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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'm glad Edward is standing up Bella and making her see that she needs some type of help. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh Bella take a moment to recover and savor the fact that you and Edward are OK. Being so pushy is just a scare tactic to cope. Time for a trip to therapy first. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh Bella take a moment to recover and savor the fact that you and Edward are OK. Being so pushy is just a scare tactic to cope. Time for a trip to therapy first. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

So loving this story right now, can't wait for the next chapter x

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 34

Bella is kind of a bitch when she sent Edward to his room. She said she had to remind him of his place and that he had denied her. They were NOT  in a scene.  They were boyfriend and girlfriend.  Rules are different.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh wow.  Jane and Alec definitely need to be stopped.  Glad Charlie was more understanding than I thought he would be.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 33

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 32

I hope that Bella and Charlie can resolve the Riley situation amicably  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

Can't wait for Bella and Charlie to talk. Love that Edward is being more forward. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

Thank you for the updates ..well done..wow Bella got hurt really bad. I'm happy she is on the mend. Grateful  Jake showed up..until you post again

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Whew, that was a wicked scary situation.  It's definitely going to take some time to heal.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Whew, that was a wicked scary situation.  It's definitely going to take some time to heal.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Whew, that was a wicked scary situation.  It's definitely going to take some time to heal.

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 31

This chapter was definitely worth the wait. Edward has certainly been through alot but he is hanging in there. I hope that we get to see more of the Drs. Cullen. ;-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2022 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2022 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh my. Bella and Edward are both so emotional.  I think they need some down time and just be with each other. Holding each other.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh my goodness. I wasn't expecting that cliffhanger! 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 30

Whyyyy?!!! The cliffhanger 'til Thurday!!! I can not wait. Poor Edward having to see Bella like that and poor Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my gosh,  somehow I missed this chapter.  I am glad I realized it. Another great chapter.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Bella.  I hope she is alright 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2022 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

NO!!!!!!!!!!  Please don't leave us hanging!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2022 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

I like that Bella is giving Edward more control over their non playtime. Love how Edward can make Bella lose herself. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) Happy New Year 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2021 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you for the update..well done..Rose & Emment are funny..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2021 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love Edward's cheeky mess. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) Happy Christmas to you 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

Glad Edward is getting along with Riley. Small world about Sue and Seth. Can't wait to find out more about that. 

Reviewer: Sanecrist Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2021 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25

Every chapter makes Bella less redeemable. She wants to waltz in, complain about every thing Charle has done for her and whine that Riley doesn't wear and eat what she finds acceptable? Every time Edward makes a true statement she can't handle, she calls him a brat and threatens to spank him. How's that going to work for Riley? You can't throw a small town kid that's enjoyed the bachelor lifestyle into a big city with a psycho loveless mother. If Bella wanted to help, she'd write a monthly check, fly in every other month, NOT uproot him and force him to live in the playhouse.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2021 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

Well, I'm surprised that she introduced Riley as her sone but at least its some progress.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Why didn't Bella give him up for adoption? 

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love your story can't wait for more !  poor Riley to hear that .

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

That erupted quickly. Really hoping to seeing more of Riley and Edward and I hope Bella deals with her feelings toward Riley and grews more close to him. Great story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2021 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

I can see why Riley was upset with what Bella said. She kind of walked right into that one. Charlie could have found a better way to bring up that subject. Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

Why is Edward being such a brat???? What has gotten into him. So Bella did say RED but it had nothing to do with their relationship . You were so sneaky with your teaser. Lol. 

 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2021 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

I love it wow so very much

thank you

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm excited to see how things unfold with their relationship 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

I hope Laim gets what he deserves for killing Edward's parents and for raping Bella.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ph my. I did NOT see that coming.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no!!!!!!!! Bella has not told Edward about Laim so Edward doesn't know to keep Laim away from Bella. Does Aro know what happened  between Bella and Laim???? If he does he is a sick fucker. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2021 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

She definitely  needs to tell Edward.  A Dom/Domme and sub should not keep secrets.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh my goodness! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2021 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

Not Liam! I hope Edward is a misbehaving sub again if Liam gets anywhere near Bella.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2021 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh shit what just happened 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2021 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love it wow that has to be so hard for her mentally 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

I hope Bella comes clean to Edward sooner than later 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2021 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2021 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh my goodness that is going to be a very interesting conversation. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Can't wait to see how Bella explains things to Edward.  

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow oh wow what will Edward say

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thnk you for the update.  well done.  until you post agin

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

don't know the circumstances, but hiding a child is a no no for me, and it looks that she doesn't care about the child.
me angry

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

So happy that Edward didn't break things off. I don't know what subspace is but it sounds like it is going to be very interesting. I really enjoy this story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love how their relationship is building 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

What does Edward mean.....pull me under deeper????? 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2021 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love it more please 

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 16

I read this this morning and had to read it again tonight. Ed is a rock star. Bella ia a lucky Dom. I love this E/B 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh wow mind blowing I love it 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow!!!!!!! Edward is awesome at making her cum. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

You never disappoint! Another great chapter! Time for a nap!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love it 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think they both want to have more of a relationship with each other. I was wondering if we will get an Edward POV????? 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy hell that was intense and so hot

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy hell that was intense and so hot

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy hell that was intense and so hot

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my. What has happened to Edward's control?  He use to be able to withhold cumming.  Is Edward a pain slut???? Or is that just what he is use to with Jane and Aro?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my. What has happened to Edward's control?  He use to be able to withhold cumming.  Is Edward a pain slut???? Or is that just what he is use to with Jane and Aro?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

I understand Bella being pissed at Edward for manhandling in front of everyone.  But she has been wanting him to react honestly to things and not be SOOOO submissive.  Well, he tonight to do it.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh how I wished Bella would have gotten her hands on Jane, but Edward was right. I love how Edward stood up to Bella but still in his gentle way.  Totally enjoying your story and can not wait for more chapters. 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh how I wished Bella would have gotten her hands on Jane, but Edward was right. I love how Edward stood up to Bella but still in his gentle way.  Totally enjoying your story and can not wait for more chapters. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

Now that tension is some amazing foreplay. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella really has a hard time with letting go of control.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

I felt like Riley was Bella's from the other chapter.  I kind of wondered if it had been a bad situation because she was letting her father raise him. But I never thought of her having a Dom and him raping her. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

What?!!!!!!!! That was a twist that I never suspected. I definitely can not wait for more. Your take on Bella in this story is so rare I like it.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow, totally did not expect that. I do hope that she doesn't hide Riley from Edward for long. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

That was hot. Edward was very forward in this chapter.  I liked it and I think Bella did too. Can't wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

I wait all week for your updates and as usual you do not disappoint. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2021 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward will heal because Bella is falling for him.  Maybe she will also heal from whatever has happened in her past. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2021 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

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