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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2021 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh my goodness that is going to be a very interesting conversation. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Can't wait to see how Bella explains things to Edward.  

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow oh wow what will Edward say

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thnk you for the update.  well done.  until you post agin

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

don't know the circumstances, but hiding a child is a no no for me, and it looks that she doesn't care about the child.
me angry

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

So happy that Edward didn't break things off. I don't know what subspace is but it sounds like it is going to be very interesting. I really enjoy this story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love how their relationship is building 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

What does Edward mean.....pull me under deeper????? 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2021 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love it more please 

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 16

I read this this morning and had to read it again tonight. Ed is a rock star. Bella ia a lucky Dom. I love this E/B 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh wow mind blowing I love it 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow!!!!!!! Edward is awesome at making her cum. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

You never disappoint! Another great chapter! Time for a nap!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love it 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2021 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think they both want to have more of a relationship with each other. I was wondering if we will get an Edward POV????? 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy hell that was intense and so hot

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy hell that was intense and so hot

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2021 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy hell that was intense and so hot

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my. What has happened to Edward's control?  He use to be able to withhold cumming.  Is Edward a pain slut???? Or is that just what he is use to with Jane and Aro?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my. What has happened to Edward's control?  He use to be able to withhold cumming.  Is Edward a pain slut???? Or is that just what he is use to with Jane and Aro?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

I understand Bella being pissed at Edward for manhandling in front of everyone.  But she has been wanting him to react honestly to things and not be SOOOO submissive.  Well, he tonight to do it.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh how I wished Bella would have gotten her hands on Jane, but Edward was right. I love how Edward stood up to Bella but still in his gentle way.  Totally enjoying your story and can not wait for more chapters. 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh how I wished Bella would have gotten her hands on Jane, but Edward was right. I love how Edward stood up to Bella but still in his gentle way.  Totally enjoying your story and can not wait for more chapters. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

Now that tension is some amazing foreplay. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella really has a hard time with letting go of control.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

I felt like Riley was Bella's from the other chapter.  I kind of wondered if it had been a bad situation because she was letting her father raise him. But I never thought of her having a Dom and him raping her. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

What?!!!!!!!! That was a twist that I never suspected. I definitely can not wait for more. Your take on Bella in this story is so rare I like it.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow, totally did not expect that. I do hope that she doesn't hide Riley from Edward for long. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2021 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

That was hot. Edward was very forward in this chapter.  I liked it and I think Bella did too. Can't wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

I wait all week for your updates and as usual you do not disappoint. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2021 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward will heal because Bella is falling for him.  Maybe she will also heal from whatever has happened in her past. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2021 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am really surprised at Bella playing and drinking/ drunk. Especially using a whip/flogger. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2021 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love seeing their relationship evolve.  

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it.such a great story. I am always hooked by your talent and words 

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

So this is what sub Edward has to look forward to day by day with his Mistress. I really do like this story and just can't wait for another update. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bella is breaking all kind of rules. Lol. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2021 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

I loved it !!!!! I was worried he would get freaked out and red but Bella watched him and showed that she is a great mistress. And love that you told the haters to fuck off! 

I love your stories and you and your talent don't deserve their stupid bs! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2021 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved their time together.  Bless Edward's heart for having to deny himself to save himself

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2021 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

What has happened in Bella's past?????? Can't wait to find out more.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting story and I can't wait to see what is next. Also, I really like how Bella is very in control of their relationship for a change. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh boy!!!!! Poor Edward,  to experience Jane and Aro. That is just horrible.  He will knew pleasure now that he is with Bella.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh wow, each chapter is more intriguing than the previous, can't for the next chapter.  Please keep posting regular updates as they are more than appreciated x

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2021 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting storyline 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2021 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2021 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to hear more of Edward's story. Glad they are matching up on their limits. 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for next update. Mot really à fan of BDSM but you've definitely hot me hooked already.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2021 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2021 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm very intrigued and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2021 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome first chapter. I am scared to find out what he went through with Aro. 

I am excited for this new adventure. ❤️❤️

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2021 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

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