2021 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

How sad. She needs to tell him how wrong she was to even consider being forgiven. I love the lemons though.



Author's Response:

Well, that's the goal for now!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella seems to be a bitch in this story. She wants Edward to screw when she wants but her sugar daddy to take care of her and buy her things.



Author's Response:

I can't disagree.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2021 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

the games they play 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Again, he left her unsatisfied.  Bella still is horny and unfulfilled.  



Author's Response:

Which she probably deserves. ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow!!!!!!! Edward just left her hanging!!!!!!!!!!! Lol. It kind of serves her right if she was spreading those lies about him. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

IMO, he's too good for Bella.  



Author's Response:

Yes he is, and they both know it. 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

Lol he is driving her crazy. I can't believe he has so much self control. 



Author's Response:

Or does he?

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Damn, that was hot......to think this is only the beginning. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  Love me some tatted up Edward. 



Author's Response:

Yes! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2021 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oooh Hawt start.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2021 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

fun times lol



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2021 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg that was awesome. So hot too



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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