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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 70

enjoyed it but ending seemed rushed

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2022 5:39 PM Title: A GLIMPSE INTO A SUB'S MIND

AWESOME !!! OMG !!! I have loved this story ;) I've just finished it and I want to start all over again ;) Thank you so much for completing this amazing story for us ;D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2022 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 50

I wish I had read this sooner because I like a song that I think would make a great inspiration to a story, unfortunately I read I can't write. Here is my siggestion incase you ever get involved in another contest


Cher - "The Music's no good without you" I picture Edward as the sexy talented dancer

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2022 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 46

put in your nose plugs and dive in

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2022 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 39

Lian

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2022 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 37

what was Charlie going to do with Riley befoe he broke his arm, he could still go fishing. I feel bad for the kid and Edward, They both seemed to be forgotten at times

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

well I never saw this coming but I love thos stpry

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

like it already

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2022 12:41 AM Title: A GLIMPSE INTO A SUB'S MIND

I have enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.  But I still do not understand why Edward did not leave Jane when she was so cruel to him. He had a choice.  In this chapter,  he said he did not want to e d up like his parents.  What did he mean by that? I thought his parents loved each other and was respected in the community.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2022 2:01 PM Title: A GLIMPSE INTO A SUB'S MIND

Poor Edward going through all that.  At least he got his own HEA

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2022 9:04 PM Title: A GLIMPSE INTO A SUB'S MIND

What a beautiful journey.  I'm so glad that both of them found happiness.  Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2022 6:45 PM Title: A GLIMPSE INTO A SUB'S MIND

I really enjoyed getting the journal! 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2022 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 70

Just keep loving Riley even more for his candor, way to call them out.

 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2022 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 70

Just keep loving Riley even more for his candor, way to call them out.

 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2022 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 70

Just keep loving Riley even more for his candor, way to call them out.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2022 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 70

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to the outtake 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2022 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 70

I have enjoyed watching these two grow so much. Thank you for sharing with us.  

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2022 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 70

im actually super glad that riley knew/figured out and they all had the conversation they did. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 69

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 69

I'm glad Riley is so accepting. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 69

Riley is hilarious.  I love that he figured it out before them 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 69

Riley is hilarious.  I love that he figured it out before them 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 69

Riley is hilarious.  I love that he figured it out before them 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 69

Oh this was a sweet chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 68

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 68

I can only imagine how hot that scene looked with the mirrors on the ceiling 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 68

Oh my. What a chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2022 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 67

Wow,  Riley is definitely becoming a teenager.  I hope he doesn't do anything stupid at this party. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2022 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 67

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2022 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 67

I like Riley and his sense of humor and the way he is testing their parenting boundaries 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2022 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 66

Bella seems to be taking the baby situation seriously. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 66

It's beautiful to see how Edward and Bella have grown 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 66

It's beautiful to see how Edward and Bella have grown 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 66

It's beautiful to see how Edward and Bella have grown 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 66

I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the talk with Tose and her plans to restart therapy and take Riley. Excited for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 66

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2022 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 65

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 65

That was kind of crazy for Edward to want to play when they haven't been together for so long. But Bella should not have pushed him for the same reason.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2022 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 64

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2022 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 64

Really enjoyed this chapter. It seems liked they are finally finding some balance in their dual relationship. :-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 64

Wow, I never expected Bella to want any kids. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2022 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 64

Those three weeks will definitely end with fireworks of the best kind!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 64

I'm glad they're getting closer and Bella is talking. I definitely never expected her to have this particular conversation.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2022 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 64

you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 63

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my gosh!!!!! How did I miss this chapter.  Bella is TOTALLY in the wrong. I don't blame Edward for being pissed. I would have called RED too. I have thought through out this story that BBella has taken advantage of she DOM status with Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my gosh!!!!! How did I miss this chapter.  Bella is TOTALLY in the wrong. I don't blame Edward for being pissed. I would have called RED too. I have thought through out this story that BBella has taken advantage of she DOM status with Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my gosh!!!!! How did I miss this chapter.  Bella is TOTALLY in the wrong. I don't blame Edward for being pissed. I would have called RED too. I have thought through out this story that BBella has taken advantage of she DOM status with Edward.  

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 63

I'm glad they finally talked, real honest conversation with substance and that Edward pointed out her issues. Some of Bella's personality has always bothered me, especially the way she always brings up punishment when they're not playing. I'm curious for more.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 63

I like that they are communicating better with each other.  I can't imagine how difficult it is to to separate a vanilla relationship from their playtime lifestyle. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2022 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 62

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2022 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my. I'm team Edward on this one. Bella needs to check herself and have more trust and faith in Edward. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2022 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my. I'm team Edward on this one. Bella needs to check herself and have more trust and faith in Edward. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2022 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 62

This chapter was awesome! Bella is feeling insecure and hormonal and she needs to trust Edward but on the other hand Bella should come first and they had plans. Edward should have told Becky that! Run!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2022 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 61

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2022 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 61

Details about Colin??? Who is Colin? 


Reviewer: wizardtho Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2022 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 60

60 Cha[ters read. Want more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2022 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 60

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 59

They're engaged and I can't wait for Riley to arrive. I absolutely adore this story. :-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 59

Something tells me that Bella's hormones ARE going to get the best of her. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 59

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2022 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

Oh poor Bella, been there,  done that. Going off the shot sucks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2022 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

Oh poor Bella, been there,  done that. Going off the shot sucks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2022 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 58

Oh to be as limber as your characters.  Lol.... goals

Great chapter 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2022 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 58

I love that she's getting more comfortable with being in love. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2022 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 58

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

Love seeing them together.  They both have changed so much in their relationship.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

Love seeing them together.  They both have changed so much in their relationship.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2022 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thank you for the updates..well done..until you post again.Their getting married..YAY!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 57

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 57

Love!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2022 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 56

great update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 56

Lol. Cockblocked by the dog. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Freddie,  my pups loathe fireworks too

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Freddie,  my pups loathe fireworks too

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Freddie,  my pups loathe fireworks too

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 56

:) 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2022 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 56

I love this story

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 55

Thank you for the update..well done..Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2022 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 55

I am glad Liam can not cause any more problems for Bella or Edward.  

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2022 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 54

I'm glad they communicate so well. I truly don't understand why she cares so much what others think, but I'm excited for more. Glad your bad news wasn't tragic news!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2022 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 54

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2022 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 54

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2022 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 54

Oh no. I hope the vibrating dildo doesn't effect Edward negatively.  Can't wait to see what happens.  

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 53

nice story so far,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2022 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 53

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2022 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh my. I hope we get to read Jacob's thoughts on this experiment.  Lol. Edward did good. Loved Emmett.  Lol. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2022 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 52

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2022 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 52

What is the deal with Leah??? I can't remember.  Jacob does seem to have a stick up his ass. Can't wait to see what else you have planned for this party. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 51

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2022 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 51

Glad Edward didn't get upset because Bella was there working with Benjamin.  I do wonder what he thought when Bella said "my Benjamin ". 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2022 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 51

I really like these day at a glance chapters of Bella and Edward. I also like this version of Aro. I can't wait for another chapter. :-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 50

I am glad Bella enjoyed her birthday!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

I'm definitely having some birthday gift envy!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

I'm definitely having some birthday gift envy!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 50

Wow, I want a birthday present like that 

Great writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 49

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 49

Love that her friends throw her a surprise party.  I hope they catch Jane and Alec. 

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