Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella is kind of a bitch when she sent Edward to his room. She said she had to remind him of his place and that he had denied her. They were NOT in a scene. They were boyfriend and girlfriend. Rules are different.
Date: 18 Dec 2021 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Every chapter makes Bella less redeemable. She wants to waltz in, complain about every thing Charle has done for her and whine that Riley doesn't wear and eat what she finds acceptable? Every time Edward makes a true statement she can't handle, she calls him a brat and threatens to spank him. How's that going to work for Riley? You can't throw a small town kid that's enjoyed the bachelor lifestyle into a big city with a psycho loveless mother. If Bella wanted to help, she'd write a monthly check, fly in every other month, NOT uproot him and force him to live in the playhouse.
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
I understand Bella being pissed at Edward for manhandling in front of everyone. But she has been wanting him to react honestly to things and not be SOOOO submissive. Well, he tonight to do it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 31 Oct 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
I felt like Riley was Bella's from the other chapter. I kind of wondered if it had been a bad situation because she was letting her father raise him. But I never thought of her having a Dom and him raping her.