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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2022 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 62

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2022 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my. I'm team Edward on this one. Bella needs to check herself and have more trust and faith in Edward. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2022 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my. I'm team Edward on this one. Bella needs to check herself and have more trust and faith in Edward. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2022 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 62

This chapter was awesome! Bella is feeling insecure and hormonal and she needs to trust Edward but on the other hand Bella should come first and they had plans. Edward should have told Becky that! Run!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2022 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 61

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2022 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 61

Details about Colin??? Who is Colin? 


Reviewer: wizardtho Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2022 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 60

60 Cha[ters read. Want more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2022 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 60

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Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 59

They're engaged and I can't wait for Riley to arrive. I absolutely adore this story. :-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 59

Something tells me that Bella's hormones ARE going to get the best of her. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2022 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 59

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2022 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

Oh poor Bella, been there,  done that. Going off the shot sucks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2022 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

Oh poor Bella, been there,  done that. Going off the shot sucks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2022 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 58

Oh to be as limber as your characters.  Lol.... goals

Great chapter 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2022 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 58

I love that she's getting more comfortable with being in love. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2022 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 58

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

Love seeing them together.  They both have changed so much in their relationship.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

Love seeing them together.  They both have changed so much in their relationship.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2022 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thank you for the updates..well done..until you post again.Their getting married..YAY!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 57

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 57

Love!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2022 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 56

great update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 56

Lol. Cockblocked by the dog. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Freddie,  my pups loathe fireworks too

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Freddie,  my pups loathe fireworks too

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Freddie,  my pups loathe fireworks too

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 56

:) 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2022 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 56

I love this story

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 55

Thank you for the update..well done..Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2022 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 55

I am glad Liam can not cause any more problems for Bella or Edward.  

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2022 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 54

I'm glad they communicate so well. I truly don't understand why she cares so much what others think, but I'm excited for more. Glad your bad news wasn't tragic news!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2022 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 54

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2022 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 54

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2022 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 54

Oh no. I hope the vibrating dildo doesn't effect Edward negatively.  Can't wait to see what happens.  

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 53

nice story so far,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2022 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 53

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2022 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh my. I hope we get to read Jacob's thoughts on this experiment.  Lol. Edward did good. Loved Emmett.  Lol. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2022 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 52

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2022 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 52

What is the deal with Leah??? I can't remember.  Jacob does seem to have a stick up his ass. Can't wait to see what else you have planned for this party. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 51

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2022 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 51

Glad Edward didn't get upset because Bella was there working with Benjamin.  I do wonder what he thought when Bella said "my Benjamin ". 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2022 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 51

I really like these day at a glance chapters of Bella and Edward. I also like this version of Aro. I can't wait for another chapter. :-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 50

I am glad Bella enjoyed her birthday!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

I'm definitely having some birthday gift envy!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

I'm definitely having some birthday gift envy!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 50

Wow, I want a birthday present like that 

Great writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 50

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 49

Love that her friends throw her a surprise party.  I hope they catch Jane and Alec. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

I'm thrilled for rose and em

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 48

I am happy for Rose and Emmett.  I hope Bella can do some true healing  now that everything is in the open. Wait.......I just thought about this......Liam is Riley's father.  Liam is also Edward's uncle. Sooooo, Edward and Riley are related.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 47

I don't feel like Ben will be a threat.  Glad Bella found something to do with Riley.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2022 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 46

I hope aro follows through with his promises.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

I'm glad that went way better than they or I expected! 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

I'm glad that went way better than they or I expected! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2022 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 46

Wow, Aro surprised me.  He did not really defend  his children.  I think it was because he already had his suspicions.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2022 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 45

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 45

Oh my!!!! Are we finally going to find out what exactly happened to both of them????? You know they could let Riley stay with Jacob while they meet with Aro.  

Reviewer: kareng Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

I love your fictions.

Had to laugh at this chapater.  Usually, I ignore spelling errors.  But this one, put a different picture to the scene.  Canning vs. caning.  Picturing Edward being "beat" by a can of beets.  (:o )

 

looking forward to the next chapter. 

 

Thank you for all you do.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 44

I still do not understand why Edward stayed in his contract with Jane. Did he even have a contract? I would have just left. No one would have blamed him for leaving.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2022 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2022 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 43

Things will be interesting with Riley living with them.  Lol. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2022 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Thank you for the update..Riley is finally with his MOM.  I hope things go well for them..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 42

Thank you for the updae..well done..Bella got to let Jane know she means business.  until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 42

So proud of Edward for finally putting Jane in her place 👏 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm confused with end of the chapter and them talking about Jess. If it's her husband what would he be investigating??  I'm glad Edward called Bella on her bullshit. If she wants him to fight for justice then she needs to fight for justice.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 41

I just don't understand why Edward just didn't leave Jane. Why did he stay? I understand he let his apartment go but dang he could have stayed with a friend or I think a homeless shelter would have been better than what he went through.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 40

I hope Bella can get justice!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2022 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 39

I feel for Edward and the tension he is experiencing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 39

I think Laim is behind the drink. Why is Edward's age all of a sudden bothering him?  Aren't Bella and Edward around the same age??? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 38

Some how I missed this chapter.  I love a cheeky Edward.  Aro seemed fairly nice in this chapter.  Who was the vodka from?????? Laim?????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2022 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 38

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2022 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thank you for the update..well done..I wonder will bella except.  Who brought Bella a drink?  until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2022 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 37

Cock blocked by her dad. Lol!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2022 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2022 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 37

Thank you for the update..well done

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2022 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2022 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 36

Good job Jake. Great chapter getting Bella back to her Dom self

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2022 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am glad that Jacob could help her. I can't wait for her and Edward to scene and also to talk. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'm glad Edward is standing up Bella and making her see that she needs some type of help. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh Bella take a moment to recover and savor the fact that you and Edward are OK. Being so pushy is just a scare tactic to cope. Time for a trip to therapy first. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh Bella take a moment to recover and savor the fact that you and Edward are OK. Being so pushy is just a scare tactic to cope. Time for a trip to therapy first. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

So loving this story right now, can't wait for the next chapter x

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 34

Bella is kind of a bitch when she sent Edward to his room. She said she had to remind him of his place and that he had denied her. They were NOT  in a scene.  They were boyfriend and girlfriend.  Rules are different.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh wow.  Jane and Alec definitely need to be stopped.  Glad Charlie was more understanding than I thought he would be.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 33

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 32

I hope that Bella and Charlie can resolve the Riley situation amicably  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

Can't wait for Bella and Charlie to talk. Love that Edward is being more forward. 

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