Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 48
I am happy for Rose and Emmett. I hope Bella can do some true healing now that everything is in the open. Wait.......I just thought about this......Liam is Riley's father. Liam is also Edward's uncle. Sooooo, Edward and Riley are related.
Date: 23 Feb 2022 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 44
I love your fictions.
Had to laugh at this chapater. Usually, I ignore spelling errors. But this one, put a different picture to the scene. Canning vs. caning. Picturing Edward being "beat" by a can of beets. (:o )
looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for all you do.
Date: 15 Feb 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm confused with end of the chapter and them talking about Jess. If it's her husband what would he be investigating?? I'm glad Edward called Bella on her bullshit. If she wants him to fight for justice then she needs to fight for justice.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
I just don't understand why Edward just didn't leave Jane. Why did he stay? I understand he let his apartment go but dang he could have stayed with a friend or I think a homeless shelter would have been better than what he went through.
Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella is kind of a bitch when she sent Edward to his room. She said she had to remind him of his place and that he had denied her. They were NOT in a scene. They were boyfriend and girlfriend. Rules are different.